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Kyshiro
Elite Mapper
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Joined January 2011
Kyshiro
General:
03:40:697 Untill the end seems a bit off?

Easy:
-00:31:467 (1) - Move the middle point 1 grid down and 1 left @Tinygrid
-00:32:492 (2) - 1 grid down @Tinygrid
-00:53:519 (3) - Suggestion: Try making this look like an extention of (2), or make it a blanket over 2.
-01:11:467 (2) - Start of this should be exactly above end of (1)
-02:08:903 (2) - > http://puu.sh/hUiH

Normal:
-00:23:518 (1,2,3,4) - This can be done better, try making a half circle out of this.
-01:25:056 (1,2) - At such combo's it's best to copy (1) and paste it at (2) and CTRL+H CTRL+R (Horizontal flip and reverse)
-01:39:672 (2) - Doesn't flow with (1) try placing it at x424 y80.
-03:01:211 (1) - End point should be further from (2) or start/middle point closer to (2).

Hard:
-00:36:338 (2) - Should be more to the right(under end of (1))
-01:02:749 (2) - 1 Grid up @ Tinygrid
-01:08:390 Add circle
-01:49:415 ^
-02:00:185 (2) - You should copy (1) and replace (2) with it(Or copy 2 and put it at 1)
-02:05:826 Add circle
-03:15:569 ^
-03:31:979 ^

That's it.

Any questions? Contact me in game or send me a pm.

~Kyshiro
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Kyshiro, thanks :)
Kei
1,797 posts
Joined May 2010
Kei
Hi once again! here's my mod. Oh the mod it's really looooong~ .-. sorry.. I tried to put it all in a spoilerbox but It doesn't worked lol.

General

  • Timing
  1. The offset you're currently using doesn't sound good at all. Try to change it to 8.890 (-13). It sounds way better to me.

[Easy]


  • Settings
  1. I think that you should decrease AR -1. This is to make more easier for beginners to see notes that you place like this. The note gets a bit hidden by the previous note's hitburst, but I think that decreasing AR the notes with this 'issue' would be more visible since they'll appear more earlier. Well, I guess you understand what I'm trying to say.
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    Mapping

  2. 00:29:416 (1) - How about placing this note were 00:27:878 (2) was? (x:296 y:204). It looks weird that you didn't placed the note there since you did that in your previous patterns. It looks better in this way to me.
  3. 00:30:954 - This empty part feels weird since the music hasn't changed in anything, so I didn't see why you didn't mapped this. I suggest you to try this pattern. It follows better the music in my opinion and fills the empty part:
    SPOILER
  4. 00:39:672 (3,4) - I don't find this placement friendly for beginners. I highly recommend you to unstack (4) since this is an Easy difficulty, not a Normal one.
  5. 00:54:544 (1) - Seriously.. why in hell is this spinner here? Don't skip parts like this. The song hasn't changed in anything.. a spinner doesn't fit here to me. You should map this part too.
  6. 01:59:672 (1,2,3,4) - Why so many circles all of a sudden? I think that you should replace this notes with sliders.. since you were doing patterns with sliders.. oh and I also think that those are way too many circles in a row for an Easy. That would be suitable for a Normal difficulty, but not for an Easy in my opinion.
  7. 02:24:287 (1,2) - This sounds really weird and doesn't follow the music at all. I highly recommend you to try this instead:
    SPOILER
  8. 02:38:903 (1) - This spinner starts too early after (2). Perhaps move it to the next white tick?
  9. 03:44:800 (3) - I know that this will ruin your good symmetric pattern, but I think that it would be way better if you end the slider (3) at the red tick (03:46:082).

    I'm not sure if it was me or what.. but I found some spacing issues selection some notes. I noticed that accidentally. In the most of the cases, the issues were in your stacking patterns, maybe when you tried to place or stack some notes you disabled distance snap to place them properly.
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    Design

  10. 00:21:724 (2) - This slider doesn't look good. I understand that you try to do some artistic stuff and all.. but if this kind of sliders aren't symmetric/perfect.. they end up looking bad rather than cool and artistic. If you still think that it looks good or you don't understand what I'm reffering to: select the slider and press ctrl+H.
  11. 00:44:801 (4,2) - I really dislike the way that this 2 sliders get a bit overlapped. Not a big deal, but it's better if you avoid this kind of placements in an Easy.
  12. 00:50:442 (1,2) - It would look better if you place these 2 sliders more like this:
    SPOILER
    http://puu.sh/i6gL
  13. 01:35:570 (2,3,1) - This placement looks a bit messy. Maybe try something more 'clean'?:
    SPOILER
  14. 01:40:185 (2) - Rather than artistic.. this slider looks a bit weird. How about trying a more 'wavy' shape (or something else that fits better to you)?:
    SPOILER
  15. 03:29:928 (1,3) - Exactly the same as I told you already about 00:44:801 (4,2).
    I'll resume everything. Various slider shapes can be improved to make the map look better (i.e: 02:55:569 (4)).
    You should use the artistic slider shapes in a more intuitive way. I mean, you try to make the map look good, but placing sliders with artistic shapes everywhere randomly ends up looking messy. I told you this already, but I repeat it once again. Here's a example of those kinds of patterns:
    02:03:774 (1,2,1)
    And.. this is what I mean with 'placing sliders in a more intuitive way':
    SPOILER
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    Hitsounds

  16. 00:08:903 ~ 00:17:108 - This section has way too high hitsound's volume. I suggest you to decrease it to 50% like IchiGUN did in all his difficulties. Sounds way better to me.
  17. 00:49:416 (2) - Perhaps add a hitfinish at the end of this slider? Sounds good in my opinion.
  18. 02:07:364 (2,1,2) - Your whistles pattern is messed up here..You added a whistle to (2) to make some 'emphasis' right? but I think that according to your previous whistles, a whistle should be at the start of (1) instead of being at the end, and the same goes to (2).
  19. 03:01:723 (2,3,4) - ^
  20. 03:05:313 (1) - Here's missing a whistle at the end of this slider.
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    Combos

  21. 03:06:339 (1) - Unnecessary new combo that doesn't follow your combos pattern. I highly recommend you to remove it.
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    I think that this difficulty can be improved a lot. The combos and hitsounds are okay overall, but the visual aspect of the map itself isn't good at all. I hope I helped you specially in improving your patterns.

[Normal]


  • Settings
  1. I feel the AR a bit fast for a Normal difficulty. I suggest you to decrease it by 1.
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    Mapping

  2. 00:18:133 (2,3) - I think that it would be better if you replace this notes with a slider. Fits better with the music to me.
  3. 00:20:185 (2,3) - ^
  4. 00:22:236 (2,3) - ^
  5. 00:28:390 (2,3) - ^
  6. 00:32:492 (2,3) - ^ Perhaps here too?
  7. 00:37:877 (1,2,3...) - This pattern doesn't follow the music at all. You should better try something more simple, that follows more the music.. something like this:
    SPOILER
  8. 00:42:749 (4,5) - And again.. I think that it would be better if you replace this notes with a slider.
  9. 00:44:800 (3,4) - ^
  10. 00:52:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I find this a bit difficult for a Normal diff. I think that they're so many circles in a row and all of a sudden. You should consider replacing some of them with sliders.
  11. 01:13:518 (5,6) - This doesn't fit with the vocals at all.. I suggest you to try this instead:
    SPOILER


    If you don't like the repeat, you can make the slider without it and add a note at the end of the kiai too, but I still recommend you to do the slider with a repeat to make that part a bit more easier.
  12. 01:25:056 (1) - Spacing.
  13. 01:25:569 (2,3) - And again, this doesn't fit with the vocals. You should rather try this:
    SPOILER
  14. 01:29:159 (1) - Spacing again.
  15. 01:32:492 (5) - This slider doesn't make sense. It doesn't sound like your previous patterns nor fits with the music. Try replacing it with a note.
  16. 01:33:261 (1,2,3,4) - Why all those notes are placed at red ticks..? This would be awkward to play for beginners and not-so experienced players. You were placing notes at white ticks, so, the player will think that they're 1/1, not 1/2.. Please do something here to avoid this problem. Remap this combo again with something else.
  17. 01:37:108 (1) - I think that it's better if you move this spinner to the next red tick.
  18. 01:54:544 (5,6) - Perhaps replace this 2 notes with a slider?
  19. 02:10:954 (5,6) - Exactly the same as I told you about 01:13:518 (5,6) already.
  20. 02:26:979 (2) - Do NOT place notes at blue ticks. I highly don't recommend you to do this in a Normal difficulty. Try something else in this combo.. this is difficult in my opinion.
  21. 02:29:031 (2) - ^
  22. 02:41:210 (1,2,3) - This doesn't sound good to me. I suggest you to try this:
    SPOILER
  23. 02:45:056 (1,2,3) - ^:
    SPOILER
  24. 03:04:288 (5,6) - Replace with a slider to follow better the vocals?
  25. 03:37:108 (5,6) - ^
  26. 03:43:774 (1) - I really don't.. understand the purpose of all those repeats of this slider. They aren't following anything. I suggest you to try something else here. Perhaps this?:
    SPOILER
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    Design

  27. 01:44:544 (4) - How about making stright this slider just like (1) and (2)?
  28. 02:00:954 (4) - ^

    Nothing else to point out. The difficulty looks.. hm.. how to describe..? Average? Yeah, that's it, average. Looks like a common Normal difficulty. It can be improved, yes, but I don't see something that really should be changed and I really dislike nazi mods so that's all I have to say about the design.
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    Hitsounds


    Uhh I really don't get the way you used samples so I'll not mention anything about this. You should use samples in a regularly way.. like in the Easy difficulty (for example). The samples that I less understand are the claps and in some cases, the whistles.
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    Combos


    The combos are alright.
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    Not bad~ You just need some more mods to improve everything a bit here.

[Hard]


  • Settings
  1. Perhaps increase HP Drain by 1 since this is your hardest difficulty of your mapset?
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    Mapping

  2. 00:10:441 (6) - I'm not really sure about this, but if I'm not wrong, this kind of sliders aren't rankable. I would ask someone else right now but is late and I don't have any friend mapper online at this hours hehe.
  3. 00:34:287 (4,5) - Replace this 2 notes with a slider to follow better the vocals?
  4. 00:37:108 (3) - Perhaps move this note 1 tick back and add a note at 00:36:851?
  5. 00:38:646 (5,6) - And again, replace this 2 notes with a slider?
  6. 00:42:492 (4,5) - ^
  7. 01:01:210 (7,8) - ^
  8. 01:03:903 (x) - Add a note here?
  9. 01:05:313 (8) - Oh this slider again. lol.
  10. 01:11:467 (3) - Well this one is too much. The player doesn't know that there's a nude while playing.. you should try another shape.
  11. 01:12:108 (x) - Add a note?
  12. 01:13:518 (7) - lol again.
  13. 01:23:518 (5,6) - Replace with a slider?
  14. 01:24:544 (9) - Perhaps delete this note? It isn't following anything in my opinion.
  15. 01:25:569 (2,3) - This doesn't follow the music at all to me. Try this instead:
    SPOILER
  16. 01:28:646 (8) - Again, the same as I told you about 01:24:544 (9) already.
  17. 02:25:826 (1) - Unrankable.
  18. 02:27:877 (5) - ^ I don't understand the need of making such a weird slider and copying it several times.
  19. 02:42:492 (4) - Confusing sudden jump. It doesn't at least fit with the music in my opinion.
  20. 02:44:544 (4) - ^
  21. 02:46:082 (5) - Hey you.
  22. 02:51:979 (7,8) - Replace with a slider?
  23. 02:54:672 (x) - Add a note?
  24. 03:02:236 (3) - Oh no, not you again..
  25. 03:04:287 (7) - ^
  26. 03:05:056 (x) - Add a note here? Sounds nice to me.
  27. 03:11:082 (x) - ^
  28. 03:12:492 (8) - Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
  29. 03:18:646 (3) - ...
  30. 03:20:697 (7) - Okay. I'm. tired. of. pointing. out. this. freaking. slider.
  31. 03:24:800 (7,8) - Replace this 2 notes with a slider too?
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    Design

    Just the same as I told you about your Normal difficulty.
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    Hitsounds

  32. 03:46:082 (4) - I really don't get why do you changed the samples to soft. You didn't used soft samples.. what's the point of using them only at the last note?

    And again, overall, the same as I told you about your Normal.
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    Combos

    Again, I seriously don't get some of your combos so I'll not say anything about this.
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    Good, you just need to replace some notes with slider to make a better rhythm. This diff still can be improved a lot, obviously. :3

Woah I'm really tired, believe me. Your map still needs work and many mods. Good luck!
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Kei O_O thanks a lot, it's a really great mod :D
Kirino Kousaka
655 posts
Joined November 2010
Kirino Kousaka
Hello!~ Here's my mod!~ and sorry for being late! >< (a request from my queue)

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:54:544 (1) - I find this spinner awkward to be here. Replace this spinner with notes.
  2. 02:24:287 (1,2) - Replace these sliders into one slider, copy "02:26:595" (1)'s design, and let it start at "02:24:544".
  3. 03:41:210 (3,1) - I don't like this overlap. :o

    [Normal]
  4. 00:16:082 (3) - Remove "clap" on end.
  5. 00:16:595 (4) - ^
  6. 00:17:364 (1) - Remove "clap" on end and put at the reverse arrow.
  7. 00:18:646 (3) - Put "clap".
  8. 00:19:415 (1) - Remove "clap" on end and put at the reverse arrow.
  9. 00:20:697 (3) - Put "clap".
  10. 00:21:467 (1) - Remove "clap" on end and put at the reverse arrow.
  11. 00:22:749 (3) - Put "clap".
  12. 00:23:518 (1) - Remove "clap" and "whistle" at the start and put them on end.
  13. 00:25:569 (1) - Remove "clap" on end and put at the reverse arrow.
  14. 00:26:595 (3) - Remove "clap".
  15. 00:26:851 (4) - Put "clap".
  16. 00:27:620 (1) - Remove "clap" on end and put at the reverse arrow.
  17. 00:28:903 (3) - Put "clap".

    [Hard]
  18. 01:09:415 (10) - Add NC.
  19. 01:10:954 (2) - Put "clap" on start and remove at end.
  20. 01:36:338 (4) - Add NC.
  21. 01:50:441 (10) - ^
  22. 01:51:979 (2) - Put "clap" on start and remove at end.
  23. 02:06:851 (10) - Add NC.
  24. 02:08:390 (2) - Put "clap" on start and remove at end.
  25. 03:00:185 (9) - Add NC.
  26. 03:01:723 (2) - Put "clap" on start and remove at end.
  27. 03:16:595 (10) - Add NC.
  28. 03:33:005 (10) - ^
That's all~ :D
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Kirino Kousaka thaaanks ^^
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
request from my modding queue

I think add a silent sliderslide will be better
[easy]
00:24:288 (3) - remove the clap in the beginning
00:44:801 (4,2) - overlap a bit
00:49:416 (2) - finish in the end
01:35:057 (1,2,3,1,2) - looks bad.try symmetrical
01:42:236 (3) - add whislte in the beginning will be better imo
02:24:287 (1,2) - try this
03:44:800 (3) - try this.and remove two clap and add whistle in the and

[normal]
01:33:261 (1,2,3,4) - really off..
01:39:159 (1) - too far from the spinner
03:41:723 (3) - spacing
hitsound set sounds really noisy.try 24clap
many 1/4 and 1/2 notes in this diff..I think this diff is not normal it more like a hard diff

[hard]
00:48:133 (1) - remove clap
01:42:236 (7,8) - whistle
hitsound set sounds really noisy.try 24clap
more 1/4 notes..I think this should be insane

diff spread is bad imo:<try make easy harder to be a normal and change normal hard to hard insane
btw offset is a little off.
GiNa
1,023 posts
Joined September 2010
GiNa
Hi

[Easy]
-AR +1
-I think Tick Rate 2 is a bit too much for this diff
00:49:402 (2) – overlaps with the next slider
00:53:505 (3) – [nazi] move to x:288 y:100
00:54:531 (1) – this is rather confusing imo, maybe try this instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/251807
01:23:248 (2) – [nazi] this shape can be improved more, move the first way (not the starting point) point to x:152 y:180, second way point to x:196 y:104

[Normal]
-SV 1.7 with distance snap 0.9, too squeezing imo
00:14:531 (1) – not straight, doing this on purpose ?
00:59:787 (1) – you use too much this kind of 1/4 slider (since there are more after this), this makes your map harder than the normal “Normal”
02:26:582 (1,2,3) – try to avoid this kind of pattern in normal (use a slider instead, just like what you did in easy), it’s quite hard to click a note on blue tick, it also makes your map even unnecessary harder
02:40:941 (1) – shape can be improved more, 1st way point x:88 y:132, 2nd way point x:120 y:40
03:18:120 (2) – a little overlap with the previous slider

[Hard]
-HP -1 ?
02:45:813 (4) – x:396 y:100
02:46:069 (5) – x:396 y:172
03:09:915 (2) – x:164 y:276
03:26:325 (2) – slider end point x:248 y:272
03:38:377 – add a note
03:40:428 – ^
Oh, some of the claps on the red tick don't really fit.

That was a bit nazi, sorry :(
I think offset is okay btw
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Thanks GiNa =)
bossandy
osu! Alumni
1,671 posts
Joined May 2010
bossandy
  • Hi hi~ request from my queue~ ( 2 diffs mod )
    　
    General :
    　
  1. 00:09:402 (T) - move this timing section to 00:00:684!!!
    　
    Easy :
    　
    ( Nice mapest here ! Keep your map as now )
    　
  2. 00:49:416 (2) - clap start~
  3. 00:51:979 (2,3) - Very strange rythm try this rythm :
  4. 02:39:159 (1) - This spinner start at 02:38:903
  5. 03:32:492 (2) - spacing
  6. 03:44:800 (3) - -1/2 beat sounds better
    　
    Hard :
    　
    ( You should try to make this diff prettier )
    　
  7. 00:48:120 (1) - This spinner should start at 00:47:864
  8. 02:01:454 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This part is too confusion for anyone , try to change this part
  9. Nothing more to say... but I really think you need to put notes or sliders pretty!!!
    　
    You must to read~!
    Red : I think you must to fix. Bule : need to discuss. Black : just suggest.
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Nice song~
Good Luck :3
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
bossandy, thx for mod :3
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,737 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
Hi IchiGUN :)

From my mod queue :D (You don't need to follow all of my mod because it just be a suggestion)

Easy
set preview point to 58120 same as other diff
00:45:826 (1,2) - spacing (honestly, this can be ignored but following the rules may be better.)
00:50:442 (1) - left 1 grid and down 1 grid will make it properly with 00:49:416 (2) -
00:51:980 (2) - down 1 grid makes it fit with (1) and (3)
03:13:518 (1) - add finish at the start
03:44:800 (3) - I suggest to reduce volume on the end of the slider and add whistle


Normal
01:34:787 (4) - add note ?
02:48:890 (1) - new combo here for prevent a bug

It seems some hitsound you should check overall again (I think it's good to be same as easy)


Hard
00:19:402 (6) - sound changed , so NC here
00:20:172 (1) - remove new combo
00:21:454 (4) - NC here
00:29:915 (1) - I think using vocal on this slider may be better so move this slider to 00:29:659 (1) - and drag to 00:30:172 -
00:47:864 (1) - drag to 00:49:915 and add finish ?
02:25:813 (1) - remove new combo here and new combo 02:26:582 (2) - instead
02:28:633 (6) - new combo here will make it same other part like this
02:29:915 (1) - remove new combo here
03:13:505 (3) - add finish ?
03:29:915 (3) - ^

hard is relax and fine :3

good luck :D
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,149 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what i can find.

General:
The preview time is inconsistent. like Frostmourne said set it to 58120 like the other diffs.
add "ending" in the tags since this is the ending in the anime.
the offset should be at 684. well that's where the big white tick is. i'm no timing expert but start it there. i feel that there should be notes there because there's so many opportunities where you can add notes.

Easy:
00:15:057 (3) - this wave slider can look a lot smoother.
00:40:185 (4) - unstack this because beginners might hit this too early or late.
00:45:826 (1,2) - spacing error. it's at 0.93. instead try to make the slider like this or something close to this as it not only follow the spacing, but it blankets the next slider.
01:23:262 (2) - just make this a curved slider. i don't like the turn at the end because it looks ugly.
02:07:877 (1) - this wave slider can look nicer.
02:34:031 (2) - make this a 1/2 slider with a repeat. it follow vocals accurately. if you ignore this then make this a 1/2 slider like at 02:36:082.
02:36:082 (2) - ^. if you ignore this leave it as it is.
03:11:467 (3) - same as 00:40:185.
03:23:774 (4) - ^

Normal:
00:30:941 (3) - remove this and start at 00:30:813. add a slider and end it till 00:31:197. it follows vocals accurately.
01:00:684 (3,4) - replace this for a 1/1 slider as it follows vocals nicely.
01:09:402 (3,4) - ^
01:32:736 (6) - delete this note. you're following vocals not the instrumental.
01:34:018 (2,3) - delete these 2 notes and do this: add a slider and end it till 01:34:402. add a repeat as well as it follows vocals accurately.
01:42:223 (3,4) - same as 01:00:684
01:50:428 (3,4) - ^
01:58:633 (3,4) - ^
02:06:838 (3,4) - ^
02:31:710 - add a circle to follow the drum?
02:51:966 (3,4) - same as 01:00:684
03:00:172 (3,4) - ^
03:08:377 (3,4) - ^
03:16:582 (3,4) - ^
03:24:787 (3,4) - ^
03:32:992 (3,4) - ^
what really puzzled me is the clap hitsounds during kiai time. they don't sound right if it's at the red ticks. it'd sound better if it was at the white ticks.

Hard:
00:19:402 (6) - IMO this looks boring. instead make this repeat once and add another 1/4 slider to replace the last repeat and the end.
00:23:505 - add a 1/2 slider and delete (2) to follow vocals.
00:24:531 - same a above but delete (4)
01:29:146 (1,2) - you can replace this for a 1/2 slider with a repeat, replace (1) for a 1/2 slider and leave (2), or replace these both for a 1/1 slider. it follows vocals accurately.
01:40:941 (2) - make this a proper curved slider. it looks ugly like that.
01:49:915 (7) - delete this note because there's no vocals here.
01:58:248 - add a circle to follow vocals?
02:05:813 (4,5) - replace this for a slider as it follows the pause.
02:40:901 - same as 01:58:248
03:16:069 (7) - same as 01:49:915
03:27:479 - same as 01:58:248
03:32:479 (7) - same as 01:19:915
IMO this needs work on the notes. there's so many opportunities where you can add notes mainly because of the vocals and instrumental if you listen carefully, and again with the claps.

This is the best i can do. GL :D
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Frostmourne, Byakugan249 thanks a lot ^^
ryuu
802 posts
Joined February 2011
ryuu
привет,ичи,черри :3
песня няша ;w;
все предложения,всё можете игнорить.

[Easy]

00:17:108 (1) - подними повыше
00:29:928 (2) - перемести куда-нибудь,чтобы начало было не под концом (3)
00:34:031 (1) - подними
00:50:441 (1) - как-нибудь вот так http://puu.sh/iZw4
00:54:544 (1) - перемести из-под слайдера
01:08:390 (3) - перемести куда-нибудь
01:09:416 (4) - выше
01:38:133 (3) - предлагаю убрать репит,а на место начала киая бит
02:02:236 (2) - выше
02:24:544 (1) - убери с середины
02:41:723 (1) - ^
02:47:877 (3) - как и на 01:38:133 (3)
02:50:954 (3) - подними немного выше
02:54:031 (2) - перемести
03:09:415 (1) - подними
03:23:774 (4) - ^
03:25:313 (5) - вместо него один бит на начале слайда
03:32:492 (2) - близко к слайдеру

[Normal]

00:18:633 (3) - перемести куда-нибудь
00:37:864 (1) - подними повыше
00:42:736 (4) - ^

[Hard]

00:44:787 (6) - измени форму
00:50:172 (1) - убери с середины
01:08:633 (5,6,7,8,9) - лично я не люблю такие формы. может лучше плавной линией?
01:11:454 (3) - не используй его ТАК часто. твоя копипаста очень даже заметна
01:25:813 (3) - некрасивый
01:29:146 (1,2,3,4) - предлагаю вместо http://puu.sh/iZBA --> http://puu.sh/iZBF. чтобы миленько под вокал
01:32:992 (1) - удали
02:02:223 (5,6,7) - убери оттуда
02:05:941 - ноту. чтобы уже был полноценный стримик
02:41:197 (1) - убери с середины
всё. так,вроде,мило. но сильно напрягает много раз повторяющийся слайдер. я понимаю,он мило выглядит и под вокал подходит,но всё же так часто не стоит.

всё,нян.
надеюсь,что хоть как-то помогла ._.
удачи ~
BCI
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Joined May 2011
BCI

[Ryuu] wrote:

привет,ичи,черри :3 привет же~

[Easy]

00:17:108 (1) - подними повыше окей
00:29:928 (2) - перемести куда-нибудь,чтобы начало было не под концом (3) да тут до спннера перемещать ;_; окей
00:34:031 (1) - подними ок же
00:50:441 (1) - как-нибудь вот так http://puu.sh/iZw4 коварный незаметный оверлап хс
00:54:544 (1) - перемести из-под слайдера как то я походу хорошо переместила, что не вижу там ничего о_о
01:08:390 (3) - перемести куда-нибудь кудаа-нибудь~
01:09:416 (4) - выше совсем чуть-чуть ><
01:38:133 (3) - предлагаю убрать репит,а на место начала киая бит в ритме ж ничего не изменилось :3
02:02:236 (2) - выше с радостью, но округление не ок тогда
02:24:544 (1) - убери с середины
02:41:723 (1) - ^ ^ везде убрала
02:47:877 (3) - как и на 01:38:133 (3) ну да, у меня как раз такой же ответ
02:50:954 (3) - подними немного выше мхм
02:54:031 (2) - перемести зачеем? о_о
03:09:415 (1) - подними с дистанс снапом не поднимается
03:23:774 (4) - ^ там ж вроде хороший стак о~о
03:25:313 (5) - вместо него один бит на начале слайда два лучше, но спасибо что обратила на это мое внимание :3
03:32:492 (2) - близко к слайдеру теперь вроде нет
спасибо же :3

Download: Horie Yui - Coloring (Full Ver.) (IchiGUN) [Easy].osu
Nichiyouki
1,579 posts
Joined August 2011
Nichiyouki
Hi, IchiGUN

From my modding queue

[Easy]
HP +1
OD -1
01:07:878 (2) - Move to x:460 y:220 (May not be different from the original. but it would be more beautiful as well.)
01:56:082 (2,4) - Make to (2) has slider shapes to similar with (4).
03:32:492 (2) - Distance from (1) is near. I suggest that move circle to up 2 slot.

[Normal]
AR +1
00:33:761 (1) - Remove whistle in the end of slider.
01:09:402 (3) - Add whistle in the beginning of slider.
02:10:941 (5) - Add finish in the end of slider.
03:45:813 (4) - Remove finish in the end of slider.

[Hard]
00:22:223 (1) - Change 1 slider to 2 circle?
00:37:607 (x) - Add a note?
00:58:120 (1) - Move to x:232 y:212
01:06:325 (3) - Add finish
01:26:838 (x) - Add a note?
01:39:146 (1) - Move to x:284 y:172
01:47:351 (3) - Add finish
02:03:761 (3) - ^
02:57:095 (3) - ^
03:13:505 (3) - ^
03:46:069 (4) - I think that sound is strange here.

That's all, that I can find them.
Nice map and song, star.

Good luck.
IchiGUN
778 posts
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Topic Starter
IchiGUN
nich95 thanks a lot :D
Loneight
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Loneight
Request from my modding queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[General]
kiai time have to same , but [Easy] not same as other diff .

[Easy]
remove 00:17:620 bookmark

00:34:031 (1) - this ? http://puu.sh/jm5Y
00:45:826 (1,2) - distance seem to strange
02:28:646 (1) - rhythm strange a bit , how about like 02:28:646 ?
02:45:313 (1,2) - how about like this ? http://puu.sh/jm60
03:29:928 (1,2) - distance
03:44:800 (3) - this rhythm strange at end

244,84,34031,6,0,B|304:136|256:216|256:216|208:300|284:356,1,300,8|0
320,280,36082,2,0,B|388:272|404:208,2,100,8|0|8

[Normal]
Um...I feel dizzy that has been in the cruising .

some place difficult for Normal like :
00:59:402 (4,1)...,02:29:915 (4,5)

and I think some place only copy and turn. OAO

00:51:197 (1) - RNC ?
01:03:505 (4) - rotation at white line ?
02:40:941 (1) - this not pretty ?
02:45:043 (1) - ^

[Hard]
Um...I also feel dizzy that has been in the cruising .
I also think some place only copy and turn.

00:34:274 (4) - not pretty
00:38:377 (4) - ^
00:42:479 (4) - ^
00:59:915 (2) - ^
01:23:505 (5) - ^
01:40:941 (2) - ^
02:01:325 (x) - add a circle ?
02:25:813 (1) - not pretty
02:50:684 (2) - ^

good song
and sorry to my poor English
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
thx l1106188 :D
Leorda
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Leorda
Privet

Easy
* Set the red timing section to 00:08:890 for consistency on each diff
* Set the preview time to 58120 for consistency on each diff
* All kiai times on this diff are different on others diff


00:44:801 (4) - Repeating arrow is overlapped by hitbursts. Some beginners are slowly to read the repeating arrow
02:02:236 (2) - The head slider is almost offscreen (just give a warning)
02:41:723 (1) - Don't put the center of spinner, because it'll overlapped by hitbursts. Some beginners are slow to read this note


Normal
* AR +1 or +2?

00:47:095 (3,4) - Try to move further away from previous pattern? Because it's a bit confusing since I thought this is a small jumps
00:50:172 (1) - Too far from for normal diff. It can't reach this after spinner for beginners
01:39:146 1) - ^
02:48:890 (1) - ^


Hard
00:19:402 (6) - New combo?
00:20:172 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:40:813 (1) - Too close from previous notes, it makes confusing for players about spacing
01:41:966 (6,7,8) - This part seems hard to read for players. Because when you click (6), it came with 1/1 click at (7,8) with one stack. I suggest you to unstack it to make it readable
01:58:248 (x) - Add note here?
02:02:223 (5,6,7) - Hard to read because it overlapped by hitbursts. You need to move further away from it
02:24:531 (6,7,8) - This notes are hard to predict the timing, because this three notes are stacked and overlapped by hitbursts
03:08:120 (7,8,9) - Same issue as 01:41:966 (6,7,8)


Good luck!!!
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
Leorda thanks a lot ;)
DarknessAngel
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DarknessAngel
request from ★(oﾟ∀`从'∀ﾟo)★-Gamu-'s Modding Queue



Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice



Hard

  1. 02:39:787 (1) - the spinner start at [02:38:890] will flow better,and plarers can have enough time to get the score~
  2. hmm...although this diff doesn't have many problem,I feel a little boring when I play it.
    You can try to make some change to make your diff better to play



Normal

  1. 01:12:095 (1) - The beginner is not good at guessing how many reserve are in a short time,you had better fix it.maybe make this ?
  2. 01:53:120 (1) - ^
  3. 02:09:531 (1) - ^
  4. 03:02:864 (1) - ^
  5. 03:02:864 (1) - make it curved because it is ugly that the slider touch too much with [03:18:120 (2)]
  6. 03:19:274 (1) - same as [01:12:095 (1)]
  7. 03:35:684 (1) - ^

Easy

  1. AR +2,I think it will be better to play
  2. 00:46:325 (2) - wrong spacing here
  3. 03:01:710 (2) - don't make this kind of overlap in Easy diff,beginner is not good at reading it
    you can change it to this pattern
  4. 03:15:556 (3) - wrong spacing
  5. 03:25:300 (5) - ^
  6. I like the hitsound setting in this diff ~


great song ~ ! !
good luck ~
IchiGUN
778 posts
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Topic Starter
IchiGUN
DarknessAngel, thanks :)
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ IchiGUN ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. Add 'ending' in tags.

[Hard]


  1. 00:10:428 (6) - Try move to center?
  2. 00:14:915 - Add a note here,sound much better with me.
  3. 00:19:402 (6) - Try like this rhythm.
  4. 00:28:377 (6,7,8) - Slound change like this rhythm.
  5. 00:30:428 (2,3,4) - Same as above.
  6. 00:32:479 (2,3,4) - ^
  7. 00:36:325 (2) - Extend to here 00:36:838.
  8. 01:42:223 (7) - Add new combo.
  9. 03:08:377 (8) - ^

[Normal]


  1. 01:54:531 (5,6,1) - Using same spacing.
  2. 03:40:684 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:44:787 (3,4) - Try like this rhythm,sound much better.
  4. 01:44:531 (4) - This slider should change 1/4.
  5. 02:00:941 (4) - ^

[Easy]


  1. AR+1 or 2 much better with play.

That's all ~

Good luck ~
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN
Kawayi Rika thaaanks =^ ^=
riffy
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riffy

Leorda wrote:

Privet
Я не понял зачем, но надо перепроверить \:D/
РАНКНИ ЕЕ УЖЕ НАКОНЕЦ

истинная причина, почему я тут
ДВА КУДОСА
Я же их заработал, да?

Easy
00:11:454 (3) - слегка не очень обводка. мб так?
код

256,192,11454,2,0,B|284:252|356:232,2,100,2|0|2
00:21:710 (2,1) - слайдер еще идет, а на нем появляется серкл! как такое играть новичкам? неаккуратно немного D:
00:25:813 (2) и 00:28:377 (3) - чууть чуть неровно. Сделай ровнее
00:36:069 (2) - х308 у272
00:44:787 (4) - может запутать слоупока новичка
00:46:325 (2) - неровно
00:50:428 (1,2) - странно смотрятся
скрин
00:54:531 (1) - стакнуть с началом 00:51:966 (2)
01:31:454 (1) - попробуй подровнять ><
скрин
01:35:556 (2,1) - страшно D:
скрин
01:44:274 (2) - какой-то не обводочный, хотя красивый, да.
01:49:402 (3) - неровная обводка
01:53:505 (3) - http://puu.sh/mKty вот так может?
02:05:813 (1) - обводка неровная
02:24:531 (1,1) - стучат по синим тикам, хотя в идеале для изей подходит 1/2 и 1/1
02:45:300 (1,3) - пересекаются
02:54:018 (2) - неровная обводка
02:57:607 (2,4) - может как-то видоизменить (4) чтоб он подходил под (2)
03:03:248 (4,1) - не очень красиво вроде

Normal
00:23:505 (1,2,3) - что то вроде такого пойдет лучше. Сделай аккуратно :3
cкрин
00:25:300 (5,1) - нк передвинь, ну нелогично смотрится. Если мапать под слова, то да. нк у тебя ок. Но структура выглядит рваной.
00:27:351 (5,1) - ^
00:29:402 (4,1) - ^ Больше повторять это не буду, если еще будут такие, то ты и без моей помощи увидишь. :3
00:39:659 (1) - форма ни о чем, повисли в воздухе. Некрасиво. ><
00:43:761 (1,2) - я бы видоизменил, и сделал так, чтоб они образовывали полукруг :O
00:53:505 (5) - возвратным? или нотку на белый тик в конце
00:59:787 (1) - oh, why? D: НУ НЕ ИГРАЮТСЯ ОНИ. Слайдеры на 2 повтора должны умереть ><
01:12:095 (1) - ^ Я их ненавижу. Как и многие игроки. Зачем занижать оценку хорошей карте?
01:12:736 (2,3,4) - измени положение, смотрятся ниочем. Знаешь, тааак, понатыканы где попало D:
01:39:146 (1,2,3) - (1) forever alone. Сделай его радостнее. Дай ему обводить (3)
01:40:813 (1) - ПРОСТО ПЕРЕМАПАЙ К ЧЕРТУ ЭТОТ СЛАЙДЕР
01:49:018 (1) - ^
01:50:428 (3) - длинный и скучный. Сделай его с интересной формой.
01:56:069 (2) - странно он выходит из (1) обводка кривая
01:57:223 (1) - i hate it
02:05:428 (1) - прямо по ушам ездит. Замении нафиг
02:27:864 (4,1) - кривовата обводка
02:34:787 (1) - х388 у184
02:40:941 (1) - страшный D:
02:45:043 (1) - ^
02:50:556 (1) - НЕТ
02:58:761 (1) - попробуй их с фл или хидденом поиграть. БЕСЯТ
03:02:864 (1) - ^
03:06:966 (1) - понел, да
03:15:172 (1) - даже писать лень
03:19:274 (1) - больше не пишу про них

Hard
00:41:710 (6,1) - нк перенисти
00:44:787 (6) - преврати его в обводку для 00:46:069 (1,2,3)
00:52:223 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - ВНЕЗАПНАЯ СТРАННАЯ ЗВЕЗДОЧКА
00:56:325 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6) - весь день сижу и ищу мапы, в который столько кликов подряд. Даже в редких аппрувах такое есть \:D/

Чем выше сложность, тем ленивее моддить ><
Короче Nice Diffs

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Я устал модить. Good luck~
Лучше б был бг с юри D:
/me runs

Напиши, что применишь \:D/
AM I NICE MODDER? D:
Hinsvar
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Hinsvar
Just passing by.

You MUST remove that (Full Ver.) phrase on the title. We don't really need the phrase to know that this mapset has the full version of the song, and majority of the songs from many anime (their full version, of course) that already got ranked doesn't have the phrase, anyway, so it's basically redundant.

Just that.

No kudosu.

Good luck 8-)

Also, full submit.

EDIT: Also, this is in the graveyard already? :|
IchiGUN
778 posts
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Topic Starter
IchiGUN

Hinsvar wrote:

Just passing by.

You MUST remove that (Full Ver.) phrase on the title. We don't really need the phrase to know that this mapset has the full version of the song, and majority of the songs from many anime (their full version, of course) that already got ranked doesn't have the phrase, anyway, so it's basically redundant. Yey..thx =)

Just that.

No kudosu.

Good luck 8-)

Also, full submit.Done
Thanks :3 I must to finish this map :oops:
riffy
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riffy
YAAAGRH!
GO RANK IT! :D/
Beren
962 posts
Joined September 2009
Beren
Hi/

[General]
remove 2osb

[Easy]
00:31:454 (1) - finish
00:54:018 (3) - ^
01:12:479 (1) - remove finish,soft volume10%
01:26:838 (2) - whistle
01:35:043 (1) - finish
02:09:915 (1) - remove finish,soft volume10%
02:31:966 (X) - add note and clap?
03:36:069 (1) - remove finish,soft volume10%
03:46:069 (3) - whistle

[Normal]
00:24:787 (4) - remove clap add whistle
00:29:402 (4) - move to 00:29:146?
00:31:454 (4) - move to 00:31:197
00:33:248 (X) - add note
00:48:120 (1) - whistle
01:35:043 (5) - remove
01:37:351 (1) - remove finish add whistle
02:24:274 (3) - whistle
02:31:710 (4) - remove
03:41:710 (3) - remove finish add whistle
03:41:966 (4) - whistle

[Hard]
00:44:787 (6) - end at 00:45:556
01:01:197 (7) - whistle
01:01:710 (7) - ^
01:05:300 (9) - ^
01:29:402 (X) - add note
01:30:428 (5) - ^
01:31:838 (5) - ^
01:34:018 (5) - end at 01:34:787 add whistle
01:44:915 (X) - add note
01:58:633 (8) - whistle
01:59:146 (8) - ^
02:01:325 (X) - add note
02:40:941 (X) - ^
02:46:069 (5) - move to 02:46:069 end at 02:46:582
02:51:966 (7) - whistle
03:02:864 (X) - add note
03:19:274 (X) - ^
03:27:479 (X) - ^

GL~
Akemi_Homura
1,509 posts
Joined February 2011
Akemi_Homura
Hi~ IchiGUN~ :3
Request from PM~

  • [General]
  1. You can use this Hit Sound. ex) 00:33:505
  2. There are two .osb file in a folder. Delete one Please~ :3

  • [Easy]
  1. AR +1
  2. 85% volume is too loud~ please set them 70%
    Click~
  3. 00:34:018(1) - improve blanket please~ :3
  4. 02:24:531(1) - Hidden by osu. Please move this slider~
    Click~
  5. 02:31:966 - add note with clap~
  6. 02:50:941(3) - (nazi) 2 grids up~
  7. 03:28:890(3) - Move this slider.meet with HP Bar~
    Click~

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:50:172(1,2,3) - (2) and (3) are hidden by osu. Please move these notes.
    Click~
  2. 02:40:941(1) - make curve perfectly~ :3
  3. 02:45:043(1) - ^

  • [Hard]
  1. 00:29:659 - add note
  2. 00:30:428(2,3,4,5) - 1st, little bit monotonous ;w; separate those notes.
    　　　　　　　　　　2nd, remove (2),(3) and make slider.
    Click~
  3. 00:32:479(2,3,4,5) - same here~ :3
  4. 02:01:325 - add note~ like this part : 02:54:659
  5. 02:11:710 - ^
  6. 02:31:966(4,5,6) - spacing (x0.8) I recommend this~ :P
    Click~
  7. 02:34:018(4,5,6) - ^
    Click~
  8. 02:36:069(4,5,6) - ^
    Click~
  9. 02:38:120(4,5,6) - ^
    Click~
  10. 02:41:197(1) - This note hidden by osu. please move this~
    Click~
  11. 03:02:864 - add note~ and try this~ :3
    Click~
  12. 03:07:607(4,5) - seperate these two notes like this~
    Click~
  13. 03:09:915(2) - (nazi) 1 grid up~
  14. 03:27:479 - add note~~
  15. 03:35:684 - add note and nc
  16. 03:35:813(1) - remove nc

That's all~
GL to your map~ >w</
IchiGUN
778 posts
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Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Thx Beren and Akemi_Homura - really awesome mod :3 so many fixed :)
Backstep
1,007 posts
Joined September 2009
Backstep
Form challenge queue ;w;

General

- This is all my suggestion. (I follow vocal and rhythm.)

BCI's Easy

00:44:787 (4) - Press ctrl+H ,then move this note like this ? (It's not cover previous slider)

01:10:428 (1) - Head slider add finish.
02:07:864 (1) - ^
02:47:864 (3) - Tail slider add finish.
02:49:402 (1) - Move this note to don't cover (3)

03:01:197 (1) - Finish.

Normal

00:20:172 (2) - Head slider add whistle.
00:52:223 (1) - ^
01:05:300 (3) - Whistle.
01:09:402 (3) - Head slider add whistle.
01:12:992 (3) - Whistle.
01:23:761 (4) - ^
01:27:864 (3) - ^
02:02:736 (3) - ^
02:10:428 (3) - ^
02:56:069 (3) - ^
03:03:761 (3) - ^
03:28:890 (3) - ^
03:37:095 (5) - Head slider add whistle.

Hard

00:20:172 (3,4) - Whistle.
01:35:813 (3) - 1 grid left, whistle
01:36:838 (3) - Whistle.
01:50:428 (1,2) - ^
02:06:838 (1,2) - ^
02:24:274 (4) - You can use your custom hitsound.
03:00:172 (1,2) - Whistle.
03:16:582 (1,2) - ^
03:24:787 (7) - Whistle all slider.
03:32:992 (1,2) - Whistle.

Good luck :)
Poggo
1,502 posts
Joined January 2012
Poggo
эм привет Ichikun ~~ я тут так мимо проходила смотрю бабла нет, думаю надо помодить ха ха :> :D

HARD

00:30:428(2) - этот слайдер лучше сделать до красного тика, и две ноты стримом. там же прям в музыке тик почему бы на него не поставить ноту? (или как вариант можно сделать слайдер до синего тика и ноту на белый, оно и так и так звучит не плохо)

00:32:479 - вот тут лучше вариант с синим тиком

00:49:402 - закончи спинер тут, а на большой белый тик ноту

01:05:300 - *facepalm* сделай ты его ровным этот чортов слайдер http://puu.sh/y4Qj

01:13:120 - а симметричным сделать никак да?) http://puu.sh/y4Rm

01:25:813 - убери красную *плесень* с этого слайдера и сделай просто округлым

01:28:633 - ну тут никак эта нота не слышиться да ещё и с клапом ;w; подвинь на белый к стриму и на большой белый ноту

01:32:736 - эту просто к стриму подвинь

02:11:710 - может эту нотку удалить и сделать так же как на конце первого киаи тайма?

02:41:454 - 02:43:505 сюда ноты добавь

02:48:633(5,1) - о боже ж ты мой анстакни хоть как-нибудь перед началом киаи тайма ну месиво сплошное ;w;

03:20:684 - опять эта корявка) я выше уже говорила об этом

Усё посмотрела нормал и изю вроде пойдёт :3 Удачи с ранком няш ^.^
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

backstep wrote:

Form challenge queue ;w;

General

- This is all my suggestion. (I follow vocal and rhythm.)

BCI's Easy

00:44:787 (4) - Press ctrl+H ,then move this note like this ? (It's not cover previous slider)

01:10:428 (1) - Head slider add finish.
02:07:864 (1) - ^
02:47:864 (3) - Tail slider add finish.
02:49:402 (1) - Move this note to don't cover (3)

03:01:197 (1) - Finish.

Normal

00:20:172 (2) - Head slider add whistle.
00:52:223 (1) - ^
01:05:300 (3) - Whistle.
01:09:402 (3) - Head slider add whistle.
01:12:992 (3) - Whistle.
01:23:761 (4) - ^
01:27:864 (3) - ^
02:02:736 (3) - ^
02:10:428 (3) - ^
02:56:069 (3) - ^
03:03:761 (3) - ^
03:28:890 (3) - ^
03:37:095 (5) - Head slider add whistle.

Hard

00:20:172 (3,4) - Whistle.
01:35:813 (3) - 1 grid left, whistle
01:36:838 (3) - Whistle.
01:50:428 (1,2) - ^
02:06:838 (1,2) - ^
02:24:274 (4) - You can use your custom hitsound.
03:00:172 (1,2) - Whistle.
03:16:582 (1,2) - ^
03:24:787 (7) - Whistle all slider.
03:32:992 (1,2) - Whistle.

Good luck :)
Fixed all 8-)

Katty Pie wrote:

эм привет Ichikun ~~ я тут так мимо проходила смотрю бабла нет, думаю надо помодить ха ха :> :D

HARD

00:30:428(2) - этот слайдер лучше сделать до красного тика, и две ноты стримом. там же прям в музыке тик почему бы на него не поставить ноту? (или как вариант можно сделать слайдер до синего тика и ноту на белый, оно и так и так звучит не плохо)

00:32:479 - вот тут лучше вариант с синим тиком

00:49:402 - закончи спинер тут, а на большой белый тик ноту No

01:05:300 - *facepalm* сделай ты его ровным этот чортов слайдер http://puu.sh/y4Qj

01:13:120 - а симметричным сделать никак да?) http://puu.sh/y4Rm

01:25:813 - убери красную *плесень* с этого слайдера и сделай просто округлым

01:28:633 - ну тут никак эта нота не слышиться да ещё и с клапом ;w; подвинь на белый к стриму и на большой белый ноту No

01:32:736 - эту просто к стриму подвинь No

02:11:710 - может эту нотку удалить и сделать так же как на конце первого киаи тайма?

02:41:454 - 02:43:505 сюда ноты добавь

02:48:633(5,1) - о боже ж ты мой анстакни хоть как-нибудь перед началом киаи тайма ну месиво сплошное ;w;

03:20:684 - опять эта корявка) я выше уже говорила об этом

Усё посмотрела нормал и изю вроде пойдёт :3 Удачи с ранком няш ^.^
Спасибки за мод...остальное исправил! ;)
Naryuga
782 posts
Joined October 2010
Naryuga
Hi, here my mod requested in-Game :)

Blue = Highly recommended you fix.
Black = Just suggestions, which you can feel free to ignore if you don't like.

Here we go~

[General]
Clean~ :3

[BCI's Easy]
  1. 00:56:582 (3) - I don't like this slider's shape very much... try something like [url=http://puu.sh/y61W]this[url] ?
  2. 01:01:197 (4) - whistle on the head
  3. 01:09:402 (4) - ^
  4. 01:51:454 (1) - finish on the head
  5. 01:58:633 (5) - whistle on the head
  6. 02:02:223 (2) - this begins at very low place, so begginers may miss the approach circle. you should replace this to another place
  7. 02:11:966 - KIAI time should end here
  8. 02:39:146 (1) - start with 02:38:890 - ?
  9. 02:51:966 (4) - you can make symmetry with (2)
  10. 02:51:966 (4) - whistle on the head
  11. 03:07:864 (4) - whistle on the end
  12. 03:13:505 (1) - finish on the head
  13. 03:17:607 (1) - ^
  14. 03:32:992 (3) - whistle on the head
  15. 03:34:018 (1) - finish on the head
    - My whistle pattern suggestions come from something like 01:40:172 (2,3) and 01:50:428 (4) ~
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:556 (2) - clap instead of finish?
  2. 00:29:146 (4) - remove finish and add a note at 00:29:402 - ?
  3. 00:30:941 (3) - add clap or whistle, sounds good
  4. 00:32:992 (3) - ^
  5. 00:35:556 (1) - finish?
  6. 01:42:223 (3) - remove whistle from the way(curve?)
  7. 02:45:043 (1) - remove finish
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:377 (6,7,8,9,10) - I could hardly expect the rhythm because of placement.
  2. 01:58:633 (8) - remove whistle from the way
  3. 02:39:787 (1) - end at 02:40:941 - ?
  4. 02:42:992 - add a note (maybe on the end of the previous slider)?
  5. 03:24:787 (7) - like 01:58:633 (8)
That's all I guess.

Well, the hitsound in Normal and Hard sounds random to me. I guess you can improve more~

then, Good Luck ;)
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
mjw5150
from challenge queue~

[General]
please make the kiai the same in all diffs

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
you are so persistent to keep your beats at the vocal lol
00:09:146 - to follow the music,better to add a note here
00:09:274 - ^
00:11:197 - ^
00:11:325 - ^
00:18:248 (2,3) - move 2 to 00:18:377 and 3 to 00:18:505?sounds better for me
00:19:146 - why there is no object here :(
00:25:684 - add a note here to follow the vocal?
00:35:043 - add a note?
00:35:556 - ^
00:36:325 (2,3) - swap there 2 objects,sounds more fit the vocal
00:37:607 - add a note
00:39:146 - ^
00:39:659 -
00:44:787 (6) - shorten 1/4 it may follow the vocal better,also if you do this,add a note at 00:45:813
00:47:864 (1) - i prefer to add some beats instead of this spin,well if you don't agree,at least end it at 00:49:915
00:59:787 (1,2,3,4) - how about this?http://puu.sh/y9xY
a32
630 posts
Joined February 2010
a32
From challenge queue~


[General]
  1. The KIAI time on easy is different from others. (03:38:248)

[Easy]
  1. 02:38:120(2) - end at 02:38:377 like the previous slider?

[Normal]
  1. 00:38:633(3) - make this slider more beautiful? This one looks a little weird...
  2. 00:42:736(4) - ^
  3. 00:44:787(3) - ^
  4. 02:24:915(4) - I think it's difficult for beginners to hit the note on blue line...Maybe you should change some of them to a slider instead?
  5. 02:26:966(2) - ^

[Hard]
  1. AR+1?
  2. 00:10:428(6) - I found it playable, but I'm not sure if MATs or BATs will complain about it.
  3. 03:22:223(2) - Ctrl+R may be better?

That's all!Really nice map and I can't find much!Good luck~
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

Naryuga wrote:

Hi, here my mod requested in-Game :)

Blue = Highly recommended you fix.
Black = Just suggestions, which you can feel free to ignore if you don't like.

Here we go~

[General]
Clean~ :3

[BCI's Easy]
  1. 00:56:582 (3) - I don't like this slider's shape very much... try something like [url=http://puu.sh/y61W]this[url] ?
  2. 01:01:197 (4) - whistle on the head
  3. 01:09:402 (4) - ^
  4. 01:51:454 (1) - finish on the head
  5. 01:58:633 (5) - whistle on the head
  6. 02:02:223 (2) - this begins at very low place, so begginers may miss the approach circle. you should replace this to another place
  7. 02:11:966 - KIAI time should end here
  8. 02:39:146 (1) - start with 02:38:890 - ?
  9. 02:51:966 (4) - you can make symmetry with (2)
  10. 02:51:966 (4) - whistle on the head
  11. 03:07:864 (4) - whistle on the end
  12. 03:13:505 (1) - finish on the head
  13. 03:17:607 (1) - ^
  14. 03:32:992 (3) - whistle on the head
  15. 03:34:018 (1) - finish on the head
    - My whistle pattern suggestions come from something like 01:40:172 (2,3) and 01:50:428 (4) ~
    Fixed all :D
[Normal]
  1. 00:15:556 (2) - clap instead of finish?
  2. 00:29:146 (4) - remove finish and add a note at 00:29:402 - ?
  3. 00:30:941 (3) - add clap or whistle, sounds good
  4. 00:32:992 (3) - ^
  5. 00:35:556 (1) - finish?
  6. 01:42:223 (3) - remove whistle from the way(curve?)
  7. 02:45:043 (1) - remove finish
    Fixed all :D
[Hard]
  1. 00:28:377 (6,7,8,9,10) - I could hardly expect the rhythm because of placement. No
  2. 01:58:633 (8) - remove whistle from the way Ok
  3. 02:39:787 (1) - end at 02:40:941 - ? No
  4. 02:42:992 - add a note (maybe on the end of the previous slider)? No
  5. 03:24:787 (7) - like 01:58:633 (8) Ok
That's all I guess.

Well, the hitsound in Normal and Hard sounds random to me. I guess you can improve more~

then, Good Luck ;)
Thanks a lot ;)

mjw5150 wrote:

from challenge queue~

[General]
please make the kiai the same in all diffs Done

[Easy]
fine

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
you are so persistent to keep your beats at the vocal lol
00:09:146 - to follow the music,better to add a note here Ok
00:09:274 - ^ No
00:11:197 - ^ Ok
00:11:325 - ^ No
00:18:248 (2,3) - move 2 to 00:18:377 and 3 to 00:18:505?sounds better for me No
00:19:146 - why there is no object here :( Ok
00:25:684 - add a note here to follow the vocal? No
00:35:043 - add a note? Ok
00:35:556 - ^ No
00:36:325 (2,3) - swap there 2 objects,sounds more fit the vocal Ok
00:37:607 - add a note Ok
00:39:146 - ^ Ok
00:39:659 - No
00:44:787 (6) - shorten 1/4 it may follow the vocal better,also if you do this,add a note at 00:45:813 No
00:47:864 (1) - i prefer to add some beats instead of this spin,well if you don't agree,at least end it at 00:49:915 No
00:59:787 (1,2,3,4) - how about this?http://puu.sh/y9xY No
Thank you for your help :3

a3272509123 wrote:

From challenge queue~


[General]
  1. The KIAI time on easy is different from others. (03:38:248)
Yes :3


[Easy]
  1. 02:38:120(2) - end at 02:38:377 like the previous slider?
Ok ^^


[Normal]
  1. 00:38:633(3) - make this slider more beautiful? This one looks a little weird...
  2. 00:42:736(4) - ^
  3. 00:44:787(3) - ^
  4. 02:24:915(4) - I think it's difficult for beginners to hit the note on blue line...Maybe you should change some of them to a slider instead? No, I think it's not difficult
  5. 02:26:966(2) - ^ ^
    Sorry...no change.

[Hard]
  1. AR+1? No
  2. 00:10:428(6) - I found it playable, but I'm not sure if MATs or BATs will complain about it. waiting MAT's :3
  3. 03:22:223(2) - Ctrl+R may be better? No



That's all!Really nice map and I can't find much!Good luck~
Thaaaaanks :oops:
nekitkas
35 posts
Joined June 2011
nekitkas
новичку вроде меня нечего предложить после 5 станиц модов :D
удачи!
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

nekitkas wrote:

новичку вроде меня нечего предложить после 5 станиц модов :D
удачи!
Спасибо 8-)
Muya
2,355 posts
Joined August 2009
Muya
[General]
offset should be music's start.
684 is right

[BCI's Easy]
01:14:402 - delete this section
03:37:992 - ^

[Normal]
00:12:736 (4) - add whistle
00:16:582 (4) - add whistle to end
01:46:325 (3,4) - add whistle
01:50:428 (3) - add whistle to end
01:54:531 (5) - add whistle to both end
01:58:633 (3) - add whistle to end
02:10:941 (5) - add whistle to start and reverse arrow
02:51:966 (3) - add whistle to end
02:56:582 (4) - add whistle
03:00:172 (3) - add whistle to end
03:04:274 (5) - add whistle to both end
03:12:479 (3,4) - add whistle
03:16:582 (3) - add whistle to end
03:20:684 (5,6) - add whistle
03:24:787 (3) - add whistle to end
03:29:402 (4) - add whistle
03:32:992 (3) - add whistle to both end

[Hard]
00:28:377 (6,7,8) - should be same spacing.
00:47:864 (1) - end at 00:49:402
01:09:402 (1,2) - add whistle
01:13:505 (8) - add whistle to both end
01:46:325 (9) - add whistle to start
01:50:941 (2) - add whistle
01:54:531 (7) - add whistle to both end
01:55:300 (8) - add whistle
02:02:736 (9) - add whistle to start
02:07:351 (2) - add whistle
02:10:941 (7) - add whistle to both end
02:25:813 (1) - add whistle to end
01:14:531 (9) - change to softhit sound and add new combo
02:31:454 (3) - move to x:148 y:356
02:36:838 (1,2,3,4) - should use same distance snap
02:56:069 (9,10,11) - add whistle
03:00:684 (2) - add whistle
03:08:377 (1,2) - add whistle
03:12:479 (9) - add whistle to both end
03:17:095 (2) - add whistle
03:20:684 (8) - add whistle to both end
03:28:890 (9) - add whistle to both end
03:33:505 (2) - add whistle
03:37:095 (8) - add whistle
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Thanks Muya 8-)
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Oh hi there


[BCI's Easy]
00:46:325 (2) - Spacing error. You can't give a small jump in easier diff
02:05:813 (1) - Move the 4th sliderpoint to 2 grid left for good blanket combo (Nazi)


[Normal]
* AR +1?

01:33:248 (1) - Extend this slider into red tick?
01:44:531 (4) - Remove 1 repeating slider for following vocal? Like 01:44:531 (4)?
02:40:941 (1) - Why finish at tail slider?


[Hard]
02:27:864 (5) - New combo?
02:48:120 (4) - Remove 1 repeating slider, so players are able to click the next object with perfect timed


What a shame on me~
IchiGUN
778 posts
Joined July 2010
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Leorda thx :3
all fixed ;)
Lizellota
467 posts
Joined October 2011
Lizellota
Привееть ^^ как и обещала помодила :3

[Hard]

SPOILER
00:08:890 (1) - финиш
00:17:607 (3) - хлопок
00:17:864 (4) - убери хлопок
00:18:890 (5) - ^
00:19:915 - хлопок
00:25:556 (1) - убери хлопок
00:26:069 (4) - хлопок
00:26:710 (7) - ^
00:27:095 (1) - убери хлопок
00:27:351 - хлопок
00:28:377 (1,2,3) - поставь их по другому, потому что запутаться можно т.т
00:29:915 - хлопок
00:30:172 - убери хлопок
00:30:941 (4) - хлопок
00:31:966 - ^
00:32:223 - убери хлопок
00:32:992 (3) - хлопок
00:34:018 (3) - ^
00:34:274 - убери хлопок
00:35:043 (7) - хлопок
00:35:300 (8) - зачем тут финиш? о.о
00:36:069 - хлопок
00:38:120 (4) - ^
00:38:377 - убери хлопок
00:39:146 (8) - хлопок
00:39:402 (9) - убери хлопок
00:40:172 (2) - хлопок
00:40:428 (3) - убери хлопок
00:41:197 (5) - хлопок
00:42:223 (4) - ^
00:42:479 - убери хлопок
00:43:120 (7) - хлопок
00:43:505 (1) - убери хлопок
00:44:274 (4) - хлопок
00:44:531 (5) - убери хлопок
00:45:300 - хлопок
00:46:069 (1) - убери хлопок
00:46:325 (2) - хлопок
00:47:351 (5) - ^
00:50:428 (2) - ^
00:50:684 (3) - убери хлопок
00:51:710 (3) - ^
00:51:454 (2) - хлопок
00:52:479 (2) - ^
00:52:736 (3) - убери хлопок
00:53:505 (6) - хлопок
00:53:761 (7) - убери хлопок
00:54:531 - хлопок
00:54:787 - убери хлопок
00:55:556 - хлопок
00:55:813 - убери хлопок
00:56:838 (3,7) - ^
00:56:582 (2,6) - хлопок
00:58:377 (2) - ^
00:59:531 (7) - ^
01:00:556 (4) - ^
01:02:736 - ^
01:02:992 - убери хлопок
01:03:633 (5) - хлопок
01:04:531 (5) - ^
01:05:300 - лучше звучит, если его чуток сократить -> http://puu.sh/Bz45
01:06:069 (1) - убери хлопок
01:06:325 (3) - финиш
01:06:838 (5) - хлопок
01:07:736 - ^
01:08:633 (5) - ^
01:11:454 - хлопок
01:12:992 (6) - ^
01:13:248 (7) - убери хлопок
01:13:505 - тоже сократи, как тот слайдер xD
01:23:248 (4) - хлопок
01:23:505 - убери хлопок
01:24:146 (7) - хлопок
01:24:531 (8) - убери хлопок
01:25:300 - хлопок
01:25:813 - убери хлопок
01:26:325 - сюда бы лучше хлопок, вместо финиша
01:27:351 (3) - хлопок
01:27:607 (4) - убери хлопок
01:28:248 (7) - хлопок
01:28:633 (8) - убери хлопок
01:29:402 (2) - хлопок
01:29:659 (3) - убери хлопок
01:30:428 (5) - хлопок
01:30:684 (6) - убери хлопок
01:31:454 (3) - хлопок
01:31:710 (4) - убери хлопок
01:32:351 (8) - хлопок
01:32:736 (9) - убери хлопок
01:33:505 (3) - хлопок
01:33:761 (4) - убери хлопок
01:34:531 - хлопок
01:35:300 (1) - убери хлопок
01:35:556 (2) - хлопок
01:36:325 (1) - убери хлопок
01:36:582 (2) - хлопок
01:39:402 (2) - ^
01:40:556 (7) - ^
01:41:582 (4) - ^
01:43:505 - хлопок
01:44:018 - убери хлопок
01:44:531 (4) - хлопок
01:45:556 (5) - ^
01:46:325 (9) - сократи :<
01:47:095 (1) - убери хлопок
01:47:351 (3) - финиш
01:47:864 (5) - хлопок
01:48:120 (6) - убери хлопок
01:48:761 (9) - хлопок
01:49:659 (5) - ^ не знаю, но можно поставить xD
01:51:454 - может финиш?
01:52:479 - сократи слайдер, а тут поставь ноту 01:53:120 (и на эту ноту хлопок)
01:53:248 (1) - убери хлопок
01:54:274 (6) - ^
01:54:018 (5) - хлопок
01:55:813 - ^
01:56:966 (5) - ^
01:59:659 - финиш
02:00:172 - хлопок
02:01:069 (5) - ^
02:02:736 (9) - сократи слайдер т.т
02:02:479 (8) - убери хлопок
02:02:223 (6) - хлопок
02:03:505 (1) - убери хлопок
02:03:761 (3) - финиш
02:04:274 (5) - хлопок
02:04:531 (6) - убери хлопок
02:06:069 (5) - хлопок
02:08:890 - сократи слайдер
02:09:531 - сюда ноту и на нее хлопок
02:09:659 (1) - убери хлопок
02:10:428 (5) - хлопок
02:10:684 (6) - убери хлопок
02:10:941 - сократи т.т
02:27:864 - убери хлопок
02:30:684 (1) - ^
02:40:684 - очевидно же, финиш
02:49:146 (2) - хлопок
02:50:300 (7) - ^
02:51:325 (4) - ^
02:53:505 - ^
02:53:761 - убери хлопок
02:54:402 (5) - хлопок
02:55:300 (5) - ^
02:56:838 (1) - убери хлопок
02:57:095 (3) - финиш
02:57:607 (5) - хлопок
02:57:864 (6) - убери хлопок
02:58:505 - хлопок
02:59:531 (6) - ^
03:02:736 - ^
03:05:300 - сделай секцию софта, думаю лучше звучит
03:06:325 (3) - хлопок
03:06:710 (5) - ^
03:07:351 (3) - ^
03:07:736 (5) - ^
03:10:813 (5) - ^
03:11:710 (5) - ^
03:12:479 (9) - T__T
03:13:248 (1) - убери хлопок
03:13:505 (3) - финиш
03:14:018 (5) - хлопок
03:14:274 (6) - убери хлопок
03:14:915 (9) - хлопок
03:15:813 (5) - ^
03:18:120 - ^
03:18:377 - убери хлопок
03:19:146 - хлопок
03:20:172 (6) - ^
03:20:428 (7) - убери хлопок
03:21:454 (9) - ^
03:22:223 - хлопок
03:22:479 - убери хлопок
03:23:120 (5) - хлопок
03:24:146 (4) - ^
03:26:325 - ^
03:26:582 - убери хлопок
03:27:223 (5) - хлопок
03:28:120 (5) - ^
03:29:659 (1) - убери хлопок
03:29:915 (3) - финиш
03:30:428 (5) - хлопок
03:30:684 (6) - убери хлопок
03:31:325 - хлопок
03:32:223 (5) - ^
03:34:531 - ^
03:34:787 - убери хлопок
03:35:556 - хлопок
03:36:582 (6) - хлопок
03:36:838 (7) - убери хлопок
03:38:633 (3) - хлопок
03:40:684 (1) - хлопок
03:41:710 (6) - убери вистл и поставь хлопок
03:42:479 - убери хлопок
03:42:736 (2) - хлопок
03:43:761 - ^
03:45:556 - убери хлопок

[Normal] под конец уже задолбалась и написала на англ чуток xD

SPOILER
00:09:402 - хлопок
00:11:454 - ^
00:12:992 - убери хлопок
00:13:505 - хлопок
00:30:941 (3) - ^
00:32:223 - убери хлопок
00:32:736 - ^
00:33:248 (4) - хлопок
00:35:043 (4) - ^
00:36:069 (2) - ^
00:38:120 - ^
00:38:377 (2) - убери хлопок
00:39:146 - хлопок
00:40:172 - ^
00:42:223 - ^
00:42:479 (3) - remove
00:43:248 - clap
00:44:274 - ^
00:44:531 - remove
00:45:300 - clap
00:46:069 - remove
00:46:325 - clap
00:47:095 - remove
00:47:607 - clap
00:50:428 - ^
00:50:684 - remove
00:51:454 - clap
00:51:710 - remove
00:52:479 - clap
00:52:736 - remove
00:53:505 - clap
00:53:761 - remove
00:54:531 - clap
00:54:787 - remove
00:55:556 - clap
00:55:813 - remove
00:56:582 - clap
00:56:838 - remove
01:22:736 (1) - finish (S:C1)
01:24:274 (6) - remove
01:25:300 - clap
01:25:556 - remove
01:31:454 - clap
01:31:710 - remove
01:32:479 - clap
01:33:761 - remove
01:35:556 - clap
01:35:813 - remove
01:36:582 - clap
01:36:838 - remove
01:54:018 - clap
01:54:274 - remove
02:11:966 - finish
03:07:864 (2) - clap
03:08:890 - ^
03:20:172 (3) - ^
03:32:479 (2) - ^
03:33:505 - ^
03:42:736 - ^
03:43:761 (1) - ^
03:45:556 - remove

[BCI's Easy]

Да ты про, замечательная изя ;3

Удачки, няшная песня >w< ~
riffy
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riffy
i don't know why map graveyarded but i'll find you and graveyard you if you won't get this map ranked, dude.
Hinsvar
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-Bakari- wrote:

i don't know why map graveyarded but i'll find you and graveyard you if you won't get this map ranked, dude.
Best statement of the day.

But yeah, Ichi, you've got this kicked to the graveyard twice already... :P
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
asfhgafisgviug no insane diff

plz add my diff if u ever resurrect this http://puu.sh/H3kc

thanks :P
IchiGUN
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IchiGUN

-Bakari- wrote:

i don't know why map graveyarded but i'll find you and graveyard you if you won't get this map ranked, dude.
Опасно ))) надо ранкать в общем 8-)

Hinsvar wrote:

But yeah, Ichi, you've got this kicked to the graveyard twice already... :P
Ok ok, i understand :333

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

asfhgafisgviug no insane diff

plz add my diff if u ever resurrect this http://puu.sh/H3kc

thanks :P
wow O O
I add it ~ ;)
please check your diff...I change: offset, combo color, TimingPoints, PreviewTime . . .and deleted the first 8 seconds :P
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
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[CSGA]Ar3sgice
checked ^^

http://puu.sh/IDiu
IchiGUN
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Topic Starter
IchiGUN

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

checked ^^

http://puu.sh/IDiu
ok~ ;)

KersiTyan большое спасибо за мод! :oops:
riffy
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riffy

IchiGUN wrote:

KersiTyan большое спасибо за мод! :oops:
в голос заржал.

бтв, пометь, что твоя последняя дифа (гостевая - инсэйн). Лучше сделать так, а то я думал, что это второй хард.
просто в описание добавь derp's derp (by Derp) - Insane
как-то так. антигрэйв бамп

NO KD
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