[Easy]

[Normal]

[Hard]

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  Timing

1. The offset you're currently using doesn't sound good at all. Try to change it to 8.890 (-13). It sounds way better to me.

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  Settings

1. I think that you should decrease AR -1. This is to make more easier for beginners to see notes that you place like this. The note gets a bit hidden by the previous note's hitburst, but I think that decreasing AR the notes with this 'issue' would be more visible since they'll appear more earlier. Well, I guess you understand what I'm trying to say.
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2. 00:29:416 (1) - How about placing this note were 00:27:878 (2) was? (x:296 y:204). It looks weird that you didn't placed the note there since you did that in your previous patterns. It looks better in this way to me.
3. 00:30:954 - This empty part feels weird since the music hasn't changed in anything, so I didn't see why you didn't mapped this. I suggest you to try this pattern. It follows better the music in my opinion and fills the empty part:
   
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4. 00:39:672 (3,4) - I don't find this placement friendly for beginners. I highly recommend you to unstack (4) since this is an Easy difficulty, not a Normal one.
5. 00:54:544 (1) - Seriously.. why in hell is this spinner here? Don't skip parts like this. The song hasn't changed in anything.. a spinner doesn't fit here to me. You should map this part too.
6. 01:59:672 (1,2,3,4) - Why so many circles all of a sudden? I think that you should replace this notes with sliders.. since you were doing patterns with sliders.. oh and I also think that those are way too many circles in a row for an Easy. That would be suitable for a Normal difficulty, but not for an Easy in my opinion.
7. 02:24:287 (1,2) - This sounds really weird and doesn't follow the music at all. I highly recommend you to try this instead:
   
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8. 02:38:903 (1) - This spinner starts too early after (2). Perhaps move it to the next white tick?
9. 03:44:800 (3) - I know that this will ruin your good symmetric pattern, but I think that it would be way better if you end the slider (3) at the red tick (03:46:082).
   
   I'm not sure if it was me or what.. but I found some spacing issues selection some notes. I noticed that accidentally. In the most of the cases, the issues were in your stacking patterns, maybe when you tried to place or stack some notes you disabled distance snap to place them properly.
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   Design
   
   
10. 00:21:724 (2) - This slider doesn't look good. I understand that you try to do some artistic stuff and all.. but if this kind of sliders aren't symmetric/perfect.. they end up looking bad rather than cool and artistic. If you still think that it looks good or you don't understand what I'm reffering to: select the slider and press ctrl+H.
11. 00:44:801 (4,2) - I really dislike the way that this 2 sliders get a bit overlapped. Not a big deal, but it's better if you avoid this kind of placements in an Easy.
12. 00:50:442 (1,2) - It would look better if you place these 2 sliders more like this:
    
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    http://puu.sh/i6gL
13. 01:35:570 (2,3,1) - This placement looks a bit messy. Maybe try something more 'clean'?:
    
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14. 01:40:185 (2) - Rather than artistic.. this slider looks a bit weird. How about trying a more 'wavy' shape (or something else that fits better to you)?:
    
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15. 03:29:928 (1,3) - Exactly the same as I told you already about 00:44:801 (4,2).
    I'll resume everything. Various slider shapes can be improved to make the map look better (i.e: 02:55:569 (4)).
    You should use the artistic slider shapes in a more intuitive way. I mean, you try to make the map look good, but placing sliders with artistic shapes everywhere randomly ends up looking messy. I told you this already, but I repeat it once again. Here's a example of those kinds of patterns:
    
    02:03:774 (1,2,1)

    
    And.. this is what I mean with 'placing sliders in a more intuitive way':
    
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    Hitsounds
    
    
16. 00:08:903 ~ 00:17:108 - This section has way too high hitsound's volume. I suggest you to decrease it to 50% like IchiGUN did in all his difficulties. Sounds way better to me.
17. 00:49:416 (2) - Perhaps add a hitfinish at the end of this slider? Sounds good in my opinion.
18. 02:07:364 (2,1,2) - Your whistles pattern is messed up here..You added a whistle to (2) to make some 'emphasis' right? but I think that according to your previous whistles, a whistle should be at the start of (1) instead of being at the end, and the same goes to (2).
19. 03:01:723 (2,3,4) - ^
20. 03:05:313 (1) - Here's missing a whistle at the end of this slider.
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    Combos
    
    
21. 03:06:339 (1) - Unnecessary new combo that doesn't follow your combos pattern. I highly recommend you to remove it.
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    I think that this difficulty can be improved a lot. The combos and hitsounds are okay overall, but the visual aspect of the map itself isn't good at all. I hope I helped you specially in improving your patterns.

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  Settings

1. I feel the AR a bit fast for a Normal difficulty. I suggest you to decrease it by 1.
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2. 00:18:133 (2,3) - I think that it would be better if you replace this notes with a slider. Fits better with the music to me.
3. 00:20:185 (2,3) - ^
4. 00:22:236 (2,3) - ^
5. 00:28:390 (2,3) - ^
6. 00:32:492 (2,3) - ^ Perhaps here too?
7. 00:37:877 (1,2,3...) - This pattern doesn't follow the music at all. You should better try something more simple, that follows more the music.. something like this:
   
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8. 00:42:749 (4,5) - And again.. I think that it would be better if you replace this notes with a slider.
9. 00:44:800 (3,4) - ^
10. 00:52:236 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I find this a bit difficult for a Normal diff. I think that they're so many circles in a row and all of a sudden. You should consider replacing some of them with sliders.
11. 01:13:518 (5,6) - This doesn't fit with the vocals at all.. I suggest you to try this instead:
    
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    If you don't like the repeat, you can make the slider without it and add a note at the end of the kiai too, but I still recommend you to do the slider with a repeat to make that part a bit more easier.
12. 01:25:056 (1) - Spacing.
13. 01:25:569 (2,3) - And again, this doesn't fit with the vocals. You should rather try this:
    
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14. 01:29:159 (1) - Spacing again.
15. 01:32:492 (5) - This slider doesn't make sense. It doesn't sound like your previous patterns nor fits with the music. Try replacing it with a note.
16. 01:33:261 (1,2,3,4) - Why all those notes are placed at red ticks..? This would be awkward to play for beginners and not-so experienced players. You were placing notes at white ticks, so, the player will think that they're 1/1, not 1/2.. Please do something here to avoid this problem. Remap this combo again with something else.
17. 01:37:108 (1) - I think that it's better if you move this spinner to the next red tick.
18. 01:54:544 (5,6) - Perhaps replace this 2 notes with a slider?
19. 02:10:954 (5,6) - Exactly the same as I told you about 01:13:518 (5,6) already.
20. 02:26:979 (2) - Do NOT place notes at blue ticks. I highly don't recommend you to do this in a Normal difficulty. Try something else in this combo.. this is difficult in my opinion.
21. 02:29:031 (2) - ^
22. 02:41:210 (1,2,3) - This doesn't sound good to me. I suggest you to try this:
    
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23. 02:45:056 (1,2,3) - ^:
    
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24. 03:04:288 (5,6) - Replace with a slider to follow better the vocals?
25. 03:37:108 (5,6) - ^
26. 03:43:774 (1) - I really don't.. understand the purpose of all those repeats of this slider. They aren't following anything. I suggest you to try something else here. Perhaps this?:
    
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    Design
    
    
27. 01:44:544 (4) - How about making stright this slider just like (1) and (2)?
28. 02:00:954 (4) - ^
    
    Nothing else to point out. The difficulty looks.. hm.. how to describe..? Average? Yeah, that's it, average. Looks like a common Normal difficulty. It can be improved, yes, but I don't see something that really should be changed and I really dislike nazi mods so that's all I have to say about the design.
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    Hitsounds
    
    
    Uhh I really don't get the way you used samples so I'll not mention anything about this. You should use samples in a regularly way.. like in the Easy difficulty (for example). The samples that I less understand are the claps and in some cases, the whistles.
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    Combos
    
    
    The combos are alright.
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    Not bad~ You just need some more mods to improve everything a bit here.

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  Settings

1. Perhaps increase HP Drain by 1 since this is your hardest difficulty of your mapset?
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   Mapping
   
   
2. 00:10:441 (6) - I'm not really sure about this, but if I'm not wrong, this kind of sliders aren't rankable. I would ask someone else right now but is late and I don't have any friend mapper online at this hours hehe.
3. 00:34:287 (4,5) - Replace this 2 notes with a slider to follow better the vocals?
4. 00:37:108 (3) - Perhaps move this note 1 tick back and add a note at 00:36:851?
5. 00:38:646 (5,6) - And again, replace this 2 notes with a slider?
6. 00:42:492 (4,5) - ^
7. 01:01:210 (7,8) - ^
8. 01:03:903 (x) - Add a note here?
9. 01:05:313 (8) - Oh this slider again. lol.
10. 01:11:467 (3) - Well this one is too much. The player doesn't know that there's a nude while playing.. you should try another shape.
11. 01:12:108 (x) - Add a note?
12. 01:13:518 (7) - lol again.
13. 01:23:518 (5,6) - Replace with a slider?
14. 01:24:544 (9) - Perhaps delete this note? It isn't following anything in my opinion.
15. 01:25:569 (2,3) - This doesn't follow the music at all to me. Try this instead:
    
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16. 01:28:646 (8) - Again, the same as I told you about 01:24:544 (9) already.
17. 02:25:826 (1) - Unrankable.
18. 02:27:877 (5) - ^ I don't understand the need of making such a weird slider and copying it several times.
19. 02:42:492 (4) - Confusing sudden jump. It doesn't at least fit with the music in my opinion.
20. 02:44:544 (4) - ^
21. 02:46:082 (5) - Hey you.
22. 02:51:979 (7,8) - Replace with a slider?
23. 02:54:672 (x) - Add a note?
24. 03:02:236 (3) - Oh no, not you again..
25. 03:04:287 (7) - ^
26. 03:05:056 (x) - Add a note here? Sounds nice to me.
27. 03:11:082 (x) - ^
28. 03:12:492 (8) - Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
29. 03:18:646 (3) - ...
30. 03:20:697 (7) - Okay. I'm. tired. of. pointing. out. this. freaking. slider.
31. 03:24:800 (7,8) - Replace this 2 notes with a slider too?
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    Design
    
    Just the same as I told you about your Normal difficulty.
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    Hitsounds
    
    
32. 03:46:082 (4) - I really don't get why do you changed the samples to soft. You didn't used soft samples.. what's the point of using them only at the last note?
    
    And again, overall, the same as I told you about your Normal.
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    Combos
    
    Again, I seriously don't get some of your combos so I'll not say anything about this.
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    Good, you just need to replace some notes with slider to make a better rhythm. This diff still can be improved a lot, obviously. :3

Hard

1. 02:39:787 (1) - the spinner start at [02:38:890] will flow better,and plarers can have enough time to get the score~
2. hmm...although this diff doesn't have many problem,I feel a little boring when I play it.
   You can try to make some change to make your diff better to play

Normal

1. 01:12:095 (1) - The beginner is not good at guessing how many reserve are in a short time,you had better fix it.maybe make this ?
2. 01:53:120 (1) - ^
3. 02:09:531 (1) - ^
4. 03:02:864 (1) - ^
5. 03:02:864 (1) - make it curved because it is ugly that the slider touch too much with [03:18:120 (2)]
6. 03:19:274 (1) - same as [01:12:095 (1)]
7. 03:35:684 (1) - ^

Easy

1. AR +2,I think it will be better to play
2. 00:46:325 (2) - wrong spacing here
3. 03:01:710 (2) - don't make this kind of overlap in Easy diff,beginner is not good at reading it
   you can change it to this pattern
4. 03:15:556 (3) - wrong spacing
5. 03:25:300 (5) - ^
6. I like the hitsound setting in this diff ~

[General]

1. Add 'ending' in tags.

[Hard]

1. 00:10:428 (6) - Try move to center?
2. 00:14:915 - Add a note here,sound much better with me.
3. 00:19:402 (6) - Try like this rhythm.
   
4. 00:28:377 (6,7,8) - Slound change like this rhythm.
   
5. 00:30:428 (2,3,4) - Same as above.
6. 00:32:479 (2,3,4) - ^
7. 00:36:325 (2) - Extend to here 00:36:838.
8. 01:42:223 (7) - Add new combo.
9. 03:08:377 (8) - ^

[Normal]

1. 01:54:531 (5,6,1) - Using same spacing.
2. 03:40:684 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:44:787 (3,4) - Try like this rhythm,sound much better.
   
4. 01:44:531 (4) - This slider should change 1/4.
5. 02:00:941 (4) - ^

[Easy]

1. AR+1 or 2 much better with play.

• [General]

1. You can use this Hit Sound. ex) 00:33:505
2. There are two .osb file in a folder. Delete one Please~ :3

• [Easy]

1. AR +1
   
2. 85% volume is too loud~ please set them 70%
   
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3. 00:34:018(1) - improve blanket please~ :3
4. 02:24:531(1) - Hidden by osu. Please move this slider~
   
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5. 02:31:966 - add note with clap~
6. 02:50:941(3) - (nazi) 2 grids up~
7. 03:28:890(3) - Move this slider.meet with HP Bar~
   
   Click~

   

• [Normal]

1. 00:50:172(1,2,3) - (2) and (3) are hidden by osu. Please move these notes.
   
   Click~

   
2. 02:40:941(1) - make curve perfectly~ :3
3. 02:45:043(1) - ^

• [Hard]

1. 00:29:659 - add note
2. 00:30:428(2,3,4,5) - 1st, little bit monotonous ;w; separate those notes.
   　　　　　　　　　　2nd, remove (2),(3) and make slider.
   
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3. 00:32:479(2,3,4,5) - same here~ :3
4. 02:01:325 - add note~ like this part : 02:54:659
5. 02:11:710 - ^
6. 02:31:966(4,5,6) - spacing (x0.8) I recommend this~
   
   Click~

   
7. 02:34:018(4,5,6) - ^
   
   Click~

   
8. 02:36:069(4,5,6) - ^
   
   Click~

   
9. 02:38:120(4,5,6) - ^
   
   Click~

   
10. 02:41:197(1) - This note hidden by osu. please move this~
    
    Click~

    
11. 03:02:864 - add note~ and try this~ :3
    
    Click~

    
12. 03:07:607(4,5) - seperate these two notes like this~
    
    Click~

    
13. 03:09:915(2) - (nazi) 1 grid up~
14. 03:27:479 - add note~~
15. 03:35:684 - add note and nc
16. 03:35:813(1) - remove nc