[Te][Amo] wrote:

Hi There ! Here is my M4M >w< !

General:

- I Think that start a KIA time before the offset its a bad idea :S http://puu.sh/ikcQ

[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:12:792 (4) - Make this spinner ends here 00:13:664 (x) And remove note like this http://puu.sh/ibTk
00:39:400 (2) - Make it more curve http://puu.sh/ibTS
01:17:787 (2) - Add finish at the begin
01:24:766 (2) - ^
01:35:671 (x) - I think its unnescesary start the break here just add it before the spinner end http://puu.sh/ibUY
02:26:271 (5) - Add clap at the end
02:28:452 (2) - Add clap
02:31:941 (2) - ^
02:48:517 (2) - Add finish at the begin
03:02:476 (2) - ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]

00:42:454 (1) - Add finish at the begin
00:59:902 (1) - Follow this partner http://puu.sh/ik0d Instead of many repeats
01:17:350 (1) - Remove finish
01:17:787 (2) - Add finish at the begin
02:23:872 (2) - Remove note for beter spread
02:24:308 (4) - ^
02:37:176 (5) - Add clap
02:41:538 (2) - Add finish at the begin
02:48:517 (2) - ^
03:02:476 (2) - ^
03:09:455 (2) - ^
03:15:998 (1) - Shouldn't this spinner end here ? 03:21:233 (x)

Good Luck ! And Star !

-Bakari- wrote:

Hard
00:22:170 - circle here sry don't wanna add circle in my diff
03:14:253 (7) - x376 y 320 ..?

AstroniX wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]

00:11:920 (3) - Make this slider end at 00:12:128 0v0 naww
00:45:507 (1) - I think this slider should end at 00:45:725 is well no.. listen to the song..
01:34:908 (1) - Add a spinner and end at 1:36:543 is well uhh spinner is good but I don't like 2 spinners in a row
02:45:464 (4) - This slider may be a little long,short it and add a note at:2:46:118(see pic) fixed in another way 0.0
02:49:826 (5) - new combo sure..

that's all.a nice map,good luck!

[Te][Amo] wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]

00:07:558 (1) - Add clap at the end ?? there is one
00:14:537 (1) - ^ ^
00:21:080 (4) - Add clap at the begin finish is better i think
00:41:145 (2) - Add clap at the begin remove clap in the end added
02:36:412 (3) - Remove note ? and 02:36:303 (2) move it to ther place
02:45:464 (4) - Make a 1/1 slider and follow this partner ? http://puu.sh/ikaI wwwww

-kevincela- wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]

1. 00:42:018 (1) - Remove NC ok
2. 00:42:454 (3) - Add NC
3. 00:43:326 (1) - Remove NC
4. 01:22:367 (6) - 1 grid down it follows the music...
5. 02:46:554 (1) - Remove the clap at the end of the slider no...

[/notice]

spboxer3 wrote:

from IRC request

[general]

• 
  Settings
  

1. unify kiai time ~ (Normal)

[Let's Try! Easy!]

• 
  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   03:02:040 -

mapping

1. 00:07:557 (1,2) - 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - try to use this rhythm↓ ~ 01:17:787 - it's not on the correct beat~I think
   
   photo

   
2. 00:14:537 (1,2) - ^
3. 00:40:709 (3) - awkward slider~ Fixed!
4. 01:17:350 (1,2) - same as 00:07:557 (1,2) -
5. 01:24:330 (1,2) - ^
6. 01:52:247 (1) - awkward slider~ Fixed!
7. 02:41:102 (1,2) - same as 00:07:557 (1,2) -
8. 02:48:081 (1,2) - ^
9. 03:02:040 (1,2) - ^
10. 03:09:019 (1,2) - ^

[Let's Try! Normal!]

• 
  Settings
  

1. unused green line:
   03:02:040 -

Overlaps
(Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap eachothou could space them farther apart.)

1. 00:54:668 (2,1) - Fixed!
2. 02:06:205 (1,2) - Fixed!

mapping

1. 00:18:026 (1,2,3) - uneven spacing~[nazi]
2. 00:25:006 (1) - end at 00:25:006 (1) - ? I think you can set it on downbeat~
3. 00:41:581 (5,1) - awkward pattern~Don't overlaps slider or note in Normal plz >"< Fixed!
4. 00:52:050 (4,1) - ^
5. 00:52:923 (1,2) - stack slider head(1) and slider tail [nazi]
6. 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) - try to use this rhythm↓ ~ 01:17:787 - it's not on the correct beat~I think
   
   photo

   
7. 01:24:330 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
   
   photo

   
8. 02:41:538 (2) - not regular pattern~ you can let it much better and same suggest 01:17:350 (1,2,3,4) -
9. 02:48:517 (2) - ^
10. 03:02:040 (1,2) - rhythm issue~
    
    photo

    
11. 03:09:019 (1,2) - ^

red is unrankable issue. bule is need to discuss. Black is just suggest.
good luck~

Leorda wrote:

Hello

General
* Inconsistent Kiai time http://puu.sh/j0NX Ah... Fixed. Thank you so much for showing me this.


Let's Try! Easy!
00:52:923 (4) - New combo? Added.
01:24:766 (2) - Make curve like 01:10:371 (1) Fixed.
02:16:674 (4) - New combo? Added.


Let's Try! Normal!
03:02:040 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - I think these part needs more clap hitsound Added.


Others are fine to me

JauiPlaY wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
00:45:507 (1) - Sounds weird for me. it's fine for me... it is in the music
00:48:997 (1) - ^
01:28:037 (2) - Remove this one. o.o no
01:29:782 (2) - ^
01:34:799 (3) - How about to set a spinner here?
03:02:040 (T) - Useless timing point. don't see timing point maybe already fixed o.o

sp3 wrote:

Overlaps~

01:19:749 (3,1) - www there is no way around... so i'd keep this

Kannatsuki wrote:

1.Source is empty.I don't know why. It don't have a source because it was from one of Nagoya, Aich'si/Gifu's/Mie's TV stations
2.Add 1or2 new colours. These tree colors are from the logo of the TV station in Nagoya. http://www.tokai-tv.com/ Check out.

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:14:101 - add a circle No thanks...
00:10:611 - add a circle ^
00:52:923 (1) - i think use 2 slider instead will be better Nice one, but we'll see.
02:16:674 (1) - ^ ^
02:37:612 (1) - the spinner is asynchronous with vocal,i think add 2 circle go with "go go" and the spinner can be a little short We'll see.
02:58:550 (1) - ^ ^
Easy is all.Not bad.

[Let's Try! Normal]
00:13:446 (5) - delete this circle No thanks...
01:05:137 (3,4,5,1,2) - cover is a lot We'll see.
01:19:095 (3) - like this:http://puu.sh/j6yN Not gonna fit.
01:23:239 (5) - delete this circle We'll see.
01:24:330 (1) - use a circle instead ^
02:14:711 (4) - delete this circle No thanks...
02:28:234 (3) - delete this circle ^
02:30:633 (8,1) - too closed,change like this:http://puu.sh/j6CW We'll see.
02:46:990 (5) - delete this circle No thanks...
03:07:928 - delete this circle ^
Normal is all.

M4M：http://osu.ppy.sh/s/45775

Kannatsuki wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!]
00:13:882 (3) - not comfortable i think it's ok
01:09:935 (1,2) - too closed ???

popner wrote:

[Hard]

01:04:918 (4,5,6,7,8) - Skip here. what do you mean..? jump is ok
01:10:698 (3) - It's not suitable for the rhythm. ..??
01:18:005 (3) - better if not lay on 01:18:659 (1) this one is fine I think
01:55:300 (1) - nazi - 1 grid upside. changed some spacing = =
02:00:862 (1) - not suitable for the rhythm. ..??
03:10:764 (1,2,3) - It's too close. (or antijump) anti-jump i think

winber1 wrote:

Ar3sgice's

00:12:574 - this note needs to be mapped imo to follow vocals better. inside slider..?
00:13:882 (3) - works better if you removed repeat and added a note at 00:14:319. It's easier to read and feels more correct. tried, it makes the pattern ugly ..
00:41:145 (2,3,4) - switch notes around http://puu.sh/jS4Q i see, fixed.
01:10:371 (2,3) - it doesn't fit very well imo. Better to use red ticks. it follows the song ^^
02:34:559 (4) - like my first suggestion. if you mapped the middle note it would sound better imo. no I don't like it
02:43:283 (6) - some reason i just hate the sound of this emptiness. if you are going to use a blue tick in the previous slider, then in my opinion this truly calls for something like this http://puu.sh/jS6p sorry I don't like it = =
03:06:838 (4) - something similar to above?

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!!:]

- Difficulty Name: To be more consistent with other difficulties, you have to remove the last !, to be Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard! well that one ! is not so important, also the name is longer... but consistency is good anyways @kokokoanime change if you like

- Settings:
--> The Overall Difficulty looks a bit low, try to increase it by 1 Tick (OD+1)
--> The Lifebar reduce a bit low when you fail in some notes, so, try to increase the HP Drain Rate by 1 Tick too (HD+1)
--> Also, If you're not going to make an Insane difficulty, try to Increase the Approach Rate by 1 Tick, because the patterns looks more readable (AR+1) it's just a Hard diff ._. I think it's fine, maybe I'll change if someone else says that. For approach rate, ar7 looks slow in streams, but ar8 looks fast in parts with no streams =.=

00:40:709 (1,2): I don't like how to work that, try to make something like that: yea.

SPOILER

00:54:668 (5): I perceive a Vocal Change, so, it's better if you add a New Combo here. ok
01:24:111 (4): (NAZI)- Move this note 1 grid left (Grid Level 3) to occupate the same position as previous (6) ok
01:34:799 (3): Add a Finish Hitsound, fit fine with the end of this Section

Nice diff in General, the problem are the settings that look a bit low, otherwise looks fine.

Well, That's all. Nice map in General
Good Luck with your map

1. The kiai time is already flashing from the zeroth second on all diffs, while it was clearly set to the beginning of the offset. Funny. Well, don't really care about this one anyway
2. Increase the volume on all diffs by 20%?

1. Can't believe I SS'd this with only my mouse (I'm typically a mouse-keyboard player) (lol) Well, it's Easy after all...
2. This diff only has two kiai times while the other has three. What. Insert the last kiai time here, please
3. 00:07:557 (1) - Clap?
4. 00:42:018 - Add a note (circle) here and give it Whistle?
5. 00:45:071 (3) - Whistle?
6. 01:10:371 (1,2) - Whistle at the end?
7. 02:34:122 (1,2) - ^

1. 00:07:557 (1) - Clap?

1. 00:47:688 (1,2,3) - This is a good chance to make a jump, and yet you made an anti-jump... Whatever; anti-jump works better, actually.
2. 01:04:918 (4,5,6,7,8) - Don't know, but this star seems a bit random.

kosiga wrote:

hi~ kokoroanime

Japanese notation title: Let's Try! Go! Go! ~Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai~ is correct. maybe xD

But, I think that there does not need to be it

Add the tag How is this? ...Shippai Nante Ki ni Shinai

no kudosu and Good luck~

kokoroanime wrote:

Thank you. BTW, could you mod this beatmap plz?

1. Song folder - You have two osb.file ><. remove it !
2. KIAI TIME - opening KIAI TIME - to put Timing Points are not well remove Timing Points KIAI TIME. and add Inherited Points to 00:07:994( but Hard diff it is better for 00:07:558 ). and 2nd KIAI TIME(01:17:350) move to 01:17:787, 3rd KIAI TIME(02:41:102) move to 02:41:538 ( Do not move Hard diff.Hard diff is good as now ) because Easy,Normal diff establishes a strong sound at the position.

1. 00:15:191 (2) - finish is unnecessary if you match it with vocal. But it is recommended that you move to 00:14:973 the beginning, put it there to finish
2. 00:42:454 (1) - add finish to start of the slider
3. 01:31:309 (1) - add finish
4. 01:56:173 - green line has two overlapping. plz remove one
5. 02:06:205 (1) - remove clap to start of the slider.

1. 01:06:881 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - Suggestion of the hitsound: (01:03:392 (1) - add finish), 01:06:881 (1) - add finish instead to whistle, 01:08:626 (4) - remove finish, 01:09:935 (6) - add whistle instead to finish, 01:10:371 (1) - add finish
2. 01:34:799 (5) - add finish
3. 02:28:016 (1) - remove NC and 02:28:888 (4) - add NC is better
4. 02:55:933 (3,4) - I think it is better to change slider. ( same as 03:16:870 (3) )
5. 03:05:529 (4) - add NC ( same as 02:44:591 (1) )

1. 00:44:199 (5) - add NC and 00:45:507 (1) - remove NC and 00:45:944 (2) - add NC. I think it is better to match with vocal or downbeat
2. 00:52:705 (1) - remove NC and 00:52:923 (2) - add NC
3. 00:59:466 (1) - remove NC and 00:59:902 (2) - add NC
4. 01:01:429 (1) - remove NC and 01:01:647 (2) - add NC
5. 01:06:445 (1) - remove NC and 01:06:881 (2) - add NC
6. 01:09:935 (1) - remove NC and 01:10:371 (2) - add NC
7. 01:10:371 (2,3) - If you wish to use the rhythm like this here, 01:11:243 (5,6,7) - Should be done at the same rhythm, such as here. The different rhythm is only one place I feel a little strange But I would recommend to make a normal rhythm of both ><
8. 01:53:992 (5) - add NC and 01:55:300 (1) - remove NC and 01:55:736 (2) - add NC
9. 01:57:481 (6) - add NC and 01:57:808 (1) - remove NC
10. 02:00:862 (1) - i think this pattern does not match here. 02:00:753,02:00:862,02:00:971 - add note is better IMO
11. 02:20:164 (9) - add NC and 02:20:818 (1) - remove NC
12. 02:30:633 (8) - add NC and 02:31:287 (1) - remove NC
13. 02:53:315 (5) - use 02:51:571 (5) - copy slider( Ctrl+C,V,H,J ) because does not match the flow of the slider.
14. 02:58:550 (1) - spinner end 03:00:295 ?
15. 03:01:167 (1,2) - remove finish and 03:02:040 (1) - add finish to start of the slider. is better IMO
16. 03:15:998 (5) - add NC and 03:16:870 (1) - remove NC

ziin wrote:

*yawn*
[general]
-20 offset. It's so late it's like pulling teeth. I'll get to it as I can.

[easy]
01:55:736 (1) - watch your spacing on these. when you're really close to the next note, it's easy to tell the difference between 0.8x and 0.76x Fixed.
02:06:205 (1) - this doesn't fit. use 1/1 or 2/1 here Fixed.
02:09:695 (1) - ^ ^
02:16:674 (1) - can you put a little bit more effort into your sliders? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289735 Fixed.
02:21:472 (2) - spacing. Consider not using grid snap. Fixed.

[normal]
00:31:985 (1) - this overlaps (3) when it doesn't need to Fixed!
01:12:116 (4) - with just the tiniest bit of effort, you can really make your sliders better. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/289740 Fixed, but in a way I wanted because it fits perfect for that.
01:32:617 - this is normal, you can put a note here You're right, added.
03:05:529 (1,1) - make your new combos consistent with how you did it before. Fixed!!

star because it's about time you get something ranked. And get something bubbled first.

32,256,52903,6,0,B|56:216|136:184|192:184|304:224|320:264|304:312|256:344|208:312|192:264|208:224|320:184|376:184|456:216|480:256,1,600

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Delete .osb files and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties.
Kiai times not consistent across all difficulties.

[Let's Try! Easy!]
00:07:538 (1) - Remove clap Done.
00:07:974 - Why do you start the Kiai time here as opposed to 00:07:538? [b]Well, thought it could be unrankable...[b]
00:09:719 - missing custom clap Resolved.
00:09:282 (3) - Remove clap on tail Done.
00:52:903 (1) - I fixed the slider to make it more symmetrical

32,256,52903,6,0,B|56:216|136:184|192:184|304:224|320:264|304:312|256:344|208:312|192:264|208:224|320:184|376:184|456:216|480:256,1,600

Thank you and resolved.
01:17:330 (1) - try x:114 y:219. You don't want notes in the middle after a spinner at this AR. Fix all other instances in this diff. Done.
02:16:654 (1) - Use the slider I gave you. Done.

[Let's Try! Normal!]
00:07:538 (1,2) - Remove claps, add clap to 00:07:974 (2) - head. Resolved, but it looks okay...
00:29:784 (2) - Stack isn't very intuitive. Consider replacing. Fixed.
01:17:330 (1) - try x:88 y:200. You don't want notes in the middle after a spinner at this AR. Fix all other instances in this diff. Done.

Good luck :3

those wrote:

[Let's Try! Ar3sgrice's Hard!]

02:04:440 (1) - From here on, the difficulty has jumped up an entire level. Either remap the part before this to maintain difficulty level (more notes on blue ticks), or remove most of the notes on the blue ticks after this point.

Good luck :3

Philippines wrote:

• GUIDELINES

1. When the text is color RED, it is unrankable.
   
2. When the text is color BLACK, it's just a suggestion.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXxXXXXGENERAL

SPOILER

1. There are 2 .osb files. Please delete them. Don't forget to Full Submit.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXxXXXXXXXXXXEASY

SPOILER

1. Seems fine.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXXXXXXXXXNORMAL

SPOILER

1. 00:34:582 (5) - Move two grids down. Done.
   
   
2. 02:16:654 (1,2) - Awkward sliders. I suggest a simple curve will do. Changed.

XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXxXXlXXXXXXXXCOMMENT

SPOILER

1. The mapset was okay but I'm just a lil worried about the bug in Kiai. But hope this gets ranked soon. Good luck!

• END OF PHILIPPINES'S MOD ~

1. Before anything else, If you have any questions, don't be shy to ask me.
   
2. If you need assistance, mapping techniques, you can count on me.
   
3. I would be glad if you try to mod my map as well: KIMONO PRINCESS

[Ryuu] wrote:

hi.
mod4mod.

[General]

• delete .osb file and do full submit. Done, but I always doing this, and we'll see how this happen got klai.

kiai

Inconsistency in Kiai Times:
- [Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:082, ends on 03:19:468
- [Let's Try! Easy!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:518, ends on 03:19:468
- [Let's Try! Normal!] :
Kiai #1: Starts on 00:07:974, ends on 00:24:986
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:17:767, ends on 01:34:779
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:41:518, ends on 03:19:468

[Let's Try! Easy!]

00:11:027 (1) - put on the middle? Done.
00:21:496 (1,2,3,4) - maybe this? Fixed.
00:33:710 (2,3,4) - maybe this? Makes sense, fixed.
00:56:392 (1,2) - maybe this? Fixed.
01:27:799 (1,2) - maybe this? Fixed.
01:59:206 (1,2,3) - put on the middle? Fixed.
02:28:868 (3) - maybe this? Fixed.

[Let's Try! Normal!]

00:07:974 (2,3) - put on the middle? Done.
01:59:206 (1) - moved from a (4) Fixed.
02:29:740 (2) - 1 grid right Fixed.
03:05:073 (4) - x:184 y:208 Done.

[Let's Try! Ar3sgice's Hard!]

fine for me.

good luck.

1. Should remove "Let's Try!" from the difficulty name.
2. 01:36:523 (4) - move the start of break here

1. 01:59:206 (1) - move away
2. 02:30:831 (1) - add clap to end

1. 00:13:862 (3) - add clap to end of slider?
2. 00:57:701 (5) - Ctrl + R and move the midpoint like this?
3. 01:11:223 (5,6,7,4) - Replace them like 01:10:351 (2,3,4) ?
4. 01:18:639 (1) - overlapped by hitburst http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/302551
5. 02:26:905 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream sounds weird, should remove 3 or 4.

Apricot wrote:

General

1. Should remove "Let's Try!" from the difficulty name. Done.
2. 01:36:523 (4) - move the start of break here Forgot about that... Done.

Normal

1. 01:59:206 (1) - move away Oh... Done...
2. 02:30:831 (1) - add clap to end Done...

[general]

1. osb. can be removed~

[Easy]

1. 01:52:227 (1) - the last point 4 grid down and 1 grid right ?
2. 01:55:716 (1) - I think let 4th point become red point and 13 grid up
3. 01:59:206 (1) - 2 grid up and 1 grid left
4. 02:42:826 (3) - the last point 1 grid left ?
5. 03:10:744 (3) - NC

[Normal]

1. 00:31:965 (1) - the last point 1 grid down ?
2. 01:07:079 (2) - 3rd point 2 grid left
3. 01:08:606 (4) - 2nd point 2 grid left
4. 02:48:497 (2) - 3rd point 2 grid right , 4th point 1 grid up , last point 3 grid up and 1 grid right
5. 03:00:275 (5) - 2nd point 2 grid down and 3 grid left , 3rd point 1 grid down , 6th point 1 grid right, last point 3 grid up

[Ar3sgice's Hard]

2. 00:13:862 (3) - clap at end ?
3. 00:44:179 (5) - last point 1 grid up ?
4. 02:38:901 (1) - remove NC?
5. 02:46:534 (1) - I think there can change ~ i feel strange a bit
6. 02:57:657 (1) - remove NC?

Apricot wrote:

Hard

1. 00:13:862 (3) - add clap to end of slider? ok
2. 00:57:701 (5) - Ctrl + R and move the midpoint like this? don't like
3. 01:11:223 (5,6,7,4) - Replace them like 01:10:351 (2,3,4) ? what do you mean ._.
4. 01:18:639 (1) - overlapped by hitburst http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/302551 ok
5. 02:26:905 (1,2,3,4,5) - this stream sounds weird, should remove 3 or 4. ok

l1106188 wrote:

Request from L18's & Crystal's Modding Queue.

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .

[general]

1. osb. can be removed~

[Easy]

1. 01:52:227 (1) - the last point 4 grid down and 1 grid right ? Done.
2. 01:55:716 (1) - I think let 4th point become red point and 13 grid up That looks fine...
3. 01:59:206 (1) - 2 grid up and 1 grid left No.
4. 02:42:826 (3) - the last point 1 grid left ? done.
5. 03:10:744 (3) - NC Looks okay.

[Normal]

1. 00:31:965 (1) - the last point 1 grid down ? It looks just fine.
2. 01:07:079 (2) - 3rd point 2 grid left Done.
3. 01:08:606 (4) - 2nd point 2 grid left Okay...
4. 02:48:497 (2) - 3rd point 2 grid right , 4th point 1 grid up , last point 3 grid up and 1 grid right Fixed/
5. 03:00:275 (5) - 2nd point 2 grid down and 3 grid left , 3rd point 1 grid down , 6th point 1 grid right, last point 3 grid up Fixed

good song
and sorry to my poor English

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Ar3sgice's Hard

OD:6

00:07:974 (2) - 用finish替代clap,并且把音量调整到40%,这样开始kiai time 感觉会更好些
00:23:241 (1) - 这个finish去掉
00:24:986 (3) 和 00:25:313(1) - 这两个皆加上finish 感觉更好(只在前者加个也不错)~
00:28:039 (6) - 这里的连续两个finish 感觉有些拖拉(原始finish音效的原因造成),去掉这个,只单独前面一个finish效果会更不错
00:30:220 (2) 这个属于可加可不加的finish,觉得加了后 效果一般
00:31:093 (6) - 这一段finish有些多,就会感觉到有些闷,而且这里觉得不适合加这个finish
01:17:330 (2) - 开始的finish 移到 结束处,结束处的clap可以去掉
01:34:779~01:36:523 -..或者加个spinner?直接break也不错, 不过break没加到这里...
03:01:583 (2) - 把这个finish去掉,在后面slider开始处加finish

Other looks fine to me

只看了这个难度...不过

deserve a star

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

no fix on crystal's.

1. Add Suku Suku Pon! to the source? I'm not sure, but this is the title of TV program where this song played :O
2. I'm not good at chosing colors, but yours are too dark and 'heavy' for your bg (especially green one).
   Try this, please:
   

   [Colours]
   Combo1 : 0,135,234
   Combo2 : 102,226,27
   Combo3 : 255,21,39
   Combo4 : 249,199,66

1. 00:08:410 (T) - remove this sections with tick-clap as you should better put claps on every second beat. So, then put clap on the end of this slider. It's better, isn't it?
2. 00:09:282 (3) - remove clap from the beginning, also you can add a reverse to better rhythm:
   
   SPOILER

   
   Don't forget to put clap on the end of the (3)
3. 00:11:027 (4) - such sliders (called 'kick sliders' or 1/2 sliders) are bad for the easiest diffs as noobs could fail it, so change it to a circle. Oh, and put new combo here, because combo which are longer than (3) or (4) are bad for Easy :<
4. 01:10:351 (1) - change the clap to the finish?
5. 01:17:767 (2) - clap to the end
6. 01:19:075 (3) - and remove from here
7. 01:20:820 (1) - again, change this kick slider to a simple circle
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 01:34:997 - start break here? I don't like how it begins later D: or add a spinner here to 01:36:523 -
9. 01:59:206 (1) - (nazi) not symmetrical, to make it: move the last followpoint 2 grids up and 1 left
10. 02:06:185 (1) - finish to the beginning?
11. 02:34:102 (1) - ^
12. 02:44:571 (1) - change the kick-slider :<
13. 03:03:764 (3) - remove clap from the beginning
14. 03:05:509 (1) - kick slideeer :<
    
    I like your end, but why not to map it till the end? :O

1. 00:07:974 (2) - again, claps. Remove timing section with custom tick and add clap to the end
2. 00:14:953 (2) - not symmetrical :<
3. 01:34:997 - again, move break or add spinner
4. 02:20:144 (1) - finish?
5. 02:30:613 (4) - put nc here as in 02:27:123 (1) -

1. 00:16:262 (1,2,3) - maybe put whistles? :O I like how they sound
2. 01:16:022 (1,2) - ^
3. 01:34:888 - as in other diffs, maybe start break here or add a spinner till 01:36:523 -
4. 02:39:773 (1,2) - go! go! whistles? :3
5. 02:41:518 - start kiai here as in other diffs
6. 02:49:806 (1,2,3) - go! go! go!
7. 03:10:744 (1,2,3) - ^

CDFA wrote:

Allright, so I tried downloading this, and it won't download for me! D:.

I'm assuming it's a client-side issue for me, but sadly, I won't be able to mod this! Sorry ;~;.

If you've re-uploaded it, you can PM me to try again :>

Nothing to say

01:24:964 Why doesn't the slider start here ? The voice starts here yet. (I think there's a reason, but I don't understand)
02:41:736 Same here
02:48:715 Same here

Nothing to say

crabovan wrote:

Ar3sgice's Hard

00:22:150 - maybe add note? don't have rhythm
01:10:351 (2,3) - this sliders don't have rhythm follow vocal
02:14:909 (9) - maybe better replace this with symmetry about axis Y? kill ds
02:18:399 (1) - this slider don't have rhythm start and end do, and has slow down effect
02:38:028 (1,2,1,2) - remap this partically with streams no
02:46:534 (1) - shorten to white tick and add note after him to red tick follow vocal and symmetrical is bettter sorry