JInxyjem wrote:

Why do you need ni-hillions of bookmarks?
ni-hillions? im sorry that i can't understand...


[Easy]
02:05:31() - Move the spinner onward, make it longer and remove the break, as it feels weird that you wait such a long time just to spin a short spinner.

When she sings, add a beat there. i see many gaps. If the song becomes too hard, make some (not ALL) beats into sliders.
After doing so, add breaks in long gaps. A good break is when you can see the whole "Break" word in the shaded spot in the timeline.
yea,actually i add few breaks


[Normal]
00:36:39() - Have a break, have a Kit-Kat
00:42:61() - ^
00:51:88 (4,5) - Weird spacing, 5 is even further than 4 compared to 1,2,3 in the time line but it is nearer to 4 in the map.
then i used the distance snap
01:08:46 (1) - Make this 1/4 longer
i see
01:11:23 (5,6,7) - Weird spacing, as seen on 00:51:xx.
01:17:15 (4,5) - ^
01:26:92() - Break
01:29:38 (1) - What you have done is called a jump, and should only be attempted in harder difficulties. Swap places with
i don't want to make this map humdrum,so have tried some jump,or i'll add it to hard diffculty01:29:78 (1) -
01:32:15 (1,1,1) - Also a jump. Reshuffle these beats.
01:33:23() - Break
01:39:65 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - WTF-spacing. make 2,3,4,5 nearer and 5,6,7 further.
01:47:94 (1,1,1) - Not innovative, but dont make it into one huge slider; think of another way.

tieff wrote:

Random mod.
Da-da-da. ^_^

[Hitsounds]
Decrease sample volume a bit, please.
And use more hitsounds.

[Easy]
00:06:88 (1) - Clap on 3rd return.
00:10:04 (1) - ^
00:13:20 (1) - ^
00:16:36 (1) - ^
so what's the mean of "Clap on 3rd return"? im sorry my English is not so well
00:24:85 (2,3) - Replace with slider?
yea, it looks better and more easier to newer
00:34:32 (2) - Slider shoud end here 00:35:11 (Red tick)
yea,you're right,but i'm afraid that it would be hard to newer
00:40:54 (2) - Slider shoud start here 00:40:63 (Red tick)
i think it's OK
00:49:12 (2,3) - Sorry, but... Spacing?
i use a slider with corner to match along with the voice

01:00:57 (1,1,1) - Jumps on easy?
then i'll fix it

[Normal]
00:35:11 (x) - Add note?
00:41:42 (x) - Same as above.
yes, i recognize it01:00:37 (x) - Add note.
01:00:47 (1) - Slider shound start here 01:00:57, return here 01:00:96 and end here 01:01:36.
thx...orz
01:02:15 (1) - Spinner shound end here 01:03:33.
01:19:71 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Nice pattern, but... Too counfusing for normal, IMHO.
let me see...
01:25:63 (x) - Add note?
01:31:95 (x) - Same as above.

[Hard]
00:06:88 (1) ~ 00:19:12 (10) - You can play with raising volume here! ^_^
00:49:32 (6,7) - Confusing, IMHO.
03:02:15 (1) - Slider shound end here 03:03:33 or here 03:03:73.
[hard]i wil reedit it thx for your mod~
Star.

qweqqwweerr wrote:

easy
1:37:08 (2)and(3) it is difficult for easy
1:39:45 (1)and(2) same above
確かに，ここは難しい
2:07:08 spiner ends 2:06:889 better
おそらくそれは本当でしょう

normal
1:20:70 (5)confusing. new combo or need distance
distance snapで使いました
2:06:29 spiner ends 2:06:495


hard
0:47:25 (6) end on 0:46:955 red tick
1:18:63 (6) end on 1:18:534 red tick

i love past easy that you submitted first
why do you change it?

Hanyuu wrote:

hi

[Easy]

00:34:32 (2) - end on white tick
00:40:63 (2) - end white tick
thanks for your mod, it do has some problem, but i think end on blue tick is better, fixed
01:36:49 (2,3) - make easier i think
01:45:96 (2) - make this slider end at the side of next circle not on the other side to make it easier too
well, in my opnion, it's not so diffcult for a rookie

i know tieff said others about the slider end but the change of speed is not good here for easy! (slider-halfbeat-beat-beat)

[Normal]
01:49:71 (1) - end white tick

[Hard]
Slider tick rate 2

The circle and slider you put here are like the normal difficulty- maybe you can make this more interesting if you not only map the voice

azuki wrote:

da da da

[Easy]
00:33:929 (2) slider end white tick
00:40:245 (2) ^

[Normal]
00:30:179 1 grid left?

[Hard]
00:12:810 (9.10) spacing near
00:22:185 (1,2) 1 tick right,i feel natural
00:28:501 (1,2) ^
00:47:448 (1,2) ^

nice map.take my star :3

blissfulyoshi wrote:

da:
00:21:69 (2) - align with the the current combo's 1
00:49:12 (2) - align with 1?
00:52:28 (2,3) - align with 1
01:00:57 (1,1,1) - make a straight line
01:10:24 (1) - I don't like how the repeat does not snap to anything in the music
01:13:40 (1) - " "
01:16:56 (1,1) - I don;t like how the second repeat does not snap to the lyrics for either slider
01:22:67 (1,1,1) - " "
01:44:98 (1) - align with 2 from previous combo?
01:51:10 (1,1,1) - make a straight line (move the yellow 1 1 grid(3) right)

da da:
y are there random bookmarks at the end?
00:30:57 (3) - align with 2
01:14:78 (4) - end on top of 2
01:25:83 (1) - align with previous combo's 2?
01:44:98 (1) - start on the end of 2 and 3

da da da:
00:12:21 (8,9) - nazi post: spacing is too large between these 2
00:34:32 (2) - this should be placed where the blue 2 was
yea, you are right, I'm so sorry for my misunderstanding
00:40:63 (2) - align with the orange 1
00:50:11 (7) - have this end on the start of 6
00:51:69 (2) - have this end directly on the end of 1
01:01:36 (1) - not the same distance from the orange 1 as the green 1 is away from the orange 1 (sorry for sounding confusing)
01:36:49 (5) - move 1 grid(3) up to make 5,6,7,8 straight

you have a few slider stacking issues, but nice map overall. Star.

sohuhard wrote:

One of my favourite singer and song!

DA DA DA
overall difficulty改到6，7比较合适，9太快。HP drain rate可以调到6以上。这样难度不会变太多。（变5星了 >.>
00:05:31() - 加一个spinner，00:06:69结束。
00:15:37 (5) - 摆圆圈的话，这个稍微调整一下。
00:17:54 (5,7) - 关掉grid，摆近一点。
00:32:15 (1,1,1) - 摆跳跳的好点，你用的0.7x的距离，这里可以用1.4x或者更大，后同。
还没做完吧 >.>

DA DA
好像所有歌曲的silder velocity都是1.6，对DA DA和DA来说快了一点，可以尝试减小一点做。
02:05:31 (1) - 在02:06:49结束。
Good

DA
01:10:24 (1) - 这个觉得中间的折返点有点不对，拆成两个slider吧。
修改了,确实有点奇怪
01:37:08 (3) - 直接放01:36:49 (2) 下面
这样是不是会对于easy来说难了点
01:46:95 (3) - ^

纵观全局，DA明明是最难的呀 >.>

Here is your star~

Alace wrote:

<Hard>
overall diff 9 is really unplayable
i suggest overall diff 7

• 00:21:69 (2) - move up by 1 cell.
  00:36:29() - remove break.
  00:38:46 (1,1,1) - may be move them left 1 cell?
  00:42:61() - remove break.
  00:52:28 (2,3) - up by 1 cell.
  00:54:45 (1,2) - may be make them strongly diagonal & mirror reflect each other horizontal.
  01:21:69 (2,3) - make reflection relatively middle's horizontal line. (move 1 down & due spacing 1 left)
  01:22:67 (1,1,1) - make it straight line.(may be with putting 01:23:07 (1) in grid center)
  01:25:83 (1,1,1) - ^ (just put them in same places such ^ )
  01:47:94 (1,1,1) - ^

• 00:06:88 (1) - make slider moooore symmetric
  00:13:20 (1) - ^
  00:21:69 (4) - up 1 cell.
  00:38:46 (1,1,1) - make reflection relatively middle's horizontal line?
  01:25:83 (1) - right by 1 cell.
  01:51:88 (1) - move down by 1 cell for symmetry.

• 00:44:98 (1,2) - stack ends.
  00:49:32 (6,7) - stack end 7 with begin 6.
  00:51:29 (1,2) - stack ends.
  00:52:28 (3,5) - stack end 5 with begin 3.
  01:11:23 (2,4) - ^
  01:13:40 (1,2) - ^
  01:14:38 (3,4) - ^
  01:16:56 (1,2) - ^
  01:16:56 (1,2) - make them straight line (or symmetric arc)
  01:24:85 (2) - I don't like how this hitcircle is covered by previous combo (2).
  01:36:49 (1) - New combo?
  01:39:65 (5,6,7) - move by 1 right.
  01:41:03 (7) - And stack it with (5) end.
  01:42:81 (1) - New combo?
  02:07:87 (4,5) - Move by 1 up....
  Well.
  02:06:88 (1,2,3,6,7,8,9) - Make it straight diagonal.
  02:07:48 (3,4,5,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - ^
  02:11:23 (5,6,7,8) - ^
  And other notes until end same procedure.

1. 00:49:12 (2) - Align with (1)s end,
2. 01:48:73 (1) - 1 left and down on Grid 3.

1. 00:32:15 (1,1,1) - Move 2 to left on Grid 3,
2. 01:08:46 (1) - Start 1/2 later and then cut by 1/2,
3. 02:16:36 (1) - Add 2 repeats.

1. 00:40:63 (2,1) - Align with (1),
2. 00:44:98 (1,2) - Stack ends,
3. 00:49:32 (6,7) - Stack beggining with end,
4. 00:51:29 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sooo, stack ends,begginings etc. lol :<,
5. 01:11:82 (4) - Stack on (2)s end,
6. 01:13:40 (1,2,3,4,5) - Sooo, stack ends,begginings etc. lol :<,
7. 01:16:56 (1,2) - Stack ends,
8. 01:50:11 (2,3) - Stack ends,
9. 02:19:521 - Maybe add note with finish?.

Takuma wrote:

I don't know why, but, when I download I only got the False Hard difficulty? Please try a full submit.
Expect a full mod later. Starred for now. :3

Alex0686 wrote:

Excuse me for being late.

General
Offset sounds a bit early. But Maybe my UO is to blame, I haven't set one.
Hit sound's volume are kinda loud.
yea, I have reduceed the hit volume

[Easy]
The drain rate is just so LOW! It won't hurt to raise it a bit. But just my own opinion.
Nothing in the actually map seem off. Just some weird feeling cause the spacing is strange because of the far away notes. But that's nazi crap.

Normal
01:13:40 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - These kind of patterns may confuse someone, I got it the first though, but almost missed it the second time. But I guess it's fine.
01:30:968 - Wouldn't hurt to put a note here?
01:56:231 - ^
I use a slider instead
02:06:889-02:19:126 - No hit sounds? And a maybe a bit of timing sections at the right points for volume going up might be nice.

False Hard
Can't find anything, 'cept saying the overlapping patterns feel overused. But it's "Hard" so I guess that's just fine.

StarForU

Takuma wrote:

I think you should find a better spinnercircle thing. It is ugly.

[Easy]
02:05:31 (1) - Huh? This is pretty boring; a break then a spinner, then the map ends. Please if you can do anything about it, do it.
okay,I add something

[Hard]
00:12:81 (10) - The spacing is a little off. You should make (9,10,1) spacings even.
01:33:337 - Add a break?
01:51:10 (1) - I think the clap here was placed on mistake? It's not like the others, so I think you should remove the clap sound.

thank you Takuma,panda
you know that my hometown is the panda's hometown XD?

NachoPiggy wrote:

Very impressive map, storyboarding is great and the maps overall are pretty good and fun. No problems found either.


[Hard]
02:19:097 (10) - Add finish.


That's it :V

thanks for your mod and star

Inferior wrote:

+star

Leeg wrote:

Good job! Starred!

That girl from the song scares me... even more than Lazy Town's girl

Zekira wrote:

I don't like the offset...
...but I can't get anything that's VERY precise! What is this?! O_O

Offset: 563? If you don't like it then don't do it, since I just bit my ears on this one.

Takuma wrote:

*sigh* Full submit when you add images.

I have no other complaints. Except that I always laugh at 02:07:284 in Easy! HAHA.
Mnnggh, *cough* yes, I'll bubble this once you do this.

Cute, bubbled!

tieff wrote:

Gratz with bubble!

Larto wrote:

Skin:
- Add a custom hitcircleoverlay.png * added
- Add a custom sliderball. * added

* You can take them from the templateskin if you have to, but if you don't want to add any of those files, just force default skin.


False Hard:
Why is it called "False" Hard? You don't have to change it if you can explain that Takuma told me P:
That's all.

Symbolic wrote:

[Easy]

This was actually one of the first times i enjoyed playing and modding an Easy difficulty, good job!

01:23:66 (x) - Add a break here. added
02:07:08 (x) - ^ here I used StoryBoard design to make it funny, so I think maybe it's OK
02:13:00 (x) - ^ ^

[Normal]

Please use bigger hitcircles for more fun while playing this difficulty.

02:06:88 (TIMING SECTION) - Please remove the kiai time here because it doesn't fit with this part of the song. In the chorusses it's awesome but don't use it elsewhere in this song. fixed


[False Hard]

Please use bigger hitcircles for more fun while playing this difficulty.

00:07:87 (3) - This isn't spaced right. fixed
00:12:41 (9) - Respace this note.
00:32:15 (1,1,1) - These could be awesome jumps. Make them all jumps with same distance between them.let me think about it...
00:33:33 (1) - This isn't spaced right. oh, you are so circumspective
00:33:92 (1) - ^
00:35:31 (1,1,1) - These could be awesome jumps. Make them all jumps with same distance between them.it's not jump, it's ditance snaped
00:40:24 (1) - Move this note down 1 level 3 grid to align it with (2) or move (2) up 1 level 3 grid to align it with (1). fixed
00:41:62 (1,1,1) - These could be awesome jumps. Make them all jumps with same distance between them.
00:57:41 (1,1,1) - ^
00:59:19 (1) - This isn't spaced right. fixed
01:00:57 (1,1,1) - These could be awesome jumps. Make them all jumps with same distance between them.
01:22:67 (1,1,1) - ^
01:23:86 (1) - This isn't spaced right.
01:24:45 (1) - ^
01:25:83 (1,1,1) - These could be awesome jumps. Make them all jumps with same distance between them.
01:28:99 (1,1,1) - ^
01:32:15 (1,1,1) - ^
01:47:94 (1,1,1) - ^
01:49:12 (1) - This isn't spaced right.
01:49:71 (1) - ^
01:51:10 (1,1,1) - These could be awesome jumps. Make them all jumps with same distance between them.
01:54:25 (1,1,1) - ^
01:56:03 (1) - This isn't spaced right.
01:56:42 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Try not to make it TOO confusing :'(.
01:57:41 (1,1,1) - These could be awesome jumps. Make them all jumps with same distance between them.
02:06:88 (TIMING SECTION) - Please remove the kiai time here because it doesn't fit with this part of the song. In the chorusses it's awesome but don't use it elsewhere in this song.
01:58:40 (BREAK) - I would love to see this break mapped!


thanks for your great mod

Great map, i really enjoyed playing + modding it!
Starred *

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
00:19:71 (1,2) - map the dead space
00:22:87 (1,2) - ^
01:16:56 (1,2) - ^
01:19:71 (1,2) - ^
01:38:66 (1,2) - ^
01:41:82 (1,2) - ^ thanks, all fixed
srsly the random blank spots feel awkward I'm sorry, it's my first map and I have no much experience, thanks for your post
i really dont see the point in the last 3 notes but w/e



[Normal]
00:10:04 (1) - there is a clapping noise in the bg. you might want to put claps on it (every other white tick starting with the second one, and one red tick right after the second to last clap)
00:16:36 (1) - ^
02:10:04 (1) - put claps in here
02:16:36 (1) - ^
thanks, all fixed

[Hard]
00:51:29 (1,2) - stack the endpoints
01:13:40 (1,2) - ^
01:16:56 (1,2) - ^ just check for these ok?
I've noticed it, but sometimes it's hard to stack them, maybe I could change thier position


call me back when you make changes and ill rebubble you ok?

1. The hitsounds during non-chorus parts could increase in volume a bit.
2. In my personal opinion, i really think you're overdoing the Cyndi Wong skin a bit. The background and hitcircles look nice and all, and one comboburst is a nice touch, but past that feels a little.... eh.... however this is only personal opinion, and you can completely ignore this if you want.
3. I really feel like this could be mapped to the end, instead of just cut in the middle.

RemmyX25 wrote:

Alright, I'm not going to bubble pop this, but im not going to rank it either because there are a few things that COULD be addressed, but not pop-worthy. Just think about them.

1. The hitsounds during non-chorus parts could increase in volume a bit.You're right, I'll increase them
2. In my personal opinion, i really think you're overdoing the Cyndi Wong skin a bit. The background and hitcircles look nice and all, and one comboburst is a nice touch, but past that feels a little.... eh.... however this is only personal opinion, and you can completely ignore this if you want.I'm sorry but I think it's OK, as for a lovely song, I'd like to make everyone enjoy it, both song and skin
3. I really feel like this could be mapped to the end, instead of just cut in the middle.

yea, you got the point, mybe too much repeat is boring, 2min is OK then?
Its a soild map, dont get me wrong. I just want my opinions voiced. If you make changes, let me know so i can rebubble.

Also, starred

deepsea wrote:

duluduluduluduludadada

Actually I don't like this song much, but its not a reason stop me ranking this.

Awesome work for first map.

Here is your heart, popipopipopopipo.

RemmyX25 wrote:

I would recommend one more tick higher for the non-chorus parts, but thats just me. Poke me again if you change it.

Re-Bubbled for now.


PS- fixed triple posting.

Also, i can has kudosu?

Gladi wrote:

My compliments on your first map, this is awesome

thanks very much for your compliments