spboxer3 wrote:

D.N.Angel

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  Overlaps
  (Some overlaps of notes/sliders in this diff don't look good. Here is a list of beats that overlap each other could space them farther apart. yep. It's just suggest and nazi. you can ignore this par)
  

1. 01:13:801 (6,4) -

mapping
(These are about your pattern.Mostly for the suggest, Just some unrankable issue I will use red color to highlight it.)

1. 00:20:364 (2,3,4,5) - [suggest] make it square? It's looks more layout. //well,I want to keep this part
2. 00:22:614 (5) - [suggest] reverse this slider? because it's can make pattern more flowing. //indeed,fixed
3. 00:32:926 (4) - ^ same as this reason //I can't agree with it

中文ver.

1. 00:20:364 (2,3,4,5) - 讓這個作成正方形? 這樣可以讓這個排列更有設計感 //唔，我想保留原來的想法
2. 00:22:614 (5) - 反過來這個slider (ctrl + R) 因為這樣可以讓map玩起來更流暢些 //沒注意到這個呢o.o，fixed
3. 00:32:926 (4) - ^同樣 //其實原來的更好

red is unrankable issue. bule is recommended to fix. Black is just suggestion.

totaliy it's a awesome map~
star~

Melophobia wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
00:42:489 - you should use lower volume than 00:30:489 - //uh ... it had been lower than 00:30:489
01:17:364 (1) - remove newcombo //no,I added NC cuz I want to emphasize the drum
01:17:739 (2,1) - switch newcombos //previous one follow the vocal well,so no fixed
01:28:989 - same as Normal //k

i think that's all~ good luck!

HeatKai wrote:

lol x)

add " -s4b- " and " HeatKai " to the tags


I'll make the bg later.

Mapping time:

-s4b- (00:03:489 - 00:42:489)
HeatKai (00:42:864 - End)

the ending so hard to map Dx

Snowy Dream wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
00:58:239 (2) - dont stop spacing =A= //k
01:15:489 (1) - try to change the color to deep since the similar background color //I think it is fine :O

Yasora wrote:

no, that's no missing :3

1. all diff start spinner gradually raise volume? I like~

1. 01:28:426 (1) - how about this?
2. nice diff!

1. 00:14:176 (5) - add new combo
2. 00:32:926 - add note

1. 00:16:239 (1,2) - change to slider?

1. 01:19:989 (1) - too hard newbie players stack please move this
   

S o r d a wrote:

[overall]:

1. all diff start spinner gradually raise volume? I like~ Good suggestion, used :3

[Hard]:

1. 00:14:176 (5) - add new combo no, break my combo pattern
2. 00:32:926 - add note weird to me ;_;

[Normal]:

1. 00:16:239 (1,2) - change to slider? ok

popner wrote:

[D.N.Angel]
many complex jump, so AR+1? //hmm...ok
00:58:239 (2) - unexpected pause. move it to somewhere like 124,148? or add a repeat on 00:57:489 (1)? //I like this part,so no change ><

That's all I can find. GL~

284,164,42489,6,0,B|292:116|356:76|420:116|428:164,2,200,4|2|0

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Weezy wrote:

Yaaay Amagami :3

Normal
00:14:176 (4) - Suggestion. Possibly add another repeat. Hmm, ok, let's see this repeat can do. But if this can be confusing, i will remove it.
01:25:614 - Add a hit circle with a clap here, keeps the flow going imo nope, i don't see any rythim that can be followed here.
01:28:614 (6,1) - Make these into a slider goes better. Sure, since two people has already mention this.

Hard
00:14:739 - Add a hit circle here. Sure
00:43:801 (5,1) - Don't stack these, seems really clustered Nah, i don't think so
00:47:645 (2,3) - Stack these 2 makes it flow better Sure.
00:56:176 (5) - Really an unexpected jump here. Nope, it can be handeld


That's all.

I provide you with the delicious Haruka Morishima Err, what is this? >.<

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Weezy wrote:

D.N.Angel
- Change the AR back to 8. 9 makes this map a huge mess and really unplayable. Had fun playing this with AR8 >.< //ok..
00:10:801 (1) - Reverse this so it flows coming to this slider and also going to the next. //I think previous one is better
01:23:176 (2,3,4) - Don't stack 3,4 with the tail of 2. Feels strange when playing. //It is ok for me