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Mami Kawada - Hishoku no Sora (TV Size)
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Zodiark1020 wrote:
Ora tocca a me moddare
~Normal~
00:06:41 (3) - 2/4 dopo? non so, cosi com'è adesso mi suona male
00:13:51 (6) - mi suona male, rimuoverei il (4) metterei il (5) al suo posto e spostare questo slider (6) dov'era il (5)
00:15:64 (1) - finish? se ti va...
01:26:29 (1) - inizia un po' presto? beh io lo sposterei a 01:26:64 o, addirittura a 01:27:002
~Insane~
00:12:97 (2) - qui lascerei un solo beat...solo il 2, la tripletta è un po' esagerata :O
00:52:03 (7) - no clap...
01:06:49 (7) - rimuovilo...? credo k suoni meglio
01:06:94 (9) - allungalo di 2/4
01:17:86 (7) - rimuovi anke questo
01:21:76 (4) - mi sembra un po' inutile...forse solo x renderla un po' più difficile? nn so cmq io lo toglierei
01:26:46 (6) - suona meglio 2/4 avanti, anke se poi lo spacing sarebbe un kasino, vedi un po'...
Beh, nn ho trovato altro, bella mappa, mi piace
Fixato ^^ Grazie per averla moddata, comunque non ho modificato tutto, soprattutto non ho cancellato tutti i cerchi che hai segnato nel post. Spero vada bene lo stesso D:
Alla faccia delle mie conoscenze (?) in inglese: oggi si aiuta in italiano!
Easy
[00:05:340] (1) usa dei soft whistles su questo slider...
[00:15:640] (spinner) ... e un finish qui!
[00:40:130] prova ad usare suoni soft da qui fino a 00:45:163
[00:56:820] (2, 3) termina questi slider rispettivamente con whistle (2°) e clap (3°)
[01:20:070] (3, 3)metti un finish a fine slider e sul beat
[01:20:960] (1) secondo me, è un pò forzato rendere questo slider così lungo... ritmicamente parlando, intendo...
[01:22:740] (2) whistle su TUTTO lo slider!
Zodi's Hard
[00:06:050] (2, 4) clap sul beat e sul 2° "intermedio" dello slider (ancora certi termini sono a me ignoti...)
[00:15:810] (6) prova a far partire da qui uno slider che finisca intorno a 00:17:417 (magari con un finish...)
[00:49:360] (7, 1) collegali con uno slider!
[00:53:270] (1, 3) claps qui...
[01:04:630] (7, 10) ... e anche qui!
[01:08:000] (7) slider ticks qui? Non ne sono assai convinto...
Hard
[00:07:120] (6) termina lo slider con un finish
[00:12:620] (6, 7) prova a togliere il 7° e aggiungi un clap al 6°
[00:13:860] (6) clap anche qui
[00:14:570] (3, 4, 7, 8, 9) whistles a raffica!
[00:34:450] (4) fai partire uno slider da qui e terminalo intorno a 00:35:890
[00:40:130] come nell'easy... da qui a 00:45:163 solo suoni soft!
[01:04:190] (11) questo undicesimo beat non centra niente con il ritmo generale della canzone...
[01:15:550] (11) ... e neanche questo!
[01:21:760] (4) Ok, capisco che hai creato questa modalità solo per una classe scelta veri veterani, ma neanche questo beat s'intona con il ritmo della canzone...
E con questo, il mio lavoro qui è finito... a te la parola!
Easy
[00:05:340] (1) usa dei soft whistles su questo slider...
[00:15:640] (spinner) ... e un finish qui!
[00:40:130] prova ad usare suoni soft da qui fino a 00:45:163
[00:56:820] (2, 3) termina questi slider rispettivamente con whistle (2°) e clap (3°)
[01:20:070] (3, 3)metti un finish a fine slider e sul beat
[01:20:960] (1) secondo me, è un pò forzato rendere questo slider così lungo... ritmicamente parlando, intendo...
[01:22:740] (2) whistle su TUTTO lo slider!
Zodi's Hard
[00:06:050] (2, 4) clap sul beat e sul 2° "intermedio" dello slider (ancora certi termini sono a me ignoti...)
[00:15:810] (6) prova a far partire da qui uno slider che finisca intorno a 00:17:417 (magari con un finish...)
[00:49:360] (7, 1) collegali con uno slider!
[00:53:270] (1, 3) claps qui...
[01:04:630] (7, 10) ... e anche qui!
[01:08:000] (7) slider ticks qui? Non ne sono assai convinto...
Hard
[00:07:120] (6) termina lo slider con un finish
[00:12:620] (6, 7) prova a togliere il 7° e aggiungi un clap al 6°
[00:13:860] (6) clap anche qui
[00:14:570] (3, 4, 7, 8, 9) whistles a raffica!
[00:34:450] (4) fai partire uno slider da qui e terminalo intorno a 00:35:890
[00:40:130] come nell'easy... da qui a 00:45:163 solo suoni soft!
[01:04:190] (11) questo undicesimo beat non centra niente con il ritmo generale della canzone...
[01:15:550] (11) ... e neanche questo!
[01:21:760] (4) Ok, capisco che hai creato questa modalità solo per una classe scelta veri veterani, ma neanche questo beat s'intona con il ritmo della canzone...
E con questo, il mio lavoro qui è finito... a te la parola!
[Timing]
BPM ok. Offset 735.
[Normal]
00:38:00 (5) - Move it here : 00:37:83 (5) And fix spacing.
00:51:49 (2) - Sounds bad. Try to change it.
01:22:74 (2) - ^
[Zodi's Hard]
00:31:26 (1) - Unrankable slider.
00:36:23 (2) - New combo.
01:07:83 (6) - ^
[Insane]
00:53:18 (11) - New combo.
01:28:24 (1) - Start this here -> 01:28:422 Follow more the song.
I love the anime and the song. Starred!
BPM ok. Offset 735.
[Normal]
00:38:00 (5) - Move it here : 00:37:83 (5) And fix spacing.
00:51:49 (2) - Sounds bad. Try to change it.
01:22:74 (2) - ^
[Zodi's Hard]
00:31:26 (1) - Unrankable slider.
00:36:23 (2) - New combo.
01:07:83 (6) - ^
[Insane]
00:53:18 (11) - New combo.
01:28:24 (1) - Start this here -> 01:28:422 Follow more the song.
I love the anime and the song. Starred!
[Normal]
00:06:41 (3) - I would move this 2/4 later, or maybe add another beat there.
00:08:90 (4) - Move the ending point of this slider 1 square down with grid 3
[Zodi's Hard]
This diff is full of alignment errors, inconsistent spacing and ugly sliders. I suggestrape to remap some parts at least.
00:15:81 (6) - Ugly slider, you could make it look shorter by adding a repeat if you like it.
00:33:74 (1) - I would delete this beat
00:42:62 (1) - ^
00:47:94 (1,2,3,4) - Even if probably done on purpose, this spacing is unintuitive
00:51:49 (5) - This looks ugly, and it should end 2/4 earlier or later
01:17:41 (1) - New combo?
[Insane]
Nothing wrong with this diff, and I love it!
Also, my attempt at fixing your storyboard:
And of course, Starred :3
00:06:41 (3) - I would move this 2/4 later, or maybe add another beat there.
00:08:90 (4) - Move the ending point of this slider 1 square down with grid 3
[Zodi's Hard]
This diff is full of alignment errors, inconsistent spacing and ugly sliders. I suggest
00:15:81 (6) - Ugly slider, you could make it look shorter by adding a repeat if you like it.
00:33:74 (1) - I would delete this beat
00:42:62 (1) - ^
00:47:94 (1,2,3,4) - Even if probably done on purpose, this spacing is unintuitive
00:51:49 (5) - This looks ugly, and it should end 2/4 earlier or later
01:17:41 (1) - New combo?
[Insane]
Nothing wrong with this diff, and I love it!
Also, my attempt at fixing your storyboard:
4,3,1,"credits.png",172,377Use it only if you like it D:
M,0,17860,21321,190,375,172,377
F,0,17860,18481,0,1
S,0,17860,21321,1.78848,0.684
F,0,18481,24872,1,1
F,0,24872,28812,1,0
And of course, Starred :3
I know this song! :V
[Normal]:
Straightforward, good, works for a beginner.
[Zodi's Hard]:
I don't know if having the Yumiko credits thing would work for this difficulty, since this one is actually made by Zodiark.
I can always help changing it around if you'd like.
00:49:36 (7) - Finish at end?
01:01:26 (2) - Finish here?
01:10:13 (5) - Remove whistle at beginning and whistle on slide trail, then add a whistle on the slider end?
01:06:94 (3) - 1 down on Grid Level 3.
01:23:98 (5) - New combo. (To rid the inconsistent spacing)
[Insane]:
00:48:48 (1) - Shorten spinner by 1/2?
00:49:54 (1) - Move spinner 1/2 back?
Star *w*
If you want me to help you with the credits thing, the whole Zodi's Hard or whatever, please tell me on#rape #italian.
[Normal]:
Straightforward, good, works for a beginner.
[Zodi's Hard]:
I don't know if having the Yumiko credits thing would work for this difficulty, since this one is actually made by Zodiark.
I can always help changing it around if you'd like.
00:49:36 (7) - Finish at end?
01:01:26 (2) - Finish here?
01:10:13 (5) - Remove whistle at beginning and whistle on slide trail, then add a whistle on the slider end?
01:06:94 (3) - 1 down on Grid Level 3.
01:23:98 (5) - New combo. (To rid the inconsistent spacing)
[Insane]:
00:48:48 (1) - Shorten spinner by 1/2?
00:49:54 (1) - Move spinner 1/2 back?
Star *w*
If you want me to help you with the credits thing, the whole Zodi's Hard or whatever, please tell me on
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Download this and extract it into your song folder.
The contents:
Zodiark's banner
The .osb
[Insane]
[Normal]
[Zodi's Hard]
There shouldn't be any changes in hitobjects or of the like. Make a double check though.
Also, you should put Shakugan no Shana in the tags or source.
Download: extract-in-songfolder.zip
The contents:
Zodiark's banner
The .osb
[Insane]
[Normal]
[Zodi's Hard]
There shouldn't be any changes in hitobjects or of the like. Make a double check though.
Also, you should put Shakugan no Shana in the tags or source.
Download: extract-in-songfolder.zip
Topic Starter
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bubbled.
consider +1 overall difficulty and 2 slider tick rate on Insane
if you decide to do that, I'll rebubble it, since the bubble will be nerfed.
consider +1 overall difficulty and 2 slider tick rate on Insane
if you decide to do that, I'll rebubble it, since the bubble will be nerfed.
Topic Starter
First, thanks so much for the bubble ^^ And...i tried to change the overall and the tick rate like you said, but i like better to do not change them, but thanks again for the suggestionsSkyripper wrote:
bubbled.
consider +1 overall difficulty and 2 slider tick rate on Insane
if you decide to do that, I'll rebubble it, since the bubble will be nerfed.
offset:+5ms
resnap all notes
<Hard> (you don`t really need to change)
01:23:10 (1,2,3,4) - i don`t think this is a good place for jumps (really confusing)
That`s all
EDIT: i set a jump in hard`s last part
usually i set jumps with heavy vocals or heavy BGM it`s more easy to follow
This is a basic jump style
btw don`t copy the picture`s patten XD
rebubbled
resnap all notes
<Hard> (you don`t really need to change)
01:23:10 (1,2,3,4) - i don`t think this is a good place for jumps (really confusing)
That`s all
EDIT: i set a jump in hard`s last part
usually i set jumps with heavy vocals or heavy BGM it`s more easy to follow
This is a basic jump style
btw don`t copy the picture`s patten XD
rebubbled
Can you fix the slider 00:51:50 (5) in Hard? The repeat is facing the wrong way because of an extra node.
Besides that, everything else looks fine to me.
Give me a PM or something if you update this, since it'll bounce back to star and vanish into page 2 and beyond
Besides that, everything else looks fine to me.
Give me a PM or something if you update this, since it'll bounce back to star and vanish into page 2 and beyond
Good job, star! ^^
I just noticed this in Hard as well
00:44:40 (6) - there are actually 3 nodes under the red node of this slider. Can you delete the red nodes? They're making the slider stutter when sliding out (if you have snaking sliders on).
Again, PM me
00:44:40 (6) - there are actually 3 nodes under the red node of this slider. Can you delete the red nodes? They're making the slider stutter when sliding out (if you have snaking sliders on).
Again, PM me
Rebubble
Here we go