air111 wrote:

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Sweet map :3

[Advanced]
Pretty solid diff exept
1:15:356 (1,2,3,4,5) - this combo seems too heavy, and with no arguments, plus it follows after "normal" 1:11:817 (2,3,4,5) and 1:14:873 (3,4) which makes it so more heavily hmm.. ok i fixed this
2:35:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as ^ i think at this point ppl already get used to the rhythm so it's fine

[Expert]
1:02:167 (3, 4) - seems confusing for me, but anways ~exepert~ lol
1:09:244 - 1:10:629 That combo makes this diff expert, exept this combo map diff seems "heavy" to me. nah it's fine (it's only further by a few grids +_+)
2:36:420 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as ^

I hope this helps ~cheers

thx for ur help

nich95 wrote:

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Hi, kazumikos

From my modding queue

[General]
No problem.

[Advanced]
00:22:279 (2,3) - Spacing is too far. Recommended to reduce Spacing to 2.1x. fixed
00:34:181 (2,3,4) - Here as well. Adjust the Spacing is 1.5x. (The overlap with 00:35:950 (1)) it's fine here
00:38:235 (1) - Move to x:124 y:72 to keep the equal spacing. then 00:40:614 (1,2) - will be too close =/
01:04:901 (4) - Move to the top of (3,5) is better. done

[Expert]
00:45:440 (2) - Maybe move to the end of the slider. Then adjust the spacing of (2,3) again would be better. ok since many ppl have complained abt this i decided to move this note

That's all that I can find them.

Good luck.

thx for da mod

nich95 wrote:

[Shulin's Soft]
OD -1 (Suggest that OD is less than AR would be better.) I think OD being the same as AR is fine.
The rest is no problem.

Mustaash wrote:

[Easy]

02:02:965 (1) - Touching the HPBar, please fix that ! Okay, I've fixed this! ^_^

Fine, Awesome Easy !

Mustaash wrote:

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Ok let's go ~

[Advanced]

So firstly i think you can add more HitSounds in this difficulty, something like this? thx for suggestions ^^ i'll consider to add more hitsound and it'll take a while to fully decide lol

01:00:398 (4,5) - I think the spacing between these notes is too much high because the most of the diff use a lower spacing generally k

Overall, this difficulty looks really good too !

[Expert]

00:41:097 (2) - I think this note is too much behind the slider (1) i should be you, i rearrange more down ( like 6grid down (Lv4) ) done
01:41:090 (4) - I suggest to make a new combo because the ryhthm is different. hmm ok

I really had fun to play this difficulty and the whole mapset, your mapping style and Shulin's Easy Skill are awesome. Keep it up, Greaaaaat Work !

thx alot for modding

Samah wrote:

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From queue:

This is the first mod I've done where I've played all the difficulties and couldn't find a single thing wrong, or to even offer any suggestions.
Sorry I can't be of much help...
If I were a MAT I'd bubble it, but you'll just have to make do with these stars instead. <3
No kd, of course, but if I can think of something I'll post later.

It's ok :3
thx for those stars
Im really looking forward to ur future mod post ^^

Wiinter wrote:

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Modding as requested~

General
the kiai times should be the same in all diffs i thought they were the same? O_o

[Advanced]
00:21:313 (2,1,2) - would look better if you shaped (1) like this http://puu.sh/dxza (or something like that) instead. that little overlap looks a bit ugly imo >< well.. ok
02:00:874 (3) - use distance snap? i did o3o
02:15:832 (1,2,3) - place (2) and (3) like this? looks better imo like wot? O_o
02:20:657 (2) - fix spacing? D: k
02:25:322 (1) - ^ k
02:30:469 (4) - place this in a way it doesn't touch the previous slider D: done.. (i think)

[Expert]
00:34:181 (3,4) - place it like this http://puu.sh/dxEM? k
00:45:440 (2) - ugly overlap D: lol k

well, it was mostly spacing suggestions. i wasn't a really big fan of the overlaps nice mapset though

Thx for modding

Mystica wrote:

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Here comes my Mod

[soft]
good for me

[advanced]
00:25:174 (1,2,3) - this three sliders are a little hard for a normal diff(even a hard diff) uhm yea.. this is a hard diff, and i kinda tried to make it look like a hard >_>

[expert]
AR seems not fit it...may use ar7? then ar will be too low =/ (tested)
other seems no problem.

In my mind.I think taiko hitsound will fits more.Also the volume seems too low for me.... I also thought of taiko hitsound but after a few tests i decided not to use it. I assume this is personal preference? O_o

But it's a nice map yet.

• Hi hi~ request from my queue~
  
  General :

1. Tags " If I Could Tell You" ...What's this mean....
2. 01:21:790 ~ 01:23:076 all diff need to change like "Shulin's Soft" diff
   　
   Shulin's Soft :
   　
3. 00:43:188 (1) - Maybe try this
   
   

   348,240,43188,6,0,B|352:144|256:72|160:144|164:240,1,320,0|8

   
   Advanced :
   　
4. Looks good for me!!
   　
   Expert :
   　
5. Looks good for me!!
   　
   
   You must read~!

   red:I think it is unrankable issue. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.

Awesome map! Awesome song! Awesome mapest!!!
Maybe add this soft-hitnormal sounds better
have my star and Good luck :3

bossandy wrote:

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• Hi hi~ request from my queue~
  
  General :

1. Tags " If I Could Tell You" ...What's this mean.... uhm.. it's album title...
2. 01:21:790 ~ 01:23:076 all diff need to change like "Shulin's Soft" diff done
   　
   Shulin's Soft :
   　
3. 00:43:188 (1) - Maybe try this
   
   

   348,240,43188,6,0,B|352:144|256:72|160:144|164:240,1,320,0|8

   
   Advanced :
   　
4. Looks good for me!!
   　
   Expert :
   　
5. Looks good for me!!
   　
   
   You must read~!

   red:I think it is unrankable issue. bule: need to discuss. Black: just suggest.

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Awesome map! Awesome song! Awesome mapest!!!
Maybe add this soft-hitnormal sounds better
have my star and Good luck :3

thx for modding
and star~ xD

bossandy wrote:

• Shulin's Soft :
  　

1. 00:43:188 (1) - Maybe try this I think this slider is fine =P
   
   

   348,240,43188,6,0,B|352:144|256:72|160:144|164:240,1,320,0|8

rockleejkooo wrote:

[Shulin's Soft]
• 00:37:237 (1) - maybe finish at the start? o.o Sounds strange to me
• 00:52:677 (1) - clap? Hmm... no I want to keep the hitsound pattern for this part =P
• 01:58:140 (3,4,5) - whistles? Too much whistle imo, it sounds a bit heavy
• 02:01:035 (2) - ^ at the start and end ^
• 02:35:615 (2) - clap at the end Sure, sounds good

rockleejkooo wrote:

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Hello from our queue

[Advanced]
• 00:57:824 (1) - maybe remove nc and put on 00:58:146 (2) - k
• 01:08:922 (3) - nc? (sound changing) fixed
• 01:59:105 (1) - remove nc and put on next slider? hm.. k
• 02:16:958 (2) - maybe better to not overlap it here? something like this http://puu.sh/elr3 k


[Expert]
• 02:08:112 (4) - nc
• 02:09:077 (1) - remove nc
• 02:09:398 (2) - nc
• 02:10:685 (5) - nc
thx for suggestions, i fixed nc things

perfect mapset *O* hope it will get ranked soon :3

thx for modding

DivineRage wrote:

I love this song ;.; I have no star but you can have a ♥

Shulin wrote:

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Modding as requested everything is just suggestions, suggestions, suggestions...

Soft:

See attached.

Advanced:

00:54:768 (3) - Finish start?
01:09:887 (3) - Whistle start?
02:00:391 (1) - Move this up 2 grids or so? The overlap with 01:59:105 (8) - looks messy
02:01:035 (3) - Move this down 2 grids if you do ^
02:14:384 (2) - Finish end?
02:29:503 (1) - Whistle end?

Expert:

00:41:097 (2) - Move down 2 grids to align with 00:41:258 (3) -
00:42:384 (5) - Move down 2 grids to reduce overlap with 00:41:901 (4) - It looks neater.
00:50:908 (7) - New combo?
00:54:768 (3) - Add finish to keep the hitsound pattern?
01:09:887 (4) - Whistle?
01:11:174 (4) - ^
01:11:496 (6) - I think there should be a new combo here so it follows 01:12:782 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) -
01:44:951 (1) - The curve is kind of ugly, maybe make it rounder?
01:50:580 (2) - I think it's better if you move this down 2-3 grids and reduce overlap with 01:50:098 (1) -
02:11:972 (4) - Clap?
02:21:944 (3) - Finish + clap at the end? (Like 02:16:797 (3,4,5) - and 02:19:371 (1,2,3) - )
02:29:664 (2) - Whistle?
02:30:951 (1) - ^
02:30:951 (1) - Remove new combo? Add new combo at 02:31:273 (3) - if you do this.

fixed (almost) everything, except 4 the ugly curve :< I dont know wot to do with it = =

Keep going! It's only 9 more months to November ~ Yea~~ 9 months to go *_*

1. One of your SB elements is not in .png. black.jpg, fix it, please, and do fullsubmit.
2. I suggest you not to use pure white combo color.
3. Make the kiai time consistent in all diffs.
4. You should make Normal diff to balance your diff spread.

1. 01:21:790 (3) - start break right away after this note.
   Nothing to say. Beautiful, just beautiful.

• Is it Hard? Maybe make it more easier? You have Insane, so maybe make the spacing here less and remove some jumps.

1. 00:23:887 (3,4) - because of osu! bag, stacking doesn't occur here,so you have to make a manual stack by moving one of the objects for some pixels or 1 grid (lvl4) off or you may change them in another way.
2. 00:35:467 (5) - nc
3. 01:16:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard :<
4. 01:21:468 (4) - start break right away after this note.
5. 01:48:811 (3,4,5,6) - don't stack, it's hard
6. 02:35:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - meh.

1. 01:21:790 (1) - same as in other diffs.

Reiji-RJ wrote:

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Hello..

[General]

1. One of your SB elements is not in .png. black.jpg, fix it, please, and do fullsubmit. hmm i dont think it does matter O_o but ok
2. I suggest you not to use pure white combo color. but the BGs are dark, it suits white combo color D:
3. Make the kiai time consistent in all diffs.they r not? ;_;
4. You should make Normal diff to balance your diff spread.

[Shulin's Soft]

1. 01:21:790 (3) - start break right away after this note.
   Nothing to say. Beautiful, just beautiful.

[Advanced]

AR, OD, HP -1.

• Is it Hard? Maybe make it more easier? You have Insane, so maybe make the spacing here less and remove some jumps. Yes this is a hard diff I know it's not really hard but more or less I dont wanna change it into normal =/
  Anything related to "..too hard, fix?" will be remained, sorry >_<

1. 00:23:887 (3,4) - because of osu! bag, stacking doesn't occur here,so you have to make a manual stack by moving one of the objects for some pixels or 1 grid (lvl4) off or you may change them in another way.
2. 00:35:467 (5) - nc I think it's fine here o_O
3. 01:16:643 (1,2,3,4,5) - hard :<
4. 01:21:468 (4) - start break right away after this note. waiting 4 Shulin's reply, if he changes i'll follow
5. 01:48:811 (3,4,5,6) - don't stack, it's hard
6. 02:35:133 (1,2,3,4,5) - meh.

[Expert]

AR, HP, OD -1.

1. 01:21:790 (1) - same as in other diffs.

Not bad overall, but I suggest you to work more on patterns, to make map more beautiful.

ok thx for modding ^^

Reiji-RJ wrote:

[Shulin's Soft]

1. 01:21:790 (3) - start break right away after this note. Sure why not =P
   Nothing to say. Beautiful, just beautiful. Thanks ^_^

[Ryuu] wrote:

rock asked me to play it о.о
i played o.o
and i love it *333*
star ~

Kanon wrote:

Shulin's Easy:
01:08:922 (2) - use green line change volume 20% 30% 40% sounds nicer Changed to 40-40-30 for this.
01:10:209 (3) - ^
01:11:496 (1) - add a default soft finish? Sounds out of place
01:20:503 (2) - add whistle to the reverse point? Nah I want emphasis on 01:21:790 (3) -
02:01:678 (3) - add whistle Nope following the same hitsound pattern as 00:35:467 (3) -
02:28:699 (2,3) - same as 01:08:922 (2) - Done as 40-40-30

Kanon wrote:

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Sorry for the delay...busy with exams.
Here is my mod.

Advanced:
00:35:950 (1) - instead a curve slider here? nah
01:44:468 (3) - stack it manually done

Extreme:
02:17:119 (5,1,2) - split them up would be nice. now is quite confusing. fixed

Good map. Personally I would like to add some more whistle in it. But now is fine too.
Good luck ~

thx for modding ^^

gaodeng wrote:

I'm Yanni's fan.Hope it can be ranked.star~

gaodeng wrote:

I'm Yanni's fan.Hope it can be ranked.star~

Tony wrote:

same here good luck kazumikos~

oh ty~

Leorda wrote:

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Hello

General
* Inconsistent kiai time http://puu.sh/ioeE ok o3o
* Inconsistent combo colors http://puu.sh/ioePbut i used different BGs D:

thx for modding ^^
update soon

Leorda wrote:

Shulin's Soft
* Would be better if diff name changed into "Shulin's Basic"

01:14:069 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Too much repeating sliders are boring, try make another pattern

Garven wrote:

[General]
02:32:559 - Ugh, the mp3 sounds horrible here. :< It's pretty bad in other areas too, but this spot was the worst. Can you find a better mp3?
yes... i can a new one but im not sure my new mp3 is good enough though o_O

[Advanced]
00:48:817 (2,3) - I don't like how much of the repeat arrow is covered by the 2 slider. ok fixed
gonna update a new audio file soon updated
thx for modding ^^

Minty Gum wrote:

Such a pretty map and storyboard. I hope to see more from you in the future. Congrats!