[Another]
01:20:973 (1) - I really think this stream is a bit too hard for the difficulty of the map before the first break. It would be fine if placed near the end where it's harder, but since it's here, you should space it with 0,9x snap or 0,8x (like what you used in the other streams before the first break). Not obligatory, but really would help a lot.
02:51:289 (11,12,13,14,15,16,1,2,3,4) - Well, uhm... this curve almost always makes me fail, and the stream isn't that hard, it's just the placement that fucks up everything :< that sharp curve really is bad to play. You should do something like
this (yes, this example is very ugly and badly spaced, don't do exactly that :V I just want to show you that I really wouldn't like these kinds of curves on such big streams, you'd better leave that for the FOUR DIMENSIONS diff)
03:19:842 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd say the same thing as ^, but this isn't as serious as the other one.
04:17:083 (section) - Maybe use Soft hitsounds for this section? would do a better job at silencing the spinner
[FOUR DIMENSIONS]
Oh god, I swear I am going to pass this someday.
00:25:353 (7) - Maybe add a new combo? You seem to have done that in similar patterns.
00:28:053 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12, etc) - No hitsounds here? You should add some whistles in the way you did in Another.
03:29:360 (1, etc) - Same thing as ^ here.
04:12:628 (16) - I'd prefer if you removed this note since it doesn't leave any short rest time until the end stream begins >:
04:17:083 (section) - Same as Another.
[Ono's Taiko Inner Oni]
00:09:828 (1,2,3,1) - Are you really sure you're going to use this 1/6? It doesn't really seem fitting and it's somewhat too fast and you didn't use it anywhere else in your map even though there are similar patterns in the song where you could've used that.
Call me back when you fix/answer this.