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Akira Yamaoka - True [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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Topic Starter
Hitomi May
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 1 ноября 2012 г. at 19:56:48

Artist: Akira Yamaoka
Title: True
Source: Silent Hill 2
Tags: OST Soundtrack Konami Starry
BPM: 154,06
Filesize: 2067kb
Play Time: 01:41
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,82 stars, 197 notes)
  2. Normal (2,93 stars, 115 notes)
  3. Starry's Catch the Truth (4,83 stars, 279 notes)
Download: Akira Yamaoka - True
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hi! It's my 4th Silent Hill beatmap! C:
And my first map with CTB difficulty Oo
I'm so happy :3
Thanks for:

This art is so awesome :O
ertyukjh010


Hi form IRC.

[General]

You hadn't use this pic. false.jpg

[Normal]

01:08-821 (1) - You can surrounded it completed. Like >

[Hard]

00:15:737 (9) - Move it to 00:15:639
00:18:853 (8) - Start New combo here will better than 00:18:951 (1)
00:34:438 (8) - ^
01:33:659 (5) - Move to 01:33:561
01:36:775 (8) - ^

Fine for me :) Good Luck
Topic Starter
Hitomi May

ertyukjh010 wrote:



Hi form IRC.

[General]

You hadn't use this pic. false.jpg Hey, I'm use it Oo

[Normal]

01:08-821 (1) - You can surrounded it completed. Like >
[attachment=0:a0c08]02.png[/attachment:a0c08]
Hm, yeah

[Hard]

00:15:737 (9) - Move it to 00:15:639 no
00:18:853 (8) - Start New combo here will better than 00:18:951 (1) okay(
00:34:438 (8) - ^ uguu
01:33:659 (5) - Move to 01:33:561 no
01:36:775 (8) - ^ no

Fine for me :) Good Luck
Thank you fo fast mod! :)
Faust
You forgot to fill in the source.
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
AAA! Yeah ><
Thank you
Edit: and I forgot about tags :D
Fixed :3
Ch1ka
Привет.

Я, если честно, кроме того .jpg ненужного, почти ничего и не нашел. Мапа хороша. Звезда. Нашел вот только это:
01:39:990 (1,2,3,4) - Почему на 4 свисток? Как-то немного лишним выглядит. Либо на всех 4, либо убрать, мне так кажется.

Если это не исправишь, не давай мне кудосу.
Пока.
Topic Starter
Hitomi May

Ch1ka wrote:

Привет.

Я, если честно, кроме того .jpg ненужного, почти ничего и не нашел. Мапа хороша. Звезда. Нашел вот только это:
01:39:990 (1,2,3,4) - Почему на 4 свисток? Как-то немного лишним выглядит. Либо на всех 4, либо убрать, мне так кажется.

Если это не исправишь, не давай мне кудосу.
Пока.
Спасибо
Я убрала вистлы, поэтому держи кудос)
YunBora
Киая не будет?

Normal
00:45:055 (2) - 2 клеточки вправо? хотяя нет не знаю

Hard
00:15:737 (9) - я думаю она лишняя именно тут
01:33:659 (5) - может сюда soft whistle или клэп?
01:36:775 (8) - и сюда
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Спасибо за внезапный мод :О
Насчёт киая.. Я думала сделать в одном месте фонтан, но как то не знаю ещё..
А остальное - извини, не исправила ._.
В любом случае спасибо :3
Starry_old
May I do a Rank-able Ctb Diff? orz
YunBora
STAR!
Topic Starter
Hitomi May

Starry wrote:

May I do a Rank-able Ctb Diff? orz
Mhm...
I don't know, realy ._.
I've never worked with CTB
And who will mod it?
gr ><

Lalala - Спасибо няшка :3
Starry_old
It is rank-able

There a queue for ctb mod here

t/74050&start=0

And a ctb diff ranked map here

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22115

And Rules / Guidelines here

p/1460844/hilit=CTB+Rule#p1460844

:P
Topic Starter
Hitomi May

Starry wrote:

It is rank-able

There a queue for ctb mod here

t/74050&start=0

And a ctb diff ranked map here

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22115

And Rules / Guidelines here

p/1460844/hilit=CTB+Rule#p1460844

:P
I am sure that in this queue a lot of maps in modlist ;_;
But okay.. Let's try T_T
Let's CTB Players enjoy too)
anyway if I can't rank map with this dif, I'll delete it, Sorry ._.
Starry_old

Hitomi May wrote:

Starry wrote:

It is rank-able

There a queue for ctb mod here

t/74050&start=0

And a ctb diff ranked map here

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/22115

And Rules / Guidelines here

p/1460844/hilit=CTB+Rule#p1460844

:P
I am sure that in this queue a lot of maps in modlist ;_;
But okay.. Let's try T_T
Let's CTB Players enjoy too)
anyway if I can't rank map with this dif, I'll delete it, Sorry ._.
thats fine.
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Okay, I'm waiting your dif)
riffy
mhm? меня звали спамить нацисткими модами D:

[General]

мб Easy и Hard?
так как-то аккуратнее смотрится ;_;

[Normal]
00:13:886 (2) - x268 y140 прыжком это не будет. т.к. х1.14, при округлении получаем 1.1 :3 (чтоб обводочка аккуратнее была)
00:17:003 (4,5) - зачем углы? D: они вроде для ломаного ритрма
00:22:068 (1,2,3,4) - не симметрично по центру, а могли бы стать таковыми так?
00:26:743 (3) - подровнять по аппроач-cерклу? \:D/
00:28:301 (1) - используя такой слайдер прямо возли оси симметрии, ты как бы обещаешь сделать с другой стороны оси такой же слайдер
00:34:535 (1) - может мне кажется, а может и правда чуть неровно обводит?
00:37:652 (1,3) - можно и посильней изогнуть
00:48:172 (2,3,4,5,6) - я конечно понимаю, что заездочка здесь - это странно, но она так сюда просится. Попробуй поставить.
00:59:470 (1) - зачем заострять сверху?
01:05:704 (1,2,3,4) - как то бы по осям эту симметрию сделать
01:21:288 (1) - а не прикрыт ли он трехсоткой? ><
01:25:964 (3) - зачем острый изгиб? D: also: ну на нем два репита. я чуть стол не перевернул :<
брэйк? ну карта короткая! брейк не вяжется ><
01:33:756 (1) - вот начиная отсюда потише хитсаунды?
01:36:873 (1,2) - выдвинуть на центр, по осям

[Hard]
слижком уж хороша сложность ;_; вряд ли что-то найду.
00:15:055 (8) - пусть обводит девятку?
00:27:717 (3) - why so jumpy?
00:50:120 (1) - ^

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Ну чо, я гичего не нашел \:D/
Звездочку дал, что-то похожее на нацмстский мод написал, карту похвалил. Вроде все. :3
А да, удачи. РАНКНИ ЗА НЕДЕЛЮ ИЛИ БЫСТРЕЕ


Edit: 2ю звезду дам. \:D/ 8 же матом надо, да?
А то, я спросонок забыл дать звезду. -_-
riffy
вместо едита, даблпост нажал :D
я точно "baka" -_-
забыл добавить, что бг можно подобрее, посветлее -_-
Topic Starter
Hitomi May

-Bakari- wrote:

mhm? меня звали спамить нацисткими модами D:

[General]

мб Easy и Hard?
так как-то аккуратнее смотрится ;_; всё норм)

[Normal]
00:13:886 (2) - x268 y140 прыжком это не будет. т.к. х1.14, при округлении получаем 1.1 :3 (чтоб обводочка аккуратнее была) она не ровнее становится и тогда левая часть слайда не попадает в серединку предыдущего ==
00:17:003 (4,5) - зачем углы? D: они вроде для ломаного ритрма я использую углы для разнообразия
00:22:068 (1,2,3,4) - не симметрично по центру, а могли бы стать таковыми так? нет :Р Ну вообще теоретически могли бы) но так мне тоже нравится :3
00:26:743 (3) - подровнять по аппроач-cерклу? \:D/ он же и так ровный по нему Оо
00:28:301 (1) - используя такой слайдер прямо возли оси симметрии, ты как бы обещаешь сделать с другой стороны оси такой же слайдер ну там по ритму он не впихивается как то ._. И там есть похожий потом немного) похожий на изогнутую часть)
00:34:535 (1) - может мне кажется, а может и правда чуть неровно обводит? ну.. Может, я не вижу ._.
00:37:652 (1,3) - можно и посильней изогнуть ой, мне не нравится как такие слайды смотрятся, когда очень кривые(
00:48:172 (2,3,4,5,6) - я конечно понимаю, что заездочка здесь - это странно, но она так сюда просится. Попробуй поставить. я не поняла ._.
00:59:470 (1) - зачем заострять сверху? Чтобы все слайды в мапе не были одинаковыми блин
01:05:704 (1,2,3,4) - как то бы по осям эту симметрию сделать у меня не поучилось( так тоже норм
01:21:288 (1) - а не прикрыт ли он трехсоткой? >< Ничо не знаю! Так можно :3
01:25:964 (3) - зачем острый изгиб? D: also: ну на нем два репита. я чуть стол не перевернул :< ну блин! Там в ритм ._. И это нормал) Два репита в нормале это не страшно
брэйк? ну карта короткая! брейк не вяжется >< а мне кажется там как раз после виолончельки так спокойно и потом пару кругов в тему Оо
01:33:756 (1) - вот начиная отсюда потише хитсаунды? Сделала 45%
01:36:873 (1,2) - выдвинуть на центр, по осям выдвинула, любитель симметрии ==

[Hard]
слижком уж хороша сложность ;_; вряд ли что-то найду. Спасибо :Р
00:15:055 (8) - пусть обводит девятку? ох, вот в этом моменте, я пока что вообще ничего менять не буду ._.
00:27:717 (3) - why so jumpy? кстати да.. По сути единственный джамп, просто я хотела его запихнуть от единицы на расстояние такое же, как и двойка от неё.. Ну там своя система == Мб потом уберу
00:50:120 (1) - ^ ну это уже вообще без вопросов менять не буду :D

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Ну чо, я гичего не нашел \:D/
Звездочку дал, что-то похожее на нацмстский мод написал, карту похвалил. Вроде все. :3
А да, удачи. РАНКНИ ЗА НЕДЕЛЮ ИЛИ БЫСТРЕЕ [/color]


Edit: 2ю звезду дам. \:D/ 8 же матом надо, да? не знаю Оо
А то, я спросонок забыл дать звезду. -_-
И Бг мне это очень нравится, так что нри за какие тортики не сменю! ><

Такс, в любом случае спасибо ^^
Zelvis_old
Hard
00:15:737 (9) - левее на один тик я бы сказал
00:18:853 (1) - ^
00:34:438 (1) - ^
01:09:990 (3) - может еще одну нотку?
01:33:659 (5) - может таки начать комбо отсюда?
01:36:775 (8) - ^
P.S. Отличный хард , дал бы звезду , но я нищий :<
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Спасибо :3
Ну ирц я тебе уже говорила всё)
С первой кудоской)
grumd
NO KUDOSU PLEASE

[Hard]
00:20:704 (5,6,7) - попробуй сделать плавнее угол между ними, чтобы выглядело гладко:
00:57:912 (1) - на начало слайдера поставь финиш (как у 00:56:353 (1).)
01:05:704 (3) - на конце (01:06:483.) финиш убрать может?

[Normal]
00:43:886 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/qSUI − некрасиво смотрится то, что шарик ближе к длинному слайдеру. попробуй либо искривить длинный слайдер, либо передвинуть шарик, чтобы он был как-то ближе к середине

попробуй добавить вистлы (софт-свистки) на такие места:
00:50:120 (1) - начало
00:53:237 (1) - ^
00:56:353 (1) - ^
00:59:470 (1) - ^

01:17:392 (4) - может правее середину?
01:25:964 (3) - разбить на два слайдера?

НЕ ДАВАЙ МНЕ КУДОСЫ ПОЖАЛУЙСТА

БГ добрее не надо, это же сайлент хилл)
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
ХОРОШО, НЕ ДАМ
И спасибо, да :3

Подправила нормал, но вистлы ставить не буду ==
И подправила хард)
Thite
Normal
00:22:068 (1) - add finish like 00:15:834 (1) ?
01:39:990 (1) - add finish?


Hard
00:18:853 (1) - remove new combo and add next slider like you did
00:22:068 (1) - add finish
00:32:392 (4) - this overlap is weird for me o.o
00:48:756 (1) - 1grid left
01:39:990 (1) - add finish?


sorry i have nothing to say~ good luck~ :)
Lidan
Hey~

Timing

  1. Offset -> 242 ?

Normal

  1. 01:28:301 - 01:33:756 - I think you should map this.

Hard

  1. 00:15:737 (9) - New Combo
  2. 00:15:834 (1) - Remove new Combo
Couldn't find more, nice map :3
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Thank you :3
Something fixed
grumd
Пожалуйста, исправь в описании карты на "This art is so awesome". пожалуйста! и извини за такую бесцеремонность и мелочность, но мне просто неприятно видеть ту ошибочку ;_; ещё раз извини
Topic Starter
Hitomi May

grumd wrote:

Пожалуйста, исправь в описании карты на "This art is so awesome". пожалуйста! и извини за такую бесцеремонность и мелочность, но мне просто неприятно видеть ту ошибочку ;_; ещё раз извини
ПФ
ноу проблем)
ZHSteven
OK, mod for CTB diff.

first of all, your map looks good. the pattern fits the song very much. We can see you have done a lot of work on it.

generally, please make all the jump flows well. Do not make sudden hypers if it is not necessary. and next time try to use bigger SV, it may help you arrange your map better. (I would like to use 1.7 in 150 bpm)

Ok lets start.
00:17:384 (5) - do not use hyperdash here. make 4 5 and following 1 a smoothly flow will be better.(I have tested it will not be a bug jump)
00:18:553 (4,5) - move them more towards right will be better.
00:21:086 (2,3) -move them more torwards left, try to make the jump smoothly.
00:23:229 (2) - move it more towards left
and you can try to make this slider horizontal(I personally like that better)
00:23:813 (4) - better stack with 00:22:839 (1) -
00:24:397 (6) - ^
00:23:618 (3) - 00:24:592 (7) - 00:24:982 (2) - - better stack these 3 properly.
00:30:047 (1,2,3,4) - you may want to remap this part, using higher spacing(make it more jumply)
00:37:644 (4) - try to move it more torwards right, to eliminate the hyper.
00:44:657 (3) - make this and 00:43:878 (1) - this symmetrical.
00:45:436 (6) - why you dont want to keep the spacing before? I think you need at least X2.25 for this slider.
00:46:216 (7,8) - you can try to move these 2 all the way to the top left. I don't know you like it or not, just suggestion.
00:47:579 (2) - make this note stack to the start of the previous slider.
00:58:488 (9) - make this one a horizontal slider.
01:02:579 (4) - to 01:14:657 (6) - again you may want to make the spacing hyper in this part, because it is the very last part of the song, and it seems the highest part of the music. Each of your jump is good, just make them hyper.

That's all.
Hope it is helpful.
Shohei Ohtani
Overall:
The mp3 kinda fades out a bit earlier then I'd like it to :>~. I know you can't really do much about it, just saying D:.

Tags:
OST, Soundtrack, and CTB are unneccesary :>~. You can remove them >3<~.

CtB:
I'm not sure if CtB diffs are rankable, but I DID say that I'd mod CtB maps in the rules. icwutudidthar ;D~.
It's fine though. I'm glad to see that it isn't just "JUMPS JUMPS JSIdjlfGKSDFG" >3<~

Hard:
00:22:060 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make this go gradually quieter?~
01:27:514 (1) - Make this fade out to nothing?~

Normal:
01:25:956 (3) - Probably make this into a more creative pattern :>~.
01:41:151 (4) - Add whistle?

Very solid mapset :D~. Everything with a question mark is a suggestion :3~. Very nice job~.
Topic Starter
Hitomi May

CDFA wrote:

Overall:
The mp3 kinda fades out a bit earlier then I'd like it to :>~. I know you can't really do much about it, just saying D:. Yeah( I can't do anything with this

Tags:
OST, Soundtrack, and CTB are unneccesary :>~. You can remove them >3<~. No ==

CtB:
I'm not sure if CtB diffs are rankable, but I DID say that I'd mod CtB maps in the rules. icwutudidthar ;D~.
It's fine though. I'm glad to see that it isn't just "JUMPS JUMPS JSIdjlfGKSDFG" >3<~ CTB are rankable :3

Hard:
00:22:060 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe make this go gradually quieter?~ no
01:27:514 (1) - Make this fade out to nothing?~ Hm ._. To nothing.. I don't want ==

Normal:
01:25:956 (3) - Probably make this into a more creative pattern :>~. I don't know how. And maybe I don't want)
01:41:151 (4) - Add whistle? This mapset without whistles :X

Very solid mapset :D~. Everything with a question mark is a suggestion :3~. Very nice job~.
Thank you!
Curry
couldnt find much, just few suggestions/things i noticed

genereal:
hitsounds 20-30% lower - i have them on like 10% in my settings but they still overwhelm the music, i wanna hear some music and not only hitsounds :D

Normal
AR+1 or +2? ->2.95Starrating
01:27:514 - why no spinner like on hard diff? the song is very short so you dont really need a break imo

Hard
AR+1? would feel better with that BPM id say, but could also be because i like high ARs :P
those 1/4 notes in front of all those sliders.... i dont like them tbh, there is no reason in the music why they should be there and they dont really make the map flow better imo
so id suggest to remove them, but its up to you ofc :) if you like them just keep em

greetz and gl with your map
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Something fixed :3
Starry_old
SPOILER

ZHSteven wrote:

OK, mod for CTB diff.

first of all, your map looks good. the pattern fits the song very much. We can see you have done a lot of work on it.

generally, please make all the jump flows well. Do not make sudden hypers if it is not necessary. and next time try to use bigger SV, it may help you arrange your map better. (I would like to use 1.7 in 150 bpm)

Ok lets start.
00:17:384 (5) - do not use hyperdash here. make 4 5 and following 1 a smoothly flow will be better.(I have tested it will not be a bug jump)
00:18:553 (4,5) - move them more towards right will be better.
00:21:086 (2,3) -move them more torwards left, try to make the jump smoothly.
00:23:229 (2) - move it more towards left
and you can try to make this slider horizontal(I personally like that better)
00:23:813 (4) - better stack with 00:22:839 (1) -
00:24:397 (6) - ^
00:23:618 (3) - 00:24:592 (7) - 00:24:982 (2) - - better stack these 3 properly.
00:30:047 (1,2,3,4) - you may want to remap this part, using higher spacing(make it more jumply)
00:37:644 (4) - try to move it more torwards right, to eliminate the hyper.
00:44:657 (3) - make this and 00:43:878 (1) - this symmetrical.
00:45:436 (6) - why you dont want to keep the spacing before? I think you need at least X2.25 for this slider.
00:46:216 (7,8) - you can try to move these 2 all the way to the top left. I don't know you like it or not, just suggestion.
00:47:579 (2) - make this note stack to the start of the previous slider.
00:58:488 (9) - make this one a horizontal slider.
01:02:579 (4) - to 01:14:657 (6) - again you may want to make the spacing hyper in this part, because it is the very last part of the song, and it seems the highest part of the music. Each of your jump is good, just make them hyper.

That's all.
Hope it is helpful.

Thank you for your mod. Fixed / Changed them All.

Download: Akira Yamaoka - True (Hitomi May) [Starry's Catch The Truth].osu
Agnes
Hello! I have mostly suggestions.

[General]

Nothing to poke at.

[Normal]

00:28:293 (1) - (Suggestion) Move the first anchor down one grid. (Grid size: tiny)

[Hard]
Really like the bits of off-beats here.

00:34:917 (3) - (Suggestions) The third anchor kind of breaks the symmetry a bit... Adjust?


The suggestions are pretty small, since this map is really close for a bubble. I have Deif checking the CTB diff for me either today or tomorrow.
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Agnes, Thank you!
I fixed this :3
Waiting CTB mod :3
ZHSteven
For CTB diff:
01:01:995 (2,3,4) - bug jump here. maybe you want to decrease the jump a bit.

no kds for this post
Drafura
[Starry's Catch The Truth]

ZHSteven wrote:

For CTB diff:
01:01:995 (2,3,4) - bug jump here. maybe you want to decrease the jump a bit.
^this

Can't find anything else bad in the map. I just have some suggestions for hitsounds.

00:24:982 (2) - Clap ?
00:31:021 (4) - ^ (end of slider)
00:37:254 (1,2,3) - Make a fade in ? 40% vol first circle 50% second 60% third
00:39:203 (1,2,3) - 50% them ?
01:27:319 (10) - Clap ?
01:38:034 (4,5,6) - Make a fade in ? 40% vol first circle 50% second 60% third

Don't Kd if you don't apply anything.
Deif

ZHSteven wrote:

For CTB diff:
01:01:995 (2,3,4) - bug jump here. maybe you want to decrease the jump a bit.

no kds for this post
There aren't bug jumps in this map o.o

But yeah, I agree that the jump Steven mentioned has to be decreased a bit.

[General]

You must add to tags "CTB Catch the Beat", as the diff isn't called like the standards, but as a custom name.

[Starry's Catch The Truth]

Overall, nice job for your 1st CTB ever released, but I'd like to point out some stuff.

From 00:12:709 (1) - to 00:24:592 (7) - It would've been better if you've mapped that part placing some little jumps according to the piano sounds. Just my opinion.
00:24:982 (2,1) - The Hdashed jump should've been placed with those 2 notes, not before.
00:39:203 (1,2,3) - I'm not a huge fan of stacked triplets as this one. Please move (1) a few grids to the right and (3) the same distance to the left. If you wanna make it a bit more challenging I suggest placing them the other way around: (1) to the left and (3) to the right.
01:38:034 (4,5,6) - ^
01:01:995 (2,3,4) - Already mentioned before.
01:11:638 (4,5,6,1) - More stacked 1/4 notes here. Try to make a sweet curve with them, something like THIS.

That's it. Good luck!
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Thank you for mods!
Starry_old
SPOILER

Deif wrote:

[General]

You must add to tags "CTB Catch the Beat", as the diff isn't called like the standards, but as a custom name.

[Starry's Catch The Truth]

Overall, nice job for your 1st CTB ever released, but I'd like to point out some stuff.

From 00:12:709 (1) - to 00:24:592 (7) - It would've been better if you've mapped that part placing some little jumps according to the piano sounds. Just my opinion. Sorry I am keeping this.
00:24:982 (2,1) - The Hdashed jump should've been placed with those 2 notes, not before. Added Hyper-dash.
00:39:203 (1,2,3) - I'm not a huge fan of stacked triplets as this one. Please move (1) a few grids to the right and (3) the same distance to the left. If you wanna make it a bit more challenging I suggest placing them the other way around: (1) to the left and (3) to the right. Changed Position
01:38:034 (4,5,6) - ^ ^
01:01:995 (2,3,4) - Already mentioned before. Spacing Decreased.
01:11:638 (4,5,6,1) - More stacked 1/4 notes here. Try to make a sweet curve with them, something like THIS. Added a Curve

That's it. Good luck!

Thank you for your Mod.

Oh can you add Tags in to >.<

@Drafura: Didn't ignore your mod , Hitomi handle it.

Download: Akira Yamaoka - True (Hitomi May) [Starry's Catch The Truth].osu
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Drafura
Hitsounds it's mine work
and I think it's okay ^^
grumd
http://puu.sh/sBIq
http://puu.sh/sBIE
не знаю, почему в одном месте "cach", а во втором "catch", но проверь правильность тэгов на всякий случай
Alice
Map more SH2/Akira Yamaoka please
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
hehe Ofc :3
Armin
[General]

*Your tag in your CTB difficulty is wrong: "Catch" instead of "Cach"
*Your timing sounds a bit early o_O I'll check it when I'll get on my notebook
*Your mp3's cut is a bit unexpected, cause: immediate silence even if there's a fade (if you can just make it end a bit later).

[Normal]

Fine (next time just try to vary your rhythm, it could become monotonous for the beginner

[Hard]

01:36:767 (8) -rhythm like this is okay but in fading parts I don't really reccomend it (because it's not even readable at all)

[CTB]

it's okay, I liked it. :)
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Thank you!
I'll wait for your right timing
Something fixed c:
Charles445
Timing

BPM 154.000 - - - - - Offset 280
BPM 154.050 - - - - - Offset 25205

Nice map, but the blue tick objects aren't very intuitive and don't really fit the music.
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Thank you!
Finaly, right timing ;_;

I like this objects in blue ticks(
MoodyRPG
Mysterious.............random mod

General
  1. Disable the letterbox during breaks please
Normal
  • - 00:23:267 (4) - Add a whistle here for the piano?
    - 01:05:711 (1,2,3,4) - Move these notes in the center please, nazi*
Hard
  • - 00:23:267 (4) - Same suggestion about this note,add a whistle
    - 01:27:522 (1) - I think is better if you end this spinner here 01:29:859
Good map btw.
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Thank you for work :o
But I don't want change this(
Armin
Blue ticks are good at the end, at the beginning they can be confusing or something, but I played again the map and they seemed okay. Other opinions are welcome, but I guess they can go.

btw, after you fixed your 1st timing section, you missed to snap this section 00:12:739 (1) - because I listen a soft - finish instead of a CUSTOM one. Adjust it please!
Doomsday
Hey hey 8-)

  1. Timing is pretty close. Works good as it is, but I think It might be a tiny bit early. Try adding +6ms to the offset. If you disagree, feel free to ignore this, though.
  2. Maybe you could make the combo colours brighter, to stand out from the background colours more? Dark brown and red blend into the BG somewhat. The map it slow, but it's still handy to make the hitcircles as clear as possible.

The normal is pretty good as the easiest difficulty but, with only 2 diffs, and this being a very short song, it would be nice if you could make an easy diff for this. Having Easy / Normal / Hard would be the perfect set of difficulties to have.

[NORMAL]

Pretty solid, works alright. However, it's kinda boring since it's mostly constant 1/4 rhythms, with no gaps. I guess this can't be helped though, since the song is quite repetitive.

[HARD]

Just a minor complaint, but in the first half of the map (Start - 00:50:131), the jumps there feel random. The jumps in the second half feel okay, but the jumps in the first half seem to come out of nowhere, and don't flow very well in a calm song imo. Here are the jumps I mean:

00:18:194 (7,8) -
00:21:310 (7,1) -
00:27:152 (2,3) -
00:33:384 (7,1) -
00:43:510 (3,1) -
00:49:742 (3,1) -

00:15:759 (9) - I see that you want to keep these, but like Charles, I don't think they fit in very well. The song is mainly stuck on 1/4 melodies, so blue-tick stuff like this feels odd to me :/

Apart from those, it's alright ~[/list]

[STARRY'S CATCH THE TRUTH]

It's functional but, It's pretty repetitive, and jumps and such seem to come in at random. Also, the fruit are almost constantly on 1/4 ticks, so it does not do much with the song. I'm not a CtB expert, but you should try to create fruit patterns that follow the song more. Heres a few patterns you could do:

Download: Akira Yamaoka - True (Hitomi May) [CtB example].osu
(CtB mapping is quite fun actually :3)

:P
716 Girl
Just CtB suggestions
Catch The Truth
00:36:288 (6) - maybe note here?
00:40:574 (8) - ^

no Kudosu
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Thanks for all
Something fixed :3
Starry_old

Doomsday wrote:

Hey hey 8-)



[STARRY'S CATCH THE TRUTH]

It's functional but, It's pretty repetitive, and jumps and such seem to come in at random. Also, the fruit are almost constantly on 1/4 ticks, so it does not do much with the song. I'm not a CtB expert, but you should try to create fruit patterns that follow the song more. Heres a few patterns you could do:

[attachment=0:c1d66]Akira Yamaoka - True (Hitomi May) [CtB example].osu[/attachment:c1d66]
(CtB mapping is quite fun actually :3)

:P
I think for this song the 1/4's can stay. I find the song really repetitive. Again I didn't intend to put any 1/8th's in or on some parts where it really fits the music.
I will remap if I have to but for now I am keeping the notes as is. I am just going change the placement of some notes to make it look more nice.

But I will take this into consideration on my next CTB maps~ :(
Armin
Hm... I checked the timing with Garven and CardnForce, both agree that it's quite early.

CnF suggested this value: BPM:154.04
Offset: 275

did you cut the song in the middle or just at the end (when it fades)?
mancuso_JM_
Hi! Random Modding :3

[General:]

Tags: I don't Know if it is really necesary Catch the Beat and CTB in tags. I did a comparison between Taiko difficulties and CTB difficulties, in general maps with Taiko Diff. don't have a tag as Taiko (you can only see that on Taiko mapsets only), after this comparison and because CTB difficulties are being recognized you can delete it from all difficulties
Combo Colours: In a mapset, I always prefer to see at least 3 combo Colours. On my personal point of view, it is very repetitve with just 2 Combo Colours

[Normal:]

• 00:22:087 (1,2,3,4): You always follow a constant Rhythm and Hitsounding. You can maybe break that, adding some Soft Whistle on this Notes to follow the piano properly. Playing with the hitsounding, you should add Soft Whistles in (1,3).
• 01:25:967 (3): Sincerely I don't like how it plays this Slider in 1/1 with 2 Repetitions, it is not following the music properly, at least the last repetition. Like you did in Hard you could add a Slider in some place to make a variety in the Score, so try this Rhythm, will fit better with the song
• 01:41:918 (1,2,3,4): To follow your constant hitsounding, to be consistent you should add a Finish in (1) and a Clap in (3) to follow the music properly. If you feel a bit high, you could reduce the Volume in this pattern.

[Hard:]

• 00:22:087 (1,2,3,4): Same as Normal.
--> Another suggestion to these Notes: The distance between these Notes looks high to be an antijump. I feel better if you reduce the Spacing between these Notes using Distance Snap 0,2x Instead.
• 00:27:151 (2,3): I don't feel really necesary an Increase of Spacing between these Slider, plays odd in my opinion. This pattern looks more fluent if the little jump it is between (3,1) instead
• 00:34:454 (1): After a lot of 1/2 patterns, this 1/4 plays bad, it is preety intuitive to catch it. Will play better if you move this Note 1/4 back (to 00:34:357) to keep the 1/2 pattern and keep the Notes in 1/4 to slow sections (like you did at the beginning and the end of the map)
• 01:09:023 (4,5,1,2,3): I would like to see (5,3) at the same position, because looks neater in my opinion, try increasing the Spacing and doing something like this: (The symetry is not really necesary here)
SPOILER

148,344,69023,1,0,0:0:0
256,364,69218,1,4,0:0:0
432,280,69607,5,8,0:0:0
352,352,69802,1,0,0:0:0
256,364,69997,1,0,0:0:0
• 01:18:176 (8,1): The change in the music appear in (8) in my opinion, so would be better if you swap the Combo placement here
• 01:39:989 (1,2,3,4): Same as 00:22:087

[Starry's Catch The Truth:]

• The diff. name will look more 'esthetic' if you replace it to Starry's Catch the Truth :P

• 00:23:256 - 00:24:424: I can't let you to follow this hitsounding here, really. Your hitsounds follow the drums especially and in this place the drums are silent. You must find another hitsounding to this section since your constant hitsounding is not following anything in this part.
• 00:35:915 (x): You could add a Note here, since start a 'New section' of the song, a bit quicklier than before
• 00:36:304 (x): (^)
• 00:37:375 (2): The Overmap is not good in any way, I think that it is the same in CTB difficulties. So, remove this Note please
• 00:39:323 (2): (^)
• 01:11:656 (4): (^)

-Well, I'm not a CTB modder, but this diff looks preety fun :D

All these difficulties looks preety well, but you could make a better variety in the hitsounding trying to follow the piano and not just the drums.
Anyways, I enjoyed all these difficulties :). So, Call me back in-game (well, could be by forums if you can't see me online :P) for a recheck when you are done looking through my mod! ;)
Topic Starter
Hitomi May

mancusojuanmattos wrote:



[General:]

Tags: I don't Know if it is really necesary Catch the Beat and CTB in tags. I did a comparison between Taiko difficulties and CTB difficulties, in general maps with Taiko Diff. don't have a tag as Taiko (you can only see that on Taiko mapsets only), after this comparison and because CTB difficulties are being recognized you can delete it from all difficulties Deleted
Combo Colours: In a mapset, I always prefer to see at least 3 combo Colours. On my personal point of view, it is very repetitve with just 2 Combo Colours Hm, I like this 2 colors(

[Normal:]

• 00:22:087 (1,2,3,4): You always follow a constant Rhythm and Hitsounding. You can maybe break that, adding some Soft Whistle on this Notes to follow the piano properly. Playing with the hitsounding, you should add Soft Whistles in (1,3). Add whistles (1, 3, 4) and mke hitsounds more quiet
• 01:25:967 (3): Sincerely I don't like how it plays this Slider in 1/1 with 2 Repetitions, it is not following the music properly, at least the last repetition. Like you did in Hard you could add a Slider in some place to make a variety in the Score, so try this Rhythm, will fit better with the song
I like this rhythm, thanks :3
• 01:41:918 (1,2,3,4): To follow your constant hitsounding, to be consistent you should add a Finish in (1) and a Clap in (3) to follow the music properly. If you feel a bit high, you could reduce the Volume in this pattern. Done andadded whistle

[Hard:]

• 00:22:087 (1,2,3,4): Same as Normal. Okay
--> Another suggestion to these Notes: The distance between these Notes looks high to be an antijump. I feel better if you reduce the Spacing between these Notes using Distance Snap 0,2x Instead. Done
• 00:27:151 (2,3): I don't feel really necesary an Increase of Spacing between these Slider, plays odd in my opinion. This pattern looks more fluent if the little jump it is between (3,1) instead Jump deleted
• 00:34:454 (1): After a lot of 1/2 patterns, this 1/4 plays bad, it is preety intuitive to catch it. Will play better if you move this Note 1/4 back (to 00:34:357) to keep the 1/2 pattern and keep the Notes in 1/4 to slow sections (like you did at the beginning and the end of the map) Just deleted this circle :p
• 01:09:023 (4,5,1,2,3): I would like to see (5,3) at the same position, because looks neater in my opinion, try increasing the Spacing and doing something like this: (The symetry is not really necesary here)
SPOILER

148,344,69023,1,0,0:0:0
256,364,69218,1,4,0:0:0
432,280,69607,5,8,0:0:0
352,352,69802,1,0,0:0:0
256,364,69997,1,0,0:0:0
Oh thank you
• 01:18:176 (8,1): The change in the music appear in (8) in my opinion, so would be better if you swap the Combo placement here Hm, I tnik it's ok
• 01:39:989 (1,2,3,4): Same as 00:22:087 Yes
It's was SUDDENLY!
Big thanks for your help! :)
I don't know what I must do with CTB diff.
I don't want delete it, becoxe it is Sterry's work, but he don't answer me.
I can fix errors with hitsounds, but other.. I don't know how it must be fixed. Maybe your comments about overmapping are not very important and I can skip it? (I hope so T____________T)
mancuso_JM_
Well, to be sincere I tested again the CTB diff again, and I can't see any problem with these Notes
A little thing in Hard: 00:27:735 (3): Could you move this Slider to x:288 y:256, to occupate the same place as previous (1)? The spacing change is minor so there isn't any problem while you play the map and if you do my suggestion the pattern will look neater than before
Starry_old

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hi! Random Modding :3



[Starry's Catch The Truth:]

• The diff. name will look more 'esthetic' if you replace it to Starry's Catch the Truth :P

• 00:23:256 - 00:24:424: I can't let you to follow this hitsounding here, really. Your hitsounds follow the drums especially and in this place the drums are silent. You must find another hitsounding to this section since your constant hitsounding is not following anything in this part. I remove this section...,
If Hitomi wants add a spinner here then he can.

• 00:35:915 (x): You could add a Note here, since start a 'New section' of the song, a bit quicklier than before I add a note somewhere else close.
• 00:36:304 (x): (^) ^
• 00:37:375 (2): The Overmap is not good in any way, I think that it is the same in CTB difficulties. So, remove this Note please Okay remove
• 00:39:323 (2): (^)
• 01:11:656 (4): (^) Following violin and so putting notes like this is fine.

-Well, I'm not a CTB modder, but this diff looks preety fun :D

All these difficulties looks preety well, but you could make a better variety in the hitsounding trying to follow the piano and not just the drums.
Anyways, I enjoyed all these difficulties :). So, Call me back in-game (well, could be by forums if you can't see me online :P) for a recheck when you are done looking through my mod! ;)
http://puu.sh/1l4GF

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Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Oh, Starry, Thans! ><
Add your diff.
[Hard]
fixed
mancuso_JM_
Ok, Rechecked again and everything looks good to me
A little advice to your next map,try to do a better variety with your hitsounds and not adding always the same
This time, since the music is repetitive and the hitsounds fit fine anyways I decided to overlook this
And your map is also preety fun and fluent
Good Luck with rank
Bubbled!
And don't ask me for a bubble again :P
Topic Starter
Hitomi May
Thaaaank you :3
IceBeam
discussed the timing
Garven suggested 154,055 for BPM,offset is the same + full resnap of notes/sections etc.

otherwise fine to me!
mancuso_JM_
I would like to give another chance to this map :(
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