SapphireGhost wrote:

[General]
- Even though the song is calm, the slider velocity still felt a bit low and caused some patterns to get a bit confusing due to close spacing. Not much to do about it now, just advice for the future. ok , I'll may attention to my future maps
- On all difficulties at 05:10:730 (1,1) - are you definitely sure these are snapped correctly? sure , they snap on 1/6 beat
- Change the thread title to be consistent with the new capitalization. oh , thanks to point it out , fixed

[Normal]
- Changing the spacing of notes often on [Normal] might not be a good idea especially at a low slider velocity where a player could get confused. Just advice for the future. ok , I'll may attention to my future maps
02:53:605 (1,2) - It was sort of hard to tell if (2) started on a blue tick or a white tick. Not a big problem. I think it is fine , the spacing is easy to read the rhyme

SapphireGhost wrote:

[Gu's Easy]
00:06:393 (1,1) - The note here comes rather quickly after a spinner for a new player, keep in mind they need time to recover after spinning. (This happens a few other places too, if you care.) Not sure how you would do this differently. You could remove the slider and have the break start at 00:09:605, I suppose. Whatever works for you.just follow cute vocal..anyway,put it to the center
01:55:605 (1,2,1) - This pattern could definitely be more symmetrical.hmm not a big issue to play imo
03:11:605 (3,4) - A lot of (4) is being hidden by (3), could be slightly confusing for a new player. Shouldn't be a big problem.I think it doesn't matter
04:57:605 (4,1) - Sort of the same issue as above.same as above
05:13:730 (1) - I'm not sure if this is a good idea for the easiest difficulty, players might think the map ended at the last spinner.just follow the same end time as other diffs...If I end the spinner here.there will be noisy spinner sound during the silent BGM.

The maximum draining time for a map is 4 1/2 minutes. "Draining time" is the total time of a song excluding breaks, intro, and outro. Thus, it's the length of time that hitobjects are on-screen.

peppy wrote:

Let's set a maximum here: 4:30 drain time is the absolute highest we should be considering.

Lekru wrote:

Is there a mp4 link for the video? just wondering.. ^^;

wcx19911123 wrote:

Lekru wrote:

Is there a mp4 link for the video? just wondering.. ^^;

added the original video link into creator's words
and thanks you all >w<

Lekru wrote:

Is it possible to download as mp4?

Ephemeral wrote:

background needs changing as it is inappropriate (sorry!) - i've got a few alternatives that i've cut myself from the video which i will include below, feel free to use them if you like, otherwise find an alternate of your own and let me know via pm

http://puu.sh/Iahw
http://puu.sh/IahX
http://puu.sh/IahY
http://puu.sh/Iaib