1. 00:03:321 (4,1) - You can move both one grid down and right to make (1) perfectly centered, but that's not a must
2. 00:10:258 (1,2) - I have a feeling this would be hard for a beginner to read (especially with the low AR). Use 1/2 slider instead?
3. 00:16:446 (1) - I prefer a long slider that ends 1/1 before the next slider here, because virtually there's almost nothing you can follow on 00:16:821. An example of what you can do here:
   
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4. 00:18:696 (1,2) - I prefer unstacking this to keep the flow here, but it's fine as is
5. 00:26:383 (1) - Start spinner 1/4 later? Because the keyboard's sound here are mostly on the red tick
6. 00:34:821 (2,3) - The finish should sound on 00:35:383. I suggest this rhythm instead : (ignore the slider's positioning, I just placed it randomly)
   
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7. 00:36:696 (1) - Make this encircle (4) or the next (2)? Will be more beautiful imo (:
8. 00:45:696 (1,2) - Considering your previous sliders were curved, why not curve these two also? For example:
   
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9. 00:51:696 (1) - Optional, try to use slider wave here?
10. 01:06:696 (1) - Hmm... Curve this slider like this perhaps?
    
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11. 01:14:196 (3) - I personally disliked how this slider got overlapped (you can easily curve it downward though), but that's not a major problem I guess
12. 01:28:821 (1,2) - I'd personally avoid to put post-spinner notes on Easy diff in the center. Why? Because it will got covered by the spinner's hitburst! Well, you can move it few grids down though, but up to you (:

1. 00:03:321 (4,5) - Not a must, but you might want to place it like this:
   
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2. 00:04:071 (1) - Whistle here? Sounds cuter with it imo
3. 00:11:196 (1,2) - Decrescendo (gradual volume decrease) for these two?
4. 00:18:508 (4) - Add clap here, so the silence on (5) can be emphasized
5. 00:22:821 (2) - Quite inconsistent spacing here, this note is closer to (3) rather than (1) - can be easily fixed by moving (3) a grid right though
6. 00:24:321 (1,2) - I'd experiment with curves here. Slider waves maybe? Or something like this:
   
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7. 00:33:508 (6) - Move down a bit to create an arc? Would flow better imo
8. 00:37:071 (2,3,4) - Same here, pretty much I prefer arc here because it looks/plays better:
   
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9. 00:54:696 (1) - Clap here feels weird, because it's the only one on this section. Whistle maybe? idk >_<
10. 01:01:258 (2) - Finish also on slider's start, it really fits
11. 01:16:821 (3) - Curve it a bit, like this?
    
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12. 01:24:696 (1,3) - You can easily curve these two to avoid (1) overlapping the previous slider. Also, (3) should be one grid down and left orz

1. 00:03:321 (4) - Whistle on repeat?
2. 00:04:446 (1) - Make this spinner's end quieter?
3. 00:10:258 (1,2) - I wonder, why not in the center instead? It's pre-spinner notes, after all
4. 00:17:571 (2) - Quite obvious this is too wide in this set of jump. I recommend moving this two grids down
5. 00:24:508 (3,6) - Where's the finish sound here? There should be one to accompany the song's cymbals
6. 00:25:633 (1,4) - Arrange like this, to build more flow?
   
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7. 00:29:008 (5) - Stack this to (2) perhaps? I personally dislike how the triple stack here looks in play mode
8. 00:32:758 (2,3) - I highly recommend to combine these two as a single 1/1 slider, because there's virtually nothing on 00:32:946 from the music
9. 00:39:321 (8) - Missing clap here?
10. 00:46:821 (2) - Slight slider wave here won't hurt (: - also, I'd like better if this is centered:
    
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11. 00:47:946 (5) - Inconsistent spacing here. Should be moved 1 grid left
12. 00:51:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Do you really need the first triple? You know, streak of triples are hard to hit on DoubleTime mod, plus it doesn't look very well in play mode because of the stack. I suggest to delete (2), and combine (1,3) into a single 1/2 slider
13. 00:56:196 (1) - I personally feel this spinner should be mapped instead. Like this for example:
    
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14. 01:05:383 (7,1) - Combine into a 1/1 slider here. Let the slidertick do its magic ~
15. 01:07:633 (6) - Suggestion, clap here?
16. 01:19:633 (4) - Same as above, to accompany the clap 1/1 before
17. 01:27:321 (3) - You can use the spinner after to guide you creating a perfect slider here! Image:
    
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1. 00:08:758 (2,3,4,5,6) - I prefer a star-shaped jump here, they're much more intuitive imo. Your current jump is fine as is, though.
2. 00:15:321 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think this shape is hard to hit orz, linear stream instead? Or arc stream like this:
   
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3. 00:18:321 (5) - New combo, spacing from (4) to (5) might be deceiving
4. 00:25:821 (2,3,4) - Arrange like this, so this jump has an equal distance between every note?
   
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5. 00:28:633 (2) - Not perfectly centered (barely noticeable though)
6. 00:30:321 (6) - Clap on slider's start fits better than whistle imo
7. 00:32:196 (6,7) - Why sudden anti-jump here? I think, it's better to space (7) further
8. 00:36:789 (7) - I personally feel this note is not necessary and just being added only for difficulty. Remove it?
9. 00:39:696 (1,2,3,4) - Give some space to this pattern? Like this:
   
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10. 00:49:633 (x) - Add a note to accompany the drums here? Preferably stack above (2)
11. 00:56:383 (1,2,3,4,5) - This is where star-shaped jumps could shine on.
    
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12. 01:01:258 (3) - Minor stuff, but one grid down to make (1,2,3)'s spacing equal
13. 01:17:571 (2) - I'd rather space them apart into two sliders, because this part could use more claps:
    
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ikari_kyon wrote:

[Hard]

- is better than [Insane] Sorry for poor my skill :<

Nymph wrote:

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General:
the video seems really weird for it's scale, seems the video used to be one for wide screen, and you changed it? Is it? i don't think it's weird.


Normal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:53:196 (1) - the vocal starts at 00:53:383, So I think the slider starts at here may not a good idea. I'm not following vocal there, but i use my own rythim that follow the song.
00:56:196 (1,2,3,4) - these are really hard to follow for a normal diff, people can't exactly know what are they following. 1/1 is hard to play? i don't think so
01:13:633 (1,2,3,4,5) - werid rhythm to play..... Nope, it's just your opinion.
01:17:758 (1) - maybe let this slider ends at the white tick? seems can follow the vocal better.... Nope, not following vocal there.

Hitsound
00:00:696 (1) - seems really quite at the beginning, some whistles would be very nice. Ehm, nope. The rythim doesn't support whistle like hard diff. And it's fine with just that
volumn seems a little low comparing with other diffs, add the volumn before kiai to 70? Nope >.<

...I start to get confused about the rhythm of this diff... those patterns really not very comfortable to play.. Basically i'm following background drum on this map. Maybe you confused about it


Hard:
Beatmap design/suggestion
00:10:633 (1,1) - I prefer the way to map these spinners like the insane diff, just personal suggestion. Nope, i'm following vocal there.
01:27:133 (X) - really werid that it is empty here. Well, added a note there

Hitsound
still think it need more whistles Nope, i prefer clap in this diff. Whistles doesn't sounds good.

mekadon's Taiko:
disable the video of this diff plz. Well, removed

00:35:946 (96) - k ok
01:25:446 - add dok
01:29:008 (103) - Too fast here. no. Just two dons that can easily be figured, and it's just 4x ;__;

ikari_kyon wrote:

hi =3=
[meka Taiko]

00:23:946 (39) - delete don D: dont follow nothing here ok
00:30:321 (66) - katsu? ok
00:39:508 (117) - katsu ok
00:53:383 (175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184) - beautiful ;_; Haha I know XD
01:29:008 - wooot a x4 slider multiplier timeline xD how can be posible O_o it's called MAGICCCCCCCCCCCCC X3 /shot

112,76,2196,2,0,B|77:98|40:163|74:225|108:248,1,200,2|2

• - use a circle on the downbeat @00:15:696
  - move 00:16:446 (1) back by 1/1 to 00:16:071, remove repeat, end on 00:16:633
  - move 00:17:758 (2) back to 00:17:008 and extend to end on 00:17:758
  - add a circle at 00:18:321
  http://puu.sh/gA92

• - remove 00:24:321 (1,2)
  - add 3x repeats to 00:23:008 (3) - may sound weird but try it, fits perfectly and is VERY appropriate for a beginners diff even the two downbeats inbetween are not dominant at all and therefore it is ok to do this
  http://puu.sh/gAf1

• - delete 01:17:008 (3,4,1,2)
  - extend 01:16:446 (2) by 1/2 to end on 01:17:008; add 1x repeat
  - use two short sliders for 01:17:946 - 01:18:321 and 01:18:696 - 01:19:071
  http://puu.sh/gArl

p3n wrote:

[Yasora's Insane]
Pretty cool map. Only a few suggestions to fix some parts where it is hard to follow the rhythm because of unfavorable slider/circle usage.

01:05:571 (X) - maybe add the note here to keep up the clap pattern (up to you, just my personal preference as it helps a lot keeping up the pace during KIAI) already do that >.< but Miya isn't update my diff orz
01:11:571 (X) - ^like above fixed
01:15:508 (1,2,3,4) - the slider starts are the complete opposite of the vocal follow and the dominant downbeat (01:15:696) is a slider ending. Both things make this combo feel like it is slightly (1/2) off the beat. Try to use a triplet into a slider for 01:15:508 (1) and with this you can re-arrange the same slider pattern but starting the sliders with the dominant parts of the song (rearrange the clap pattern afterwards): http://puu.sh/gAGM change it with myself
01:17:571 (2,3) - similar to what was mentioned above, try using a circle on 01:17:571 instead of (1) and use a 1x repeat slider starting at 01:17:758 that will replace (3): http://puu.sh/gAHr sorry, I don't want to do this.

p3n wrote:

Hi there. Modding this by your request from the ready to rank queue


[Star's Easy]
There are some extremely unpredictable notes as you leave out so many important downbeats or just end sliders on them. This is the beginners difficulty of the set and it is supposed to be enjoyable for ppl who never played a rhythm game before (and probably don't even know the song). I will try and give you some examples of using your (mostly fitting) beatplacement with slightly different objects (clever sliders) to increase playability. You will have to adjust spacings, hitsounds and general object placement after the changes on your own, as I don't mention those again and again.

00:02:196 (3) - maybe use a nice blanket for this kind of pattern. Looks much better: http://puu.sh/gwK4 fixed

112,76,2196,2,0,B|77:98|40:163|74:225|108:248,1,200,2|2

00:03:696 (1) - this slider + background image = pure cuteness
00:07:446 (2,3,4) - the beatplacement is not "wrong" but probably very hard to predict for beginners. Slightly different placement will make this a lot easier. Since you already used the cute slider to end on the downbeat, I suggest moving (2) back to 00:07:071 and start (3) on the downbeat @00:08:196 (big white tick). Adding a circle to 00:09:321 and replacing 00:10:446 (4) with a slider ending from a slider starting on the downbeat @00:09:696: http://puu.sh/gwPL Also: Use this as a new combo after the long slider No, just added NC at 00:08:946 (2) -
00:10:633 (1,1,2) - this is really bad mapping style, especially for a beginners diff. The downbeat (big white tick @00:15:696) starts a completely new part of the song and the player should be able to "do" something here to let him pick up the beat. So either use a circle or start a slider at this point. I suggest shortening the spinner to end on 00:14:946 (remove finish) and:

• - use a circle on the downbeat @00:15:696
  - move 00:16:446 (1) back by 1/1 to 00:16:071, remove repeat, end on 00:16:633
  - move 00:17:758 (2) back to 00:17:008 and extend to end on 00:17:758
  - add a circle at 00:18:321
  http://puu.sh/gA92

sticking this spinner
00:19:071 (2) - small mistimed slider ending, make this slider 1/2 longer to match your melody focus http://puu.sh/gAal no, there's melody on 00:19:446 -, too
00:24:321 (1,2) - usually 1/2 AND stacked notes in easy difficulties should be avoided, you can try this:

• - remove 00:24:321 (1,2)
  - add 3x repeats to 00:23:008 (3) - may sound weird but try it, fits perfectly and is VERY appropriate for a beginners diff even the two downbeats inbetween are not dominant at all and therefore it is ok to do this
  http://puu.sh/gAf1

actually, i already used double 1/2 beats as stack in my ranked map, so, no
00:40:446 (2,3,4) - again poor beatplacement and slider usage make this part unpredictable and hard to read. Best way to fix this: delete (2,3,4) and use a slider from 00:40:446 - 00:41:008 and add a repeat. Fits perfectly and is much easier to read and play http://puu.sh/gAiS ok, but don't say like 'Best way', it's just your taste, not others too
00:43:446 (2,3,4) - use the same as above: http://puu.sh/gAjg^
00:48:508 (1,2) - I recommend removing (1) and starting the new combo with (2) to avoid 1/2 stacked notes here (still more intuitive than mapping the vocals 1:1 with 1/2 notes) deleted
00:50:383 (3) - hard to predict, try this: delete (3) and add 2x repeats to 00:48:696 (2) http://puu.sh/gAkP no
01:02:008 (1) - this is what you should avoid at all costs. The start of the refrain, the KIAI, the most important part of this song.....is a friggin spinner ending. Mapping the downbeat at 01:03:717 properly is crucial. I suggest deleting the spinner and starting a slider on 01:03:696: http://puu.sh/gAOL stick
01:11:758 (4,1) - I guess the 1/2 follow of 2 sliders should be ok here, as the player should have picked up the beatpattern and melody of the refrain by now
01:14:008 (2) - to avoid this 1/2 stack delete (2) and add 1x repeat to the previous slider 01:12:696 (1) no
01:16:446 (2,3,4,1,2) - again the beatplacement is not wrong or "bad" it is just very hard to predict especially for beginners. Try to simplify it by using clever slider patterns that start with predictable white ticks that match dominant parts of what the player can hear in the song. Example:

• - delete 01:17:008 (3,4,1,2)
  - extend 01:16:446 (2) by 1/2 to end on 01:17:008; add 1x repeat
  - use two short sliders for 01:17:946 - 01:18:321 and 01:18:696 - 01:19:071
  http://puu.sh/gArl

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01:19:446 (1) - dominant downbeat (01:21:696) mapped with this spinner ending should be avoided. Try shortening the spinner and maping the downbeat properly to help the player pick up the beat no

Still some work here as the map as it is now, with unpredictable beatplacement and missed downbeats, would be really frustrating for beginners. Try playing this with DT/HR/HD (hidden is the most important though) and you will immediately see what all those suggestions above are about.

p3n wrote:

Hi there. Modding this by your request from the ready to rank queue

[Normal]
00:47:571 (1,2) - try deleting (2) and instead end the slider at the same timing point (00:48:133), plays much better for me as it is more consistent with what you've done up to this point (will also reduce diff rating a tiny bit) It will miss the whistle sound and make whistle inconsistent
00:57:696 (1,2) - ^same as above same here, but it will miss the clap
01:02:008 (1) - just as mentioned in [Easy], the refrain and your KIAI start on the most dominant downbeat at 01:03:696. This is one of the most important parts of this song and should be mapped properly with a circle or with starting a slider here. A spinner ending is probably the worst way to start this as the player has no chance to pick up the beat (that's why the following combo feels "lost" or "weird"). I suggest deleting the spinner and starting a short 1/1 slider on the downbeat (use finish on start, clap on ending) http://puu.sh/gAxe all right
01:04:446 (2) - wrong use of clap, remove and... yes yes, fixed all hitsound
01:04:821 (3) - ...add the clap here to match the actual pattern of the song
01:05:196 (4) - just like above, delete clap on start and add clap on ending
01:05:946 (5) - ^like above
01:06:696 (1) - remove clap and...
01:07:071 (2) - ...add clap here
01:07:446 (3) - remove clap from start...add clap on ending
01:17:758 (1,2) - removing (2) and adding 1x repeat to (1) feels more consistent with previous patterns and is a better match for the vocals imo the spacing become hard to fix. I will leave it to that



[Hard]
00:41:008 (X) - maybe add a note (circle) here as it feels really weird to map the vocals but randomly leaving out a note ok, added

Really good map. thank you

Overall solid mapset with some small things left to polish. [Easy] needs some work to make it actually "easy" and intuitive to play. For a recheck (especially for [Easy]) catch me ingame or just send a forum PM and I will star this if the important stuff is fixed. Should be ready for MAT mod after this. Ok, will send a forum pm after all has been fixed for recheck

mancusojuanmattos wrote:

Hi! Mod Request From my Modding Queue

First of all, I have to said that this map, it's much better now, comparing with my first mod here Thanks~

Normal:
- I suggest Circle Size -1, since you have 3 difficulties with the same Circle Size. I think that it's more consistent if you have 2 diff with one kind of CS and 2 diff with other kind of CS. ok ok, reduce cs by 1

00:33:321 (5,6,7): Looks better in this difficulty and it's more consistent with your other 1/2 patterns, if you stack those Notes emm, i don't think so, the spacing will be hard to fix if stacked
01:24:696 (T): The hitsounds sounds a bit high in this Section. So, I think that it's better if you add an Inherited Point here (Green Line), with Volume in 60% added

Hard:
00:29:008 (5): Sounds like an emphasis in this place. For this reason, I suggest to add a Whistle in this note I'm still unsure about whistle here, if someone mention this again, i will add it
00:29:758 (2): Add a Whistle here, fit fine with Vocal ^
00:30:133 (3): Add a Whistle at the beginning of Slider ^
00:31:258 (x): Following the Vocal, you have to add a Note here ok

Well, That's all!
Nice Map in General.
Good Luck with your map Miya!

Leorda wrote:

Yasora's Insane
00:15:321 (1,2,3,4,5) - These pattern are overlapped by spinner-osu.png (look at gameplay if you want to see the proof)

Leorda wrote:

Halo hi leo~

Normal
00:35:196 (3) - Reverse this (Ctrl+R) slider for better flow? i think it's same if it's ctrl+r or not
00:47:571 (1) - Remove new combo for your combo pattern ok
00:48:508 (3) - New combo for above reason ok
00:50:196 (1) - Remove new combo for above reason ok


Hard
00:27:133 (5) - Add finish? ok, since 2 people is mentioning this
00:39:133 (7) - Remove clap? i think clap really fit there since it has strong point in that spot
00:39:321 (8) - Add clap? no for above reason
00:51:696 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I don't think this triplets are fit to music... i think it's fit, but it's overmapped, well change the first triplet into slider to reduce difficulty


Once you already done, forum PM me okay

Leorda wrote:

Halo

Star's Easy
* AR +1? too hard imo <.<

00:50:383 (2) - Make a blanket combo with 00:51:321 (3). Like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/241812 fixed
01:06:696 (1) - Snap the repeating slider to red tick for following vocal for end of 01:08:008 -
01:13:633 (x) - Add note here for better rhythm? beginners need some time to read 01:14:008 (2,3) - imo
01:14:196 (3) - Why clap at head slider? following 01:12:696 (1) - <w<

Once you already done, forum PM me

1. Tags : Add "Nyandaful! in the tags since it is the other name of the song.

1. The song is pretty energic, however the AR is only 2, it is kinda boring, AR3 would fit the song much better.
2. 01:28:821 (1) - Don't put it at the center of the screen please, it is hidden by the spinner's hitburst. I must be visible !

1. 01:15:321 (5) - This circle sounds pretty bad, I know you have tried to make up the 1/4 rhythm at 01:15:039 but this is not the good way to proceed. Actually, the best would be to remove this circle and it would sound well.
   
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1. 01:28:821 (103,104) - This is quite... unexpected ? :u Actually I don't think this is a good idea, I mean, exept if you know the map, you can't expect that 2 big dons will come like this. x2 instead of x4 would be enough.

1. 01:29:008 (1) - This circle is hidden by the spinner's hitburst, make it visible please.

1. 00:25:258 (4,1) - This pattern is very confusing, I mean, the slider has a new combo, so it means that it belong to another pattern than (4), however (4,1) are only separated by 1/2. Besides the end of the slider is stacked with (4) which make the pattern kinda confusing and plus having something at 00:25:446 is kinda weird since it is mapped on a background rhythm (which in this case is weird).
   Well, a pic is always better than a boring text.
   
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2. 01:29:008 (1) - This circle is hidden by the spinner's hitburst, make it visible please.

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hey ~ Hi Again!

General

1. Tags : Add "Nyandaful! in the tags since it is the other name of the song.

added, #Miya - if you wont, just delete it Miya :3

Star's Easy

1. The song is pretty energic, however the AR is only 2, it is kinda boring, AR3 would fit the song much better. hmm.. leorda siad it too, ok.. AR3 now
2. 01:28:821 (1) - Don't put it at the center of the screen please, it is hidden by the spinner's hitburst. It must be visible !

fixed

1. (Normal) - Make sliderborder is not touched by circle at 00:20:008 (3)
2. (Normal) - Remove new combo at 01:08:008 (1) for combo pattern
3. (Hard) - Add new combo at 00:38:008 (4) for combo pattern
4. (Yasora's Insane) - Make a combo color consistent on each diff