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THanks for mods! :3hoLysoup wrote:
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00:30:061 (1,2) - this plays weird I think.. doesn't go well with the music It fits the music imo, but to be honest I some reason like it better putting it on the white tick, so I just did
02:07:134 (1) - remove NC? dont' need to NC there I want this new combo here, but I decided to removethe new combo from the previous note
02:51:043 (1,2) - this doesn't sound well with the music what you did here: 02:55:795 (1,2,3) is much better. Suggest change to that I'll leave it as is. It follows the lead guitar in the background, not the rhythm guitar which is louder. I may end up changing it later if it ends up playing really awkward
Garven wrote:
[Winber] all fixed below
Tick rate 2 fits better and doesn't leave so many awkward ticks like during the intro. ok, i don't really care about the tick rate that much and it sounds fine, so fixed
01:40:940 (3) - This would have better impact as circles instead of a slider. sure
01:50:175 (2,1) - Maybe rotate these -10 and 10 degrees respectively to make the jump feel a bit more natural. I was actually gonna change this anyways, cuz i realized that this jump was kinda random.
03:05:340 (1) - Snap this to the next red line please. lol at first i didn't know what you meant, and then i realized a red timing section was hiding behind the green one.
03:05:661 - This gap is just... kinda dull. some reason i like having this gap, but I do not mind mapping it either, so i did.
Download: Syuiro - Ama no Jaku (Natteke) [Winber1's Normal].osu
