Saitou Chiwa - staple stable (TV Size) · forum

Nymph

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Nymph 2012-02-09T02:44:09+00:00

Hi Nymph here and request from my queue.

General:
Nothing got here.

Easy:
fine

Normal:
Beatmap design/suggestion
01:24:176 (1) - why the spinner stops at the blue tick when all other diffs stop at the red tick? try to make them the same.

Hitsound
00:42:548 (2) - miss a clap here?

Fumis:
Issue
01:12:897 (6) - you got 2 timing sections at the same place here#_# try to delete one

Beatmap design/suggestion
00:38:129 (2) - try to stack this note better

Insane:
fine.

Kana's Taiko Oni:
disable the video plz.

that is all#_#

fumis

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fumis 2012-02-09T04:14:44+00:00

thanks for mod~

Download: Saitou Chiwa - staple stable (TV Size) (Hinacle) [fumis].osu

Download: Saitou Chiwa - staple stable (TV Size) (Hinacle) [Normal].osu

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2012-02-09T04:33:06+00:00

Thank you mod~>w<//

Suimya

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Suimya 2012-02-09T12:53:42+00:00

from in-game mod req~ :3 moeHinacle

[Easy]

00:02:083 (2) - maybe add a finish on the start of this slider?
00:05:804 (3) - ^
00:18:827 (3) - 1 grip up
01:10:920 (2) - finish on the start of this slider

[Normal]

nothing to poke on o.o

[fumis]

00:07:432 (4) - maybe NC?
00:24:409 (1) - remove NC and add to the next note 00:25:106 (2) - ?
00:57:432 (6) - NC and remove the NC on 00:57:897 (1) - ?

nothing else, seems fine to me ><

[Insane]

i loved this diff <3 >w<

=w= nice map ~~baka~~Hinacle, gl with it :3

jossieP

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jossieP 2012-02-09T16:27:02+00:00

wee hi >3<

[Easy]

00:11:385 - from here, the finish usage feels repetitive, boring and all stuff, decreasing the usage of finish by 1 instance would make it less repetitive, I mean remove the pointed, 00:18:827 this and incoming.
the claps are ok since sounds funny x3

[Normal]

hmm I just have this nazi

01:18:827 (6) - move down to (5) to view the follow points moar clearly?

[fumissssssssss]

- uh yeah many 1/4 sliders =3=

00:16:036 (3) - yeah its bad overlaped with 00:15:804 (2) =3=
00:23:246 (2,3) - hmm location, previous follow circle's slider may hidden the aproach circle of (3)
00:39:757 (6) - uh overmapping =3= if you delete this you would have 2 nice doubles on back and forward, rearrange spacing if you had deleted this circle
00:41:850 (5,6,7) - hmmm untenable stream, you have used nice doubles after, why you are not keep using it?
00:45:339~ - missing vocal stream xD is ok since have a nice note placement
and kiai has overusage of finish
01:06:269 (3) - missing finish since you are overusing it

[Kana's Taiko Oni]

00:18:827 (67) - I have a sensation that this would be a don, Im not sure since katsu sounds with vocals but maybe are my damaged ears, but katsu dont convince me at all
00:25:339 (96) - katsu makes this stream follow a sweet pattern
00:32:083 - hmm use your 2 - 4 stream pattern for keep simmetry?

[Insane]

00:21:153 (2) - finish support moar and moar overusage of finish /o/
00:36:269 (3) - finish at start of slider? ↑
01:11:618 (2) - finish on end dont sounds so good >3<

and here ends the spam

[CSGA]Ar3sgice

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[CSGA]Ar3sgice 2012-02-11T08:27:12+00:00

Hi, from my queue

good map~

Easy

fine

Normal

00:15:571 (1) - move middle point 1 grid left
00:16:967 (2) - move middle point 1 grid right

Fumis

00:17:664 (2,3) - move a grid right
01:12:897 - 2 useless green lines here, plz remove
01:13:013 (6) - spacing different..?

Insane

00:00:223 (1) - remove end whistle
01:21:618 (4) - whistle

that's all

Good luck~

fumis

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fumis 2012-02-17T07:51:44+00:00

Thank you mod~~

Download: Saitou Chiwa - staple stable (TV Size) (Hinacle) [fumis].osu

Download: Saitou Chiwa - staple stable (TV Size) (Hinacle) [Normal].osu

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2012-02-17T16:54:37+00:00

Thank you mod~!!></

Leorda

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Leorda 2012-02-23T07:10:37+00:00

Hiiii

Easy
* This diff is fine, but it's boring. Consider to add more object at 2nd and 4th ticks, and make an interesting pattern

Normal
00:33:711 (4) - I think this slider needs more wavy
01:00:920 (x) - Add note here?
01:16:967 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. This could be confusing for players

fumis
00:20:688 (1,2) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. This could be confusing for players
00:44:409 (5) - Add clap?
01:08:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too much stacking notes

Insane
00:53:711 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too much stacking notes

Nice map, anyway

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2012-02-24T12:20:49+00:00

Leorda wrote:
Hiiii

Easy
* This diff is fine, but it's boring. Consider to add more object at 2nd and 4th ticks, and make an interesting pattern

Normal
00:33:711 (4) - I think this slider needs more wavy
01:00:920 (x) - Add note here?
01:16:967 (1) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. This could be confusing for players

fumis
00:20:688 (1,2) - Overlapped by hitbursts from spinner. This could be confusing for players
00:44:409 (5) - Add clap?
01:08:595 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too much stacking notes

Insane
00:53:711 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too much stacking notes

Nice map, anyway

Thank you mod~>w<//

fumis

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fumis 2012-02-24T13:01:17+00:00

Thank you mod~!

Download: Saitou Chiwa - staple stable (TV Size) (Hinacle) [fumis].osu

Download: Saitou Chiwa - staple stable (TV Size) (Hinacle) [Normal].osu

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2012-02-29T04:50:39+00:00

Bakacle

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Hinacle

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Hinacle 2012-03-02T07:10:50+00:00

Verdisphena wrote:
Bakacle //

Thank you for star~!!>w<//

lovhin456

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lovhin456 2012-03-09T02:29:58+00:00

Hello

General:
- Fine

Easy:
- Slider tick rate 2 ? I strongly suggest this, it makes the diff feel less empty and goes well
- 01:27:664 >> I think is better to end the spinner here, the music stops here

Normal:
- Slider tick rate 2 ? Optional
- 01:23:943 >> I think that a whistle would fit more

fumis:
- Consider adding the difficulty name to your diff in this case it would be fumis' Hard
- 00:45:445 >> Add a note ?
- 01:04:176 >> Stack better
- 01:23:943 >> A whistle fits more imo
- 01:27:664 >> Same as Easy

Insane:
- 00:45:455 >> Add a note ?
- 00:59:757 (1,2) >> Finish on the start of (1) and on the end of (2)
- 01:27:664 >> Same as Easy

* Very nice mapset ><

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2012-03-09T14:41:53+00:00

lovhin456 wrote:
Hello

General:
- Fine

Easy:
- Slider tick rate 2 ? I strongly suggest this, it makes the diff feel less empty and goes wellFixed
- 01:27:664 >> I think is better to end the spinner here, the music stops heresorry, keep it

Normal:
- Slider tick rate 2 ? Optional
- 01:23:943 >> I think that a whistle would fit more

fumis:
- Consider adding the difficulty name to your diff in this case it would be fumis' Hard
- 00:45:445 >> Add a note ?
- 01:04:176 >> Stack better
- 01:23:943 >> A whistle fits more imo
- 01:27:664 >> Same as Easy

Insane:
- 00:45:455 >> Add a note ? Fixed
- 00:59:757 (1,2) >> Finish on the start of (1) and on the end of (2)Fixed
- 01:27:664 >> Same as Easy sorry,Keep it

* Very nice mapset ><

Thank you mod~!!>w</

fumis

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fumis 2012-03-09T15:37:44+00:00

Normal:
- Slider tick rate 2 ? Optional ok
- 01:23:943 >> I think that a whistle would fit more ok

fumis:
- Consider adding the difficulty name to your diff in this case it would be fumis' Hard
- 00:45:445 >> Add a note ? ]no change
- 01:04:176 >> Stack better ok
- 01:23:943 >> A whistle fits more imo ok
- 01:27:664 >> Same as Easy no change

Download: Saitou Chiwa - staple stable (TV Size) (Hinacle) [Normal].osu

Download: Saitou Chiwa - staple stable (TV Size) (Hinacle) [fumis].osu

fumis

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fumis 2012-03-09T15:41:54+00:00

>< Thank you mod!!

lovhin456

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lovhin456 2012-03-24T04:49:58+00:00

Hello, recheck

Normal:
- 00:37:432 >> Add finish
- 01:27:432 >> End the spinner here to keep consistency with the other diffs

fumis:
- 01:13:478 >> Maybe remove the new combo

* Call me back

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2012-03-24T13:22:47+00:00

lovhin456 wrote:
Hello, recheck

Normal:
- 00:37:432 >> Add finish
- 01:27:432 >> End the spinner here to keep consistency with the other diffs

fumis:
- 01:13:478 >> Maybe remove the new combo

* Call me back

Thank you mod~!!

all fixed!!

lovhin456

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lovhin456 2012-03-27T03:09:18+00:00

Bubbled

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2012-03-27T13:51:32+00:00

lovhin456 wrote:
Bubbled

Thank you Bubbled~><//

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iinioi 2012-04-05T18:19:33+00:00

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Garven

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Garven 2012-05-07T13:14:50+00:00

Heya, Hinacle

[Normal]
01:16:967 (1) - Might be a bit too soon after a spinner for a Normal. Maybe end 01:14:176 (1) - at 01:15:804 - with a whistle, then add a note with a finish at 01:16:502 - ?

[fumis]
Tick rate 2 sounds much better
Really nice map here.

[Insane]
Tick rate 2 sounds much better
00:43:595 (4,5,6,7) - This huge spacing didn't fit very well - especially when going from this to 00:44:641 (8,1) -

Hinacle

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Hinacle 2012-05-07T13:34:04+00:00

Garven wrote:
Heya, Hinacle

[Normal]
01:16:967 (1) - Might be a bit too soon after a spinner for a Normal. Maybe end 01:14:176 (1) - at 01:15:804 - with a whistle, then add a note with a finish at 01:16:502 - ? ok~

[fumis]
Tick rate 2 sounds much bettersorry no change
Really nice map here.

[Insane]
Tick rate 2 sounds much bettersorry no change
00:43:595 (4,5,6,7) - This huge spacing didn't fit very well - especially when going from this to 00:44:641 (8,1) -sorry no change T-T

Thank you mod~></