SPOILER

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00:31:773 (1) - finish
00:41:878 (3) - finish
00:49:299 (9) - nc I'm following voice for NCs
00:51:983 (13) - move nc here I'm following Voice for NCs and Graphically better now
00:51:983 (13) - finish
[color=#00FF00]00:54:194 (10) - finish to the end
00:56:878 (7) - finish to the reverse
00:59:246 (3) - finish to the end
01:02:089 (2) - finish
01:04:630 (2) - ^
01:05:577 (5,7) - overlap?... It's wanted and you can see it's wanted >,<
01:14:735 (2) - finish
01:19:787 (2) - ^
01:23:261 (1) - move it further It's a trap...

K o g u r e wrote:

feat. Ota
00:31:777 (1) - This note overlapped looks ugly. Move it to x:256 y:320?
01:00:040 (4) - I dont think this fits nor the lyrics nor the music. Maybe put it like this:

K o g u r e wrote:

Hi~
From my queue:

Easy
00:01:445 (1) - Consider making these two sliders one slider, since its a map for begginers and they wouldnt expect a slider after another no, that'll make spinner longer and make player tired
01:24:844 (1) - Same here ^

Normal
00:11:551 (1) - No NC? ok
00:16:603 (1) - NAZI - In grid level 4, take notes from 00:16:603 (1) to 00:20:393 (2) and go 1 grid down. Do this so the slider in 00:15:972 (5) will be in the center of 00:16:603 (1) and you wont have spacing problems ok
00:33:356 (1) - No NC? ok
00:34:303 (2) - NC? ok
00:53:882 (5) - No NC? no, it has different ryhtm

Thats all i could find
Nice song and nice diffs u got there
Good Luck

goodbye wrote:

[feat. Ota]
00:21:672(T) - delete this meaningless green line. you can add NC1 at the red line. fixed

[Normal]
00:11:551 (1) - remove nc ok
00:33:356 (1) - ^, and add nc in 00:34:303 (2) ok
01:02:093 (1) - finish at the end weird
01:04:540 (T) - I dont know this red line is necessary or not but at least you should delete the green one at the same time. no, I make all timing same (0.75x). It has same case as easy diff

[Easy]
00:21:577(T) - delete this green line ok
00:40:935 (3) - clap at the begin and the end ok
00:49:777 (4) - clap at the begin ok
01:00:514 (2) - spacing ok

Sync wrote:

feat. Ota
Other than the timing issues mentioned above, I found nothing wrong with this difficulty...other than unsnapped inherited timing sections, that is! Make sure to snap those.

Unsnapped inherited timing sections

00:06:496
00:11:549
00:11:707
01:19:791
01:22:476
01:22:950
01:23:266

Sync wrote:

General
-- Change Easy, Ota, and Haku's audio lead-in time to 1000. You can achieve this by opening the .osu file. fixed
-- Easy and Haku has combo colors that differ from the rest of your mapset. Be sure that combo colors are consistent throughout your map. fixed
-- Remove Haku's first kiai to have consistent Kiai sections throughout all of the difficulties. wait him do by himself
-- In Ota's difficulty, there are timing sections that differ from the rest of the mapset. (01:04:540 BPM 189.950, 01:04:634, BPM 189.950) fixed

Normal
00:33:356 (3) - Move this back one tick (1/2) I follow guitar
00:35:724 (4) - Move this back one tick ^
00:43:461 (3) - Move this back one tick and extend by one tick. ^
01:22:314 (x) - Unsnapped inherited timing section fixed

Easy
I'd suggest nazi-ing your own map for the sake of it looking better. Other than that, I found nothing wrong. ok

That is all. Good luck.

[feat. Haku]
00:05:235 (6) - remove whistle The one on the sliderslide?
00:32:566 (4) - why there is a whistle here? It's the remnant of an experiment, thank for pointing
00:58:935 (1) - not stack well
01:00:672 (8) - this sounds strange...use 1/2 slider repeat instead it? Nothing strange, simply following the voice while using a graphical pattern
01:01:303 (10) - clap at the end
01:07:002 (8) - not stack well
01:23:265 (1,2) - Dont you think they're too close to 12?I'd like to make a little jump here. hm, like that it's better, nuff' said (1. Archheard reason: I like it, 2. It's graphically good, 3. The song become slower there, so as well the snap ( it's like 1,4x in the 1x speed I used (the distance is counted from the last note section, so it's 0.7 in 2x) 4. You actually have some graphical sign while plaiying, as this appear when the last note is ended. note before the start.

General
-- Remove Haku's first kiai to have consistent Kiai sections throughout all of the difficulties.
It's called "fountain", and i want to use it.

feat. Haku
00:08:393 (2) - Add a whistle The whistle are not in the bell sounds, but in the synth.
00:18:498 (2) - Totally unpredictable and unfitting slider speed-up. I don't believe this should stay. Do as you wish. Now 1.75x
00:32:566 (4) - What on earth is this whistle doing here? Failed experiment remnant
I have to admit, this map is very unique. Well done.

[feat.Haku]
00:10:288 (3)　　　　Please use complete stack.Very confusing pattern. Why?, play it. I just stacked (3) under (2) end and not viceversa.
00:15:656 (6)　　　　^ Why?, play it. I just manually stacked (6) to continue (5)
00:29:882 (3)　　　　Ctrl+R Flow and Look better. nuff said
00:58:461 (x)　　　　I think the slider should start from here. As you saw in 00:56:882 (7,8) - , this slider follow voice better like this

[feat. Haku]
More than three unique slider speeds = unrankable nope, it was a guideline, plus we modders changed it to

Please don't change slider speeds more often than the music suggests. Changing speeds by small amounts to help fit objects is fine, but don't change the speeds of single stray sliders by noticeable amounts.

00:10:288 - Move this to x216 y100 Uhm... okay ...
00:58:383 - Ugly here between these to sliders ?.?

terametis wrote:

Hi~
These are all suggestion.

[Easy]
Hmm, I recommend to redesign by GlidLv4.
It is more readable for beginners.

00:17:709 (x)　　　　Shorten slider.

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01:00:514 (1)~(2)　1grid right
01:11:897 (2)~(3)　1grid up
01:13:476 (5)　　　　1gid left

[Normal]
Same as suggestions of precedent.
Try using the GridLv4?

00:17:709 (x)　　　　Shorten slider.

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That's all.

I wish your map is Ranked~
bye~

Jacob wrote:

From my queue. Not much left for me to pick at

[General]
00:50:093 - This timing section's volume change is barely noticeable in [Easy], and rather annoying in other diffs - delete it
00:50:408 - ^
00:50:724 - ^
00:51:040 - ^

[Easy]
1:15:686 - Clap

[Normal]
00:32:250 - Move back one tick and add claps to the front and end of the slider. (sounds better to me) fixed sometihing else too

Katsuri wrote:

From Rank-Ready queue, I wish you good luck.

General

1. At [feat. Ota] you can see the uninherited sections placed at 01:04:540 and 01:04:634 have a different BPM of the other difficulties. The timing in each difficulty must be the same if you use the same mp3 for all diffs. fixed
2. I think you should keep the tick rates all at 2, it's highly recommended by BATs and great mappers like RJ and others. This way you can hear the constant 1/2 while playing sliders.sorry, not for now. I'm not really used to it

Easy

1. New Combos:
   
   1. 00:19:130 (3) - I think it's the start of a new phrase of vocal, I suggest you to add a New Combo here. ok
2. Pretty clean difficulty!

Normal

1. Structure:
   
   1. 00:19:130 (1) - I think the flow here is really bad in my opinion, I think something like this will look better. actually I do that to make cursor near the center so player can easily start spin, but ok, I accept it
2. Lovely!

Ota

1. 00:39:356 (1) - I think the recover time between the spinner and the next note is too small, I really suggest you to shorter the spinner to 00:40:303 since it fits perfectly with the song. fixed

Good mapset, Call me for a recheck later and I will see if you will pass to next layer of the queue .

Katsuri wrote:

Okay, I will talk with Elly-chan and we will decide if your map shall pass to the MATs' layer.
@Lennox, I think my suggestions would totally improve your map, I think you could at least see the suggestions and not just ignore them because it's just my opinion. At least open the editor and see the suggestions.
I have the newest version of your diff, maybe Shikyu missed to update it.

1. Timing: reset red line#2 21,672 →21,662
2. 01:04:540 - useless red line
3. end kiai at [01:22:949]

LKs wrote:

req from my queue

General
seems fine, and you've recieved a lot of mods

1. Timing: reset red line#2 21,672 →21,662 ok
2. 01:04:540 - useless red line
3. end kiai at [01:22:949] ok

Easy

00:01:445 (1,1) - these two spinners were given too large volume, reduce them. especially the end of them. ok
00:15:182 (3) - remove whistle at the end of the slider ok
00:40:935 (3) - remove whistle at the reversal point and the end of the sliderok
kiai time: You diveded kiai time into 3 parts and used different hitsound sets. It's interesting but less logic though. Anyway just sound a bit weird, but creative. I like placed different hitsound there

Normal

00:01:445 (1,1) - same part in different diffs is not very wise deed, I'd suggest concentrating on new things. it's normal, give another pattern will make confused IMO
00:12:024 (3) - slider shape is poor fixed
00:33:672 (3) - remove whistle at the beginning of the slider ok
00:31:777 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1) - You created your own way of setting hitsounds during this part? I won't show you my opinion if that. if you hear clearly I follow guitar rhytm

feat. Ota

AR+1 OD+1
maybe change name to feat.Ota since song name is feat.Me.

00:01:445 (1,1) - boring spinner couple, why even a GD used similar objects?
00:03:972 (1) - this should be stop at red line
fixed all

Timing: reset red line#2 21,672 →21,662 ok Nope, as 21672 is precise as hell. It's an offset jump.
01:04:540 - useless red line True...
feat. Haku

name problem
slider tick rate1 is enough for this song (I'm waiting for section-based slider-ticks)

00:10:288 (3) - this note stack is a misguide. It's manually stacked ...
00:19:446 (3,4,5,1) - noisy sound, abite the volume
01:03:356 (2) - freak sliderslide sound.. add a section at 01:03:395- SC1, 20%volume. and add a section at the end of slider to bring back the volume

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ shikyu ~ (Sorry for later mod)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]

1. Change same offset in all diff. already...
2. Your Mp3 file it's 409 kbps,this is unrankable.need change for 192 kbps. what the it's already 192 kbps, I'll full submit it later

That's all ~

Good luck ~

Your Mp3 file it's 409 kbps,this is unrankable.need change for 192 kbps.

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

Before giving a kudosu you should be sure i'll follow something.

Lissette wrote:

I felt timing off at the end, you may get some pro timer to check this out
Offsets must be the same in all difficulties

Normal and Easy
00:31:777 - the soft hit-sounds doesn't fit to this part, try normal sounds, like in the guest difficulties

Taiko
00:31:461 - add note
00:31:619 - same
01:24:212 (2) - move to prev red tick

Kurisuchianu wrote:

Taiko mod /late
• General
- Volume in 90% at least

• Map
- 00:04:761 (1) - Delete no, there's something
- 00:37:777 (5) - ^ ^
- 01:24:528 (1) - Katsu ok
- 01:24:686 (2) - Delete ok

Easy map lol, i can't mod it very well

Lissette wrote:

feat.Lennox
00:34:145 (2) - this jump makes no sense to me, what did you follow to put it here?
00:36:040 (3) - same fixed
00:43:619 (3) - same, also this one is even more confusing due to this 00:42:987 (5,1,2,3) - see the spacing between them, maybe you did it on purpose, but this doesn't always turns well, it has to follow the music very well, and this one looks random to me.
00:46:145 (3) - same fixed
00:57:198 - add note? feels like is missing one here ok
00:57:672 (1) - move to prev red tick and add note here 00:57:514 (1) - sounds and plays better, try it~ ok
01:02:724 (1,2,3,4) - delete 3 and 4, also you could put the two left in jump, it gives a nice effect while playing, also sounds better, example: http://puu.sh/giA7 fixed
01:03:356 (1) - new combo bug, add new combo to the spinner ok
01:04:634 - 01:24:844 - nice

K o g u r e wrote:

I was playing this map and noticed something at Haku's diff:
00:17:076 (3) - Is this slider supposed to end on a blue tick? coz it doesnt go with the rhythm imo

Thats all~

1. 00:14:089 (2) - Extend by 1/2? It follows the vocal more, plus it gives 1/1 delay to your next slider (which is far more intuitive compared to 3/2)
2. 00:18:194 (2) - Here's an useful trick : hold SHIFT while placing this note to get it perfectly aligned vertically with your previous slider. (this one is kinda obvious, it's slightly off)
3. 00:19:773 (2) - Whistle on slider's start here also? You've done it on 00:16:615 (1), so why not here also~
4. 00:36:826 (x) - Considering you have a 1/2 notes on 00:33:352 (3,1) and 00:39:036 (4,1), why not add a circle here also :3
5. 00:37:773 (2,3,4) - (optional) - well, I personally don't like how you put (2,3) linearly - for an Easy diff, I think this plays better:
   
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6. 00:43:458 (4,1,2) - Uhh... The pattern here feels quite random, usually in symmetry parts like this (2) is placed on (4)'s end and then CTRL+H'ed, but on this case (to tidy this part up) I suggest to move (2) two grids up so these three will form a better straight line
7. 00:53:879 (3) - I highly recommend to use finish on slider's start instead of whistle, because this part is too strong for a whistle
8. 00:58:931 (1) - Here also, to continue your previous hitsound pattern I suggest to use finish on slider's repeat instead
9. 01:07:477 (3) - (optional) Add repeat? Feels kinda empty with 01:08:108 plainly unmapped, but it's fine
10. 01:15:056 (2) - I prefer to curve this upward to avoid clustering:
    
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1. 00:13:142 (1,2) - Why no whistle on these two? I think it's better to add some to spice up this part, perhaps on (2)'s start?
2. 00:14:089 (3) - To avoid this overlapping (1), blanket it instead?
   
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3. 00:16:615 (1) - Considering that this is placed on downbeat, I think it's better to put finish instead of whistle on slider's start
4. 00:34:615 (2,3) - You have some parts like this (1/2 slider followed by a repeating 1/2 slider), but all of them are hitsounded randomly. I suggest to make them all consistent like you did on 00:39:668 (2,3) with clap only on first slider's start and second slider's repeat
5. 00:35:879 (4) - Minor stuff, but move the second waypoint (the middle one) four grids up to make it symmetrical
6. 00:38:405 (4) - (optional) Encircle (1)? It looks less random and more patterned this way imo
7. 00:41:879 (1) - On creating sliders like this, make sure the slider's start, tick, and end is arranged in a straight line, plus the angle before and after your slider-tick is equal:
   
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8. 00:44:405 (1) - What's the point of silencing this slider's end? I highly recommend not to silence it, however if you wanna keep the silence move the inherit section to 00:45:306 to avoid the sliderslide being partly silenced
9. 00:53:563 (x) - Add note? The vocals continue here
10. 01:02:089 (1) - I highly recommend to add finish on slider's start (it's the end of your short 1/2 sliders part anyway)
11. 01:13:477 (2) - It's obvious, you definitely can curve this smoother (especially if the red waypoint is dragged down by few grids:)
    
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12. 01:21:687 (4,5,6) - One grid left and down for all (or is it intentional? o.o)

1. 00:03:036 (1,2,3) - If you're using too many whistles here, this part's essence will be lost. Remove one on (2)?
2. 00:05:089 (2) - Should be snapped to 3/4 instead of 1/2 because the vocal ends there
3. 00:15:352 (5) - (optional) Move the whistle from slider's end to slider's repeat?
4. 00:19:142 (1,2,3,4) - Try to curve this more and arrange (2,3,4) like this, it will play/flow better imo:
   
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5. 00:33:352 (x) - Add note here. The transition between 1/1s and 1/2s here doesn't sound well, so it will be much better to continue on with 1/2s here
6. 00:35:405 (4) - There shouldn't be a clap here on slider's end - claps, if any, should be placed 1/2 after in the white tick
7. 00:39:352 (1) - Extend this spinner by 1/2? The drum sounds begin from there actually
8. 00:48:826 (6) - I recommend to keep on with the flow like this:
   
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9. 00:54:510 (1) - (optional) Curve this also (to the right)? Feels weird having a single straight slider so sudden while your previous and next sliders are mostly curved
10. 01:04:635 (1,2) - The clapping here... Random placement of clap could make the map sounds abrupt! I would suggest to use clap only on (2)'s start - This suggestion applies for next parts like this
11. 01:22:319 (x) - Add circle? The vocal continues here actually
12. 01:26:740 (2) - (optional) Add whistle on slider's end if you want, it could give a dramatic effect here on the ending

1. 00:06:510 (1) - Minor stuff, but the midpoint isn't in the center (if you're going for symmetry here), but it's barely noticeable
2. 00:10:615 (4) - Uhh, are you going to curve it with that waypoint in the center? Also, rotate it a bit would flow better imo (:
   
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3. 00:19:931 (7,8,9) - I think whistle should be added here also, I highly recommend to add one on (7), but a whistle on (9) sounds well also~
4. 00:33:826 (x) - Add circle? Being 3/2 apart from the previous sequence sounds kinda empty, 1/1 silence better imo
5. 00:37:773 (3,4,5,6) - You can easily move them all one grid down and right to make it stack with 00:36:352 (5), so why not (:
6. 00:48:510 (4) - (optional) On this one, I prefer to move it lower so (3,4) won't be too linear:
   
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7. 00:53:879 (7,8) - Clap on (7) instead on (8)'s start? Fits better there imo
8. 01:00:510 (6) - (optional) Rotate this one around? I like how it will flow:
   
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9. 01:03:352 (1) - I understand you're trying to make this spinner silent, so use soft sampleset instead of normal sampleset here, to make the silence smoother?
10. 01:04:635 (1) - Add clap on your slider's end? (to make (1,2,3) has consistent claps)
11. 01:19:161 (1,4) - Although you've switched to claps here, I think it's not a bad idea to continue your previous whistles (along with claps) here :3
12. 01:19:792 (1,2) - I highly recommend to shorten these two by 1/2, and add a circle where the slider originally ends (with clap). This way, it follows both the guitar and drums better

1. 00:04:773 (4,5,6) - I think you're using too much whistle here, it ends not blending really well with the vocals... Maybe remove one on (5)?
2. 00:05:247 (6) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint one grid left to encircle (7) perfectly
3. 00:08:089 (1,2,3) - Contrary to my previous suggestion, this part feels weird without any whistles. I highly suggest to add one on (1), and if you think it won't be too noisy, add one also on (3)
4. 00:09:826 (2,3) - Why not consistent with your rhythm on 00:07:300 (3,4) (1/4s) here? You could try this:
   
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5. 00:18:510 (2) - Uh... Is it intentional you're curving it like this? I think just curve it with one waypoint could make it flow more naturally
6. 00:21:668 (1) - The short Kiai Time here is only featured on this difficulty, plays good though (I recommend other diffs to add this short kiai also)
7. 00:27:668 (3) - Minor stuff, but move the midpoint one grid left to encircle (2) better
8. 00:28:141 (1,2,3) - Well- it's kinda obvious you can arrange it neater, like this:
   
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9. 00:40:299 (3,4) - (optional) To keep your blanket pattern here : combine these two as a single slider encircling (5)?
10. 00:51:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Well, in this sequence of stream I think you can play around with claps as well to spice up this part. The simplest thing you can do is do a 1/1 clapping (on 1,5,9), but idk... just experiment around here (:
11. 00:58:378 (4) - Uh... why is this placed on the blue tick? It doesn't even follow the vocals imo, move it 1/4 later sounds much better
12. 01:05:582 (5,7) - Due to (7)'s start placed below (5)'s path, it is hard to read this, especially with those flashing kiais - plays good, though :3
13. 01:16:950 (9) - (optional) Considering your next (2) is stacked above (3), stack (9) above (1) also?
14. 01:23:108 (x) - The spacing from (12) to (1) is very unintuitive, I think most players will react as they're 1/2 apart (although it's 1/1) - the easiest solution is to add a circle here stacked beneath (12), but you can play with (12)'s shape also ^^

-> .mp3 is still 320 kbps, which is unrankable by now. Look up for a 128-192 kbps one? ↓

Niva wrote:

Mod request taken for mod4mod ~

Hello, shikyu (:
Mod4mod, as discussed in PM :3

[General]

-> Your first note starts around 00:01:300-ish, so why bother having 1s lead-in time? 0.5s is even more than enough imo (:
-> Also, you don't need the extra timing sections on 01:04:556 because the metronome doesn't suppose to reset there (true)

[feat. Haku]

-> Why HP Drain 8 >< -- uh well, it's usable but... I prefer 7, using 8 will be tensing especially with slow SVs like this :3 The HP Drain should be considered in base to the density of the objects ( i have a low density in start and end)... If the density was slow in start, this wasn't a problem, but the low density end is... so ok

1. 00:04:773 (4,5,6) - I think you're using too much whistle here, it ends not blending really well with the vocals... Maybe remove one on (5)? They do follow a different sound on the music (that flute like sound)
2. 00:05:247 (6) - Minor stuff, but move the endpoint one grid left to encircle (7) perfectly fitted it even better
   
3. 00:08:089 (1,2,3) - Contrary to my previous suggestion, this part feels weird without any whistles. I highly suggest to add one on (1), and if you think it won't be too noisy, add one also on (3) I'm using whistle in the flute-like sounds
4. 00:09:826 (2,3) - Why not consistent with your rhythm on 00:07:300 (3,4) (1/4s) here? You could try this:
   
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5. 00:18:510 (2) - Uh... Is it intentional you're curving it like this? I think just curve it with one waypoint could make it flow more naturally
6. 00:21:668 (1) - The short Kiai Time here is only featured on this difficulty, plays good though (I recommend other diffs to add this short kiai also)
7. 00:27:668 (3) - Minor stuff, but move the midpoint one grid left to encircle (2) better
8. 00:28:141 (1,2,3) - Well- it's kinda obvious you can arrange it neater, like this:
   
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9. 00:40:299 (3,4) - (optional) To keep your blanket pattern here : combine these two as a single slider encircling (5)?
10. 00:51:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Well, in this sequence of stream I think you can play around with claps as well to spice up this part. The simplest thing you can do is do a 1/1 clapping (on 1,5,9), but idk... just experiment around here (: I don't like so much messing up streams sound using non inherent sounds
11. 00:58:378 (4) - Uh... why is this placed on the blue tick? It doesn't even follow the vocals imo, move it 1/4 later sounds much better It did follow the vocals (but the vocal there was 1/6 maybe >.<)
12. 01:05:582 (5,7) - Due to (7)'s start placed below (5)'s path, it is hard to read this, especially with those flashing kiais - plays good, though :3
13. 01:16:950 (9) - (optional) Considering your next (2) is stacked above (3), stack (9) above (1) also? It'll also follow music less though ( I stacked this because it was an "in-between" beat respected for the sake of the hitsounds )
14. 01:23:108 (x) - The spacing from (12) to (1) is very unintuitive, I think most players will react as they're 1/2 apart (although it's 1/1) - the easiest solution is to add a circle here stacked beneath (12), but you can play with (12)'s shape also ^^ Not many people, that try to follow music, will click it before the right time (and an antijump stay good anyway)

Love those sliders on Haku's diff~
Solid mapset also, star ^^

Niva wrote:

Mod request taken for mod4mod ~

Hello, shikyu (:
Mod4mod, as discussed in PM :3

[General]

-> .mp3 is still 320 kbps, which is unrankable by now. Look up for a 128-192 kbps one?
-> Your first note starts around 00:01:300-ish, so why bother having 1s lead-in time? 0.5s is even more than enough imo (:
-> Also, you don't need the extra timing sections on 01:04:556 because the metronome doesn't suppose to reset there

[Easy]

1. 00:14:089 (2) - Extend by 1/2? It follows the vocal more, plus it gives 1/1 delay to your next slider (which is far more intuitive compared to 3/2)
2. 00:18:194 (2) - Here's an useful trick : hold SHIFT while placing this note to get it perfectly aligned vertically with your previous slider. (this one is kinda obvious, it's slightly off)
3. 00:19:773 (2) - Whistle on slider's start here also? You've done it on 00:16:615 (1), so why not here also~ weird
4. 00:36:826 (x) - Considering you have a 1/2 notes on 00:33:352 (3,1) and 00:39:036 (4,1), why not add a circle here also :3 save it
5. 00:37:773 (2,3,4) - (optional) - well, I personally don't like how you put (2,3) linearly - for an Easy diff, I think this plays better:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:43:458 (4,1,2) - Uhh... The pattern here feels quite random, usually in symmetry parts like this (2) is placed on (4)'s end and then CTRL+H'ed, but on this case (to tidy this part up) I suggest to move (2) two grids up so these three will form a better straight line
7. 00:53:879 (3) - I highly recommend to use finish on slider's start instead of whistle, because this part is too strong for a whistle hmmm... but with soft sampleset it sounds awkward
8. 00:58:931 (1) - Here also, to continue your previous hitsound pattern I suggest to use finish on slider's repeat instead I change hitsound pattern
9. 01:07:477 (3) - (optional) Add repeat? Feels kinda empty with 01:08:108 plainly unmapped, but it's fine
10. 01:15:056 (2) - I prefer to curve this upward to avoid clustering:
    
    SPOILER

    

[Normal]

-> The difficulty gap between [Easy] and [Normal] isn't that big, so I don't think you'll need AR this high (plus this Normal isn't that hard anyway)
-> Plus, I don't really get why you suddenly change to Soft sampleset on 00:41:879 (1) while your other diffs don't do the same

1. 00:13:142 (1,2) - Why no whistle on these two? I think it's better to add some to spice up this part, perhaps on (2)'s start?
2. 00:14:089 (3) - To avoid this overlapping (1), blanket it instead?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:16:615 (1) - Considering that this is placed on downbeat, I think it's better to put finish instead of whistle on slider's start no, it doesn't really good to hear
4. 00:34:615 (2,3) - You have some parts like this (1/2 slider followed by a repeating 1/2 slider), but all of them are hitsounded randomly. I suggest to make them all consistent like you did on 00:39:668 (2,3) with clap only on first slider's start and second slider's repeat
5. 00:35:879 (4) - Minor stuff, but move the second waypoint (the middle one) four grids up to make it symmetrical
6. 00:38:405 (4) - (optional) Encircle (1)? It looks less random and more patterned this way imo
7. 00:41:879 (1) - On creating sliders like this, make sure the slider's start, tick, and end is arranged in a straight line, plus the angle before and after your slider-tick is equal:
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:44:405 (1) - What's the point of silencing this slider's end? I highly recommend not to silence it, however if you wanna keep the silence move the inherit section to 00:45:306 to avoid the sliderslide being partly silenced
9. 00:53:563 (x) - Add note? The vocals continue here I follow guitar sound
10. 01:02:089 (1) - I highly recommend to add finish on slider's start (it's the end of your short 1/2 sliders part anyway) finish for soft hitsound too loud imo
11. 01:13:477 (2) - It's obvious, you definitely can curve this smoother (especially if the red waypoint is dragged down by few grids:)
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 01:21:687 (4,5,6) - One grid left and down for all (or is it intentional? o.o)

others accepted, I fix some for Lennox's diff and athiota have fixed her part too

Love those sliders on Haku's diff~ when slider lovers are meet
Solid mapset also, star ^^

• 
  Set a audio-lead-in 500 on taiko diff as well as other diffs.
  
  Only Easy and Haku have first KIAI? How about adding it to other diffs? (especially your own normal diff)
  And the end of first KIAI is not snapped on Haku.

1. 00:19:773 (2) - It's better to avoid overlapping with 00:18:194 (2). Please try to move this note to somewhere else.

• 
  Your way to use clap is not so good.
  Between 00:31:773 and 00:49:142, there are too many claps. Sounds overused.
  About first half of KIAI, you put claps on 1st and 3rd white line, but they should be put on 2nd and 4th white line.

1. 00:19:142 (1) - Remove new combo.
2. 01:10:003 (2,3,4,5) - I feel something weird about these notes. (3) should be moved to 01:10:161.

• 
  Good diff overall.

1. 00:05:089 (2) - This slider should be extended to 00:05:405.
2. 01:24:845 (1) - End this spinner at 01:25:950.

1. 00:20:247 (T) - Remove this green line.
2. 00:45:036 (4) - This note doesn't follow the music well. Try the pattern below or something else.
   
3. 00:51:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Cannot read this 1/3 stream...if you really want to put a stream here, you shouldn't stack (1,2,3,4).
4. 01:14:582 (T) - The volume 40% is too low. Try to turn it up to 50%.
5. 00:32:721 (T) - Remove this green line.
6. 01:22:792 (T) - SV is changed while a slider. Set SV 0.50x on this green line.
7. 01:22:950 (T) - Remove this green line.

• 
  Frankly, the gap of two kinds of SV is too big and not making so good effect. And having five SVs per map is unrankable.
  I suggest you to change 2.00x SV to 1.50x, and 1.25x to 1.00x.

1. 00:11:879 (2,3,4) - I feel kinda bad flow here. Try to add a note at 00:12:510 and stack it with the top of (4).
2. 00:15:668 (6) - Stack it correctly.
3. 00:18:036 (T) - I know why you turned the volume up here, but 60% is too loud for me. I think 50 - 55% is good enough.
4. 00:19:142 (T) - Same reason as above, turn the volume down a bit.
5. 00:20:168 (T) - This one makes good sound! But the sound of the end of spinner is too loud. Turn it down before the spinner please.
6. 00:29:404 (2) - How about adding a repeat to this slider or adding a note at 00:29:721?
7. 00:42:983 (7,8,9) - These notes don't follow the music well. Try the pattern below.
   
8. 00:58:458 (4,1,2) - Confusing pattern. Stack them correctly.
9. 01:04:540 (1) - Unsnapped note.
10. 01:06:529 (7) - Oh player cannot read this hidden slider. Please don't put a slider like this.
11. 01:19:792 (2) - ^

• 
  HP7 is too high as taiko. HP6 is fine enough.

Suzully wrote:

[feat.Ota]

• 
  Good diff overall.

1. 00:05:089 (2) - This slider should be extended to 00:05:405. ...shikyu said so too,so fixed.
2. 01:24:845 (1) - End this spinner at 01:25:950. fixed

Suzully wrote:

[General]

• 
  Set a audio-lead-in 500 on taiko diff as well as other diffs. damn I forget, fixed
  
  Only Easy and Haku have first KIAI? How about adding it to other diffs? (especially your own normal diff)
  And the end of first KIAI is not snapped on Haku. ^

[Easy]

1. 00:19:773 (2) - It's better to avoid overlapping with 00:18:194 (2). Please try to move this note to somewhere else. ok

[Normal]

• 
  Your way to use clap is not so good.
  Between 00:31:773 and 00:49:142, there are too many claps. Sounds overused. 'cause I change it from soft hitsounds, reduce some
  About first half of KIAI, you put claps on 1st and 3rd white line, but they should be put on 2nd and 4th white line. ok

1. 00:19:142 (1) - Remove new combo. ok
2. 01:10:003 (2,3,4,5) - I feel something weird about these notes. (3) should be moved to 01:10:161. I follow instruments

[feat.Lennox]

1. 00:20:247 (T) - Remove this green line.
2. 00:45:036 (4) - This note doesn't follow the music well. Try the pattern below or something else. left it like that until I find better way to fix it
   
3. 00:51:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Cannot read this 1/3 stream...if you really want to put a stream here, you shouldn't stack (1,2,3,4). not really
4. 01:14:582 (T) - The volume 40% is too low. Try to turn it up to 50%.
5. 00:32:721 (T) - Remove this green line.
6. 01:22:792 (T) - SV is changed while a slider. Set SV 0.50x on this green line.
7. 01:22:950 (T) - Remove this green line.

fixed timing but for notes I left it like that 'cause

[Taiko]

• 
  HP7 is too high as taiko. HP6 is fine enough. forget again, fixed

Good luck!

Suzully wrote:

[General]

• 
  Only Easy and Haku have first KIAI? How about adding it to other diffs? (especially your own normal diff)
  And the end of first KIAI is not snapped on Haku. It don't count as there aren't other flashes other then the first in this case...buy may as well do it (not a poppable reason)

[feat.Haku]

• 
  Frankly, the gap of two kinds of SV is too big and not making so good effect. And having five SVs per map is unrankable.
  I suggest you to change 2.00x SV to 1.50x, and 1.25x to 1.00x. It's a guideline that had to be changed because it said basically "you can use less or equal than three SVs, even if it don't make sense"

1. 00:11:879 (2,3,4) - I feel kinda bad flow here. Try to add a note at 00:12:510 and stack it with the top of (4). Listen better what I'm following
2. 00:15:668 (6) - Stack it correctly. It stack partly under sliderpath and sliderend and is even less visible than being stacked under sliderpath
3. 00:18:036 (T) - I know why you turned the volume up here, but 60% is too loud for me. I think 50 - 55% is good enough.
4. 00:19:142 (T) - Same reason as above, turn the volume down a bit.
5. 00:20:168 (T) - This one makes good sound! But the sound of the end of spinner is too loud. Turn it down before the spinner please.
6. 00:29:404 (2) - How about adding a repeat to this slider or adding a note at 00:29:721? No drums, plus no guitar
7. 00:42:983 (7,8,9) - These notes don't follow the music well. Try the pattern below. I'm partly follow
   
8. 00:58:458 (4,1,2) - Confusing pattern. Stack them correctly. Manually
9. 01:04:540 (1) - Unsnapped note.
10. 01:06:529 (7) - Oh player cannot read this hidden slider. Please don't put a slider like this. Sightread? Someone playing the Another/Extra level of the maò should know how to do it
11. 01:19:792 (2) - ^

those wrote:

[feat.Ota]
00:46:773 (1) - RNC Consider later
00:46:931 (3) - NC ^
01:03:352 (1) - Spacing is 2.01x, too far for a normal 1.00x. You're right!oAo But because I think this jump can still be reached by the player, so nope. But if there's someone saying like that again I will change.

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]
Delete .osb files and full submit if you aren't using a storyboard or the same storyboard across all difficulties.
What's the timing point at 64635 for? if you metion about normal and easy, the stanza move a little so to make it consistent I have to add timing

[feat.Lennox]
00:21:668 - need to add Kiai burst like you have in all other diffs. oh, I'm forget

[Taiko]
00:01:457 (1) - Spinner does not fit. A simple K at 00:01:457 will do. D better
00:20:247 (1) - Nothing goes on in the background that would tell you to map a spinner. Just have a d or k at 00:20:247. ok
00:44:405 (6) - make d. ok
00:51:036 (4) - Right now this gives a 1/4 roll. You want a 1/3 roll, so if you want to keep slider you need to decrease overall bpm. Alternatively, you can map them as notes. kddkddkddkddk would work fine, if not great, here. keep current
01:24:845 (1,1) - These don't really fit. change to something
I also notice there are places you can strategically place 1/4 drums, but you've only mapped in 1/2. Be creative, overmapping usually isn't an issue :3 it's easy taiko diff, so I won't add 1/4 or whatever

Good luck :3

Milkshake wrote:

ok, I really like the song so decided to mod~
*All of the things are suggestions. If it doesn't help at all, no needs to kudos~

Uguu~

easy
00:19:615 - note
00:31:773 (1) - I think you can make it longer, which fits the rhythm more, even though it's easy diff (http://puu.sh/xeIw) I follow drum
00:39:984 (2) - ^ the same idea. ^
01:23:266 (X)- there's a huge space here. I think you can follow the vocal, make a slider from 01:23:266 - 01:23:898 and add another one on
01:24:213 to 01:24:845 (which means you need to move the spinner and make it shorter so it would stay the same.)
if you're going to change it like that, I think soft hitsounds would fit perfectly. sorry, I do that on pupose

normal
00:42:826 (2) - make it repeats (http://puu.sh/xeO7) I follow guitar
01:04:615 (1) - add finish in the head of the slider. i think it fits because it becomes stronger after a silence. fixed
01:07:161 (6) - i think you should remove the finish from the end of the slider and put finish in the head of it. it sounds better. there's no finish
01:23:582 (X)- as i said in the easiest diff. silence is not fun, you can put 4 circles (on the white lines) from here, and add soft hitsounds if so. nope
;_;


feat.Ota
it's pretty good. nothing for this diff \o\

feat.Lennox
00:40:931 (X) - i think you should put something here. even a slider that repeat himself works good. (http://puu.sh/xeS9 something like that, maybe) maybe it's on purpose, I leave it like that
00:45:036 (4) - remove it? no
01:03:036 (2) - i think the jump here is little bit too big? not for me, but that's what i think. not really

great diff, btw.

feat.Haku
nothing at all. i think it follows the rhythm very good. ^_^

GL~(,,#ﾟДﾟ)

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

http://vgmdb.net/album/22550

because of the last rule you need to remove the "(Short ver.)", this is called " 90" ver. " ( the " means seconds )