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Ах да, забыл дать звезду <3
JauiPlaY
Hi
Some suggestions:

[General]
Move "Dream High" to Tags if it's an album name or so.

[Easy]
00:37:450 (2) - Move to x224y216.
01:03:550 (1) - I don't know why but setting a spinner here may be a little bit weird.
01:14:050 (1,1) - Bad overlapping.
01:45:250 (1) - Remove nc.
02:11:650 (1) - ^
02:18:850 (2) - Ctrl+R.

[Normal]
01:02:050 (4) - Remove whistle from the beginning and add it to the end.
01:20:050 (4) - Add whistle to the end.
01:29:650 (1) - Remove nc.
01:30:850 (4) - Add nc.
02:23:650 (4) - Same as 01:02:050 (4).
02:40:450 (4,5) - Should be like this.[Hard]
00:21:250 (1) - Move to 00:21:550, ends on 00:23:050.
01:03:550 (1) - Move to 01:03:400.
01:17:800 (T) - Useless timing point.
01:53:650 (4,5) - 02:39:100 (T) - Useless timing point.

That's all. Good luck~

Topic Starter
IchiGUN
JauiPlaY, thanks :3
kosiga

JauiPlaY wrote:

[Normal]
01:02:050 (4) - Remove whistle from the beginning and add it to the end. sorry,I do not match me ;x;
01:20:050 (4) - Add whistle to the end. ^
01:29:650 (1) - Remove nc. It is the NC of the opening of KIAI TIME. I also put the NC, do not feel strange
01:30:850 (4) - Add nc. I think that the NC is unnecessary even if I watch other similar parts
02:23:650 (4) - Same as 01:02:050 (4). sorry,I do not match me ;x;
02:40:450 (4,5) - Should be like this.good. i change itATTACH[dfsdef.PNG]


thank you~ :oops:

Download: Sun Ye - Maybe (IchiGUN) [Normal].osu
Yucali
Hi, mod as you requested in my queue!~

I have to say that I love all the song you're choosing for you maps XD
Anyway, let's begin!

General

Remove the osb if there isn't a sb. :3


Easy


00:16:450 (3) - NC?

00:17:650 (1) - Remove NC

00:19:450 (4) - NC

00:20:050 (1) - Remove NC

01:20:650 (2) - Make a weird rhytm...how about let it finish at 01:21:250 ?

01:35:650 (3) - NC?

01:36:850 (1) - Remove NC

01:38:650 (2) - NC


Normal

01:17:350 (2,3) - Uhm, why don't you move the slider? Maybe just to flip it vertically and put it under the ending of the other slider.

01:35:050 (5) - NC

02:11:050 (6) - NC

02:18:850 (4) - Move 2 grid down.

02:23:650 (4) - Move 2 grid up and 2 left.

02:27:250 - Why don't you let end the kiai time here?


Hard

I think it's fine.



That's all. Hope it helped, good luck with your map ♥
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

Yucali wrote:

I have to say that I love all the song you're choosing for you maps XD
thaaanks O(≧∇≦)O
kosiga

Yucali wrote:

Normal

01:17:350 (2,3) - Uhm, why don't you move the slider? Maybe just to flip it vertically and put it under the ending of the other slider. sorry, no change ;x;

01:35:050 (5) - NC vocal follow NC. I do not feel funny :D

02:11:050 (6) - NC ^

02:18:850 (4) - Move 2 grid down. why? when I changed it, DS becomes 0.9x :(

02:23:650 (4) - Move 2 grid up and 2 left. sorry, no change ;x; I do not look bad to me even if I do not put it parallel

02:27:250 - Why don't you let end the kiai time here? match it with other diff. However, I think that I may change this because it is a guest diff. I hear the opinion of other people a little more
thank you~ :oops:
Kuma-san
Хард
00:26:050 (3) - убрать репит
00:26:500 (4) - ноту
00:26:800 (5) - ноту
00:28:300 (5) - ноту
00:28:900 - ноту
00:31:150 - http://puu.sh/k3wF так сделай
00:36:550 - слайдер с репитом сюда с красного тика по красный
00:54:400 (2) - смени форму
Хватит.иначе ремап сделаю
Остальные диффы вроде ничего
S h i a
Hi o/
mod as you requested in my queue o/
Nice K-POP

[Overall]
clean

[Easy]
02:05:650 (1) - let the spinner start from 02:05:350? ending time no change.
Yeah that's all. nice sliders.nice and clean.

[Normal]
01:20:050 (4) - newcombo?
Man. nice.

[Hard]
01:53:650 (4,5) - this would fit music better

I love this song. :D

need any Insane diff ? :P
kosiga

S h i a wrote:

[Normal]
01:20:050 (4) - newcombo? fixed~
Man. nice.
thank you~ :oops:

Download: Sun Ye - Maybe (IchiGUN) [Normal].osu
Topic Starter
IchiGUN

S h i a wrote:

need any Insane diff ? :P
Thanks for mod :3 and yes, why not ;)
Kawayi Rika
Hi ~ IchiGUN ~ :)

Mod time for my Queue ~

Red : Must be fixed
Pink : Should be fixed
Purple : Just suggestions

[General]


  1. 02:27:400 - Remove this break time,really not need this is too short.

[Hard]


  1. 00:46:600 - KIAI start point must be on white line.

That's all ~ pretty nice mapset ~

Good luck ~ ;)
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Kawayi Rika, thank you :33
Hinsvar
Oh hi.

Time to... mod now.

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General
  1. Everything looks fine. To the maps.
>Easy
  1. 00:20:050 (1) - Clap at the other end of the slider?
  2. 01:05:650 - End the kiai time here?
>Normal
  1. 01:05:650 - Same as Easy.
  2. 02:42:850 - I think there's no need to lower the volume up to 20%. Remove the inherited timing point here?
>Hard
  1. 00:45:250 (1,2,3,4) - Set an inherited timing point and adjust the volume to 60% here, then add clap to "1" and "3", maybe?
  2. 00:55:150 (3) - Clap?
  3. 00:55:600 (5) - ^
That was pretty good. Should be able to get bubbled.

Good luck on the way 8-)
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Hinsvar, thanks a lot =^^=
kosiga

Hinsvar wrote:

>Normal
  1. 01:05:650 - Same as Easy. yea :3 change it
  2. 02:42:850 - I think there's no need to lower the volume up to 20%. Remove the inherited timing point here? sorry, i want to reduce the sound
thank you ~ :oops:

Download: Sun Ye - Maybe (IchiGUN) [Normal].osu
BeatofIke
Normal mod request from my modding queue. :)

[General]
None.

[Easy]
-When doing blanklets, make sure your distance snap remains constant. I noticed that your distance spacing varies from 0.8x, 0.85x, and 0.9x, or somewhere in between. Although AIMod didn't detect this, so it's probably okay in this case.
-OD +1? For better difficulty spread.
-00:57:250 (2) - blanklet this slider better.
-01:02:050 (1) - ^ Also make it blanklet with 01:15:850 (2).
-01:16:450 (1) - ^ Also make it symmetrical with 01:20:650 (2).
-01:20:650 (2) - Blanklet with 01:20:650 (2).
-02:21:250 (1) - Blanklet with 02:23:050 (2).
-02:39:250 (1) - This slider is almost touching the drain meter.

[Normal]
-00:22:150 (1) - Insert break time after this spinner.
-02:26:050 (3) - Insert break time?

[Hard]
-None, but could use some polarity, so it's more readable.

Pretty good map indeed. 8-)
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
BeatofIke thank you so much :D
B2IN
[General]

How about this? (slider sound) ( http://puu.sh/kSEj ) ( http://puu.sh/kSEh )
[Easy]

fine

[Normal]

fine' v '

[Hard]

Kiai should start on a white tick (rule) 01:29:800

01:23:950 (1) - move to here 01:24:550

01:54:850 (1) - spacing


bye ~ :D
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
thx B2IN :3
Muya
[Easy]:
many zigzag sliders. hard to newbie player imo

[Normal]
01:29:500 - not using section. delete this
01:48:700 - ^

[Hard]:
00:26:050 (3) - please try this http://puu.sh/kYp5
00:36:250 - add circle to triangle's center? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/266608
01:03:400 (1) - end at 01:05:650, also please add some hitsound
01:29:650 - 2nd kiai start here
kosiga

Muya wrote:

[Normal]
01:29:500 - not using section. delete this タイミングズレ対策で1tick前に置くようにしています。これがあっても特に問題無いかと思います。
01:48:700 - ^
ありがとうございます~ :oops:
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Muya-san, ありがとう (ノ・_・)‥‥…━━━━━☆ピーー
Kryptogram
Hi There Here is My Mod

General:

- Inconsistency in Kiai Times:

- [Easy] :

Kiai #1: Starts on 00:46:450, ends on 01:05:650
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:29:650, ends on 01:48:850
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:08:050, ends on 02:27:250

- [Hard] :

Kiai #1: Starts on 00:46:450, ends on 01:05:650
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:29:800, ends on 01:48:850
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:08:050, ends on 02:27:250

- [Normal] :

Kiai #1: Starts on 00:46:450, ends on 01:05:650
Kiai #2: Starts on 01:29:650, ends on 01:48:850
Kiai #3: Starts on 02:08:050, ends on 02:27:250


But i think that Guest diffs can have different kia Times :P

Easy

00:06:850 (1) - Add whistle at the begin
00:17:650 (1) - Add whistle
01:03:550 (1) - Move this spinner to 01:03:850 (x) and end it here 01:05:650 (x) due is to close from 01:02:050 (1)
02:20:650 (3) - Miss the clap add it
02:27:850 (1) - ^

Normal

00:06:850 (1) - Add whistle at the begin
02:05:350 (1) - Add clap at the end
02:06:550 (2) - ^
02:27:850 (x) - Add note whit clap for empty space
02:29:050 (x) - ^

Hard

00:33:100 (1) - Remove clap at the end
00:36:850 (2) - Remove clap, normal-hitsounds sounds better alone
00:38:650 (1) - Add clap
00:39:250 (3) - Same as 00:38:650 (1)
02:27:850 (x) - Add note whit clap for empty space
02:29:050 (x) - ^

Nice mapset :) Hope it was helpful

Good Luck !
kosiga

[Te][Amo] wrote:

Normal

00:06:850 (1) - Add whistle at the begin sorry, no change. Here is a quiet sound
02:05:350 (1) - Add clap at the end this is intentional. Gets in the way of vocals when I put it here
02:06:550 (2) - ^ ^
02:27:850 (x) - Add note whit clap for empty space sorry, Others do not match rhythm if they put it here.
02:29:050 (x) - ^ ^
thank you~ :oops:
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
[Te][Amo] thaaanks :3
SapphireGhost
Here we go, finally modded something again.

[General]
- I'd strongly advise changing the difficulty names to [BCI's Easy], [kosiga's Normal] and [Hard] so that players downloading through osu!direct can see who made what difficulty.
- Consider timing the little tune in the beginning, but it's not necessary (asked a BAT).
- Just a note: New combo placement seems a bit strange through all difficulties, usually one per measure or lyric works well.

[Hard]
02:27:850 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - It seems you have two red combos in a row here, try to fix the second red (1) and make it blue.

[Normal]
- I probably would have used a slightly higher slider velocity to prevent overlap between notes, but it's late for that now. I'd advise doing that in the future, though, it looks a bit better.
01:58:450 (1,2,3) - These curves seem really "squished", try to make them more smooth like this.
02:34:450 (1) - It sounds a lot better to have this spinner end on the downbeat at 02:36:850.

[Easy]
- Throughout the map, beat blankets were a bit off, and changing them a bit could really improve the look of the map. For example: This to this. It's not a big problem, but something to consider. There's also this guide if you haven't read it already! Most else looked fine, good job.

Alright. Not many problems, PM for re-check after fixes.
kosiga

SapphireGhost wrote:

[General]
- I'd strongly advise changing the difficulty names to [BCI's Easy], [kosiga's Normal] and [Hard] so that players downloading through osu!direct can see who made what difficulty. I entrust Ichigun
- Just a note: New combo placement seems a bit strange through all difficulties, usually one per measure or lyric works well. ;x;

[Normal]
- I probably would have used a slightly higher slider velocity to prevent overlap between notes, but it's late for that now. I'd advise doing that in the future, though, it looks a bit better. Easy uses 1.00 and Hard uses 1.40. so it thinks that balance is good that I use 1.2 @x@
01:58:450 (1,2,3) - These curves seem really "squished", try to make them more smooth like this. hm... ok. fixed
02:34:450 (1) - It sounds a lot better to have this spinner end on the downbeat at 02:36:850. 02:32:050 (5) - quiet in this end. and 02:39:250 (1) - quiet in this start. so 02:34:450 (1) - also had better be quiet here IMO. and when I move, I think that an interval to 02:39:250 (1) becomes too much vacant ><
Thank you~ :oops:

Download: Sun Ye - Maybe (IchiGUN) [Normal].osu
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
SapphireGhost thanks :3 all fixed
SapphireGhost
Added one more tag over IRC and double-checked stuff. Everything looks good now.
Bubbled!
IceBeam
ranked

tiny irc mod
13:33 <IceBeam> : в харде,01:17:650 (6,1) - вот тут не очень подходит прыжок мне кажется
13:33 <IceBeam> : не то чтобы сложный просто ни к месту
13:33 <IchiGUN> : oook
13:34 <IceBeam> : 01:50:950 (6,7) - вот тут может сделать чтоб они не слипались?
13:35 <IchiGUN> : так они вроде и не слипаются Оо
13:35 <IceBeam> : ну немного
13:35 <IchiGUN> : 1мм зазорчик везде )
13:35 <IceBeam> : хотя там и дальше слайдер
13:35 <IceBeam> : ну ладно,тогда оставим
13:36 <IchiGUN> : =)
13:37 <IceBeam> : в остальном все чисто,приятно удивил :о ну в общем правь тогда тот джамп и апдейть
13:37 <IchiGUN> : спасиюки ) уже поправил
13:37 <IchiGUN> : сейчас залью
13:38 <IchiGUN> : готово )
13:41 <IceBeam> : хорошо,только скажи жанр и еще нашел что у этой певицы имена разные - Min Sun Ye, Sun Ye,Sun
13:41 <IchiGUN> : проблем не было, так как песенка спокойная ^^ да и ритм не сложный, а вот следующая мапа более
13:41 <IchiGUN> : грандиозная :D через недельки 3 покажу :3
13:41 <IchiGUN> : K-pop
13:42 <IceBeam> : просто не нашел ранкд мапок ее
13:42 <IceBeam> : поэтому спросил про имя
13:42 <IchiGUN> : все её Sun Ye называют
13:42 <IchiGUN> : =)
13:42 <IchiGUN> : сам честно точно не знаю )
13:43 <IceBeam> : там просто еще Sunye в вики
13:43 <IceBeam> : ну ладно
13:43 <IceBeam> : Sun Ye красивее всего :D
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Thanks a lot IceBeam :D
BCI
грацую ж \:D/
kosiga
(●ゝ∀・●)♪♪
Kawayi Rika
Omedeto ~ :)
Aurele
Oh, Congratulation !
Topic Starter
IchiGUN
Black_Cherry_Ita спасяб :3
kosiga ありがとう ^_~
Kawayi Rika 감사합니다 =^^=
Gabex3 thanks =)
Nichiyouki
Congrats~ :)
Akemi_Homura
Congratz~! ><
SeeU_old
Awesome beatmap !
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