1. Move "Wonder Girls" from the Title into Tags. Because the singer in this song only Sun Ye, it's right? after this, you must fullsubmit and change the forum's title too (:
2. I'm not good in timing, but I think the offset is 5,462ms (-188) because I saw in the kiai is a bit late. also, if you do this, you must resnap all timing section, resnap the slider length and resnap the notes.
3. You must make a Normal difficulty because from Easy to Hard is too far. The mapset must consistent and balance. This is avaible in the rules.

1. 00:19:450 (x) - why not add note in here? the vocal still running in here. or I suggest to make (3) into slider. following this vocal that make easier to read by new players.
2. 00:39:250 (1) - add finish in slider's end? make combination finish in here is more better to heard when play imo, since you add finish in 00:35:650 (1) too.
3. 01:03:850 (1) - this spinner should begin in 01:03:550, since the vocal begin in there
4. 01:18:850 (1) - remove all finish sound in here. the song doesn't fit with finish because the song is in 'lower' section
5. 00:20:050 (1) - same as above, but in here, just remove the finish in slider's end
6. 01:25:450 (2) - (nazi) make it blanketing the (1) more perfectly: x:364 y:288
7. 01:36:250 (4) - add clap in here for consistency hitsounding the clap.
8. 01:44:050 (4) - add finish in here?
9. 01:46:450 (1) - this spinner isn't fit with the song. Try to map it into some notes.
10. 02:12:850 (2) - add finish in here. That will make combination finish sound with 02:16:450 (3)'s end.
11. 02:20:650 (x) - here, add note for following the vocal and clap sound. of course, for easier read by new players.
12. 02:42:850 (x) - add note in here for easier read when play

1. 00:08:050 (5) - the clap in slider's beginning is weird to heard when I test. the clap should in the end of slider.
2. 00:10:450 (5) - same as above
3. 00:09:100 (1) - add whistle in slider's end, because you already added whistle too in 00:11:650 (2)
4. 00:12:850 (6) - here, same think as 00:08:050 (5).
5. 00:15:250 (6) - ^
6. 00:16:300 (1) - add whistle in slider's end? in this pattern is felt too silent imo
7. 00:19:450 (1) - add whistle? same reason as above
8. 00:26:050 (2) - ah, clap in beginning is uncomfortable to me orz. can remove that?
9. 00:27:850 (6) - add clap in here?
10. 00:28:450 (1) - remove the clap in here, also add clap in 00:29:050 (2)'s slider beginning and remove clap in (3). finally, add clap again in 00:30:250 (6).
11. 00:32:650 (4) - add clap in here?
12. 00:35:050 (4) - ^
13. 01:04:450 (1) - same think as 01:46:450 (1) in easy difficulty
14. 01:46:450 (4) - add new combo in here?
15. 01:53:650 (4) - add finish in slider's beginning?
16. 01:55:300 (2) - I don't think this circle fit if put in blue tick, I felt more easier to click when it's avaible in the white tick
17. 01:58:450 (2) - add finish in here?
18. 02:04:900 (4) - same think as 01:55:300
19. 02:16:000 (6) - remove the clap in here, because the sound is weird and you didn't add that from before
20. 02:24:850 (4) - add new combo in here?
21. 02:39:250 (1,2,3,4,1) - sorry I said this, but the pattern is same with 02:29:650 (1...1) and 02:34:450 (1....1) and that make feel the players is bored. Try to make another pattern

1. 02:44:050 (1) - same spinner suggestion as in hard..

1. 00:55:450 (4) - move to (300,120)..?
2. 01:23:650 (3) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot219-2.jpg feels it should turn here o.o

1. 00:24:400 (2) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot218-2.jpg this slider should move 1/4 later like this (listen in 50% speed)
2. 00:25:600 (3) - you can add a note here, sounds better imo
3. 00:28:900 (2) - move 1/4 earlier (as in the music)
4. 00:35:050 (4) - this clap is not need as it sounds awkward in slow part of the music
5. 02:45:250 (1) - how about ending at 02:47:650 and with a 5% volume green line? It fits the
6. slow music I think

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

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1. 00:55:450 (4) - move to (300,120)..? move to 300,124
2. 01:23:650 (3) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot219-2.jpg feels it should turn here o.o ok. change it~

nekonomitsu wrote:

Hey Ichi~
Star

nich95 wrote:

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02:11:050 (6) - Add clap fixed~

Leorda wrote:

Hello

Hard
00:07:150 (2) - Remove this note?
00:27:250 (4) - New combo?
00:28:450 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:29:650 (3) - New combo?
01:28:750 (1) - New combo for preventing of spinner bug

Was planning to bubble this, but not old map, sorry

winber1 wrote:

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01:28:450 (1) - just for consistency purpose you could use the same rhyhtm as 00:45:250 (1,2) - I also kinda like that better I have tried a variety of patterns. so no change ;x;
01:45:250 (5) - this is usually confusing for beginners. If you are adamant about hte placement i don't mind if you keep it, but i think it's better of like http://puu.sh/jdEp or something I consider the spinner, has put in this position. Also want to hear other people's opinion. If confused, I think about a change
02:32:050 - use normal hitnormal for the beginning of this slider? There is surely the drum sound there. but I think it is better for whistle, in this
02:41:650 - ^? ^

Zorlok_ wrote:

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すべてがいいです。ヒッツ音が好きです。 :3 ありがとう :3

hillaryzx wrote:

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None

3er123 wrote:

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00:49:450 (5) - удали нк sorry, no change. because there is vocal follow NC
00:50:050 (1) - ^ ^
00:56:050 (1) - можно сделать обычный волнистый как 00:57:250 (2) - same way as this 00:46:450 (1)
01:02:050 (4) - удали нк same as above
01:03:250 (1) - ^ ^
01:23:650 (3) - тут можно сделать волнистый This is intentional
01:29:650 (1) - зачем тут нк? put the NC at the beginning of the kiai
01:53:650 (1) - выглядит чууть чуть криво I do not have no problem. I want a recipe if you think that this is strange

JauiPlaY wrote:

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01:02:050 (4) - Remove whistle from the beginning and add it to the end. sorry,I do not match me ;x;
01:20:050 (4) - Add whistle to the end. ^
01:29:650 (1) - Remove nc. It is the NC of the opening of KIAI TIME. I also put the NC, do not feel strange
01:30:850 (4) - Add nc. I think that the NC is unnecessary even if I watch other similar parts
02:23:650 (4) - Same as 01:02:050 (4). sorry,I do not match me ;x;
02:40:450 (4,5) - Should be like this.good. i change itATTACH[dfsdef.PNG]

Yucali wrote:

I have to say that I love all the song you're choosing for you maps XD

Yucali wrote:

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♦ 01:17:350 (2,3) - Uhm, why don't you move the slider? Maybe just to flip it vertically and put it under the ending of the other slider. sorry, no change ;x;

♦ 01:35:050 (5) - NC vocal follow NC. I do not feel funny

♦ 02:11:050 (6) - NC ^

♦ 02:18:850 (4) - Move 2 grid down. why? when I changed it, DS becomes 0.9x

♦ 02:23:650 (4) - Move 2 grid up and 2 left. sorry, no change ;x; I do not look bad to me even if I do not put it parallel

♦ 02:27:250 - Why don't you let end the kiai time here? match it with other diff. However, I think that I may change this because it is a guest diff. I hear the opinion of other people a little more

S h i a wrote:

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01:20:050 (4) - newcombo? fixed~
Man. nice.

S h i a wrote:

need any Insane diff ?

1. Everything looks fine. To the maps.

1. 00:20:050 (1) - Clap at the other end of the slider?
2. 01:05:650 - End the kiai time here?

1. 01:05:650 - Same as Easy.
2. 02:42:850 - I think there's no need to lower the volume up to 20%. Remove the inherited timing point here?

1. 00:45:250 (1,2,3,4) - Set an inherited timing point and adjust the volume to 60% here, then add clap to "1" and "3", maybe?
2. 00:55:150 (3) - Clap?
3. 00:55:600 (5) - ^

Hinsvar wrote:

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1. 01:05:650 - Same as Easy. yea :3 change it
2. 02:42:850 - I think there's no need to lower the volume up to 20%. Remove the inherited timing point here? sorry, i want to reduce the sound

[General]

How about this? (slider sound) ( http://puu.sh/kSEj ) ( http://puu.sh/kSEh )

[Easy]

fine

[Normal]

fine' v '

[Hard]

Kiai should start on a white tick (rule) 01:29:800

01:23:950 (1) - move to here 01:24:550

01:54:850 (1) - spacing

bye ~

Muya wrote:

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01:29:500 - not using section. delete this タイミングズレ対策で1tick前に置くようにしています。これがあっても特に問題無いかと思います。
01:48:700 - ^

[Te][Amo] wrote:

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00:06:850 (1) - Add whistle at the begin sorry, no change. Here is a quiet sound
02:05:350 (1) - Add clap at the end this is intentional. Gets in the way of vocals when I put it here
02:06:550 (2) - ^ ^
02:27:850 (x) - Add note whit clap for empty space sorry, Others do not match rhythm if they put it here.
02:29:050 (x) - ^ ^

SapphireGhost wrote:

[General]
- I'd strongly advise changing the difficulty names to [BCI's Easy], [kosiga's Normal] and [Hard] so that players downloading through osu!direct can see who made what difficulty. I entrust Ichigun
- Just a note: New combo placement seems a bit strange through all difficulties, usually one per measure or lyric works well. ;x;

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- I probably would have used a slightly higher slider velocity to prevent overlap between notes, but it's late for that now. I'd advise doing that in the future, though, it looks a bit better. Easy uses 1.00 and Hard uses 1.40. so it thinks that balance is good that I use 1.2 @x@
01:58:450 (1,2,3) - These curves seem really "squished", try to make them more smooth like this. hm... ok. fixed
02:34:450 (1) - It sounds a lot better to have this spinner end on the downbeat at 02:36:850. 02:32:050 (5) - quiet in this end. and 02:39:250 (1) - quiet in this start. so 02:34:450 (1) - also had better be quiet here IMO. and when I move, I think that an interval to 02:39:250 (1) becomes too much vacant ><