Netsukawa wrote:

Mod and Mod ~

Easy

1. Hit Object
   
   
   1. 00:20:078 (1) - Delete New Combo here. I think need NC to here.
   2. 00:22:067 (7) - New Combo Here and 00:23:393 (1) - Delete New Combo here. ok
   3. 01:06:819 (2,3) - Unstacked it ?, It will make new player confused. sorry.

1. Hit Sound
   
   
   1. 00:17:095 (2) - Add Clap instead Finish ? ok
   2. 00:17:426 (1) - Add Finish ? ^
   3. 00:55:879 (3) - Remove Finish ? ^
   4. 01:02:509 (1) - Delete Finish and add Finish at the end of the slider ^
   5. 01:09:802 (4,1) - Add Whistle ^
   6. 01:05:161 (1) - Delete whistle at reverse and add Whistle at end of slider ^
   7. 01:13:780 (2) - Add Whistle at end of the slider ^
   8. 01:16:266 (1) - Remove Whistle at start of the slider ^
   9. 01:21:073 (2) - Add Whistle at start and remove Whistle at reverse ^

Normal

1. Hit Object
   
   
   1. 00:27:371 (3,4,5,6,7) - Too confused ? I think it's fine ><
   2. 00:43:946 (1) - Remove New Combo ok
   3. 00:47:924 (1,2,3,4) - Change to slider ? Hmm,sorry no change

1. Hit Sound
   
   
   1. Fine

Rika

1. Hit Object
   
   
   1. Fine

1. Hit Sound
   
   
   1. Fine

Hope my mod is helpful ~

hillaryzx wrote:

Hi, Kawayi Rika

Here's my mod

Easy

00:18:421(2) - I think this note is not suitable to put here. Try to remove it.. sorry,no change.
00:22:067(4) - add finish at the beginning of the slider ok
00:38:310 - add a circle here? Hmm,a bit hard,so keep it.
01:05:161(1) - add finish here too (the beginning of the slider) ok
01:06:819(2,3) - make this 2 circle into 1 single slider sorry,no change.
01:28:366(2) - here, add finish. already added.

Normal

AR -1 (is this a normal diff.? I sense no... this could be hard diff to me) High BPM song for this,so I think AR5 is fun.

00:11:459(3) - add finish at very end of the slider ok
00:21:404(1) - remove note after this slider and extent this slider to 21:901 (by +1 repeat to the slider) Hmm,I think is ok now.
00:30:023(4,5,6) - can make these notes into a mini slider? sorry,no change.
00:40:300(5,6) - the circle and the slider are confusing, try to space them out. DS it's fine to this.
00:50:410(4,5) - make this circles into a short slider sorry.
00:58:531(4) - repeat +2 and remove circle(5) ^
01:27:703(1,2,3,4) - try make a slider with these notes ^

Kawayi Rika

00:12:122(1) - make it like this? - http://puu.sh/izZn I think this is phonic diff.


Rika

Nice!!


Nevertheless, this map is good. Also, star
Now, I'll take my leave...

LKs wrote:

as pre mod request via in-game PM, my mod here

Genera

啥都木

Easy

00:18:421 (2) - 这clap节奏和刚才的不合 歌曲原本每个小节/loop有8条线 你本来是37clap 这加在4上 所以违和 去掉clap了
00:28:034 (1) - 同上问题 这次是放在了1上 同上
00:28:034 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这之后的一组clap单听不违和 但这属于另一种loop 你只能选一种 改了些
00:36:653 (1) - 这有什么理由不加clap 没 漏掉了.
00:38:642 (1) - 又一个新loop 这里又放在了2上 lol
00:46:598 (2) - 结尾clap 好
00:52:896 (4) - 这里又突然换了loop类型 本来clap应该放在前面slider end 上 好
00:52:896 (4,1,2,1,2) - 但这之后的单听又不违和 orz
00:59:194 (5) - 这种1/2 slider不要都clap满 不然无法突出强弱 好 删了尾部.
01:08:476 (3) - kiai没clap的时候薄弱无比 进入的不合时宜 加了clap.

我可以猜你是故意想做丰富音效但意识不够 也可以猜你是根本没意识做的 总之规规矩矩就好

Normal

00:22:067 (3) - 折返处clap 事实上finish要加在尾部 也就是老外们喜欢说的downbeat 加了clap和尾部finish.
00:27:371 (3,4,5,6,7) - 1/2的181BPM5连打对某些人会不会比较尴尬 这挺好 我觉的.
00:31:349 (1) - shape 这怎么了？orz
00:47:924 (1,2,3,4,5) - 做成弧形吧 懒了
01:06:487 (3,4) - 这事实上很好 但你之后没有再用 导致这里成了废梗 节奏也不对了 不知道用在哪.

长slider用爽了的后果就是clap的不连贯性 当然能发现并听着不爽的人也不多 所以能一直存活到现在

日卡

00:11:377 (X) - 事实上这里的鼓一开始敲你不跟着敲在edit感觉很悲剧 但打起来还行 额 就这样吧.
00:27:703 (6,7,8) - 这种跳有难度 但没有流畅度 还好.
01:04:664 (3) - 事实上视频里律队都在打鼓 空出一块很空虚 这先保留下,看别人怎么说.
01:28:366 (1) - 参照phonic那条 就这样吧,画slider无力.

虽然你说你不想比但我还是摆脱不了你这难度和TV size 甚至now, thank you[Insane] 前奏部分的既视感 但愿不是有意为之

难得说这么多我可以再说点 问题在于
1.音效选曲上创新不够 甚至不如full ver的有爆发力
2.音效使用上缺乏系统性 节奏混乱 高低频音效缺少呼应 转换生硬
3.节奏与slider+note的匹配不足 该用note的地方有些用slider一笔带过

我是新手 www ~ 谢谢这么多讲解 ><

坐等ranked

Slanox wrote:

Hi hi.

Wow, this song is really familiar to me! Too loud!
I don't mod guest difficulties. Sorry.

Here is my mod :

• 
  [Overall]:

1. Try to make more esthetic pattern in your difficulties.
   
   [Easy]:
   
   
2. 00:10:796 (1,2,3) : This pattern is a bit ugly. Try to make this.
   The patterns are pretty enjoyable to watch. sorry,I like this.
3. 00:17:426 (1,2,3) : The slider (3) is not the same as the (1) : look.
   It's easy to fix : copies (1) and replaces it with the (3). Like that. ok,fixed.
   
   [Normal]:
   
   
4. Alright. This difficulty is a bit hard to [Normal].
   Do not make things too complicated, as deathstreams, hidden notes, etc..
   And then tries to go below 4 star. For here, in the listing, they indicate that it's insane.
   I refer to this kind of thing :
   
   Hard stream :
   1-
   2-
   3-
   
   [Hidden notes]
   1-
   2-
   3-
   
   Okay. I think you should try to change that.
5. 00:29:692 (3,4) : I do not feel it too. As well keep a symmetrical pattern. If people to say again,I'll try change this.
   I suggest that you delete these notes to make this pattern.
   If you apply this remark, do not forget to put the (3) selection in reverse. (For spacing.) ok,nice idea.
6. 00:37:979 (3,4) : These sliders are a bit hidden. I suggest you move them to ensure they are seen better.
   Try that. Do not forget the spacing between (4) and (1). I think not too hard for this.
   
   [Rika]:
   
   
7. Nothing to say about this difficulty. Fairly well mapset.

Hm. This anime made me feel so much x).
Pretty mapset!
Good luck! ~

nich95 wrote:

Hi, Kawayi Rika

From my modding queue

[Easy]
00:18:421 (2) - Add clap here nope.
00:34:664 (2) - ^ in the end of slider ok
00:35:327 (3) - Move clap sound from here to 00:35:658 ^
01:06:819 (2,3) - I think that it may be difficult for Easy diff. If people to say again I'll change this.
01:12:122 (2,3) - ^ but this is unlikely to have problems. ^

[Normal]
00:29:692 (3,4) - If you want to make here is symmetric. I suggest to change here is a slider, then make symmetry with (1). Part (5) and (6) placed at the end of the above slide. ok

[Rika]
00:22:399 (4) - Add finish here? ok
00:28:034 (8) - ^ ^
00:45:935 (1) - Move finish sound from here to 00:46:598 (1). ^
01:15:769 (1) - Add finish here. ^

That's all, that I can find them.
nice map and I like this song, star

Good luck.

1. 00:59:194 (5) - add clap at end. I think add clap sound much better
2. 01:08:145 (2) - add clap

1. 00:27:371 (3,4,6,7) - change to 2 sldiers , this is really too hard to play for newbies
2. 00:46:266 (3) - This circle is very hard to see for newbies. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/254508
3. 00:47:924 (1,2,3,4) - change to 2 sldiers , this is really too hard to play for newbies

1. 00:45:935 (4) - スライダーの後ろの部分にwhistle追加！
2. 00:51:570 (5) - whistle追加！
3. 00:56:874 (4) - ^

1. 00:32:343 (6) - This slider is hidden by 00:32:012 (5) - slider. very hard to see
2. 00:45:935 (7) - add whistle at end. I think add whistle sound much better
3. 00:51:570 (8) - add whistle at beginning.
4. 00:56:874 (6) - ^

1. fine!! Nice diff= =+

JauiPlaY wrote:

HI
一些建议

[General]
这mp3听起来质量怎么这么差... 找不到别的了
comboburst太迷你了... >w<

[Easy]
00:50:576 (3) - Finish 改了
00:55:879 (3) - ^ ^
01:01:183 (3) - ^ ^
另外加个转盘避免同分... 不知道哪加好

[Normal]
转盘转盘... 同上


[Rika]
01:17:426 (1,2) - Ctrl+R. 好

Roddie wrote:

Easy

Looks alright from what I'm seeing.

Normal

1. Perhaps this map would play better if you decrease the Approach Rate by 1. I think high BPM with this song ~ so no.
2. 00:27:703 (4, 5)-I suggest switching these so it can be a pattern of slider to slider to note. You know, something like this? A note in between two 1/2 sliders is a bit difficult in a Normal difficulty in my opinion. ok,fixed

Kana's Taiko Oni

Clears out alright.

phonic

1. 01:17:592 (2, 3)-You know, a whistle on the 2nd note sounds better than whistle on the 3rd note. Consider removing the note from the 3rd note and add a whistle on the 2nd note. ok
2. 01:18:918 (2, 3)-^ ^

Spinboxer

1. 01:04:498 (1, 1)-Putting new combos on these really isn't necessary from what I'm seeing. So, consider removing those. ok

Rika

1. 01:14:277 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6)-Pretty much told Rika to use a note placement like this. Courtesy of Kurai for suggesting it. (: already changed.

And that's about it. Call me back so I can recheck it.



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