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Larval Stage Planning - Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!! TV S

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L_P
1,370 posts
Joined July 2011
L_P
[weiren's ass]

07,679 move closer?
24,709 move to note 5's position
32,473 note 1 and note 2 exchange position
35,826 change to note style
58,591 move further?
103,709 add note same as position of note 2
110,591 move further？


[weiren]

31,414 slider ends at 31,767
32,297 note change to 32,120
32,650 slider change to 32,473 ( offbeat.... although it fit the song, but it doesnt fit the rhythm. if you ever played the anime beatmap pack you will know what i mean)
49,944 slider change to 49,767 end at 50,120
50,473 add note

thats all! STAR!
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Megurine Luka：
[Normal]
00:43:767 (2) - 放在00:43:591 然后拉长到00:44:122怎样
Fixed
00:44:826 (1) - 缩到00:45:537
Fixed
00:56:120 (2) - 1 grid up
做这个的时候我没开Grid Snap LOL
01:00:532 (1) - 这个slider的时间点真的感觉很奇怪..不过我试了一下1/4好像找不到特别合适的点._.
Fixed

据说有对diff的start point是否一致很看重的MAT/BAT。如果是这样的话建议NORMAL和HARD都改到和这个diff一样的开始点
我把开头一段给去掉了
00:45:532 (2) - 缩短一半吧...这里前后都很跟vocal就这里不怎么合感觉很奇怪
Fixed
00:58:591 (4) - 这个音量有点重了
Fixed
01:12:532 (1) - ^
Fixed
L_P：
07,679 move closer?
This part were deleted-0-
24,709 move to note 5's position
It's fine now
32,473 note 1 and note 2 exchange position
It's fine now I think, If anyone points this out again, I will fix this
35,826 change to note style
Fixed
58,591 move further?
It's fine now
103,709 add note same as position of note 2
It's fine now I think, If anyone points this out again, I will fix this
110,591 move further？
It's fine now
Thank you for help :)
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
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Magical Pokie
358 posts
Joined August 2010
Magical Pokie
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kanpakyin
Global Moderator
4,236 posts
Joined June 2010
kanpakyin
Hi!
Mod requested by tutuhaha
都是意見而已,不同意的話可無視之.

[General]
  1. 我建議把一開始的部分都map掉..timing我測了,80%準.如果改的話要記得re-snap note和綠線阿,先看mod
    BPM//Offset:
    83.97//5203
    170//10939
[Normal]
  1. 00:12:356 (2) - 無論在聽配樂,vocal,在各方面都顯示了這個slider應該在1/2後結束!如果是因為要對稱才做成這樣我覺得不太值w
  2. 00:19:591 (x) - 其實Hard的想法很好,在00:19:767 - barek才開始..
  3. 00:37:061 (3) - 我在想在這裏加new cobmo會不會比後面好 :/ 要不這裏加,00:38:473 (1) - 這裏也加把 xD
  4. 00:42:003 (1) - 說真的,這個slider略醜..
  5. 00:47:650 ~ 00:52:591 (x) - 可以嘗試在這部分加一點whistle,感覺現在的hitsound比較單調 :/
  6. 01:10:944 (x) - 這個加和1/2 slider和一個reverse?配合音樂
  7. 01:18:709 (1,2,3,4) - 麻,這種排版其實比其他的pattern間距是會比較大的,建議換個pattern,而且這種pattern可能會誤導新手..(因為你沒有E,所以要在這個難度考慮新手的能力)
[tutuhaha's Hard-]
  1. 我不知道身麼原因要在Hard後面加個"-" 請rename to "tutuhaha's Hard"而且貌似現在也不允許加+/-了
  2. 00:43:856 (3) - 為甚麼不在這裏做個3/4節奏?其實我覺得vocal有點off..你自己決定= =
  3. 00:48:709 (2) - 如果把這個note推前1/2會舒服多,00:48:709 - 畢竟這裏沒vocal,估聲也不是太突出,如果跟vocal的話效果會突出很多.
  4. 00:58:414 (5) - 突然跑出個soft-clap還要調低音量到40%於是違和感滿載,要不就+音量,要不就remove掉,我倒是覺得remove比較好
  5. 01:04:591 (1,2) - 這個combo長度比其他的都短:/ 為了配合overall,請在01:05:650 (1) - remove new combo!
  6. 01:18:532 (1) - 這個poistion不建議,雖然不是unrankable,但感覺還是怪怪的..
  7. 01:26:297 (6,7) - 感覺這裏還是跟鼓聲比較好,我的意思是(6)-換成note!然後01:26:650 - 這裏加note!
感覺還好,就是排版略擠

[Weiren's Ass]
  1. 阿,哲♂學阿..
  2. 00:16:944 (4) - 感覺可以和(1)- 再拉開一點,感覺上好看一點..
  3. 00:18:003 (x) - 這個位置不建議漏音,因為你之前跳得很爽,現在突然來個停頓,於是詭異感滿載= =
  4. 00:30:532 (1) - 考慮這裏加個clap?這樣會比較好聽,個人感覺.
  5. 00:39:003 (x) - 加個note把,還有跳 :D 把note放到中心(x:0,y:0),這個中距離跳很好玩w
  6. 00:43:238 (x) - 這裏不應該是個spinner阿 D: 換成note/slider把..
  7. 00:52:238 (7) - 加New combo阿..和其他combo長度略略統一!這是nazi而已
  8. 01:11:650 (1,2,3,4) - 這個跳可以放大一點,因為是斷音,所以跳大一點無所謂.
That's it!
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
[General]
就像之前说过的，我觉得如果没有一个备用音效包（或是干脆把现在的Sounds文件夹备用了），恐怕没人敢挑战这个下限。

[Normal]
hitsounds太单薄了，多加一些吧这样不太过的去。
HP/OD/AR三项都可以+1，作为这个note密度我觉得3.00这种难度正好（AR3略低）
00:25:061 (1) - 这个无论弧度长度都有限根本盖不好2，我建议换成一个左边过来的直线还顺眼一点

01:13:061 (1,2,1,2) - 有点丑了啊这。

[tutuhaha's Hard-]
Hard就Hard，还减啥。
AR+1/+2，Hard只AR5的现在见不到。OD+1
如果可以的话，希望你把间距调大一点重摆一下。现在的间距是两个1/2 note间正好叠上那么一点点，真心不好看。只摆不重排节奏应该花不了太长时间。
00:15:885 (5,1,2) - 这就属于特别难看的典型，后面的234则是一个可以肉眼看到的间距不等。
01:05:650 (1,2,3,4) - 建议改note。因为你这种间距这个实在不好看的出来，前面两个1/2后，用折返slider过掉那两个3/4，再回到1/2节奏。
01:10:238 (1) - 1分钟还复制粘贴，希望自重。
01:26:297 (6) - 折返那里的那一拍不该有。
整体来看，横平竖直的slider多的莫名其妙而且比较糟糕的是他们很多在连用，在美观上太扣分。

[Weiren's Ass]
AR+1建议，其他no comments.
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
sorry for my lazy mod
just suggestions

[Normal]
感觉可以ar-1诶..
00:25:767(2)-节奏感觉好奇怪啊..虽然silder拉的很好看啦..
音效太空了..适当加点soft-whis吧

[tutuhaha's Hard-]
音效插绿线的时候 如果是单note 不要把绿线插在白线上 否则有人提前按了就听不到了 所以适当提前一点 :)
00:17:650(4,5)-是不是要和(2)对齐？one grid left 然后(8,9)右移一格-..-
01:05:650(1)-我怎么觉得向上弯比较好看..和(2)对称？-.-

[Weiren's Ass]
00:45:532(2)-add clap?
00:46:414(2,3)-我怎么觉得位置换下比较顺手-_-
00:48:532(4)-add clap?
00:59:650(3)-^
01:03:885(1)-add finish?
01:09:532(4)-add clap

..不太懂音效 给点小小的意见-_-表fuck偶

star :!:
tutuhaha
3,059 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
kanpakyin 的改完了，Rin大的可能要花点时间，不自重的地方我会花点时间搞一下，间距嘞因为一调slider就错位了所以也要搞一下，不横平竖直的话我认为我可能会搞得更乱所以也要花一点时间搞一下。最后BakaHuang！假如改完后我还看的出来你在说什么的话我一定改的！
最后的最后！！猥人你丫的抽风么？！！ :evil: 裤兜不要乱加啊！
Axey
1,216 posts
Joined October 2009
Axey
假如改完后我还看的出来你在说什么的话我一定改的！

什么 你看不懂我说的中文？
tutuhaha
3,059 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha

BakaHuang wrote:

假如改完后我还看的出来你在说什么的话我一定改的！

什么 你看不懂我说的中文？
我比较怕改完后我不知道你说的哪里了。。。。。
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
KPY:

[General]

我建議把一開始的部分都map掉..timing我測了,80%準.如果改的話要記得re-snap note和綠線阿,先看mod
BPM//Offset:
83.97//5203
170//10939
开始那一段我开始做了= =不过没上传
offset fixed

[Normal]

00:12:356 (2) - 無論在聽配樂,vocal,在各方面都顯示了這個slider應該在1/2後結束!如果是因為要對稱才做成這樣我覺得不太值w
00:19:591 (x) - 其實Hard的想法很好,在00:19:767 - barek才開始..
00:37:061 (3) - 我在想在這裏加new cobmo會不會比後面好 :/ 要不這裏加,00:38:473 (1) - 這裏也加把 xD
00:42:003 (1) - 說真的,這個slider略醜..
00:47:650 ~ 00:52:591 (x) - 可以嘗試在這部分加一點whistle,感覺現在的hitsound比較單調 :/
01:10:944 (x) - 這個加和1/2 slider和一個reverse?配合音樂
01:18:709 (1,2,3,4) - 麻,這種排版其實比其他的pattern間距是會比較大的,建議換個pattern,而且這種pattern可能會誤導新手..(因為你沒有E,所以要在這個難度考慮新手的能力)
All fixed

[Weiren's Ass]

阿,哲♂學阿..
看见Weiren's Ass就知道的♂
00:16:944 (4) - 感覺可以和(1)- 再拉開一點,感覺上好看一點..
00:18:003 (x) - 這個位置不建議漏音,因為你之前跳得很爽,現在突然來個停頓,於是詭異感滿載= =
00:30:532 (1) - 考慮這裏加個clap?這樣會比較好聽,個人感覺.
00:39:003 (x) - 加個note把,還有跳 :D 把note放到中心(x:0,y:0),這個中距離跳很好玩w
00:43:238 (x) - 這裏不應該是個spinner阿 D: 換成note/slider把..
00:52:238 (7) - 加New combo阿..和其他combo長度略略統一!這是nazi而已
01:11:650 (1,2,3,4) - 這個跳可以放大一點,因為是斷音,所以跳大一點無所謂.
All fixed
NTR：
[General]
就像之前说过的，我觉得如果没有一个备用音效包（或是干脆把现在的Sounds文件夹备用了），恐怕没人敢挑战这个下限。
正在做音效

[Normal]
hitsounds太单薄了，多加一些吧这样不太过的去。
HP/OD/AR三项都可以+1，作为这个note密度我觉得3.00这种难度正好（AR3略低）
00:25:061 (1) - 这个无论弧度长度都有限根本盖不好2，我建议换成一个左边过来的直线还顺眼一点
01:13:061 (1,2,1,2) - 有点丑了啊这。
All fixed

[Weiren's Ass]
AR+1建议，其他no comments.
Fixed
BH:
[Normal]
感觉可以ar-1诶..
之前NTR叫我+1来着- -如果还有人觉得快了我就-
00:25:767(2)-节奏感觉好奇怪啊..虽然silder拉的很好看啦..
Fixed
音效太空了..适当加点soft-whis吧
Fixed

[Weiren's Ass]
00:45:532(2)-add clap?
试过了，加了不好听- -
00:46:414(2,3)-我怎么觉得位置换下比较顺手-_-
Fixed
00:48:532(4)-add clap?
Fixed
00:59:650(3)-^
我加到前面的2上了，效果要好一点
01:03:885(1)-add finish?
Fixed
01:09:532(4)-add clap
试过了，加了不好听- -
Thanks

tutuhaha wrote:

最后的最后！！猥人你丫的抽风么？！！ :evil: 裤兜不要乱加啊！
还有你想表达啥- -
tutuhaha
3,059 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
先搞成这样了，明天后天坐飞机先这样
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Download: Larval Stage Planning - Kimi+Nazo+Watashi JUMP!!(TV Size) (Weiren) [tutuhaha's Hard-].osu
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
图图哈哈的难度名改为Hard
增加一张BG
我可能会做一个SB -0-
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,958 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Hello.

Folder is clean.
I liked that fail-background.png by the way.

I browsed the song in the web,and I think the correct title is Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!!
If I'm mistaken,prove it with some link,please.

Also,there should be a space between the last letter and (TV Size).

So it should look like a Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!! (TV Size) then.


Check out Tags field in [Normal].Why there're an extra space between kosug and Aniki's? Fix it.

[Normal]
Maybe lower AR by 1 as it supposed to be the easiest difficulty in this mapset?

00:12:351 (2) - I'd add a repeat to this slider,cause I feel like a note is missing at 00:13:409.
00:25:762 (2) - Shorten this slider to 00:26:291 and add a circle to 00:26:644.
00:36:351 (2) - What's with this slider shape? .__.
00:48:880 - Finish is missing.
01:00:174 - ^

[Weiren's Ass]
00:17:292 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is so odd..make something like this:
SPOILER
00:44:468 (2) - Oh come on,it's not even readable..reduce this jump please.

Don't have much to say here..
But I'd suggest to add some warning about this difficulty to the map's description. Hitsounds might be annoying to others.

[tutuhaha's Hard] doesn't have anything major to point out,so good job.

Due to stars being useless, they are currently being phased on.
Good luck to you.
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

IceBeam wrote:

Hello.

Folder is clean.
I liked that fail-background.png by the way.
:lol:

I browsed the song in the web,and I think the correct title is Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!!
If I'm mistaken,prove it with some link,please.

Also,there should be a space between the last letter and (TV Size).

So it should look like a Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!! (TV Size) then.
OK it fixed

Check out Tags field in [Normal].Why there're an extra space between kosug and Aniki's? Fix it.
Fixed

[Normal]
Maybe lower AR by 1 as it supposed to be the easiest difficulty in this mapset?
Fixed
00:12:351 (2) - I'd add a repeat to this slider,cause I feel like a note is missing at 00:13:409.
Fixed
00:25:762 (2) - Shorten this slider to 00:26:291 and add a circle to 00:26:644.
Fixed
00:36:351 (2) - What's with this slider shape? .__.
I've changed the shape of this slider
00:48:880 - Finish is missing.
I prefer the normal-hitnormal, course finish is kinda loud
01:00:174 - ^
I prefer the normal-hitnormal, course finish is kinda loud

[Weiren's Ass]
00:17:292 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing is so odd..make something like this:
SPOILER
Fixed
00:44:468 (2) - Oh come on,it's not even readable..reduce this jump please.
Fixed
Don't have much to say here..
But I'd suggest to add some warning about this difficulty to the map's description. Hitsounds might be annoying to others.
Added

Good luck to you.
Thank you
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Added SB :lol: I made a program to do it :) :) :)

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frost-b-spec
786 posts
Joined February 2009
frost-b-spec
[SB]
change SB...
1.ひとりとふ　→　ひとりと
2.たり　→　ふたり

and many chinese "kanji" change japanese kanji

Hi!!問題:ひとりとふたりどっちが素敵?

colorful 回り出す私の将来
どこまで話そうか? 見ないふり?

あっそー、大きな世界は気分で広がる
今日もだいすき
本当にだいすき

わたしのバカ...星の数よりもバカだっ
素直になれずに
君と歩く夢をみた
ごめんね...だって! 恋と知らなかったんだ
答えって
君と
なぞたすわたしは
無限のJUMP!!

[Normal]
Slider tick rate:0.5

Nice :)
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

frost-b-spec wrote:

[SB]
change SB...
1.ひとりとふ　→　ひとりと
2.たり　→　ふたり

and many chinese "kanji" change japanese kanji

Hi!!問題:ひとりとふたりどっちが素敵?

colorful 回り出す私の将来
どこまで話そうか? 見ないふり?

あっそー、大きな世界は気分で広がる
今日もだいすき
本当にだいすき

わたしのバカ...星の数よりもバカだっ
素直になれずに
君と歩く夢をみた
ごめんね...だって! 恋と知らなかったんだ
答えって
君と
なぞたすわたしは
無限のJUMP!!

[Normal]
Slider tick rate:0.5

Nice :)
Thank you for the mod but the font I using isn't support Japanese character like this:

So I think I should change a font :o
I will fix the text error fist :lol:

And I've heard that 0.5 slider tick rate is unrankedable. I decided to change it to 1
Kotone
2,402 posts
Joined August 2008
Kotone
use this font: [url]take♂it♂boy[/url]
(I will delete it later
fight~
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EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Thank you sir♂

SPOILER
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EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
SB fixed
SPOILER
SB fixedSB fixedSB fixedSB fixedSB fixedSB fixedSB fixedSB fixed
loveFantasy
526 posts
Joined August 2008
loveFantasy
hi

[General]
  1. 我認為歌詞SB fade out太快了, 由於你是兩行式的, fade out慢點不會造成問題並且效果較好
  2. 兩條紅線的BPM分別是84與170, 這造成了在沒綠線調整的情況下突然2倍的slider speed改變, 至少在Normal和Hard難度下可以考慮在第一條紅線上加個1.5x的綠線讓改變不那麼劇烈
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:233 (x) - 雖然這難度中1/2很少, 但是這裡真的值個note, 重要的vocal且又是鼓點
  2. 00:27:791 (T) - 兩條無用綠線
[Hard]
  1. 172 unsnapped notes
  2. 一般綠線無所謂, 但KIAI綠線是必須準確的snap在線上的
  3. 00:25:938 (3,4,5) - 歌曲上的感覺, 這邊(3)起頭的擊點和(2)的三個點是一類, 而後面四個紅線點是一類, 建議跟著這個感覺重新調整circle/slider的配置, 尤其是考慮到後段都是有照著感覺走著
  4. 00:43:939 (3) - 這個感覺是3/4
  5. 00:58:409 (5) - 頭尾音效對調
  6. 01:03:350 (5) - resnap後注意這條綠線..沒調整的話會變成Normal set
  7. 01:08:821 (4) - new combo在這似乎較好
  8. 01:18:527 (2) - resnap後注意綠線
  9. 01:24:350 (1) - ^, 後面的每條都是..
[Aniki]
  1. 沒什麼大問題..不過stack leniency是可能被說的, 像是01:10:056 (6,7) - 這類的被全遮了
  2. 00:43:233 (1,2) - 這邊和Hard一樣的看法即是vocal較接近3/4, sync的不好
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
看来又得写个程序去批量延长fade了（死
Your message is too short.
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
抱歉!!最近這星期太忙了 所以沒辦法mod

[General]
你需要把Letterbox during breaks 拿掉
SB字幕稍微大了點!!這樣感覺起來蠻奇怪的

[Normal]
00:37:056 (1,2,1,2) - 對於最簡單的難度來說 這有點難度!!

[tutuhaha]
建議右移一個grid讓他與左邊對稱

[Weiren's Ass]((lol誰來跟我解釋一下為什麼是你的屁股阿
...我建議"阿"是放在01:10:586 (7) - 而不是01:10:233 -

說實話看完最後一個難度我無語了lol((瞬間了解到為什麼這叫Ass了


非常的♂阿
YahwehClarion
2 posts
Joined July 2011
YahwehClarion
bakatesusaiko-
It's so exciting！
hahahaha
XD
Last edited by YahwehClarion , edited 1 time in total.
tutuhaha
3,059 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha

spboxer3 wrote:

[tutuhaha]
建議右移一個grid讓他與左邊對稱

。。。纳尼？
pieguyn
2,020 posts
Joined May 2009
pieguyn
Normal:

-AR 4?

00:55:409 (1,2) - Switch NCs?

tutuhaha's Hard:

00:08:060 (6) - New combo?
00:15:885 (5) - (nazi) this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/135284
00:25:056 ~ 00:47:644 - I think using soft hitsounds sounds better here :?

Weiren's Ass: orz

...Fine <.< >.>

♂Nice map♂
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

loveFantasy wrote:

hi

[General]
  1. 我認為歌詞SB fade out太快了, 由於你是兩行式的, fade out慢點不會造成問題並且效果較好
  2. 兩條紅線的BPM分別是84與170, 這造成了在沒綠線調整的情況下突然2倍的slider speed改變, 至少在Normal和Hard難度下可以考慮在第一條紅線上加個1.5x的綠線讓改變不那麼劇烈
All Fixed

[Normal]
  1. 00:13:233 (x) - 雖然這難度中1/2很少, 但是這裡真的值個note, 重要的vocal且又是鼓點
  2. 00:27:791 (T) - 兩條無用綠線
All Fixed


[Aniki]
  1. 沒什麼大問題..不過stack leniency是可能被說的, 像是01:10:056 (6,7) - 這類的被全遮了
  2. 00:43:233 (1,2) - 這邊和Hard一樣的看法即是vocal較接近3/4, sync的不好
Fixed

spboxer3 wrote:

抱歉!!最近這星期太忙了 所以沒辦法mod
大丈夫萌大奶
[General]
你需要把Letterbox during breaks 拿掉
SB字幕稍微大了點!!這樣感覺起來蠻奇怪的
All Fixed

[Normal]
00:37:056 (1,2,1,2) - 對於最簡單的難度來說 這有點難度!!
Fixed

[Weiren's Ass]((lol誰來跟我解釋一下為什麼是你的屁股阿
...我建議"阿"是放在01:10:586 (7) - 而不是01:10:233 -
All Fixed
說實話看完最後一個難度我無語了lol((瞬間了解到為什麼這叫Ass了


非常的♂阿
Ass we can

pieguy1372 wrote:

Normal:

-AR 4?
I will fix if anyone more points this out

00:55:409 (1,2) - Switch NCs?
Fixed

Weiren's Ass: orz

...Fine <.< >.>

♂Nice map♂
:lol:

YahwehClarion wrote:

バカテスサイコー！
良譜面なのでランキングに載るべき
I'll try my best to get ranked :D
Thank you all~
Sakura
osu! Alumni
7,979 posts
Joined March 2010
Sakura
Please dont kudosu guest diff updates/uploads i have to revoke some kudosu from tuhahaha because of that, kudosu should be awarded for mod posts, thanks for understanding
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Sakura Hana wrote:

Please dont kudosu guest diff updates/uploads i have to revoke some kudosu from tuhahaha because of that, kudosu should be awarded for mod posts, thanks for understanding
I see
OzzyOzrock
5,185 posts
Joined August 2010
OzzyOzrock
[Normal]
Good diff.

Can't point many things out...
01:29:997 (1) - Maybe put this in center of slider like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137571

But good job ww
[tutuhahard]
Stacking Leniency should be at least 4 (or third tick, is the same)
Hmm, distance space 1.0 would make map look better, but it's ok..

Pretty nice style.
[Weiren's Ass]
XD Pro hitsounding

00:33:174 (4) - Maybe make it an S wave, instead of straight
00:47:644 (1) - Aniki sound here? :3
01:23:821 (2) - Grid to the right to mirror (1) correctly?

Hmm.. maybe needs more aniki yells =w= But very good diff!
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

OzzyOzrock wrote:

[Normal]
Good diff.

Can't point many things out...
01:29:997 (1) - Maybe put this in center of slider like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/137571
Fixed
But good job ww

[Weiren's Ass]
XD Pro hitsounding

00:33:174 (4) - Maybe make it an S wave, instead of straight
Fixed
00:47:644 (1) - Aniki sound here? :3
I'm considering which sound is better
01:23:821 (2) - Grid to the right to mirror (1) correctly?
Fixed

Hmm.. maybe needs more aniki yells =w= But very good diff!
I will add more if I get the suitable yells
Thanks :lol:
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
[General]
  1. [Normal]的第一根红线offset怎么是2345,其他2个难度是5203
  2. mp3音量太小了,可以的换换个音量大点的
[SB]
  1. 歌词出来得都有点太早,恐怕你得都往后移些
[Normal]
  1. 01:08:821 (1) - Finish取代whistle如何
[tutuhaha's Hard]
  1. 00:58:409 (5) - Whistle取代finish如何
[Weiren's Ass]
  • 好吧我不吐槽音效了...
  1. 00:19:409 (1) - 这个有必要new combo么, 单独一个1看着挺奇怪的
nice map 这么多星了我就不打星了:/
tutuhaha
3,059 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
改好鸟
╮(╯▽╰)╭音效对调了一下
啧为了应付Your message is too short.我是不是应该要复制一个专门刷贴吧的二十字- -

Download: Larval Stage Planning - Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!! (TV Size) (Weiren) [tutuhaha's Hard].osu
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
等我9月4号把电脑搬到学校里再弄- -
SPOILER
Your ass is too short.
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[Normal]
00:41:997 (1) - i don't like the fact that this slider is overlapped do like this?
416,160,41997,6,0,B|372:196|324:168|324:168|316:180|316:180|276:172|240:216,1,200,4|0
00:43:233 (2) - i suggest using a blanket like this
104,288,43233,2,0,B|224:352|344:288,1,250,4|0
[tutuhaha's Hard]
00:08:060 (1) - make this blanket 00:07:345 (4) - like this
336,176,8060,6,0,B|276:171|232:120|246:56,1,160
00:14:115 (2,3,4) - Add a repeat to 00:14:115 (2) - and move them like this
[Weiren's Ass]
Sure no one will laments the fact you used "Ass" as a difficulty name? (referring to some BATs, MATs and GMTs)
those Samples were just scary and pervy.

[Video]
Why you didn't use the video? i do think it's pretty good in those cases where you only do a Lyrics SB
In the fact i founded one, converted and stretched to 9.58 Mb and i'm Uploading it. I fouded the Video Offset too.
Video Download
Video Offset is 2770, so use this line in the various diff's (or directly in the osb)
Video,2770,"baka to test to shokanjū ni! Op.avi"
P.s. That's not true
Stacking Leniency should be at least 4 (or third tick, is the same)
It should be at least 0.2, and it is actually the leftmost tick of the stack Leniency(all editor usable Stack Leniency are perfectly rankable) . Even like that it destroys many patterns in many map, so i generally prefer to use a low Stack leniency in my Maps whenever i see badstacks or wrong stacking places.
tutuhaha
3,059 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
done！~
啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊
凑字- -

Download: Larval Stage Planning - Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!! (TV Size) (Weiren) [tutuhaha's Hard].osu
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Breeze wrote:

[General]
  1. [Normal]的第一根红线offset怎么是2345,其他2个难度是5203
  2. mp3音量太小了,可以的换换个音量大点的
All fixed

[SB]
  1. 歌词出来得都有点太早,恐怕你得都往后移些
暂时没动= =

[Normal]
  1. 01:08:821 (1) - Finish取代whistle如何
Fixed

[Weiren's Ass]
  • 好吧我不吐槽音效了...
  1. 00:19:409 (1) - 这个有必要new combo么, 单独一个1看着挺奇怪的
Fixed

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

[Normal]
00:41:997 (1) - i don't like the fact that this slider is overlapped do like this?
416,160,41997,6,0,B|372:196|324:168|324:168|316:180|316:180|276:172|240:216,1,200,4|0
00:43:233 (2) - i suggest using a blanket like this
104,288,43233,2,0,B|224:352|344:288,1,250,4|0
All fixed

[Weiren's Ass]
Sure no one will laments the fact you used "Ass" as a difficulty name? (referring to some BATs, MATs and GMTs)
those Samples were just scary and pervy.
This diff name means it used aniki hitsound, that's what I want :lol:
By the way, this beatmap contains "Weiren's Ass" but ranked.
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/19312

[Video]
Why you didn't use the video? i do think it's pretty good in those cases where you only do a Lyrics SB
In the fact i founded one, converted and stretched to 9.58 Mb and i'm Uploading it. I fouded the Video Offset too.
Video Download
Video Offset is 2770, so use this line in the various diff's (or directly in the osb)
Video,2770,"baka to test to shokanjū ni! Op.avi"
I downloaded this video, but it's kinda vague, so I will recode a video later.
Thank you all
HakuNoKaemi
3,828 posts
Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
I downloaded this video, but it's kinda vague, so I will recode a video later.
in what sense? just copypaste the line i gaved you in the SB (or in the difficulties ) Background if it is because it don't go in time with music...

There a thing called "video offset" and that problem are derived by the difference on music/video offsets
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

HakuNoKaemi wrote:

I downloaded this video, but it's kinda vague, so I will recode a video later.
in what sense? just copypaste the line i gaved you in the SB (or in the difficulties ) Background if it is because it don't go in time with music...

There a thing called "video offset" and that problem are derived by the difference on music/video offsets
I known how to add a Video and set the offset, I mean that the video you gave me is not clear enough so I need to recode it. I will add this when free :lol:
thethorndog
33 posts
Joined April 2009
thethorndog
the map is amazing, i dont understand the last maps sounds and stuff but the map is really well made, star!!
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Add video and some yells :lol: 　　　　　//Your message is too short.
HellDawn
1,035 posts
Joined April 2010
HellDawn
Normal
00:17:984- Why break drag here ?

Weiren ass
Delete bg3
homo.
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

HellDawn wrote:

Normal
00:17:984- Why break drag here ?
All diff's break are here

Weiren ass
Delete bg3
No.That's what I wanted
homo.
not homo but "哲学"
Komeiji Yuki
1,264 posts
Joined March 2010
Komeiji Yuki
[Normal]

>>SV 0.999999999999999...?

[tutuhaha's Hard]

>>This diff doesn't close "Letterbox during breaks"

00:07:722 (7) - NC ?

[Weiren's Ass]

00:56:808 (Green Line) - Kiai Time is different to your normal diff ? Or you just want a kiai fountain here

---

looks good

Here's a star
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Komeiji Yuki wrote:

[Normal]

>>SV 0.999999999999999...?
Change to 1

[Weiren's Ass]

00:56:808 (Green Line) - Kiai Time is different to your normal diff ? Or you just want a kiai fountain here
Fixed
Thanks
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze

Timing

  1. BPM/Offset
    168/590
    170/9175
    如果觉得这个更好就换这个, resnap那些你懂的

SB

  1. 歌词出来还是太早了, 你没改么, 这个太明显了, 改改吧

tutuhaha's Hard

  1. 00:10:043 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  2. 01:09:337 (3) - Unsnapped slider (end).
  3. 00:17:719 - 这个绿线貌似没用
  4. 00:23:277 - ^
  5. 01:07:057 (4) - Soft finish?


no comments to the ass hitsound
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Timing 按B姥爷的建议调整了
SB重新弄了下~
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
OK, nice enough, bubbled
Cirno
662 posts
Joined June 2010
Cirno
\:D/
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Breeze wrote:

OK, nice enough, bubbled
Thank♂you♂sir！
tutuhaha
3,059 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha
哎呦总算泡了Orz....................
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,437 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
SB
  1. Lrc20, Lrc21 overlaps Lrc18, guess it shouldn't be. Reduce time of showing Lrc18.

  2. I guess "Storyboard Sound Samples" with "ass" hitsounds should work only is "ass" diff, isn't it?
    Weiren's Ass: 100%, Weiren (=Using ♂Aniki♂ hitsounds warning=)
    They work in every diff. Make them only for one diff. You will need in full submit after, cuz it'll be fixes in osb file.
General
  1. Inconsistency in PreviewTime:
    [Normal] : 45658
    [tutuhaha's Hard] : 45866
    [Weiren's Ass] : 45658
Normal
  1. Set Stack Leniency 4 at least

  2. i'd set tickrate 2 like in other diffs
  3. 01:09:880 (1,2) - sounds off, try this :
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
LOL
The SB in my folder is right, it seems some exceptions happened while submitting.
I will try full submittion again some days.
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Full submitted~
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,437 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
looks fine, re-bubbled
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Thanks~
Weez
2,318 posts
Joined February 2009
Weez
The source is wrong...
this op is from the second season soo it should be "Baka to Test to Shoukanjuu Ni!" just like the already ranked one.

Also looking at the SB I feel like Lrc03 should start at 00:05:947 and Lrc04 should end at 00:09:161 so it actually follows the song.
Aleks719
osu! Alumni
2,437 posts
Joined May 2010
Aleks719
yep, source is really wrong, my fault~

Baka to Test to Shoukanjuu 2!
or
Baka to Test to Shoukanjuu Ni!

^ both of them are correct, use one. SB it's up to mapper, i don't think that it shows in wrong time~

EDIT : rebubbled
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Twice_old
Twice_old
怒瞎 哲学图要rank了 ♂ass we can♂
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
就不坟..
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[Normal]
00:35:292 (1,1) - Kinda ugly overlap and easily avoidable
00:52:939 (3,1) - ^

[Ass]
00:17:645 (6) - The finish doesn't fit here imo
00:26:116 (3) - Although not completely obscured, this could be changed easily enough to have more of the repeat arrow visible.
00:42:086 (2) - This feels better with beats at 00:42:174 - and 00:42:351 -
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Aww, someone told me about this old bubble but Garven ninja'd me xP

Totally agree with what he said, btw, but I'd suggest one more thing before it gets ranked: Make that warning for Weiren's Ass bigger (probably just making it bold will be enough), also please say something a bit more explanative about it, not everybody knows what Aniki is!

By the way, I can't play this map anymore without laughing, this was so fun to play xD
Good luck! :)

EDIT: Wait a second... how is this in the graveyard?! :o
Last edited by Garven , edited 1 time in total.
tutuhaha
3,059 posts
Joined October 2010
tutuhaha

Weiren wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012年3月30日 at 15:32:21

Artist: Larval Stage Planning
Title: Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!! (TV Size)
Source: Baka to Test to Shoukanjuu Ni!
Tags: tutuhaha Aniki Billy Herrigton Van Darkholme TDN kosugi Kiyoshi Kazuya Aniki's brother Pachuri Go
BPM: 168
Filesize: 12211kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Normal (2.99 stars, 97 notes)
  2. tutuhaha's Hard (4.8 stars, 180 notes)
  3. Weiren's Ass (5 stars, 247 notes)
Download: Larval Stage Planning - Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!! (TV Size)
Download: Larval Stage Planning - Kimi + Nazo + Watashi de JUMP!! (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
TV Anikime "バカとテストと召唤獣" 2nd Season OP.
Normal: 100%, Weiren
Hard: 100%, tutuhaha (Thanks)
Weiren's Ass: 100%, Weiren (=Using ♂Aniki♂ hitsounds warning=)
俩BAT来看了哇快reply！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Sorry for delay-0-Busy those days

Garven wrote:

[Normal]
00:35:292 (1,1) - Kinda ugly overlap and easily avoidable
Fixed
00:52:939 (3,1) - ^
Fixed

[Ass]
00:17:645 (6) - The finish doesn't fit here imo
Changed to soft-hitfinish
00:26:116 (3) - Although not completely obscured, this could be changed easily enough to have more of the repeat arrow visible.
Fixed
00:42:086 (2) - This feels better with beats at 00:42:174 - and 00:42:351 -
Changed them to a slider

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Totally agree with what he said, btw, but I'd suggest one more thing before it gets ranked: Make that warning for Weiren's Ass bigger (probably just making it bold will be enough), also please say something a bit more explanative about it, not everybody knows what Aniki is!
Added bold
Beatmap has been revived. Thanks for mod
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
Weiren aniki you're the best gay~go go rank
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

AoiX wrote:

Weiren aniki you're the best gay~go go rank
F@ck♂you
jieusieu
460 posts
Joined March 2011
jieusieu
YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
the best hitsound <3

Ass♂you♂can
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[Ass]
00:41:469 (1) - I don't think this works so well. The slowdown at the start and end aren't very fitting. The rhythm is pretty strong with the triplet feel - try working with that.
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Garven wrote:

[Ass]
00:41:469 (1) - I don't think this works so well. The slowdown at the start and end aren't very fitting. The rhythm is pretty strong with the triplet feel - try working with that.
Changed to a slider and circle
Yes Sir Popesama
17 posts
Joined May 2010
Yes Sir Popesama

Weiren wrote:

Garven wrote:

[Ass]
00:41:469 (1) - I don't think this works so well. The slowdown at the start and end aren't very fitting. The rhythm is pretty strong with the triplet feel - try working with that.
Changed to a slider and circle
fuck u boy♂
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Take it!
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,425 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan
Yes! ಥ_ಥ
spboxer3
Global Moderator
3,616 posts
Joined November 2009
spboxer3
my ass.
Piotrekol
1,002 posts
Joined March 2010
Piotrekol
dat ass diff-> wtf
Skystar
1,628 posts
Joined May 2011
Skystar
Teddy
118 posts
Joined August 2010
Teddy
what happen to that preview picture
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
Crap, had to unrank since the novideo link wasn't updated correctly. Weiren: do a full submission and that should fix this and I can rerank. Let me know please!
AkiShizuha
55 posts
Joined May 2011
AkiShizuha
._. I was just about to download..../
taka1235
609 posts
Joined February 2009
taka1235
oh nice BG and hitsound ww
AoiX
674 posts
Joined April 2010
AoiX
wow～猥人Good♂Job～

EDIT: 我珍贵的600th post献给你了
Yes Sir Popesama
17 posts
Joined May 2010
Yes Sir Popesama
萎人你麻痹，说好的rank呢？
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Resubmitted
Yes Sir Popesama
17 posts
Joined May 2010
Yes Sir Popesama

Weiren wrote:

Resubmitted
waiting ♂ for ♂ rank, boy~~!
Twice_old
Twice_old
帕秋丽♂go♂
Yes Sir Popesama
17 posts
Joined May 2010
Yes Sir Popesama
开♂ 爆
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
No-Video的osz文件总是更新不能。。这尼玛不科学。。明天再弄
UnderminE
osu! Alumni
4,011 posts
Joined August 2010
UnderminE
Still waiting.

♂
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
I' ve tried again and again..but the .osu file in No-Video ver. still could'n t update....QAQ
Kawayi Rika
osu! Alumni
3,635 posts
Joined December 2010
Kawayi Rika
Oh,This map very nice :3

I just have a suggestion for [Weiren's Ass] diff :

00:17:469 (5,6) - Missing symmetry?
00:30:704 (1,3) - ^
00:47:292 (1,2) - ^
01:01:586 (2,3) - ^
01:10:057 (2,3) - ^
01:11:292 (1,2) - ^
01:23:998 (1,4) - ^
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Oh,This map very nice :3

I just have a suggestion for [Weiren's Ass] diff :

00:17:469 (5,6) - Missing symmetry?
00:30:704 (1,3) - ^
00:47:292 (1,2) - ^
01:01:586 (2,3) - ^
01:10:057 (2,3) - ^
01:11:292 (1,2) - ^
01:23:998 (1,4) - ^
All fixed, thanks
Stefan
Global Moderator
10,425 posts
Joined January 2011
Stefan

Weiren wrote:

I' ve tried again and again..but the .osu file in No-Video ver. still could'n t update....QAQ
How about to upload seperate the Video? So people can download the video if they want and it would be fine for everyone.
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
试着把video去掉(包括osu文件里的video code)然后fullsubmit看看行不行, 如果可以的话再加上video, 最好video重新命个名
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

Breeze wrote:

试着把video去掉(包括osu文件里的video code)然后fullsubmit看看行不行, 如果可以的话再加上video, 最好video重新命个名
刚传了，没用= =
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EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin

TheNutritiousGuy wrote:

Weiren wrote:

I' ve tried again and again..but the .osu file in No-Video ver. still could'n t update....QAQ
How about to upload seperate the Video? So people can download the video if they want and it would be fine for everyone.
Emmm..Looks like a good way. I'll do it if I run out of my idea :)
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
Some exceptions happened.....
EnakoRin
Topic Starter
EnakoRin
OK I give up, deleted the Video ;_;
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
I had to kill what few scores there were, sorry. Not sure if things were changed or not since I had old copies of the difficulties. Everything checks out though, so I think we're good to go again. Sorry about all the problems. :/

Reranked!
mochi
779 posts
Joined June 2010
mochi
BG lol
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
我要看video，麻烦放个带video的进creator's word
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