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Хех, спасибо, но похоже, что никто больше так не думает.MennyRuS wrote:
Крутая мапа, мне понравилась
Hey, everyone, i'm realy confused becouse i don't know what should be on hard. Any ideas, please?
Topic Starter
Hmm... It's hard or insane?
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Please endure my poor English
Firstly.. I think the song is very difficult to map beacuse it is a absolute music
So..If you are first time to map, I think you should not do it too hard..
I really recommend you to follow the music and don't put too much your's own rhythm in hard..
Because in some parts, it is a kind of overmapping..
But the Easy and Normal are not bad
Offset seem find
Easy someting need to be changed:
01:13:74 (2) - Move it left 2 grid
01:32:69 (1) - move apart from 3
02:10:97 (3) - new combo?
Normal:00:05:07 (8,9) - move to right 2 grid
00:08:23 (3) - move to rigth 3 grid
00:10:60 (7,8,9,10) - these is a kind of unrankable slider change it
00:13:76 (11) - new combo
00:20:86 (8) - slider
00:33:49 (1) - put on top of 00:34:67 (3) -
01:29:53 (8) - move near 9 is better.....
02:20:44 (1) - move 1 gird downward
Hard: the core structural have to change..
00:12:18 (1,1,1) - move a away...no one can do it
00:18:10 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) -
00:32:70 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
00:36:25 (1,1) - these is someting i said overmapping
Anyway i suggest you to delete the hard and rename normal as hrad...
Firstly.. I think the song is very difficult to map beacuse it is a absolute music
So..If you are first time to map, I think you should not do it too hard..
I really recommend you to follow the music and don't put too much your's own rhythm in hard..
Because in some parts, it is a kind of overmapping..
But the Easy and Normal are not bad
Offset seem find
Easy someting need to be changed:
01:13:74 (2) - Move it left 2 grid
01:32:69 (1) - move apart from 3
02:10:97 (3) - new combo?
Normal:00:05:07 (8,9) - move to right 2 grid
00:08:23 (3) - move to rigth 3 grid
00:10:60 (7,8,9,10) - these is a kind of unrankable slider change it
00:13:76 (11) - new combo
00:20:86 (8) - slider
00:33:49 (1) - put on top of 00:34:67 (3) -
01:29:53 (8) - move near 9 is better.....
02:20:44 (1) - move 1 gird downward
Hard: the core structural have to change..
00:12:18 (1,1,1) - move a away...no one can do it
00:18:10 (1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,1) -
00:32:70 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
00:36:25 (1,1) - these is someting i said overmapping
Anyway i suggest you to delete the hard and rename normal as hrad...
Topic Starter
You're english isn't poor.
Thanks for you help! Really thanks.
Thanks for you help! Really thanks.
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[Normal]
This difficulty needs more hitsounds.
[Hard]
58:357(1)-> This is too far from (2).
Your map is fine.
But I think this map is hard to be ranked.
Why? This map is little boring.
To avoid this problem, you have to add some streams on hard.
This difficulty needs more hitsounds.
[Hard]
58:357(1)-> This is too far from (2).
Your map is fine.
But I think this map is hard to be ranked.
Why? This map is little boring.
To avoid this problem, you have to add some streams on hard.
Topic Starter
Hard to be ranked? Too bad =(
And... Streams?
And... Streams?
This is what i was going to say. This is not the best choice of music for osu because it is extremely repetitive.minyeob wrote:
Your map is fine.
But I think this map is hard to be ranked.
Why? This map is little boring.
The map plays well but it gets very boring after a while. All of the beats are in the same place. Well look.
Push Ctrl+A to highlight all beats. Now do this on any other ranked map and you should see a completely different kind of picture.
Ill star because the map flows well and theres no big errors. It could use more style tho.
side note: for your timing tab. if this is timed correctly, you should be able to click "Inherit previous timing settings" on all slots with no issues. Then, maybe put .5 bpm checkbox on the last timing section for a slow end slider? =p
Хех, мне так понравилась песня, что захотелось сделать новую сложность самому. Прости, у меня почему-то не скачался сначала твой hard, поэтому получились похожие места. Hard только сейчас вот сыграл 
Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi, Jun Maeda - Uminari (tieff) [gyt's hard].osu
Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi, Jun Maeda - Uminari (tieff) [gyt's hard].osu
Topic Starter
Добавлена сложность.
Overall a very nice map, if a bit repetetive at times.
Normal
00:37:04 (2) - Move up 1 grid to make the end look nicer with (1)
00:46:51 (6) - I think this sounds good with a finish
01:06:64 (6) - Down one grid looks better methinks
Hard
00:11:39 (5) - Up 1 grid maybe
00:31:91 (4) - Down 2 grids to line up with (1)
00:46:51 (1) - It's kind of hard to tell that this is a slider...
01:54:00 (5) - Down 2 grids to line up with 3
Have a star! ^_^
Normal
00:37:04 (2) - Move up 1 grid to make the end look nicer with (1)
00:46:51 (6) - I think this sounds good with a finish
01:06:64 (6) - Down one grid looks better methinks
Hard
00:11:39 (5) - Up 1 grid maybe
00:31:91 (4) - Down 2 grids to line up with (1)
00:46:51 (1) - It's kind of hard to tell that this is a slider...
01:54:00 (5) - Down 2 grids to line up with 3
Have a star! ^_^
[Timing]
Meh, I think it's abit off... but oh well, just a warning~
[Overall]
Yeah, I agree it's abit boring... Well, at least normal was.
[Normal]
It's too... cuadricular. It's a little boring you know :/
00:50:85 (1) - See [Hard]
01:39:00 - Change sampleset?
02:04:26 - ^
[Hard]
00:07:64 (2,3,4) - IMO this sampleset change (Soft -> Normal) doesn't fit.
00:10:60 (1) - I don't mean to be super nazi, but move 1Grid (lvl3) up.
00:12:97 (3,4,5) - Same problem as 00:07:64 (2,3,4).
00:24:01 (6,7,8,9,10) - I think you overmapped this abit.
00:30:33 (3,1) - Yesh, spacing... I tripped me up in Test... Maybe add another beat at 00:30:53?
00:33:09 (1,2,3) - This tripped me up too. Though I think it's doable (And fine if it's [Hard]).
00:38:22 (4) - Sampleset change...
00:50:85 (1) - Ahaha! Now I like how the sampleset change is used here. Maybe add it in [Normal] too?
01:08:61 (1,2,3,4,5) - Disalignment! I'm not liking it.
01:39:00 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5) - Yeah, the sampleset change is fine... If you delete all whistles here.
01:50:44 (2,3,4) - Yeah, this tripped me up too... I don't know if it's acceptable even for [Hard].
Yeah... that's it. I'll star this once you fixed/explained everything.
Meh, I think it's abit off... but oh well, just a warning~
[Overall]
Yeah, I agree it's abit boring... Well, at least normal was.
[Normal]
It's too... cuadricular. It's a little boring you know :/
00:50:85 (1) - See [Hard]
01:39:00 - Change sampleset?
02:04:26 - ^
[Hard]
00:07:64 (2,3,4) - IMO this sampleset change (Soft -> Normal) doesn't fit.
00:10:60 (1) - I don't mean to be super nazi, but move 1Grid (lvl3) up.
00:12:97 (3,4,5) - Same problem as 00:07:64 (2,3,4).
00:24:01 (6,7,8,9,10) - I think you overmapped this abit.
00:30:33 (3,1) - Yesh, spacing... I tripped me up in Test... Maybe add another beat at 00:30:53?
00:33:09 (1,2,3) - This tripped me up too. Though I think it's doable (And fine if it's [Hard]).
00:38:22 (4) - Sampleset change...
00:50:85 (1) - Ahaha! Now I like how the sampleset change is used here. Maybe add it in [Normal] too?
01:08:61 (1,2,3,4,5) - Disalignment! I'm not liking it.
01:39:00 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5) - Yeah, the sampleset change is fine... If you delete all whistles here.
01:50:44 (2,3,4) - Yeah, this tripped me up too... I don't know if it's acceptable even for [Hard].
Yeah... that's it. I'll star this once you fixed/explained everything.
Topic Starter
Gens wrote:
[Timing]
Meh, I think it's abit off... but oh well, just a warning~
[Overall]
Yeah, I agree it's abit boring... Well, at least normal was.
[Normal]
It's too... cuadricular. It's a little boring you know :/
00:50:85 (1) - See [Hard]Fixed.
01:39:00 - Change sampleset? Fixed.
02:04:26 - ^ Fixed.
[Hard]
00:07:64 (2,3,4) - IMO this sampleset change (Soft -> Normal) doesn't fit.Fixed.
00:10:60 (1) - I don't mean to be super nazi, but move 1Grid (lvl3) up. Fixed.
00:12:97 (3,4,5) - Same problem as 00:07:64 (2,3,4). Fixed.
00:24:01 (6,7,8,9,10) - I think you overmapped this abit. Hmm... Not think so. Wait second opinion.
00:30:33 (3,1) - Yesh, spacing... I tripped me up in Test... Maybe add another beat at 00:30:53? Fixed.
00:33:09 (1,2,3) - This tripped me up too. Though I think it's doable (And fine if it's [Hard]).
00:38:22 (4) - Sampleset change... Fixed.
00:50:85 (1) - Ahaha! Now I like how the sampleset change is used here. Maybe add it in [Normal] too?
01:08:61 (1,2,3,4,5) - Disalignment! I'm not liking it. Fixed. 1.2x now.
01:39:00 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,5) - Yeah, the sampleset change is fine... If you delete all whistles here. Fixed.
01:50:44 (2,3,4) - Yeah, this tripped me up too... I don't know if it's acceptable even for [Hard]. Hmm... Wait second opinion.
Yeah... that's it. I'll star this once you fixed/explained everything. Thanks! ^^
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Normal~
Hard~
Nice BG again ^^
- 00:27:17 (3) - This has a clap at the end. Intended?
- 02:07:42 (1) - Possibly add a finish sound here.
Hard~
- 01:05:65 (2,3) - Move 2 ticks to the right.
Nice BG again ^^
Topic Starter
I didn't find any errors in this map but, like minyeob said, you should add some streams or stacks in the hard difficulty. Btw it's a nice map, so i'll star it ^^
Normal:
Audio Lead In: 1 second (Song Setup > Audio > Lead-In > 1 second)
00:44:54 (3) - Nudge down to make it horizontal with 2.
01:43:74 (1) - Remove clap from start.
02:02:68 (1) - ^
This difficulty is a bit boring. Try not to be too linear with the map. "Square" maps aren't that fun. D:
Hard:
Audio Lead In: 1 second (Song Setup > Audio > Lead-In > 1 second)
00:09:22 (1) - Put whistle on each end individually instead of the whole slider. The slider-slide sounds horrible.
This difficulty is way more fun! Nothing else I can see wrong, very well made, especially for your first map. Star !
Audio Lead In: 1 second (Song Setup > Audio > Lead-In > 1 second)
00:44:54 (3) - Nudge down to make it horizontal with 2.
01:43:74 (1) - Remove clap from start.
02:02:68 (1) - ^
This difficulty is a bit boring. Try not to be too linear with the map. "Square" maps aren't that fun. D:
Hard:
Audio Lead In: 1 second (Song Setup > Audio > Lead-In > 1 second)
00:09:22 (1) - Put whistle on each end individually instead of the whole slider. The slider-slide sounds horrible.
This difficulty is way more fun
! Nothing else I can see wrong, very well made, especially for your first map. Star !В сложности [Normal]
02:07:126 начинается спиннер до окончания слайдера
02:07:422 на том же спиннере посередине стоит кружок
Star 4 u
02:07:126 начинается спиннер до окончания слайдера
02:07:422 на том же спиннере посередине стоит кружок
Star 4 u
No difficulty specific errors.
Timing:
BPM:152.000
offset: I'm not 100% sure about offset, but it feels a bit late. You might recheck yourself if my suggestion fits: 1.127ms (change by -4ms)
Resnap, recalc and recheck afterwards of course.
time sections:
Realign time sections so that they snap to the time marks.
Hitsound sections are recommended to start a bit before (1/4 or 1/8) the first beat of the new sound section to prevent this beat having the old sound on a misstimed hit.
BPM affecting sections as well as Kiai Mode sections are supposed to be spot on though.
Btw: Tags are seprerated by a simple space (don't use comma/point). You might also add Tags to Normal.
Nice map.
fumoffu star :3
Timing:
BPM:152.000
offset: I'm not 100% sure about offset, but it feels a bit late. You might recheck yourself if my suggestion fits: 1.127ms (change by -4ms)
Resnap, recalc and recheck afterwards of course.
time sections:
Realign time sections so that they snap to the time marks.
Hitsound sections are recommended to start a bit before (1/4 or 1/8) the first beat of the new sound section to prevent this beat having the old sound on a misstimed hit.
BPM affecting sections as well as Kiai Mode sections are supposed to be spot on though.
Btw: Tags are seprerated by a simple space (don't use comma/point). You might also add Tags to Normal.
Nice map.
fumoffu star :3
Topic Starter
Sorry, but i can't agree with your BPM and offset. I check my timing on 25% playback rate.
And thanks for modding my map ^^
And thanks for modding my map ^^
Normal is all good
<Hard>
some hitsounds are overused
ex 00:11:78~00:13:76 too many finish
00:19:68~00:20:26 too many whistle
01:39:00~01:41:96 too many claps and finish
you can use some normal`s sound pattens anyway
good map~
<Hard>
some hitsounds are overused
ex 00:11:78~00:13:76 too many finish
00:19:68~00:20:26 too many whistle
01:39:00~01:41:96 too many claps and finish
you can use some normal`s sound pattens anyway
good map~
bpm 152
[Normal]
00:42:57 (6) - this one 1 level 3 grid up
00:41:78 (4,5,6,7) - put all of them 2 level 3 grids up
[Hard]
00:50:85 (1) - this one 2 level 3 grids down
01:09:01 (3) - one level 3 grid up (just for the looks but its your decicion)
01:33:47 (1) - 1 level 3 grid to the left
01:45:71 (2) - 2 level 3 grids down so it fits with 01:46:10 (3)
02:03:47 (3) - 1 level 3 grid up
thats it so far
take my star very nice map
[Normal]
00:42:57 (6) - this one 1 level 3 grid up
00:41:78 (4,5,6,7) - put all of them 2 level 3 grids up
[Hard]
00:50:85 (1) - this one 2 level 3 grids down
01:09:01 (3) - one level 3 grid up (just for the looks but its your decicion)
01:33:47 (1) - 1 level 3 grid to the left
01:45:71 (2) - 2 level 3 grids down so it fits with 01:46:10 (3)
02:03:47 (3) - 1 level 3 grid up
thats it so far
take my star very nice map
Topic Starter
Спасибо.
~Normal~
00:26:192 - (4)~(1)
Spacings problem imo.
02:28:363
Should decrease BPM here.
~Hard~
I hate huge jumps
and also I'm not good to mod them.
00:40:205 - (3)~(4)
00:55:995 - (1)~(5)
01:14:087 - (1)~(1)
01:23:232 - (2)~(5)
01:41:982 - (5)~(1)
01:57:969 - (1)~(3)
02:02:705 - (1)~(3)
Spacings problem imo.
01:48:495 - (1)
Too high, it looks weird.
02:28:363
Should decrease BPM here.
+Star
00:26:192 - (4)~(1)
Spacings problem imo.
02:28:363
Should decrease BPM here.
~Hard~
I hate huge jumps
and also I'm not good to mod them.00:40:205 - (3)~(4)
00:55:995 - (1)~(5)
01:14:087 - (1)~(1)
01:23:232 - (2)~(5)
01:41:982 - (5)~(1)
01:57:969 - (1)~(3)
02:02:705 - (1)~(3)
Spacings problem imo.
01:48:495 - (1)
Too high, it looks weird.
02:28:363
Should decrease BPM here.
+Star
Overall:
I like the placement of claps.
@background: not "Dremas", but "Dreams", I guess. Seriously, it's worth fixing.
Normal:
For me - too small circles or too big distances between them. But it's just my opinion.
00:39:41 (1,2,3) - weird. Maybe change it? Or at least remove hitsounds at the end of first two sliders.
01:23:23 (1) - this huge slider is ugly.
01:39:02 (1,1,1) - remove hitsounds, it sounds scary.
02:04:28 (1,1,1) - ^
Hard:
I don't like curveless sliders.
00:03:10 (6) - I'd remove repeat.
00:19:67 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the song is not as fast as this.
00:45:23 (1,2) - maybe just one hitcircle?
00:50:86 (1,2,1) - I dont like the hitsounds.
01:39:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - it seems to loud for me, but maybe it's just me. 02:04:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this one is quieter, isnt it?
Starred - it's still nice
I like the placement of claps.
@background: not "Dremas", but "Dreams", I guess. Seriously, it's worth fixing.
Normal:
For me - too small circles or too big distances between them. But it's just my opinion.
00:39:41 (1,2,3) - weird. Maybe change it? Or at least remove hitsounds at the end of first two sliders.
01:23:23 (1) - this huge slider is ugly.
01:39:02 (1,1,1) - remove hitsounds, it sounds scary.
02:04:28 (1,1,1) - ^
Hard:
I don't like curveless sliders.
00:03:10 (6) - I'd remove repeat.
00:19:67 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - the song is not as fast as this.
00:45:23 (1,2) - maybe just one hitcircle?
00:50:86 (1,2,1) - I dont like the hitsounds.
01:39:02 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - it seems to loud for me, but maybe it's just me. 02:04:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - this one is quieter, isnt it?
Starred - it's still nice
Topic Starter
DJPop wrote:
~Normal~
00:26:192 - (4)~(1)
Spacings problem imo. Fixed.
02:28:363
Should decrease BPM here. Hmm... But it's decreased alredy! O_o
~Hard~
I hate huge jumps
00:40:205 - (3)~(4)
00:55:995 - (1)~(5)
01:14:087 - (1)~(1)
01:23:232 - (2)~(5)
01:41:982 - (5)~(1)
01:57:969 - (1)~(3)
02:02:705 - (1)~(3)
Spacings problem imo. I called it jumps.
01:48:495 - (1)
Too high, it looks weird. Fixed.
02:28:363
Should decrease BPM here. it's decreased alredy! =(
+Star
Normal is ok. Didn't notice anything weird with any of the two difficulties (even listening to them at slower speed) but you should definately rename Hard to Insane, even if you don't make an intermediate difficulty later.
Such amount of jumps and speed changes don't belong in Hard that I know of. But anyway, your map, your decision.
Still get some star.
Such amount of jumps and speed changes don't belong in Hard that I know of. But anyway, your map, your decision.
Still get some star.
Offset: 1123
4ms might not be much, but it can spell accuracy issues for pl0x.
I like it. *star*
4ms might not be much, but it can spell accuracy issues for pl0x.
I like it. *star*
Topic Starter
To BATs:
Don't ranked this until Alace make diff.
Don't ranked this until Alace make diff.
No one would ranked your map even you didn't tell, I bet.tieff wrote:
To BATs:
Don't ranked this until Alace make diff.
Topic Starter
You made me sad. =(DJPop wrote:
No one would ranked your map even you didn't tell, I bet.
*sob*
tieff wrote:
You made me sad. =(DJPop wrote:
No one would ranked your map even you didn't tell, I bet.
*sob*
Because BATs are lazy 
Many of my maps don't get ranked yet too.
Сlannad это кавайно,держи звезду.
Not bad for mapping newbie, but the song's a relatively quiet one, so I suggest you not to use so many finishes and claps, just make them follow the song naturally, and everything will be ok.
Also, I found triplets don't fit in this song, so I removed most of them, leaving only one in my modified map.
Be sure to rename your background picture and reupload. Such names are regarded invalid by BATs.
Have a star.
Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi, Jun Maeda - Uminari (tieff) [modified].osu
Also, I found triplets don't fit in this song, so I removed most of them, leaving only one in my modified map.
Be sure to rename your background picture and reupload. Such names are regarded invalid by BATs.
Have a star.
Download: Shinji Orito, Magome Togoshi, Jun Maeda - Uminari (tieff) [modified].osu
WOW
hitsounds are better now
cool
hitsounds are better now
cool
The spins are just right in the middle of things. You should at least have some sort of pause after one to get into position.
Overall:
- Either add a custom sliderball or force default skin. The sliderfollowcircle alone will look weird on some skins.
- Don't place timing sections that change only volume/sample directly on notes. if you do, the player will get the wrong sample if he clicks too early. You don't need to do that, but it's preferred.
Hard:
02:17:70 (1,2,3,4) - Just saying, those sliders don't all move in the same angle, soo... yeah, if you want to change that, it'd look better. You don't need to do that.
Nice map. orz.
- Either add a custom sliderball or force default skin. The sliderfollowcircle alone will look weird on some skins.
- Don't place timing sections that change only volume/sample directly on notes. if you do, the player will get the wrong sample if he clicks too early. You don't need to do that, but it's preferred.
Hard:
02:17:70 (1,2,3,4) - Just saying, those sliders don't all move in the same angle, soo... yeah, if you want to change that, it'd look better. You don't need to do that.
Nice map. orz.
Topic Starter
Fixed, thank you.
The song is a sleeper~ the hitsounds you added makes it nice~ but still... nazi~
The timing is off by at least 30ms near the end.... So I can't say the clean 152BPM is right (offset is fine though..)
Normal-
00:01:12 (1) - I don't like the Finish hitsound start
00:04:28 (1,2) - What I'd do instead -> have 1 with only 1 repeat, 2 start on 00:05:46, with one repeat, and add a single note to 00:06:64, just my thoughts on it though~
00:26:38 (1,2) - have new combo on the 2 instead and have 1 on last combo?
00:34:28 (1) - I say remove this finish hitsound
00:43:75 (2,3,4) - remove claps from 2,4 and add to end of 3?
01:06:64 (7) - just nazi~ move a tad bit higher to have end directly under 1 (with grid snap off)
01:42:17 (1) - a tad bit right without grid snap or just a tick right with grid snap
01:53:22 (4) - maybe have the slider side up, so doesn't touch the 2?
02:06:05 (1) - end one repeat sooner?
02:28:75 (1) - left a tick?
02:29:34 (2) - up two ticks? or have it farther away (since 0.5 bpm also means half the distance snap)
I noticed the map flows in a 3x3 square most of the time~ and theres lots of nazi-able alignments, not that it matters too much anymore
Some spacing seemed a bit odd, but it didn't interupt anything during play, so thats fine
Hard-
00:22:43 (3) - down a tick? and the claps on this didn't flow well with the rest of the combo
00:30:72 (1,2,3,4) - don't have finish hitsound on all four please~
00:31:91 (4) - down a tick? (to match the 1 on same combo)
00:38:22 (4) - add clap?
00:57:57 (5) - add clap to the end?
00:58:75 (5) - ^
01:00:72 (3) - no finish please?
01:11:38 (3) - no finish on the end at least~
01:22:83 (1) - up two ticks?
01:24:41 (5) - add clap to end?
01:22:83 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:27:57 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - technically sound the same, so maybe match the hitsounds on those two? (whistles sound better imo, but claps follow through your whole map)
02:03:49 (3) - up a tick?
02:04:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - GAH! too loud!
02:18:88 (4) - face end toward middle better
02:25:20 (3) - place it so its mirrored with the 2 (right three ticks)
02:28:85 (1,2) - use soft here instead of finish hitsounds, and snap 2 to the 1/4 blue tick (02:29:34)
^ why is it that Normal and Hard have differently snapped endings?
Can't say I like the extra jumpy end~
The hitsounds are quite nice~~
The maps nice~
Star~
The timing is off by at least 30ms near the end.... So I can't say the clean 152BPM is right (offset is fine though..)
Normal-
00:01:12 (1) - I don't like the Finish hitsound start
00:04:28 (1,2) - What I'd do instead -> have 1 with only 1 repeat, 2 start on 00:05:46, with one repeat, and add a single note to 00:06:64, just my thoughts on it though~
00:26:38 (1,2) - have new combo on the 2 instead and have 1 on last combo?
00:34:28 (1) - I say remove this finish hitsound
00:43:75 (2,3,4) - remove claps from 2,4 and add to end of 3?
01:06:64 (7) - just nazi~ move a tad bit higher to have end directly under 1 (with grid snap off)
01:42:17 (1) - a tad bit right without grid snap or just a tick right with grid snap
01:53:22 (4) - maybe have the slider side up, so doesn't touch the 2?
02:06:05 (1) - end one repeat sooner?
02:28:75 (1) - left a tick?
02:29:34 (2) - up two ticks? or have it farther away (since 0.5 bpm also means half the distance snap)
I noticed the map flows in a 3x3 square most of the time~ and theres lots of nazi-able alignments, not that it matters too much anymore
Some spacing seemed a bit odd, but it didn't interupt anything during play, so thats fine
Hard-
00:22:43 (3) - down a tick? and the claps on this didn't flow well with the rest of the combo
00:30:72 (1,2,3,4) - don't have finish hitsound on all four please~
00:31:91 (4) - down a tick? (to match the 1 on same combo)
00:38:22 (4) - add clap?
00:57:57 (5) - add clap to the end?
00:58:75 (5) - ^
01:00:72 (3) - no finish please?
01:11:38 (3) - no finish on the end at least~
01:22:83 (1) - up two ticks?
01:24:41 (5) - add clap to end?
01:22:83 (1,2,3,4,5) and 01:27:57 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - technically sound the same, so maybe match the hitsounds on those two? (whistles sound better imo, but claps follow through your whole map)
02:03:49 (3) - up a tick?
02:04:28 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - GAH! too loud!
02:18:88 (4) - face end toward middle better
02:25:20 (3) - place it so its mirrored with the 2 (right three ticks)
02:28:85 (1,2) - use soft here instead of finish hitsounds, and snap 2 to the 1/4 blue tick (02:29:34)
^ why is it that Normal and Hard have differently snapped endings?
Can't say I like the extra jumpy end~
The hitsounds are quite nice~~
The maps nice~
Star~
Topic Starter
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I got 1,127 ms as the offset, but I'm still a noob a timing. ;P
- All
Although it is normal for me to complain about this not having a break, this map seems fine without one. Nice and relaxing.
Nice song, haha.
- Hard
00:23:42 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Up 1 level 3 grid.
- Normal
01:43:75 (1) - Up 1 level 3 grid.
01:50:07 (1) - Right 1 level 3 grid.
02:24:01 (2) - Awkward spacing change? This isn't really a problem either, but, yeah..
* These things I listed really weren't a problem, you don't have to change if you don't want to. They were just something I managed to spot, haha.
- All
Although it is normal for me to complain about this not having a break, this map seems fine without one. Nice and relaxing.
Nice song, haha.
- Hard
00:23:42 (2,3,4,1,2,3) - Up 1 level 3 grid.
- Normal
01:43:75 (1) - Up 1 level 3 grid.
01:50:07 (1) - Right 1 level 3 grid.
02:24:01 (2) - Awkward spacing change? This isn't really a problem either, but, yeah..
* These things I listed really weren't a problem, you don't have to change if you don't want to. They were just something I managed to spot, haha.
Light nazing
Normal:
00:16:91 (1) - flip this horizontally because the rest of the combo is a horizontal flip
00:31:91 (6) - align 6 and 2
00:55:99 (4) - align with 1
Hard:
01:42:57 (2) - make a vertical reflection of 1
01:47:70 (3) - not the same distance from 2 as 1 is
01:54:80 (1,2) - align 2 with the end of 5 and make 1 a vertical reflection of 2
02:02:70 (1,2) - make them have the same slope
02:08:22 (3) - make a vertical reflection of 2
02:09:01 (1) - make a horizontal reflection of 2
02:18:88 (4) - align the end of 4 with the end of 1
I noticed there were quite a few times in your song where you did not align notes with sliders. Since some of these seemed to be on purpose, I did not mod it. If they are not on purpose, I can go through the song and point them out ina second mod.
Nice map. Star.
Normal:
00:16:91 (1) - flip this horizontally because the rest of the combo is a horizontal flip
00:31:91 (6) - align 6 and 2
00:55:99 (4) - align with 1
Hard:
01:42:57 (2) - make a vertical reflection of 1
01:47:70 (3) - not the same distance from 2 as 1 is
01:54:80 (1,2) - align 2 with the end of 5 and make 1 a vertical reflection of 2
02:02:70 (1,2) - make them have the same slope
02:08:22 (3) - make a vertical reflection of 2
02:09:01 (1) - make a horizontal reflection of 2
02:18:88 (4) - align the end of 4 with the end of 1
I noticed there were quite a few times in your song where you did not align notes with sliders. Since some of these seemed to be on purpose, I did not mod it. If they are not on purpose, I can go through the song and point them out ina second mod.
Nice map. Star.
[normal]
*nazi* 02:11:78 (3) - move 1 lvl3 grid right to align.
[hard]
00:19:67 (1) - move up 2 grids, it looks better
02:08:82 (?) - note here?
02:11:98 (?) - note here?
02:15:14 (?) - note here?
02:21:45 (?) - ^
02:27:77 (?) - ^
good job. starred
*nazi* 02:11:78 (3) - move 1 lvl3 grid right to align.
[hard]
00:19:67 (1) - move up 2 grids, it looks better
02:08:82 (?) - note here?
02:11:98 (?) - note here?
02:15:14 (?) - note here?
02:21:45 (?) - ^
02:27:77 (?) - ^
good job. starred
Normal - 01:39:01 (1,1,1) and 02:04:28 (1,1,1) really throw me off. I think it'd be much more intuitive to cut one of the repeats from the first slider (and move the following sliders earlier, and add one more repeat to the last one), see the timeline in this screenshot for what I mean. Try that and see if it feels better to you. If you prefer it the way it is, you don't have to change it.
Other than that, I didn't have any real issues with the map.
Other than that, I didn't have any real issues with the map.
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[Normal]
02:08:820 (4) This seems like it's in a weird spot.
02:13:359 (3) Realign to the end of (2).
[Hard]
00:17:307 (7) The fact that there is a delay before hitting (7) after the end of (6) throws me off. Unless it follows directly afterwards, refrain from putting hitcircles on the ends of sliders.
01:42:175 (1) This may be just me, but this part may have a little too much big spacing for such a long section.
<3 -*'s-
02:08:820 (4) This seems like it's in a weird spot.
02:13:359 (3) Realign to the end of (2).
[Hard]
00:17:307 (7) The fact that there is a delay before hitting (7) after the end of (6) throws me off. Unless it follows directly afterwards, refrain from putting hitcircles on the ends of sliders.
01:42:175 (1) This may be just me, but this part may have a little too much big spacing for such a long section.
<3 -*'s-
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Topic Starter
Lokamp wrote:
That's what I need now... a refreshing winter song for the start of the summer!
Normal
[00:13:630] remove this whistle But I like whistle here, sorry.
[02:24:633] finish here and on the next beat No change.
[02:27:703] like upper! No change.
Hard
[00:09:181] this whistled slider seems a bit nonsense... normalize the sound Fixed, thanks.
[00:27:051] put a beat between the 4th one and the pink slider, like you've done for the later white series Fixed, but not as you said.
[00:34:269] clap on the end of this slider (and on the next!) Fixed, but not as you said.
[00:55:968] clap ONLY on the sliders's start in the blue series Fixed, but not as you said.
[00:58:602] NO CLAPS here; set them on the next beat and on the next slider's start and end No change, sorry.
[01:03:479] on this slider, clap only here and on 01:03:849
[01:09:641] clap here...
[02:19:692] ... and here!
Ready for rank this song? I'm ready, and I think, that song is ready too, but...
Kudosu for you!