wcx19911123 wrote:

from my que

[General]
red timing sections in Normal is different with other diffs
and make sure your kiai times in all diffs are the same ok

[Easy]
01:13:776 (2,3,4,5) - this is kinda too hard for an Easy diff.. no change
01:20:835 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ ok

[Normal]
00:36:387 (4,5) - this is hard to read , cuz the sldier (3) is too short , newbies may click (4) too early ok
00:38:472 (3,4) - confusing , no one know the circles following vocal or following something else. I think someone would click (4) at 00:38:954 ok
01:15:531 (1,1) - too far , spinner end at 01:16:814 plz , or move slider to the middle of the screen ok


[Hard]
there are lots of unsnaped timing section in this diff , it's no need to snap them all , but make sure all the sections work well
no issues found , just feel the hitsounds are kinda quiet and mess.. maybe you can check some else endless story maps for some hitsounds ideas 0.0 ok

[Insnae]
00:20:514 (1,2,3,4,5) - why stream here 0.0? I hear nothing .. ok
01:17:627 (1) - why 0.5x speed here.. it is really confusing , people may think it is a 1/4 repeat slider and release it too early..
hitsounds are also kinda quiet and mess.. ok

that's all
good luck :3

Ryafuka wrote:

hi
全て提案ですので気に入らないものは無視してくださってかまいません

[General]
SourceをC3 shikyubuに変更(Rankedされている譜面と同じに) ok

[Easy]
01:00:942 (1) - remove new combo no
01:04:151 (4) - remove new combo no

[Normal]
00:28:536 (4) - remove new combo no
01:11:530 (4) - 4 grid left and low (x:432 y:96) ok

[Hard]
00:13:456 (1) - try this?

SPOILER

no
00:23:402 (7) - remove new combo no
00:44:258 (5) - try this?

SPOILER

ok
01:03:830 (5) - 8 grid left (x:272 y:264) ok

[inaba's taiko]
sorry, i cant MOD for taiko diff

[Insane]
00:43:616 (1) - remove new combo then 00:44:258 (3) - add new combo no
01:00:300 (3) - remove new combo no
01:15:541 (1) - end point change to 01:17:306 ok

nice song and mapset

呪うぞ！

hoLysoup wrote:

hihi~
in-game mod request
these are all suggestions
Bigger BG~
[attachment=0:0acd2]BG.jpg[/attachment:0acd2]
very nice BG!! thanks I use it.

[Insane]
00:11:528 (5) - add finish? no
00:44:258 (3,4,5,1) - don't place in square formation like that. Anti-jump there feels weird and unexpected. Move (1) away further ok
00:53:723 (5) - NC no
01:02:867 (5,6,7) - add beat here 01:02:787 - (x) and delete beat 01:02:947 (6) no change

[Hard]
00:01:654 (3,4) - combine into slider no
00:11:528 (5) - add finish? no
00:30:782 (5) - NC ok
00:50:033 (1) - remove NC and NC here 00:51:316 (3) instead ok
00:59:017~01:07:680 - the clap is on 1, 3. Put clap on 2, 4 to make consistent with Insane and the rest of the song please. It also sounds better ! ok
01:09:926 (1) - remove NC, NC here 01:11:210 (6) ok
01:13:135 (2) - remove clap, add finish at slider head only ok
01:13:776 (4) - remove clap from slider head ok
01:21:477 (4) - NC? maybe. A little confusing for Hard at high bpm ok

[Normal]
00:10:009 (4) - NC
00:35:915 (3,4) - combine into slider
all fixed
[Easy]
00:15:381 (3) - NC
00:38:482 (2) - NC here instead
all fixed
That's all I can find.~~
nice map~

• 
  AR,OD -1.

1. 00:55:167 (1) - finishはこっちではなく00:57:734 (1)こっち。
2. 01:17:627 (T) - 音量60%は低すぎるので80%のままでいいと思います。

1. 00:38:482 (3,4,5) - こういった単発を一拍置くパターンはノーマルとしては少し難しいです。
2. 01:02:226 (1) - 終端のwhistleの代わりにfinish。
3. 01:13:135 (2) - ^
4. 01:15:541 (1,1) - スピナー後の間隔が短すぎると思います。
5. 01:17:627 (T) - 音量60%は低すぎるので80%のままでいいと思います。

1. 00:00:136 (1) - 終端にwhistle。
2. 00:01:275 (2,4) - whistle削除。
3. 00:04:313 (3,5) - ^
4. 00:10:389 (2,4) - ^
5. 00:21:798 (1) - New combo削除？
6. 00:22:921 (6) - こちらにNew combo追加して00:23:402 (1)こっちのを削除？
7. 00:32:707 (2,3,4) - くっついていて見栄えが悪いです。y軸で対称にしたいのなら、(2,4)をそれぞれ外に1gridずらすと良いと思います。
8. 00:49:391 (5,6) - Insaneと同様。
9. 00:57:734 (3) - 終端にclap。
10. 01:02:867 (2) - finish追加。
11. 01:08:001 (3) - ちょっと終端のwhistleがうるさく感じます。
12. 01:20:835 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 対称配置にしてみてはどうでしょうか？

• 
  アニメソングのTV Sizeにしては難しすぎます。
  難しく不規則なパターンが連続しているので、もう少しやさしめのパターンに変えて統一した方が良いと思います。

1. 00:44:899 (T) - 太鼓でx0.9xのSVの変化はわかりづらいです。x1.0のままにするか、x0.75など一般的なSVにしてください。(個人的には前者の方が良いと思います)
2. 00:57:734 (1) - clapではなくfinishです。

1. 00:05:452 (3) - 終端にwhistle。
2. 00:06:591 (4) - whistle削除。
3. 00:06:971 (1) - あんまりwhistleの音が聞こえないので音量を変えない方が良いと思います。それと何故か全体にclapがついているので削除してください。
4. 00:08:110 (2) - whistle削除。
5. 00:29:338 (4,5,1) - stack leniencyによってプレイするときは重なっただけ位置がズレるので、その分全体を右下にズラして補正しておくと良いと思います。
6. 00:30:140 (3) - 終端にclap。
7. 00:30:782 (5) - clap削除。もし音が寂しいと感じたらwhistleなどを加えておくといいかも。
8. 00:31:103 (1) - clap追加。
9. 00:31:423 (3) - clap削除。
10. 00:37:199 (2) - 始端にwhistle追加。
11. 00:42:974 (3) - finishよりはwhistleの方が合っていると思います。
12. 00:43:455 (4) - 前の(1,2,3)とスペーシングが違って、かつこの配置のパターンで次の(1)との距離が空くのはやや不自然です。
13. 00:44:899 (1) - 迷う配置だと思います。離すか、00:44:739にノートを追加してこのスライダーにスタックさせるかした方が良いと思います。
14. 00:49:552 (8,9,10) - このカスタムclapを追加するなら、同じドラムの音が鳴っている場所の(8)にも追加しましょう。
15. 00:55:808 (1) - New combo削除？
16. 01:00:621 (2,4) - clap追加？
17. 01:02:867 (5,6,7) - whistle3連続はちょっとうるさく感じる人が多いので避けた方が良いです。
18. 01:04:151 (3,4,5) - ^
19. 01:08:402 (2,3) - ^
20. 01:08:643 (4) - ここからwhistleが無くなっているのが少し音が寂しいです。
21. 01:18:108 (2,3) - ここのカスタムclapは少し合わないです。
22. 01:25:808 (x) - ノート追加？(3とスタックさせて)

Suzully wrote:

Modリクエストどうもですー。
Insaneをmodしてから他のdiffをmodするまで期間が空いているので、ひょっとしたら既に修正済みだったりパターンが変わっているものもあるかもしれません。

[Easy]

• 
  AR,OD -1. ok

1. 00:55:167 (1) - finishはこっちではなく00:57:734 (1)こっち。ok
2. 01:17:627 (T) - 音量60%は低すぎるので80%のままでいいと思います。ok

[Normal]

1. 00:38:482 (3,4,5) - こういった単発を一拍置くパターンはノーマルとしては少し難しいです。ok
2. 01:02:226 (1) - 終端のwhistleの代わりにfinish。ok
3. 01:13:135 (2) - ^ ok
4. 01:15:541 (1,1) - スピナー後の間隔が短すぎると思います。spinを少し短くしました
5. 01:17:627 (T) - 音量60%は低すぎるので80%のままでいいと思います。ok

[Hard]

1. 00:00:136 (1) - 終端にwhistle。ok
2. 00:01:275 (2,4) - whistle削除。ok
3. 00:04:313 (3,5) - ^ ok
4. 00:10:389 (2,4) - ^ ok
5. 00:21:798 (1) - New combo削除？スペーシングが変化している場所なんでこのままで
6. 00:22:921 (6) - こちらにNew combo追加して00:23:402 (1)こっちのを削除？このままで
7. 00:32:707 (2,3,4) - くっついていて見栄えが悪いです。y軸で対称にしたいのなら、(2,4)をそれぞれ外に1gridずらすと良いと思います。ok
8. 00:49:391 (5,6) - Insaneと同様。ok
9. 00:57:734 (3) - 終端にclap。ok
10. 01:02:867 (2) - finish追加。ok
11. 01:08:001 (3) - ちょっと終端のwhistleがうるさく感じます。ok
12. 01:20:835 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 対称配置にしてみてはどうでしょうか？ok

[Insane]

1. 00:05:452 (3) - 終端にwhistle。ok
2. 00:06:591 (4) - whistle削除。ok
3. 00:06:971 (1) - あんまりwhistleの音が聞こえないので音量を変えない方が良いと思います。それと何故か全体にclapがついているので削除してください。ok
4. 00:08:110 (2) - whistle削除。ok
5. 00:29:338 (4,5,1) - stack leniencyによってプレイするときは重なっただけ位置がズレるので、その分全体を右下にズラして補正しておくと良いと思います。ok
6. 00:30:140 (3) - 終端にclap。ok
7. 00:30:782 (5) - clap削除。もし音が寂しいと感じたらwhistleなどを加えておくといいかも。ok
8. 00:31:103 (1) - clap追加。ok
9. 00:31:423 (3) - clap削除。ok
10. 00:37:199 (2) - 始端にwhistle追加。ok
11. 00:42:974 (3) - finishよりはwhistleの方が合っていると思います。ok
12. 00:43:455 (4) - 前の(1,2,3)とスペーシングが違って、かつこの配置のパターンで次の(1)との距離が空くのはやや不自然です。(4)のスペーシングに問題はなさそうだったので、修正済みであったと思います。少し配置をいじりました
13. 00:44:899 (1) - 迷う配置だと思います。離すか、00:44:739にノートを追加してこのスライダーにスタックさせるかした方が良いと思います。ok
14. 00:49:552 (8,9,10) - このカスタムclapを追加するなら、同じドラムの音が鳴っている場所の(8)にも追加しましょう。ok
15. 00:55:808 (1) - New combo削除？　no
16. 01:00:621 (2,4) - clap追加？no
17. 01:02:867 (5,6,7) - whistle3連続はちょっとうるさく感じる人が多いので避けた方が良いです。ok
18. 01:04:151 (3,4,5) - ^　ok
19. 01:08:402 (2,3) - ^　ok
20. 01:08:643 (4) - ここからwhistleが無くなっているのが少し音が寂しいです。ok
21. 01:18:108 (2,3) - ここのカスタムclapは少し合わないです。ok　
22. 01:25:808 (x) - ノート追加？(3とスタックさせてok)

頑張ってください～

des1re43 wrote:

こんにちは～

少しModしてみましたが、特に修正が必要な個所は見つかりませんでしたが、１点だけ。

田村ゆかりさんはフィアの声優なので、tagsにFearを追加してみてはどうでしょうか？

Ranked期待してます！
がんばってください！
Nice Map

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Laurier ~

My some tips~

[General]

Mp3 file change 192kbps will be better. ok change it.


[Insane]

00:42:172 (4) - Remove note will be better. ok
00:50:033 (1) - Remove whistle,clap and add finish. ok


[Hard]

HP+1 ok
00:25:808 - add note. ok
00:29:418 (2) - Remove note. ok
01:12:172 (4) - move to here X:264 Y:136. ok



[Normal]

Many overlapping note, try them apart, for beginners is very difficult. ok try it ><
HP+1 ok
00:33:188 (1) - like this? It's good idea. but I think difficult.><

SPOILER

00:46:183 (3,4) - change slider? no change ><


[Easy]

00:44:258 (4,5) - change slider? no change.
00:45:862 (2) - Remove note,For the novice is difficult. ok remve it.

nice job~

Please accept my star ( My heart ) >///<

good luck ~

regenz wrote:

こばんは Laurier さん 。　（ラウリーア　?） ローリエ(French)
This is Thai mapper modding team!

regenz 'll mod your map

general

none! ( please read red text careful ). Thankyou.

Insane

00:00:895 (2) - whistle tail ok
00:02:034 (3) - delete ?no
00:06:971 (1) - whis tail ok
00:08:110 (2) - del ? no
00:22:921 (2) - clap tail ok
00:23:402 (3) - ^ ok
00:26:931 (1) - del clap head ok
00:27:252 (2) - clap ok
00:34:070 i think this should be stream also no
00:39:766 (1) - fin head ok
00:45:541 (4) - ^ ok
00:50:675 (3) - ^ ok
00:53:723 (5) - this is weird finish sound should be here 00:53:883. better to change this note 00:53:723 (5) - to some thing that can put finish sound at white tick. no
00:59:017 (3) - fin head ok
01:02:867 (5) - fin ok
01:04:792 (7) - clap tail no
01:05:434 (1) - fin head ok
01:13:135 (3) - fin head ok
01:15:541 (1) - end at 01:16:984
(01:17:145 , 01:17:305 , 01:17:465) add note and use clap[ (custom 2 all notes ) no
01:17:626 (1,2) - make stream instead ? no
01:23:321 add note ( stream is here) ok
01:25:969 (1) - this is too long spinner i suggest
---- 01:25:968 - 01:27:091 make note that match instrument perfectly.
---- 01:27:252 start spinner here end at 01:29:177 ok


01:07:199 add circle + clap ? no
01:07:359 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think use default normal hit at 35 and 45 percent volume are more fit than whistle sound. ok

*** if you like my hitsound mod please apply too another difficult also.



Hard

00:01:275 (2,4) - del no
00:25:648 (3,4,5) - change to return slider and add note at 00:25:487 , 00:26:129no
00:29:417 add note ok
00:33:990 (1,2) - combine this two notes to make this to 1/4 return slider for complete stream. 00:33:990 - 00:34:310 all are 1/4 return slider no
01:08:643 (1,2) - can move 2 ? ( not stack with 01:08:643 (1) tail like this set 01:07:359 (1,2,3) - ok
01:11:369 add note no
01:12:011 ^ no
01:22:118 whistle head ok
01:25:487 add note ok


Normal

00:06:211 (1) - make this 1/2 return slider for match rhythm. ok
00:14:738 (4) - delete 5(circle number 5 ) and make 4 (slider number 4 ) return slider ok
00:15:380 del clap ok
00:16:022 (1) - del clap add head add it at tail instead. ok
00:17:947 (4) - make it to 1/1 return slider add put clap at 00:18:268 ,00:17:947 whistle at 00:18:588 no
00:21:798 (1) - clap center ok
00:23:402 (2) - clap ok
00:27:573 (2) - clap tail ok
00:33:188 (1) - whistle ?all ok
00:37:199 (1) - clap tail ok
00:41:370 (1) - clap head ok
00:42:333 (3) - clap tail ok
00:44:417 add note + clap (stack) ok
00:56:450 (5) - make this to 1/2 return slider and at clap at tail and head no
00:58:375 (3) - clap tail ok
00:59:017 (4) - del clap ok
00:59:659 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - this set is weird clap hit sound.ok
(the correct is put clap forward 1 white line)
---- remove clap on 1 3 5(head) 6(head)
---- put clap at 2 4 5(tail) 6(tail )
01:02:226 (1) - clap center ok
01:04:151 (3) - remove clap put clap at 01:03:509 (2) - tail and 01:04:472 (4) - head ok
01:05:113 (5) - clap ok
01:05:434 (6) - del clap head ok
01:07:359 (1,2,3,4) - delete all clap and put at 01:07:680 , 01:08:963 only ok
01:09:926 (1) - there are alot after this about wrong clap sound placing i should be next whiteline of each clap.

I 'll told you how I check this. ( I learn form BAT (Alace))

1. I put another offset at 00:14:097 to make sure offset land on Heavy beat.
2. make sure your clap sound land on 2nd and 4th white tick ( big white tick is 1st )
3.*** your clap sound current are land on 1st and 3rd

here this is link that Alace mod my friend map http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?p=463118#p463118 [/color]

01:15:541 (1) - i think this should start at white tick start 1/2 after previous note is too hard for normal and 187 bpm.

***sorry for this diff it's to much about clap placing.mod

Easy

00:06:211 add note no
00:52:278 add note + clap no
01:21:155 ^ no
01:21:797 ^ no

がんばってくだいさい。

Plz vote "regenz" if my mod helpfull.
http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=63069&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

sorry for Late.

MOD COMPLETE!

AoiX wrote:

Request from Queue

Aoi's Mod

General

1. reduce bitrate of video to 600kbps.It's enough for OSU ok changed
2. um...maybe you need another timing line?I think your offset not fit song well.plz see this:http://osu.ppy.sh/s/37915

I dont think need another timing line.but offset is moved.


Easy

1. 00:21:798 (1) - finish ok
2. 00:24:365 (1) - remove finish ok
3. 00:30:140 (4) - don't overlap it no
4. 00:55:167 (1) - reduce the spinner to 00:56:771 and add circle at 00:57:734 with finish ok
5. 00:57:734 (1) - if you follow previous,remove finish on this circle ok
6. 01:02:226 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - don't forget the clap ok
7. 01:15:060 (1) - finish and cancel whistle ok

Normal

1. 00:33:188 (1) - add two reverseok

Hard

1. 00:50:033 (7) - new combo ok
2. 00:51:316 (1) - remove new combo ok

Insane

1. 00:11:528 (5) - one grid left

so,you should check your timing and increase your hitsound.

a page of "Endless Story",so Good Luck~

phoon wrote:

Hi ~ Laurier~

From yuineee & phoon's modding queue

すべて提案です :3

Easy
>>01:14:733 (5) - 1 grid done?

Normal
>>00:42:327 (3,4,5) - 1 grid right?
>>01:15:373 (8) - 1 gird up?

Hard
Fine!

Insane
僕が見たところ問題らしい問題が見つかりませんでした･･･
したがって指摘するのは僕の好みが混ざった部分が多くなるので、気に入らないならスルーしてください

>>00:17:540 (x) - add Note
>>00:33:343 (2,3) - 提案です

SPOILER

これくらい三角形を傾けるのはどうでしょうか？

>>01:06:952 (x) - add Note
>>01:19:064 (7) - x:384 y:248 に移動
>>01:25:722 (x) - add Note

----------
いいmapです!
Rankedまで頑張ってください!!

Samah wrote:

From queue ages ago. Sorry for taking so long, real life caught up with me...

[Easy]ok
00:00:136 (1) - The other diffs all have something at 00:00:895, but this slider passes over it. It sounds strange to miss that beat. I'd suggest either making the slider shorter and moving it to 00:00:895, or maybe Ctrl+R it, make it shorter, and add a repeat:

SPOILER

Remove this timing point: 00:23:717

[Normal]ok
Remove this timing point: 00:23:717

[Hard]umm..i think it no problem nochange
00:52:273 (6,1) - These are too far apart.

[Insane]ok
00:43:449 (4,1) - Maybe move (1) a bit closer to (4)?

Very nice, have a star. <3

1. Your timing is wrong. Use this one : (You will not have to resnap anything, this is just a metronome issue)
   
   1. Offset 895ms / 79 BPM
   2. Offset 13450ms /187 BPM
   3. Offset 14091ms / 187 BPM
2. In my opinion, the custom clap you are using don't fit the music at all. Maybe use this one instead ? http://puu.sh/akhc
3. You should use 70% hitsound volume from 00:13:450 till 00:57:086. 60% is too low, it doesn't really fit the song.
4. Add "cube cursed curious cube x cursed x curious cubexcursedxcurious" in tags ?

1. 01:15:054 (1) - This spinner starts earlier than it should. According to me, this spinner should only follow the "Iiii~~". So it should start at 01:15:695 and end at 01:17:621 - and add a circle at 01:15:054 if you want to fix

KuraiPettan wrote:

General

1. Your timing is wrong. Use this one : (You will not have to resnap anything, this is just a metronome issue)
   
   1. Offset 895ms / 79 BPM
   2. Offset 13450ms /187 BPM
   3. Offset 14091ms / 187 BPM
   ok. use this timing
2. In my opinion, the custom clap you are using don't fit the music at all. Maybe use this one instead ? http://puu.sh/akhc good sound. use it
3. You should use 70% hitsound volume from 00:13:450 till 00:57:086. 60% is too low, it doesn't really fit the song. ok.change
4. Add "cube cursed curious cube x cursed x curious cubexcursedxcurious" in tags ? ok add it
   
   
   
   Easy
   
   1. 01:15:054 (1) - This spinner starts earlier than it should. According to me, this spinner should only follow the "Iiii~~". So it should start at 01:15:695 and end at 01:17:621 - and add a circle at 01:15:054 if you want to fix

move spinner and add note at 01:15:054

KuraiPettan wrote:

Bubbled ;3

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

Easy

1. 00:52:594 (1) - Use both custom soft clap (suppose to be normal hitsound?) and soft finish sounds mussy, maybe remove clap here? ok I feel better this
2. 01:07:994 (1) - ^ ok
3. 00:57:728 (1) - I feel use finish instead of whistle+clap seems better ok

Normal

1. 00:57:728 (2) - Same to [Easy] 01:07:994 (1)ok

Hard

1. 00:47:460 (1) - Consider adding a finish here?ok because another diff use finish this timing

01:20:508...here's a sound like glass broke off lol Scare me when first time hear that
Just some minor suggestion, call me back when you have reply, and I'm hopefully rank this map

lolcubes wrote:

Grats, another one of those hehe.