Star! 

41578,-100,4,2,2,80,0,1delete excess timing line?
59107,-100,4,2,2,80,0,1
Download: Gabriela Vega y Maggie Vera - Superalma (eldnl) [Verdi's Taiko Oni].osuwmfchris wrote:
[Taiko]
00:30:651 - d k~~k~~k~~k ok
Deif wrote:
Gonz:Hmm, cierto no es un problema, creo...
- 00:33:519 (2) - No creo que sea un gran problema, pero el final del slider está por debajo del HP bar.
Download: Gabriela Vega y Maggie Vera - Superalma (eldnl) [Gonz].osuwmfchris wrote:
[Gonz]
00:08:813 (3) - [Nazi] down 2 grid lv 4 Nazi :3
delete excess timing line?
Actually, I meant to disable kiai using one of those lines, fixed.
Creo que esta bien así ... y no mapeo lo que queda de la canción porque es mi estilo (?)Metro wrote:
Probé todas las diffs y lo único que me pareció raro fue esto:
Insane
00:35:284 (1) - Este spacing no va acorde al spacing anterior: 00:33:297 (3,1) y 00:34:181 (3,1).
Me gustó el Insane pero me parece que podrías mappear hasta el final que tiene buen ritmo para el osu.
Suerte.
Thanks ~Kanon wrote:
hi, you mapset is good. i can barely find errors.
so i just talking about some details
insane
00:32:636 (1,2,3) - due to former distance , imo you should make distance larger here. when i testplay ,i often press too fast here. It's fine for me :3
Gonz
00:40:136 (1,2) - why dont cover the circle in the video like other diff? i think its cool hmm
star~
No kudos plz ._. Shit, I read this when I had given kodosu ._.
Entrail wrote:
Hi there!~
Just few suggestions, since I hate when new combos are not in time with the music.
Gonz
00:09:695 (5) - Move new combo to this note (so it is in time) Ok :3
00:16:754 (3) - ^ This one is not that bad, I think that it fits the vocals
00:23:813 (4) - new combo ^
Star.
240,56,52048,6,0,B|168:56,2,70,0|0|8
96,144,52931,2,0,B|168:144,2,70,0|0|8
424,280,29531,6,0,B|376:288|376:288|344:328,1,100,2|0
88,280,29972,2,0,B|136:288|136:288|168:328,1,100,2|0
eldnl, si decides cambiar el offset no olvides cambiarlo en mi diff también o/narakucrimson wrote:
[Gonz]Muy buenas sugerencias, todo hecho.
- 00:03:061 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Creo que este crescendo podría sonar mucho mejor. Creo que el primero objeto, (3), debería estar con volumen al 30%, y luego le iría subiendo de a 10% a cada uno hasta que (8) estuviese en 80%. Luego, agregaría claps en todos ellos. Probá, estoy seguro de que te va a gustar!
- 00:23:796 (4) - Mmmm... Un whistle me suena a muy poco, ¿qué tal un finish en vez del whistle?
- 00:27:987 (2) - Me suena a que este (2) necesita más énfasis que el anterior, sugiero usar un whistle.
- 00:39:458 (SP) - Creo que un finish quedaría mejor - le da como "más sutileza" a los dos objetos que lo siguen.
- Excelente, como siempre :3
Graciaas pero no cambio nada, thxnarakucrimson wrote:
[Verdi's Taiko Oni]
- 00:07:693 (24, 25) - Quizás sea mejor usar (24) sin clap ni finish, y (25) con ambos.
- 00:11:443 (T) - Creo que sonaría mejor si a partir de acá, usaras Normal hitsounds. De veras.
- 00:18:502 (76) - ¿Qué tal agregar un clap? La verdad, me estoy guiando por como me suena
I understand you do not like the map, it's for Spanish people also the mp3 quality is only shit.Ekaru wrote:
I do not usually mod like this. However, multiple things have occurred (especially involving some of your actions queue-wise), and since this map upsets me, I am going to rant about it.
Insane:
-why did you map through the "SHAMAN KING!"? It's just awkward and horrible to play through. It's the mp3 ;_;
00:11:443 (1,2) - I do not feel this jump at all. I like it
00:16:958 (2,3) - This doesn't go with the music or flow at all. It just feels awkward. It follow the music perfectly.
00:22:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - What's with the anti-jump between (3) and (4)? It's illogical. Also, (5) would play better IMO as a slider ending where (6) currently is. Agree, I do some different.
00:23:355 (1,2,3,4,5) - This flows horrible. (1,2,3) are probably better off as hit circles, and (4) should be a slider that ends where (5) is; this is because you're mapping to the vocals here, and that's how the vocals flow here. En un ciclo in fi ni toooo, fit perfect with the voice xD
00:25:561 (1,2) - This jump makes absolutely no sense at all Nothing in the music, and there's no pattern throughout the map so far to give a reason to this jump. Ok jump removed.
00:28:428 (3,4,5,6) - That anti-jump into (6) is weird. This is not an anti jump, Is just a small jumpthen I add a new combo on (6)
00:29:531 (7,8,9) - Big jump -> anti-jump? Huh? It makes no sense and plays horribly. Changed
00:30:855 (1,2,3,4) - These jumps should be bigger, and they should all be the same distance apart. Why? Because there is nothing in the music or the map to suggest this kind of jump pattern. Changed a little the distance between (1,2) everything else remains the same.
00:44:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - The spacing here feels too small, until you get to (5,6), where it suddenly increases to a distance (for no real reason whatsoever) that feels much better. No changes
00:52:031 (2,3,4,5) - I don't feel these sliders. Hit circles would feel better IMO. Agree but I don't know how I can change it ;_;
00:56:002 (4,5) - This jump makes no sense. Nothing for you have sense !!
00:57:325 (3,4) - This one makes even less sense. :<
00:59:090 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This spacing does not correlate to the music. I love that star, It's the better part of the song, that's why add these jumps here.
01:11:002 (4,1) - Where does this jump come from? Nothing bad with this jump
Overall, I do not like this map, but that's okay; some people will. To me it feels like you pissed on the concepts of spacing and flow and just tried to make pretty patterns. I like pretty (see: Rainbow Dash And Fluttershy Taking A Leisurely Glide), but when you compromise spacing and flow to the degree you have, it just doesn't play well. :/ But again, I'm sure plenty of people will like it.
Thank you !SapphireGhost wrote:
Krisomg suggested that I mod this, and here I am. I can tell just what you want, they're my mods, you know.
~ General ~
For this song, I think it would be more appropriate to either have no kiai, or do it like Gonzvlo. Either of those things would make the kiai placement seem a bit more fitting. Ok
~ Insane ~
00:17:730 (4) - This would be more visually pleasing if it was crumpled in such a way where the start and end did not overlap. Hard to do, so I just fix a little the slider.
00:19:495 (6,7) - This stack is rather unintuitive to play. Try using a slider or following a different rhythm. That's why the first slider.
00:21:259 (6,7) - See above. ^
~ Normal ~
Tick Rate 2 is still appropriate for this difficulty, I strongly advise you use it here. Ok
00:11:884 (1,2) - This pattern could be confusing at a this Approach Rate. Consider putting (1) or (2) elsewhere. Fixed
00:41:002 (1,2,3) - It's awkward here how the spacing goes 0.8x 0.0x 1.2x. Basically, it would be nice to move (1) somewhere else so that the player didn't have to shift from stack spacing to normal spacing in a slightly uncomfortable way. It's fine.
00:47:399 (2) - Sliderend stacking with this Approach Rate is unadvised, I'd move (2) somewhere else. I Change that part.
(This also occurs at 01:02:178 (3) - and 00:49:605 (2,3) - if this matters, matters to you.)
~ Easy ~
00:40:120 (1) - This note starts appearing a good amount of time before the spinner ends, it might be best for Easy to just take it out as to not confuse new players, and they also need recovery time after spinners. I keep this note.
01:00:414 (1,1) - Same thing about spinner recovery. Fixed
Is that what it's true, how society says this mod is already over? In fact, that's exactly what I want and how I want it to be, so please enjoy the rest of your day.
Thankslolcubes wrote:
Hello there.
[General]:[Insane]:
- Timing: It feels off, the bpm feels too fast. I was getting 20ms+ late later in the song.
BPM: 135,975
Offset: 2632
I had best results with these (each section was tested separately multiple times). I ask to expert in timing.
- 00:17:730 (4) - This slider was WEIRD. With caps. I tried to figure out what was it following, but I just couldn't do it. Every time after it, the following stream were 100s. You should move this slider by 1/4 forward in time, so it starts at 00:17:840. It actually follows the music better, and makes the rhythm more playable as well. Start/end on a blue tick is just asking for trouble hehe. Follow the rhythm perfectly, what headphones you use?
- 00:19:825 (7) - You could say the same for this note. Its easier to hit because it's predictable, unlike the slider above, but it did sound off. Moving it to the white tick at 00:19:825 made it sound so much better. Since they are stacked, it should be no problems reading they are 3/4 apart anyway. No >/<
- 00:21:480 (7) - ^ same thing, just different timeline. ^
- 00:22:709 (2,3,1) - This was weird. I kept getting 100 on that 3 cause I always thought it would come sooner. After getting used to it, I felt that the jump between 3 and 1 was a bit too much. I suggest that you try to rearrange that pattern somehow, maybe 2 and 3 switch places and distance them further from each other a little or something. It could be just me though, so this is a suggestion only. Fixed
[Normal]:[Easy]:
- 01:09:237 - Add a note here. Felt weird having nothing here when the music is still going on. Ok
- 01:13:208 (1) - This note is arguably coming too soon after a spinner for a normal diff, considering it's so far away from the middle of the screen. You should end the spinner 1/1 earlier or reposition this note much closer to the middle of the screen (which i don't really see working cause of the next note). I keep this, the spinner is long and with the low AR this is not hard to press.
[Verdi's Taiko Oni]:
- AR+1. With AR2 you have too much stuff on the screen. I don't want :<
- 00:51:590 - Would be a good idea to add a note here, you had it in the previous section which was just like this, without it, it sounds empty. Don't forget the clap on it as well. But is consistent with the next section.
That's about it. Apart from timing, I didn't notice anything unrankable. Some stuff could use some polishing I guess, but overall the mapset was pretty good.
- Remove video from this diff.
Too bad the quality of the song is really bad, also the singer could probably take some singing lessons too. ;x; I know :'(
Good luck!
Gracias ~lovhin456 wrote:
here's my mod
general;
- nothing
easy;
- 00:03:281 (2,3) >> this would sound better imo No quiero poner una nota sola a 1/2 de distancia.
- 00:31:737 >> finish ? Ok
- 00:53:796 (4,5) >> mix into a slider Si te refieres a que haga de los dos un slider, no, creo que suena mejor asi.
normal;
- 00:17:399 (5,6) >> just make a slider from here to 00:17:840 Lo haría, pero se perderia el clap y quedaria un spacing raro.
- 00:18:281 >> add a note sahahsdasd nu :c
insane;
- 01:05:046 >> not sure about these streams, they are practically not following anything in the music Si siguen la musica, yo consigo escucharlo perfectamente
Download: Gabriela Vega y Maggie Vera - Superalma (eldnl) [Gonz].osulovhin456 wrote:
gonz;
- 00:07:362 >> move (5) here Added a circle here
- 00:10:671 (5,6) >> whistle on (5)s end and (6)s start Added!
- 00:24:678 >> finish ? Nope
- 00:44:421 >> move (8) here Okay, fixed
- 00:51:480 >> (7) should end here hm I'm not sure.
208,128,2620,2,0,B|256:88|304:128|304:128,1,99.9999999999999,4|0
400,104,3502,2,0,B|408:56,2,50
120,328,69678,6,0,B|152:312|152:312|184:296|200:256|184:216|148:194|112:208,2,200,4|4|4
392,56,73208,6,0,B|360:72|360:72|328:88|312:128|328:168|364:190|400:176,1,200,4|4
Thanks a lot naraku :3narakucrimson wrote:
Ok, time to recheck this! I'll probably be really pick, so sorry about that.
[Easy][Insane]
- 00:03:502 (2,3) - These sliders don't convince me yet. Try this: Ok, looks good :3
SPOILERIt's easier to read and play imo, but you can keep it as it is if you want to.208,128,2620,2,0,B|256:88|304:128|304:128,1,99.9999999999999,4|0
400,104,3502,2,0,B|408:56,2,50- 00:16:296 (2) - (Totally nazi) Could you please move this one grid left? Spacing would be more consistent, even if it doesn't matter that much in such small amounts. Left? the weird spacing is to right, fixed.
- 00:18:502 (1) - Again, nazi as hell, move this two grids down and two grids left, to keep spacing more consistent. Moved 1 grid down and 1 left, I can't two >.<
- 01:09:678 (1,1) - These sliders could be smoother! Try this: Is not a big change but ok
SPOILERThe code is for both sliders.120,328,69678,6,0,B|152:312|152:312|184:296|200:256|184:216|148:194|112:208,2,200,4|4|4
392,56,73208,6,0,B|360:72|360:72|328:88|312:128|328:168|364:190|400:176,1,200,4|4That would be all! And fix the stuff in red and call me back ~
- 00:17:730 (4) - I insisnt - this works better if it is 1/4th longer. It will follow the music in a much more understandable way for the player. I Change these notes by sliders, Is ok now?
- 00:18:943 (4,5) - This would flow better with an inversion, I think. Like this: Ok
SPOILERBe careful with the spacing if you do this!
Won't add code since it's pretty simple to do that.- 00:19:715 (7) - In a similar way to 00:18:943 (4,5), this sounds way better 1/4th later. Fixed
- 00:20:708 (4,5,6,7) - The same treatment to the two previous points, since this pattern is symmetrical to the previous one. You can simply copy & paste the previous pattern, too. Fixed
yay! Thanks \:D/narakucrimson wrote:
So:I think I covered everything else before.
- Checked that the new offset and BPM are the same in all diffs.
- Checked if there weren't unsnapped notes (found none in all diffs).
- Checked if the kiais were snapped.
So, after some irc modding on insane:log20:57 <narakucrimson> : veamos
20:58 <eldnl> : ok
21:01 <narakucrimson> : bien, los kiais estan bien, el timing tambien, y no hay objectos fuera de lugar
21:02 <narakucrimson> : ahora
21:02 <narakucrimson> : Insane
21:02 <eldnl> : ok
21:02 <narakucrimson> : 00:17:745 (4) -
21:02 <narakucrimson> : eso
21:02 <eldnl> : lo cambie por un slider >~<
21:02 <narakucrimson> : no se si es que no me termino de explicar bien, o si es que hay algo que no cierra
21:02 <narakucrimson> : si, pero no era a lo que me referia
21:02 <narakucrimson> : el tema es que
21:03 <narakucrimson> : el ritmo sugiere mucho mas
21:03 <narakucrimson> : que el slider termine en el tick blance, y no en el azul
21:03 <narakucrimson> : si haces eso
21:03 <narakucrimson> : para que suene bien, creo que deberias remover los clas de 00:18:296 (1,2) -
21:03 <narakucrimson> : y ahi, creo que te va a convencer mas ^^
21:05 <narakucrimson> : me explico? :O
21:05 <narakucrimson> : estas ahi? :O
21:10 <eldnl> : si si
21:10 <eldnl> : es que estaba viendo algo en las noticias
21:10 <eldnl> : no termina de convenserme lo que me dices
21:10 <eldnl> : siento que se sigue mejor el ritmo en los ticks azules
21:10 <eldnl> : escuchas los bajos?
21:12 <eldnl> : ok, a ver, escuchando otro ritmo (el de las trompetas) si se escucha bien en el tick blanco, pero ahora el problema sería como cambiarlo :l
21:12 <narakucrimson> : escucho los bajos
21:13 <narakucrimson> : pero en realidad
21:13 <narakucrimson> : es el ritmo de las trompetas el que predomin
21:13 <narakucrimson> : a
21:13 <narakucrimson> : o el mas facil de distinguir
21:13 <narakucrimson> : no es por capricho, es que de veras se juega mejor
21:13 <eldnl> : si, ahora que me fijo tienes razon xD
21:13 <eldnl> : pero no se como cambiarlo y que quede bien
21:13 <eldnl> : no tengo espacio >.>
21:13 <narakucrimson> : dejame probar algo
21:15 <narakucrimson> : que tal algo asi? http://puu.sh/6l3A
21:16 <narakucrimson> : y luego para 00:19:510 (6) -
21:16 <narakucrimson> : podrias probar algo como:
21:16 <narakucrimson> : http://puu.sh/6l3E
21:17 <narakucrimson> : luego, para 00:21:275 (6) - , solo tendrias que copiar el anterior y girarlo 180 grados ^^
21:18 <narakucrimson> : si estas de acuerdo, creo que no hay nada mas que tenga que decir~
21:19 <eldnl> : voy a reiniciar el juego
21:19 <eldnl> : que se escuchan corridos los hitsounds
21:19 <narakucrimson> : ok!
21:20 <eldnl> : ok ahi si
21:20 <eldnl> : estoy de acuerdo en cambiar las ultimas dos
21:20 <eldnl> : pero quiero conservar este
21:20 <eldnl> : 00:17:745 - (4)
21:21 <eldnl> : la verdad creo que ese si suena bien
21:21 <narakucrimson> : a mi me sigue sin parecer...
21:21 <narakucrimson> : no se
21:21 <narakucrimson> : dejame verlo bien
21:21 <eldnl> : ahi se acentuan mas los bajos, ni si quiera logro escuchar otra cosa
21:22 <narakucrimson> : es que en el tick blanco, suena un snare
21:22 <narakucrimson> : clarito
21:22 <narakucrimson> : por eso
21:22 <narakucrimson> : es que en realidad, como seguiste el ritmo de las vocales
21:23 <narakucrimson> : en parte, seguiste el ritmo de las trompetas y los snares
21:23 <narakucrimson> : por eso es que sonaria mejor si lo alargaras
21:23 <narakucrimson> : de veras que no lo digo por capricho
21:23 <eldnl> : si entiendo xD
21:23 <eldnl> : algo haré, espera
21:23 <narakucrimson> : ok~
21:24 <narakucrimson> : despues de eso, solo haz el update, y lo reviso
I think this is ready for a bubble.Yay, my first bubble!
Good luck!
~Krisom wrote:
Buenas! Décimo modposts como BAT! Wheee ~~~/0/
General.-
· Hay problemas con el mp3/offset/BPM. Por ahora no podré rankear hasta que resolvamos como arreglarlos.
· Todo el resto está en orden. Ok :c
Insane.-
00:03:955 (8) - Beep! El segundo repeat está escondido bajo el hitsplash de 00:03:845 (7). El patrón en sí es bastante intuitivo, pero preferiría que dejaras algo más rankeable para no tener problemas luego. Desde cuando estos sliders no se pueden rankear? orz si solo hay que mantener el raton encima, bueh, lo mantendré asi por ahora, despues veo como cambiarlo.
Easy.-
00:36:167 (1) - Haz que esto termine en silencio en 00:39:256 - para que haya más tiempo de recuperación después del spinner. Por suerte calza con el término de las voces Ok
Cuando tenga noticias sobre el mo3/offset del resto del BAT team te avisaré ~
Download: Gabriela Vega y Maggie Vera - Superalma (eldnl) [Gonz].osuKrisom wrote:
Gonz.-
00:40:148 (1,2) - Borra (1) y mueve (2) 1/2 atrás? Like a G6
01:09:703 (1) - Finish al final? ^
Podrías quitar un repeat, mover el slider más atrás y agregar un circulo en el espacio que dejó. Eso sería la manera más fácil de arreglarlo.eldnl wrote:
Insane.-
00:03:955 (8) - Beep! El segundo repeat está escondido bajo el hitsplash de 00:03:845 (7). El patrón en sí es bastante intuitivo, pero preferiría que dejaras algo más rankeable para no tener problemas luego. Desde cuando estos sliders no se pueden rankear? orz si solo hay que mantener el raton encima, bueh, lo mantendré asi por ahora, despues veo como cambiarlo.
Lo dire en español ya que mi ingles no es muy bueno para responderte como tal.narakucrimson wrote:
However, it isn't a bad idea to get a new mp3 with higher quality~
I haven't found one yet, but I'll let you know if I do.
Hasta donde se no esta la version completa en español, no me costaría nada cortarla tampoco :cVerdisphena wrote:
Lo dire en español ya que mi ingles no es muy bueno para responderte como tal.narakucrimson wrote:
However, it isn't a bad idea to get a new mp3 with higher quality~
I haven't found one yet, but I'll let you know if I do.
Bueno, la cosa es que encontrar un mp3 de mejor calidad y que no diga "Shaman King" seria de la version larga, ahi tendriamos que cortar el mp3 en un punto y seria, no creo que encuentren la TV Size con esos puntos, o simplemente seria bien dificil encontrar eso x.x
Pero la idea seria quitarlo, todos reclaman por eso. Si la encuentras genial.narakucrimson wrote:
Si cortamos la versión completa, yo le puedo agregar el "shaman king" con Audacity. Creo.
The map was in wip, moved to pending, fix the bubble please ><Doomsday wrote:
The logtl;dr, Checked the timing, and found that I thought it was fine as it was, so decided to mod on the spot to fix the bubble. Not many issues were found.21:08 <Doomsday> : hmm. so this was popped for it's timing?
21:08 <eldnl> : yep
21:08 <Doomsday> : because...it's seems fine to me
21:08 <Doomsday> : oh dear
21:10 <Doomsday> : I'll mod it now for you in that case
21:12 <eldnl> : I love you
21:14 <Doomsday> : Mind reviving it for me then? I'll post anything that needs fixing here
21:19 <eldnl> : It's revived
21:20 <Doomsday> : awesome
21:20 <eldnl> : awesome D:?
21:21 <Doomsday> : awesome, as in, awesome that it's revived :v
21:21 <Doomsday> : nevermind
21:21 <eldnl> : :v
21:24 <Doomsday> : Easy looks fine. It's pretty cool actually
21:26 <eldnl> :
21:28 <Doomsday> : Heh, normal passes too. The map is pretty nice so far
21:31 <Doomsday> : Oh wait, I just noticed one thing
21:31 <eldnl> : what
21:31 <Doomsday> : it is probably intentional I guess, but Easy has tick rate 1, with the other diffs having tick rate 2?
21:31 <Doomsday> : (not a big issue, just wandering)
21:32 <eldnl> : Intentional
21:32 <Doomsday> : Ahh, alright
21:32 <eldnl> : Slow sliders feels really tight with a lot of ticks ><
21:33 <Doomsday> : I see what you mean. I think tick rate 2 works fine, but each to his own
21:33 <eldnl> : wait
21:33 <eldnl> : I'll see
21:34 <Doomsday> : Since the sliders are not that slow, it doesn't feel very tight here
21:34 <eldnl> : Agree
21:34 <eldnl> : I'll change it
21:35 <Doomsday> : Cool
21:35 <Doomsday> : ANyways, Gonz is next
21:35 <eldnl> : perfect diff (?
21:36 <Doomsday> : Easy and Normal are fine. just started checking the Gonz diff
21:36 <eldnl> : ok
21:37 <Doomsday> : Yup, Gonz diff is great ~
21:38 <eldnl> : Obviously (?
21:39 <Doomsday> : hehe, I guess :v
21:44 <Doomsday> : hmm, not that keen on the Taiko, but it's passable. nothing wrong with it at least
21:45 <Doomsday> : It's just me, not my kind of map, but others would like it
21:45 <eldnl> : I don't know anything about taiko
21:45 <eldnl> : Not sure if the diff is good
21:45 <eldnl> : XD
21:46 <Doomsday> : I've seen enough to see which ones would be good. I'm not keen on this kind of taiko map, but that's just
21:46 <Doomsday> : because I suck
21:47 <eldnl> : xD
21:50 <Doomsday> : aaand insane looks good to me ~
21:51 <Doomsday> : So yup, the map's pretty good actually! I quite like it
21:51 <eldnl> :
21:51 <eldnl> : thanks
rebubbled!
Thanks a lot naraku ! ><narakucrimson wrote:
Ok! Everything in the folder seems clean, the timing got checked, and it seems it's ok.
[General][Normal]
- Just an idea here, what do you think of ending the kiai at 01:02:201 - ? It felt a little weird ending where it does now, but it's your choice Ok
[Insane]
- 00:03:293 (2,3) - Tell me if this doesn't feel a little weird while playing. The first (2) was a little unexpected imo, perhaps by how the pattern is designed, idk. Give it some test plays and tell me what you think, because it might be just my impression
Everything is fine.
Ok! That's all i have to say. Let me know if you change anything, and I thnk I can rank this afterwards!
- 00:57:789 (4) - This feels as if an inversion (Ctrl + R) would make it flow better. Try it! Se siente raro como dices tu ><