fixed some ~
thanks everyone's mod ~
thanks everyone's mod ~
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Rita - Little Busters! -Ecstasy Ver.-
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Topic Starter
Hi , Kawayi RikaGeneral
- offset减去 4~7 ms ( If you want. )
- 00:03:796 (3) - 切到接下来的(4)了 故意的?
- 00:28:034 (3,1) - 摆法感觉很不顺呀
- 02:04:590 (4) - 晚了1/2 在之前的白线结束的
- 01:10:551 (6) - Wow, what a jump... x4.36
- 01:55:849 (1,2,3,4) - 由于(1)的形状 判断何时结束有点困难 然后马上接之后的1/2很容易失误
- 02:17:504 (4) - Ctrl+R
- 00:12:140 (6,1,2,3,4) - 因为是一个慢速的slider 后面接1/2s很容易出现读谱上的失误
- 00:14:524 (5) - 上面刚加速，这个slider节奏又慢了,和节奏也不那么搭. 考虑在00:14:524+note 然后在00:14:921 来一个1/3的slider ?
- 00:14:915 (1,2,3,4) - 恩,这4个节奏本来就有些容易抢拍,再来个跳的话感觉更坑了...
- 00:26:637 (x) - 其实背景音有4个鼓点,从这个红线开始起的, 所以放3个的话有点不知道究竟跟的是哪3个,换一个slider 节奏可能更清晰
- 00:47:498 (1,2) - 这里没什么理由跳吧 而且是刚开始 (我个人是很痛恨的..T.T
- 01:21:074 (7,8,9) - 和之前的(6)之间空出一个1/4,第一次打会不知道 (第1PC的时候我就抢了 第2PC才OK...
- 02:18:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这个跳有点勉强 节奏方面和音乐也不太搭
- 02:20:677 (1,2,3) - 这个3连节奏不太同意 而且太跳 会导致看不过来
Good luck~
TokidoSaya_old_1
good song though.
first, i don't know why you used this diff name "Rin". oh i think it's because you like Rin as the character. but it's meaningless here, it does not fit your mapset. i would think it's made by natsumerin.
second, if you can't map better than the current versions, there's really no point in remapping a song. i personally don't like natsumerin's maps, nor cc's, but sadly, i have to say you didn't beat them.
third, the reason why i said you didn't beat them is, many parts of your map just make no sense. did you ever think "if this pattern fits in the music?" what i saw was just some unrelated stuff, it's not a map.
ok go back to some details
1,add tag : key galgame
2,00:14:921 (1,2,3,4) - this is 3/4, not 2/3
3,the diff Rin is better than Rika
4,go remap Rika when you are skilled enough to make an insane like this
5,if you are not going to rank the map, plz ignore me.
first, i don't know why you used this diff name "Rin". oh i think it's because you like Rin as the character. but it's meaningless here, it does not fit your mapset. i would think it's made by natsumerin.
second, if you can't map better than the current versions, there's really no point in remapping a song. i personally don't like natsumerin's maps, nor cc's, but sadly, i have to say you didn't beat them.
third, the reason why i said you didn't beat them is, many parts of your map just make no sense. did you ever think "if this pattern fits in the music?" what i saw was just some unrelated stuff, it's not a map.
ok go back to some details
1,add tag : key galgame
2,00:14:921 (1,2,3,4) - this is 3/4, not 2/3
3,the diff Rin is better than Rika
4,go remap Rika when you are skilled enough to make an insane like this
5,if you are not going to rank the map, plz ignore me.
Hi Kawayi Rika ~
Your song all solo diff have more than 10 minutes, so I'll mod only 2 diffs (form my rules)
All suggestion
General
- 'spinner-background.png' I think you can reduce file size by change it to '.jpg' format
Rika
00:18:101 (2) - I think this slider it isn't look like circle shape, so please try this code. (I think it look better.)
01:09:756 (2) - finish ?
01:29:623 (1) - start of slider add finish ?
01:39:955 (1) - I hear finish sound, so you can add finish and clap together.
02:46:710 (1) - start of slider add finish ?
02:47:902 (4) - end of slider I can hear finish sound you can add it or not
02:53:067 (1) - start of slider add finish ?
Zero
01:09:756 (1) - add finish too ?
02:36:378 (1) - start of slider add finish ?
02:37:173 (6) - add finish too ?
02:46:710 (1) - ^ (start of slider)
02:53:067 (1) - ^
Ozzy's Little Taiko
01:00:120 (?) add note with o
01:54:259 (?) ^
03:29:623 (G) - I suggest add green timing with 10% (like silence spinner) because your spinner end it not have any rhythm o_O"
About taiko diff i'm newbie to mod it, so never mind this mod if it not helpful lol
Good Luck
Your song all solo diff have more than 10 minutes, so I'll mod only 2 diffs (form my rules)
All suggestion
General
- 'spinner-background.png' I think you can reduce file size by change it to '.jpg' format
Rika
00:18:101 (2) - I think this slider it isn't look like circle shape, so please try this code. (I think it look better.)
268,92,18100,2,2,B|324:92|408:164|408:268|320:352|204:352|108:284|108:164|172:100|244:92,1,600,2|0^Save before you test it
01:09:756 (2) - finish ?
01:29:623 (1) - start of slider add finish ?
01:39:955 (1) - I hear finish sound, so you can add finish and clap together.
02:46:710 (1) - start of slider add finish ?
02:47:902 (4) - end of slider I can hear finish sound you can add it or not
02:53:067 (1) - start of slider add finish ?
Zero
01:09:756 (1) - add finish too ?
02:36:378 (1) - start of slider add finish ?
02:37:173 (6) - add finish too ?
02:46:710 (1) - ^ (start of slider)
02:53:067 (1) - ^
Ozzy's Little Taiko
01:00:120 (?) add note with o
01:54:259 (?) ^
03:29:623 (G) - I suggest add green timing with 10% (like silence spinner) because your spinner end it not have any rhythm o_O"
About taiko diff i'm newbie to mod it, so never mind this mod if it not helpful lol
Good Luck
Topic Starter
thanks mod update ~
Busters!
02:24:855 (2,3,4) - 感觉三个note还是不太适合音乐中的鼓声，变成1/4的折返slider
02:36:776 (2,3,4) - ^
Rin
00:17:504 (?) - 加一个slider，00:18:100 结束，再紧接一个转盘
00:58:630 (7,1) - 两个slider结尾处重合多好啊，后面的都可以右移到中间，01:04:988 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个倾斜角度大一些就可以了
Rika
OD8 有点高啊
01:11:147 (3) - 感觉这里单调了，折返slider，或者是3个1/4note
01:45:319 (3) - 尾部再往下来点，跟(2)成一条线
Zero
00:34:590 (4) - change to a 1/4 slider
01:20:782 (8) - 1 grid down
Ozzy's Little Taiko
so many big circle……
星星挺多的了，我就攒一个了……
02:24:855 (2,3,4) - 感觉三个note还是不太适合音乐中的鼓声，变成1/4的折返slider
02:36:776 (2,3,4) - ^
Rin
00:17:504 (?) - 加一个slider，00:18:100 结束，再紧接一个转盘
00:58:630 (7,1) - 两个slider结尾处重合多好啊，后面的都可以右移到中间，01:04:988 (1,2,3,4) - 这四个倾斜角度大一些就可以了
Rika
OD8 有点高啊
01:11:147 (3) - 感觉这里单调了，折返slider，或者是3个1/4note
01:45:319 (3) - 尾部再往下来点，跟(2)成一条线
Zero
00:34:590 (4) - change to a 1/4 slider
01:20:782 (8) - 1 grid down
Ozzy's Little Taiko
so many big circle……
星星挺多的了，我就攒一个了……
❤Hihi~!
❤开始modding~！here we go~!
❤总的来说。。。
❤【Rika】 diff
❤ 【zero】 diff
❤【Rin】diff
❤ 【busters!】diff
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歌曲应该算是流行摇滚音乐（pop-rock)吧?各种小跳连打我认为把歌曲体现的很好
从音效绿线上来看的确下了很大功夫，
继续加油
新人modder，以上modding仅个人建议。
❤开始modding~！here we go~!
❤总的来说。。。
SPOILER
❤音量问题，kiai time 的时候音量略小，因为音乐声音比较大，鼓点把音效遮了，稍微大点就好
❤音效问题，个人感觉有点嘈杂，音乐中的鼓点感觉是很清楚的，加上踩镲的hit-sound，如果在鼓点的话还好，一直有就会显得比较乱。。
❤皮肤做的很漂亮，小脚印hitcircle我喜欢~！
❤整体感觉不错，有跳有连打，位置上面也有对称，谱面也挺满，GOOD
❤音效问题，个人感觉有点嘈杂，音乐中的鼓点感觉是很清楚的，加上踩镲的hit-sound，如果在鼓点的话还好，一直有就会显得比较乱。。
❤皮肤做的很漂亮，小脚印hitcircle我喜欢~！
❤整体感觉不错，有跳有连打，位置上面也有对称，谱面也挺满，GOOD
❤【Rika】 diff
SPOILER
01:09:557 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这几个note的节奏我找不好。。按照音乐的话应该不是这样的。。
01:24:061 (1,2,3) - 跳的会不会太过了。。。
01:50:882 (6,1) - 这两个之间会不会也太跳了。。。
02:13:928 (2) - 要不要离远点？
02:15:120 (4) - 同上
02:55:849 (5) - 形状跟左边的好像不太一样
01:24:061 (1,2,3) - 跳的会不会太过了。。。
01:50:882 (6,1) - 这两个之间会不会也太跳了。。。
02:13:928 (2) - 要不要离远点？
02:15:120 (4) - 同上
02:55:849 (5) - 形状跟左边的好像不太一样
❤ 【zero】 diff
SPOILER
01:20:782 (8) - down 1 grid?
02:55:849 (6,7,8,9,10) - for these notes,i personally think its not very good looking for they are not symmetric with 02:55:451 (3,4,5)
02:55:849 (6,7,8,9,10) - for these notes,i personally think its not very good looking for they are not symmetric with 02:55:451 (3,4,5)
❤【Rin】diff
SPOILER
00:09:359 (2) - 移到00:09:160
❤ 【busters!】diff
SPOILER
GOOD
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歌曲应该算是流行摇滚音乐（pop-rock)吧?各种小跳连打我认为把歌曲体现的很好
从音效绿线上来看的确下了很大功夫，
继续加油
新人modder，以上modding仅个人建议。
Topic Starter
fixed some ~ thanks mod ~
hi Rika
from my mod queue
Busters!
00:30:021 (3) - 1grid down
01:59:822 (1) - Ctrl+J?
02:08:564 (1) - hidden by 押忍? http://puu.sh/8Kwo
Rin
00:24:259 (1,2,3) - Why is (3) large as for spacing?I think (2)x172y76 (3)x340y76 is better
01:17:107 (1) - remove newcombo and 01:17:703 (4) newcombo
01:55:849 (1) - hidden by 押忍? http://puu.sh/8Kzh
02:26:445 (2) - 1grid right and (3)1grid down
Zero
00:51:478 (3) - remove whitsle and add whitsle end
00:53:862 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -It is better to put a whistle only on a white line. IMO
01:13:729 (3) - move y116
01:55:054 - add note?
Rika
00:13:332 (1) - hidden by押忍?
00:28:431 (1) - add finish on head?
00:34:789 (3) - movex376y120
01:10:153 (4,5) - 1grid up
02:46:710 (1) - add finish on head?
that's all
nice map
from my mod queue
Busters!
00:30:021 (3) - 1grid down
01:59:822 (1) - Ctrl+J?
02:08:564 (1) - hidden by 押忍? http://puu.sh/8Kwo
Rin
00:24:259 (1,2,3) - Why is (3) large as for spacing?I think (2)x172y76 (3)x340y76 is better
01:17:107 (1) - remove newcombo and 01:17:703 (4) newcombo
01:55:849 (1) - hidden by 押忍? http://puu.sh/8Kzh
02:26:445 (2) - 1grid right and (3)1grid down
Zero
00:51:478 (3) - remove whitsle and add whitsle end
00:53:862 (1,2,3,4,1,2) -It is better to put a whistle only on a white line. IMO
01:13:729 (3) - move y116
01:55:054 - add note?
Rika
00:13:332 (1) - hidden by押忍?
00:28:431 (1) - add finish on head?
00:34:789 (3) - movex376y120
01:10:153 (4,5) - 1grid up
02:46:710 (1) - add finish on head?
that's all
nice map
Topic Starter
thanks mod ~
update all diff ~
update all diff ~
hello~~
IMO -> My opinions
Some Suggestions
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Busters!
00:14:921 (1,2) - IMO this slider is 1/3 right and unstack note is weird play gameplay will better if stack because 1/3 is very weird try stack ? IMO
01:09:756 (1,2,3) - i not like the slider blanket near try this http://puu.sh/8MXB this is better and more read also if you fix this carefully spacing at 01:12:537 (4)
01:24:061 (3,4,5) - this is hard for this normal try stack or slider repeat IMO maybe by me i think this is hard catch
02:00:617 (2,3) - this slider end with stack is hard catch try unstack or try stack with 02:02:206 (1) IMO
02:53:067 (1,2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/8MZa the 3 note is too higher overlaps and almost hidden with this slider repeat try change this part
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Rin
00:23:464 (6) - i will be like if stack with slider 00:23:663 (7) because better gameplay imo
00:58:630 (7,1) - almost hidden repeat try this http://puu.sh/8N03 or try change you owm imo
01:39:955 (1) - I can see my self is not look nice arc
01:59:822 (1) - the end point need grid 1 up to make symentric
everthing look good
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Zero
rawr
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Rika
00:18:101 (2) - lol not look good try this code
if you like orz
i aldready did mod this diff with you irc long time ago
everthing look good diff
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that all i think
and good luck
bye bye ~nyan nyan~
IMO -> My opinions
Some Suggestions
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Busters!
00:14:921 (1,2) - IMO this slider is 1/3 right and unstack note is weird play gameplay will better if stack because 1/3 is very weird try stack ? IMO
01:09:756 (1,2,3) - i not like the slider blanket near try this http://puu.sh/8MXB this is better and more read also if you fix this carefully spacing at 01:12:537 (4)
01:24:061 (3,4,5) - this is hard for this normal try stack or slider repeat IMO maybe by me i think this is hard catch
02:00:617 (2,3) - this slider end with stack is hard catch try unstack or try stack with 02:02:206 (1) IMO
02:53:067 (1,2,3,1) - http://puu.sh/8MZa the 3 note is too higher overlaps and almost hidden with this slider repeat try change this part
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Rin
00:23:464 (6) - i will be like if stack with slider 00:23:663 (7) because better gameplay imo
00:58:630 (7,1) - almost hidden repeat try this http://puu.sh/8N03 or try change you owm imo
01:39:955 (1) - I can see my self is not look nice arc
01:59:822 (1) - the end point need grid 1 up to make symentric
everthing look good
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Zero
rawr
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Rika
00:18:101 (2) - lol not look good try this code
288,92,18101,2,2,B|344:100|396:164|396:284|340:368|172:368|116:284|116:164|168:100|224:92,1,600,2|0http://puu.sh/8N2P
if you like orz
i aldready did mod this diff with you irc long time ago
everthing look good diff
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that all i think
and good luck
bye bye ~nyan nyan~
Topic Starter
thanks mod and star fixed some ~
Hi ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by Kawayi Rika
Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only
[Ozzy's Little Taiko]
03:15:915 ~ 03:19:690 - Diff spread is too big when compared with others. I know this is made intentionally, so I won't force you to fix this~
The map is OK overall ~
Try to use more different hitsound patterns :3
Rating : 8/10
Star and good luck ~
Here is my taiko mod ~
Mod request by Kawayi Rika
Blue~ Critical issues, you must fix this
Purple~ I think you should fix this
Pink~ Suggestions only
[Ozzy's Little Taiko]
03:15:915 ~ 03:19:690 - Diff spread is too big when compared with others. I know this is made intentionally, so I won't force you to fix this~
Suggested patterns
Suggestions only. Change them only if you want to ~
01:00:617 ( 1 ) - Add finish ?
01:10:551 ( 5 ~ 8, 11 ~ 12 ) - All blue notes ?
01:13:531 ( 3, 7, 11 ~ 12, 15 ~ 16 ) - ^
02:14:127 ( 2 ) - Red note ?
02:15:319 ( 2 ) - ^
02:16:511 ( 2 ) - ^
02:17:703 ( 2 ) - ^
02:54:259 ( 6 ~ 7, 10 ) - All blue notes ?
01:00:617 ( 1 ) - Add finish ?
01:10:551 ( 5 ~ 8, 11 ~ 12 ) - All blue notes ?
01:13:531 ( 3, 7, 11 ~ 12, 15 ~ 16 ) - ^
02:14:127 ( 2 ) - Red note ?
02:15:319 ( 2 ) - ^
02:16:511 ( 2 ) - ^
02:17:703 ( 2 ) - ^
02:54:259 ( 6 ~ 7, 10 ) - All blue notes ?
The map is OK overall ~
Try to use more different hitsound patterns :3
Rating : 8/10
Star and good luck ~
no changes orz
big note parts (D D D D D D D D D etc) are meant to emphasize the fact that the same thing is played
the d d k k d d k k is a pattern sort of thing, to fit the feel
\o/o\o/o\o/o\o/o\
big note parts (D D D D D D D D D etc) are meant to emphasize the fact that the same thing is played
the d d k k d d k k is a pattern sort of thing, to fit the feel
\o/o\o/o\o/o\o/o\
General
- 同时silence slidertick和sliderslide是unrankable的, 至少tick是不能静音的, 你slidertick1和slide1同时静音了
- 因为有video, 考虑要不要取消letterbox
- 从视频和wiki来看, title的Ecstacy的E都应该是小写的
- 01:44:717 - Break可以考虑拉到这儿
Skin
- cursor在转spinner的时候不太看得清, 考虑换个黑边的cursor可能会更好
- comboburst和section-fail人物头发那块有些空白区域去掉会感觉更好
Timing
- 我测得offset : 1406 (-6), 相差不多, 你觉得这个更好就用这个吧
(下面mod是以我的timing来算的)
Busters
- 01:15:313 (3) - 考虑加个finish
- 01:17:697 (4) - ^
- 01:21:670 (1) - ^
- 01:27:233 (3) - ^
- 01:33:591 (1) - ^, 还有些, 其实也就是对应背景乐, 看你自己喜好加不加了
Rin
- finish建议我就不多写了, 如果需要我列举哪些地方可以加的话可以再找我
- 00:34:584 (1) - 取消NC
- 00:47:107 (1) - 像这种单独一个的combo意义不大, 改不改随你了
- 00:49:882 (1) - 这跳让人打着很不舒服
- 01:10:545 (6) - 感觉跳得挺突然的
- 01:28:425 (5,6) - 这种排列会容易让人觉得5是2反弹然后后面接的6, 倒也说不上有什么问题, 感觉会略难读
- 02:42:531 (1,1) - 这间距太坑爹了, 02:42:531 (1)应该是1/4拍的reverse吧?
Zero
- 01:09:750 (1,2,3,4) - Music here are 3 3/4 beat space sound, so use 1/2 beat space notes here might be confusing IMO
Rika
- 00:33:790 (6) - 1/4 stream后stack接一个1/2拍后的slider略坑, 当然也不是不行
- 01:16:902 (4) - ^
- 01:03:194 (1) - 间距略大, 跟之前8和之后2的间拍虽然一样但是spacing不一样读图的时候会稍微楞一下
- 01:24:055 (1,2,3) - 这jump...也打着不舒服, 不如换了1,3位置然后1,3再水平翻转下
我发现你很多跳是为了对称或者排列跳, 虽然note好看但是打起来并不是太顺畅, 建议做图的时候多自己test下, 毕竟图还是要打着舒服才好玩
o.o
指针的话O.o
弄了个黑色的试试看。我OSU出问题了所以没test过O.o
具体怎样就不知道了~（不负责任的代表 ━┳━ ━┳━
指针的话O.o
弄了个黑色的试试看。我OSU出问题了所以没test过O.o
具体怎样就不知道了~（不负责任的代表 ━┳━ ━┳━
我把觉得可以加finish的地方都列出来, 你看哪些你没加的自己选着来加吧, 加*号的是比较强烈的finish音, 这些建议你都加上, 没加*号的就是一般的finish音, 选择性的加些就行, 另外可以考虑降低音量
*00:34:783
00:47:107
01:00:219
*01:06:577
*01:09:756
*01:12:935
01:15:319
01:17:703
01:18:498
01:21:676
01:24:855
01:27:239
01:29:623
01:30:418
*01:33:597
*01:36:776
*01:39:955
01:43:133
*02:19:690
02:22:074
02:25:253
02:28:431
*02:37:173
02:40:352
02:41:743
*02:43:531
02:46:710
*02:49:888
02:53:067
*02:55:849
*02:56:246
03:02:405 - 最后一个spinner可以考虑这里结束并加finish, 当然音量就要在结尾提高了
*00:34:783
00:47:107
01:00:219
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03:02:405 - 最后一个spinner可以考虑这里结束并加finish, 当然音量就要在结尾提高了
uuuuuu~ This is Aki_Kannabi Chinese mod!
[Busters!]
这个应该是normal吧？
01:04:988 - (1) 这个起始位置在 01:04:789 结束位置不变！
02:02:206 - (1) 这个跟的是歌词！后面的我怎么感觉突然就变跟鼓点了？有点乱啊
[Rin]
00:09:359 - (2) 位置不对，这个放在这 00:09:160 ！
01:04:789 - 加 circle
01:26:445 - (6) 这个感觉不合适！在这点放个Circle，然后这个滑条从01:26:643到01:26:842。
01:55:849 - (1) 滑条最好到重拍结束！！后面的那个倒是没问题
[Zero]
01:09:756 - (1-4) 这个跳感觉突然了！！试着做个渐远跳如何？
01:17:703 - (7) 弄成滑条 结束在 01:18:100 把这个位置的(1)取消掉！
[Rika]
00:18:100 - (2) 这个滑条结束的位置在 00:20:484！
00:26:842 - (1-10) 这组跳感觉比较突然！！而且有些是堆叠不好读！
00:33:799 - (6) 不要叠起来！弄开！
01:16:908 - (4) ^
01:21:080 - (7-9) ^
01:51:080 - (1) 这间距。。。坑爹么？这里不要跳！
02:30:617 - (11.1)求同等距离 1.36x
Ok.....大致这么多！！
祝你好运！
[Busters!]
这个应该是normal吧？
01:04:988 - (1) 这个起始位置在 01:04:789 结束位置不变！
02:02:206 - (1) 这个跟的是歌词！后面的我怎么感觉突然就变跟鼓点了？有点乱啊
[Rin]
00:09:359 - (2) 位置不对，这个放在这 00:09:160 ！
01:04:789 - 加 circle
01:26:445 - (6) 这个感觉不合适！在这点放个Circle，然后这个滑条从01:26:643到01:26:842。
01:55:849 - (1) 滑条最好到重拍结束！！后面的那个倒是没问题
[Zero]
01:09:756 - (1-4) 这个跳感觉突然了！！试着做个渐远跳如何？
01:17:703 - (7) 弄成滑条 结束在 01:18:100 把这个位置的(1)取消掉！
[Rika]
00:18:100 - (2) 这个滑条结束的位置在 00:20:484！
00:26:842 - (1-10) 这组跳感觉比较突然！！而且有些是堆叠不好读！
00:33:799 - (6) 不要叠起来！弄开！
01:16:908 - (4) ^
01:21:080 - (7-9) ^
01:51:080 - (1) 这间距。。。坑爹么？这里不要跳！
02:30:617 - (11.1)求同等距离 1.36x
Ok.....大致这么多！！
祝你好运！
Topic Starter
thanks mod ~ update ~
IRC modded.
Chat log
00:08 *kanpakyin is editing (Rita - Little Busters! -ecstacy ver.-)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/39293]
00:08 <Kawayi Rika> : 嗯
00:08 <kanpakyin> : [Busters!]
00:08 <Kawayi Rika> : OK~_~
00:09 <kanpakyin> : 00:14:915 (1) - 1/4 snap
00:09 <Kawayi Rika> : 这里是1/3
00:09 <Kawayi Rika> : ..
00:09 <kanpakyin> : 不..25% 聽
00:09 <kanpakyin> : 是1/4
00:10 <Kawayi Rika> : 不能相信25%...
00:10 <Kawayi Rika> : 没人挑过这个的
00:11 <kanpakyin> : 00:28:028 (3,1) - Easy裏面不建議出現
00:11 <kanpakyin> : 1/2 click
00:11 <kanpakyin> : 00:33:194 (1,2) - ^同
00:12 <Kawayi Rika> : 嘛 这个也觉的没问题 找过好多人测试过
00:12 <Kawayi Rika> : 这是N难度没关系
00:13 <kanpakyin> : 01:04:982 (1,4) - 其實我一直都覺得這樣的slider很醜
00:13 <Kawayi Rika> : T_T 嘛 想出来的Slider
00:13 <kanpakyin> : 01:07:366 (1) - NC
00:14 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
00:16 <kanpakyin> : 02:04:584 (4) - 延長到02:05:379 - ,然後spinner向後移1/2
00:17 <Kawayi Rika> : 我觉的那样太紧了...
00:17 <Kawayi Rika> : 暂时不改
00:17 <kanpakyin> : -02:25:247 (4) - Normal finish
00:18 <kanpakyin> : 02:35:180 (4) - Slider尾部移開一點
00:18 <kanpakyin> : 怕會被MAT挑
00:19 <kanpakyin> : 02:37:167 (4) - Normal finish
00:19 <Kawayi Rika> : 挑了再改 XD
00:19 <kanpakyin> : [Rin]
00:19 <Kawayi Rika> : GO
00:19 <kanpakyin> : 我快速看一次把..
00:20 <Kawayi Rika> : 慢点看也没事
00:20 <Kawayi Rika> : 我时间多的是
00:20 <kanpakyin> : 00:21:670 (1) - finish太重了
00:20 <kanpakyin> : 聽起來有點怪
00:20 <Kawayi Rika> : 还好啦
00:21 <kanpakyin> : 00:28:227 (8,1) - 拉開一點?
00:23 <kanpakyin> : 01:10:545 (6) - 跳太大
00:24 <Kawayi Rika> : 这跳
00:24 <Kawayi Rika> : 我想过
00:24 <Kawayi Rika> : 要不要从8的地方开始
00:24 <Kawayi Rika> : 会近点
00:25 <kanpakyin> : 恩
00:25 <kanpakyin> : 會好一點
00:25 <Kawayi Rika> : 嗯
00:08 <Kawayi Rika> : 嗯
00:08 <kanpakyin> : [Busters!]
00:08 <Kawayi Rika> : OK~_~
00:09 <kanpakyin> : 00:14:915 (1) - 1/4 snap
00:09 <Kawayi Rika> : 这里是1/3
00:09 <Kawayi Rika> : ..
00:09 <kanpakyin> : 不..25% 聽
00:09 <kanpakyin> : 是1/4
00:10 <Kawayi Rika> : 不能相信25%...
00:10 <Kawayi Rika> : 没人挑过这个的
00:11 <kanpakyin> : 00:28:028 (3,1) - Easy裏面不建議出現
00:11 <kanpakyin> : 1/2 click
00:11 <kanpakyin> : 00:33:194 (1,2) - ^同
00:12 <Kawayi Rika> : 嘛 这个也觉的没问题 找过好多人测试过
00:12 <Kawayi Rika> : 这是N难度没关系
00:13 <kanpakyin> : 01:04:982 (1,4) - 其實我一直都覺得這樣的slider很醜
00:13 <Kawayi Rika> : T_T 嘛 想出来的Slider
00:13 <kanpakyin> : 01:07:366 (1) - NC
00:14 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
00:16 <kanpakyin> : 02:04:584 (4) - 延長到02:05:379 - ,然後spinner向後移1/2
00:17 <Kawayi Rika> : 我觉的那样太紧了...
00:17 <Kawayi Rika> : 暂时不改
00:17 <kanpakyin> : -02:25:247 (4) - Normal finish
00:18 <kanpakyin> : 02:35:180 (4) - Slider尾部移開一點
00:18 <kanpakyin> : 怕會被MAT挑
00:19 <kanpakyin> : 02:37:167 (4) - Normal finish
00:19 <Kawayi Rika> : 挑了再改 XD
00:19 <kanpakyin> : [Rin]
00:19 <Kawayi Rika> : GO
00:19 <kanpakyin> : 我快速看一次把..
00:20 <Kawayi Rika> : 慢点看也没事
00:20 <Kawayi Rika> : 我时间多的是
00:20 <kanpakyin> : 00:21:670 (1) - finish太重了
00:20 <kanpakyin> : 聽起來有點怪
00:20 <Kawayi Rika> : 还好啦
00:21 <kanpakyin> : 00:28:227 (8,1) - 拉開一點?
00:23 <kanpakyin> : 01:10:545 (6) - 跳太大
00:24 <Kawayi Rika> : 这跳
00:24 <Kawayi Rika> : 我想过
00:24 <Kawayi Rika> : 要不要从8的地方开始
00:24 <Kawayi Rika> : 会近点
00:25 <kanpakyin> : 恩
00:25 <kanpakyin> : 會好一點
00:25 <Kawayi Rika> : 嗯
Topic Starter
thanks mod KPY ~
Modded via IRC
log
13:53 <KuraiPettan> : IRC mod ?
13:54 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
13:54 <KuraiPettan> : Buster! diff :
13:54 <KuraiPettan> : HPdrain 4 and OD 4 are too high for the easiest difficulty
13:55 <KuraiPettan> : 3 would be better imo
13:55 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm 4 is too hard?
13:55 <Kawayi Rika> : I think that the label will change E
13:56 <Kawayi Rika> : Now N
13:56 <KuraiPettan> : I don't think it will change the label
13:56 <KuraiPettan> : and even if the label change, it's not a problem owo
13:57 <Kawayi Rika> : OK OD,HP-1
13:57 <KuraiPettan> : cool
13:58 <KuraiPettan> : Rin :
13:59 <Kawayi Rika> : ＯＫ
13:59 <KuraiPettan> : 01:10:346 (5,6) - this jump is so sudden and innapropriate to the difficulty of the map
13:59 <KuraiPettan> : So you shouldn't have a jump here
13:59 <Kawayi Rika> : you are update this ?
13:59 <KuraiPettan> : You ought to change it
14:00 <Kawayi Rika> : I think the JUMP, not too far
14:00 <KuraiPettan> : yep but it's a hard difficulty right ?
14:00 <Kawayi Rika> : yeah hard
14:01 <KuraiPettan> : Lot of unexperienced players play hards difficulty, and They can't handle this can of jump
14:01 <KuraiPettan> : *kind of jumps
14:02 <KuraiPettan> : I'm pretty sure that all of them will miss at this jump ahah
14:02 <Kawayi Rika> : XD
14:03 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm You have a good way?
14:03 <KuraiPettan> : what ?
14:03 <Kawayi Rika> : good idea this jump?
14:04 <KuraiPettan> : Don't make a jump here >w<
14:04 <Kawayi Rika> : >O<
14:04 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
14:04 <KuraiPettan> : 02:01:604 (4,1,2,1) - Same here, this sudden spacing change is not appropriate to hard difficulties >w<
14:05 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
14:05 <KuraiPettan> : 02:09:750 (4) - omg, this jump is so big °A°
14:06 <Kawayi Rika> : XD I think this jump not hard
14:06 <KuraiPettan> : °A°
14:09 <KuraiPettan> : Except these jumps, the diff fits well the Hard criteria
14:10 <Kawayi Rika> : XD
14:11 <KuraiPettan> : Taiko :
14:11 <KuraiPettan> : 9 unsnapped notes
14:11 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
14:11 <KuraiPettan> : 19*
14:11 <KuraiPettan> : check AImod (ctrl+shift+A)
14:11 <KuraiPettan> : 16*
14:12 <Kawayi Rika> : not 1/6?
14:13 <KuraiPettan> : it is, but they aren't correctly snapped on ticks
14:14 <Kawayi Rika> : aha
14:16 <Kawayi Rika> : OK fixed unsanpped
14:19 <KuraiPettan> : Rika :
14:19 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
14:19 <KuraiPettan> : 00:26:637 - add a note
14:20 <KuraiPettan> : 00:25:445 (2) - Add a note
14:20 <KuraiPettan> : wait
14:20 <KuraiPettan> : 00:26:737 - here >w<
14:20 <Kawayi Rika> : 00:26:637 - not here?
14:21 <KuraiPettan> : at 26:637 and 26:737
14:21 <KuraiPettan> : You will need to change your pattern
14:21 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm...Now is not very good yet?
14:22 <KuraiPettan> : It will sound a way better imo
14:22 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm I try change this..
14:22 <KuraiPettan> : 01:41:538 (7) - New combo owo
14:23 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
14:23 <KuraiPettan> : It's really needed here
14:23 <Kawayi Rika> : yeah >w<
14:24 <KuraiPettan> : Nice use of speed changes
14:25 <Kawayi Rika> : XD
14:28 <KuraiPettan> : OD8 wtf
14:29 <Kawayi Rika> : 00:26:637 - add 1 note is ok I think
14:29 <Kawayi Rika> : OD8 good XD
14:29 <KuraiPettan> : If you add only 1 note, it would sound weird
14:30 <KuraiPettan> : because there is drums at 00:26:737 -
14:30 <KuraiPettan> : which are louder than 00:26:637 -
14:30 <KuraiPettan> : so add 2 notes or none
14:30 <Kawayi Rika> : aha OK
14:32 <KuraiPettan> : well, that's all I have to say
13:54 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
13:54 <KuraiPettan> : Buster! diff :
13:54 <KuraiPettan> : HPdrain 4 and OD 4 are too high for the easiest difficulty
13:55 <KuraiPettan> : 3 would be better imo
13:55 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm 4 is too hard?
13:55 <Kawayi Rika> : I think that the label will change E
13:56 <Kawayi Rika> : Now N
13:56 <KuraiPettan> : I don't think it will change the label
13:56 <KuraiPettan> : and even if the label change, it's not a problem owo
13:57 <Kawayi Rika> : OK OD,HP-1
13:57 <KuraiPettan> : cool
13:58 <KuraiPettan> : Rin :
13:59 <Kawayi Rika> : ＯＫ
13:59 <KuraiPettan> : 01:10:346 (5,6) - this jump is so sudden and innapropriate to the difficulty of the map
13:59 <KuraiPettan> : So you shouldn't have a jump here
13:59 <Kawayi Rika> : you are update this ?
13:59 <KuraiPettan> : You ought to change it
14:00 <Kawayi Rika> : I think the JUMP, not too far
14:00 <KuraiPettan> : yep but it's a hard difficulty right ?
14:00 <Kawayi Rika> : yeah hard
14:01 <KuraiPettan> : Lot of unexperienced players play hards difficulty, and They can't handle this can of jump
14:01 <KuraiPettan> : *kind of jumps
14:02 <KuraiPettan> : I'm pretty sure that all of them will miss at this jump ahah
14:02 <Kawayi Rika> : XD
14:03 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm You have a good way?
14:03 <KuraiPettan> : what ?
14:03 <Kawayi Rika> : good idea this jump?
14:04 <KuraiPettan> : Don't make a jump here >w<
14:04 <Kawayi Rika> : >O<
14:04 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
14:04 <KuraiPettan> : 02:01:604 (4,1,2,1) - Same here, this sudden spacing change is not appropriate to hard difficulties >w<
14:05 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
14:05 <KuraiPettan> : 02:09:750 (4) - omg, this jump is so big °A°
14:06 <Kawayi Rika> : XD I think this jump not hard
14:06 <KuraiPettan> : °A°
14:09 <KuraiPettan> : Except these jumps, the diff fits well the Hard criteria
14:10 <Kawayi Rika> : XD
14:11 <KuraiPettan> : Taiko :
14:11 <KuraiPettan> : 9 unsnapped notes
14:11 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
14:11 <KuraiPettan> : 19*
14:11 <KuraiPettan> : check AImod (ctrl+shift+A)
14:11 <KuraiPettan> : 16*
14:12 <Kawayi Rika> : not 1/6?
14:13 <KuraiPettan> : it is, but they aren't correctly snapped on ticks
14:14 <Kawayi Rika> : aha
14:16 <Kawayi Rika> : OK fixed unsanpped
14:19 <KuraiPettan> : Rika :
14:19 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
14:19 <KuraiPettan> : 00:26:637 - add a note
14:20 <KuraiPettan> : 00:25:445 (2) - Add a note
14:20 <KuraiPettan> : wait
14:20 <KuraiPettan> : 00:26:737 - here >w<
14:20 <Kawayi Rika> : 00:26:637 - not here?
14:21 <KuraiPettan> : at 26:637 and 26:737
14:21 <KuraiPettan> : You will need to change your pattern
14:21 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm...Now is not very good yet?
14:22 <KuraiPettan> : It will sound a way better imo
14:22 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm I try change this..
14:22 <KuraiPettan> : 01:41:538 (7) - New combo owo
14:23 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
14:23 <KuraiPettan> : It's really needed here
14:23 <Kawayi Rika> : yeah >w<
14:24 <KuraiPettan> : Nice use of speed changes
14:25 <Kawayi Rika> : XD
14:28 <KuraiPettan> : OD8 wtf
14:29 <Kawayi Rika> : 00:26:637 - add 1 note is ok I think
14:29 <Kawayi Rika> : OD8 good XD
14:29 <KuraiPettan> : If you add only 1 note, it would sound weird
14:30 <KuraiPettan> : because there is drums at 00:26:737 -
14:30 <KuraiPettan> : which are louder than 00:26:637 -
14:30 <KuraiPettan> : so add 2 notes or none
14:30 <Kawayi Rika> : aha OK
14:32 <KuraiPettan> : well, that's all I have to say
Topic Starter
thanks mod Kurai chan ~
mod request from in-game
[Busters!]
02:04:584 (4) - spacing and 3rd point 1 grid down (grid level 4)
[Rin]
00:14:915 (1,2,3) - This circles is harder for this diff imo,change to slider?
00:21:670 (1,1) - spacing x1.2 or stack?
[Zero]
Fine.
[Rika]
00:04:982 (3) - confuseable spacing,rotate -90° and move to x:336 y:128?
02:03:790 (7) - worry hidden reverse arrow
[Busters!]
02:04:584 (4) - spacing and 3rd point 1 grid down (grid level 4)
[Rin]
00:14:915 (1,2,3) - This circles is harder for this diff imo,change to slider?
00:21:670 (1,1) - spacing x1.2 or stack?
[Zero]
Fine.
[Rika]
00:04:982 (3) - confuseable spacing,rotate -90° and move to x:336 y:128?
02:03:790 (7) - worry hidden reverse arrow
IRCmod~
overall nice map!
logs
08:01 <S_o_r_d_a> : 00:24:055 -
08:01 <S_o_r_d_a> : http://puu.sh/91z8
08:01 <S_o_r_d_a> : like this?
08:02 <S_o_r_d_a> : i think not fits music
08:02 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm this is ok
08:02 <Kawayi Rika> : not change
08:02 <S_o_r_d_a> : okey,
08:04 <S_o_r_d_a> : 01:21:074 (7,8,9) - I think stack looks slightly awkward?
08:05 <S_o_r_d_a> : I think player so hard this
08:06 <Kawayi Rika> : Separate would be better?
08:06 <S_o_r_d_a> : ye
08:06 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
08:07 <S_o_r_d_a> : 01:46:505 -
08:07 <S_o_r_d_a> : 01:46:704 -
08:07 <S_o_r_d_a> : Add note?
08:08 <S_o_r_d_a> : There is a vocal there
08:08 <S_o_r_d_a> : oops,There is a vocal
08:08 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm
08:09 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
08:09 <Kawayi Rika> : added
08:13 <S_o_r_d_a> : okey looks good now~
08:13 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
08:14 <S_o_r_d_a> : zero's diff hard?
08:14 <Kawayi Rika> : not modding Zero diff
08:14 <S_o_r_d_a> : ahh,okey
08:14 <Kawayi Rika> : go Rin diff
08:18 <S_o_r_d_a> : Hmm,Nothing wrong here nice diff<3
08:18 <Kawayi Rika> : XD OK
08:19 <S_o_r_d_a> : need busters diff?
08:19 <Kawayi Rika> : if you have time XD
08:19 <S_o_r_d_a> : okey!
08:21 <S_o_r_d_a> : Please do a gap AR-1 to bury it
08:22 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm I think 5 it's fun XD
08:22 <S_o_r_d_a> : I see okey
08:23 <S_o_r_d_a> : 02:04:584 (4) - slider end to 02:04:982 ?
08:29 <S_o_r_d_a> : that's all~
08:29 <Kawayi Rika> : OK,thanks post plz ~
08:01 <S_o_r_d_a> : http://puu.sh/91z8
08:01 <S_o_r_d_a> : like this?
08:02 <S_o_r_d_a> : i think not fits music
08:02 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm this is ok
08:02 <Kawayi Rika> : not change
08:02 <S_o_r_d_a> : okey,
08:04 <S_o_r_d_a> : 01:21:074 (7,8,9) - I think stack looks slightly awkward?
08:05 <S_o_r_d_a> : I think player so hard this
08:06 <Kawayi Rika> : Separate would be better?
08:06 <S_o_r_d_a> : ye
08:06 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
08:07 <S_o_r_d_a> : 01:46:505 -
08:07 <S_o_r_d_a> : 01:46:704 -
08:07 <S_o_r_d_a> : Add note?
08:08 <S_o_r_d_a> : There is a vocal there
08:08 <S_o_r_d_a> : oops,There is a vocal
08:08 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm
08:09 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
08:09 <Kawayi Rika> : added
08:13 <S_o_r_d_a> : okey looks good now~
08:13 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
08:14 <S_o_r_d_a> : zero's diff hard?
08:14 <Kawayi Rika> : not modding Zero diff
08:14 <S_o_r_d_a> : ahh,okey
08:14 <Kawayi Rika> : go Rin diff
08:18 <S_o_r_d_a> : Hmm,Nothing wrong here nice diff<3
08:18 <Kawayi Rika> : XD OK
08:19 <S_o_r_d_a> : need busters diff?
08:19 <Kawayi Rika> : if you have time XD
08:19 <S_o_r_d_a> : okey!
08:21 <S_o_r_d_a> : Please do a gap AR-1 to bury it
08:22 <Kawayi Rika> : hmm I think 5 it's fun XD
08:22 <S_o_r_d_a> : I see okey
08:23 <S_o_r_d_a> : 02:04:584 (4) - slider end to 02:04:982 ?
08:29 <S_o_r_d_a> : that's all~
08:29 <Kawayi Rika> : OK,thanks post plz ~
overall nice map!
Topic Starter
[Busters!]
02:04:584 (4) - spacing and 3rd point 1 grid down (grid level 4) <<fixed this
thanks biwako and sorda's mod ~
02:04:584 (4) - spacing and 3rd point 1 grid down (grid level 4) <<fixed this
thanks biwako and sorda's mod ~
Hi~></
suggestion only
＜Busters!＞
suggestion only
＜Busters!＞
- 00:57:829 (3) - try this? I think that it look better.http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/185426
- 01:24:253 (2) - Remove finish?
Topic Starter
Arigado ~ Hinacle chan ~
All fixed ~
All fixed ~
Hey Kawayi Rika
[General]
- You should capitalize Little Busters! -Ecstasy Ver.- considering all ranked map of this song does this and a google search show this as well. Also, since there's a full version of the song, please add short version somewhere. so like this Little Busters! -Ecstacy Ver.- (Short Ver.) or like one of the ranked map Little Busters! -Ecstacy Short Ver.- If you really don't want to, add it to tags atleast.
- Little Buster! EX is a 18+ game, so consider the following tags hentai eroge. Also consider these as well, visual novel galge gal game (if someone search gal or game, they will not find this song with current tags) and visual arts (if you add visual novel, do not write visual)
- Maybe change slider tick rate of Ozzy's Little Taiko to 2 for consistency? But I'm not really sure what slider tick does to taiko so your choice.
I guess that's all, I don't check skin, sorry if I miss anything there.
[Busters!]
00:15:909 (1) - Perhaps map through this spinner? I feel like there is too many spinner here. If not, end it at 00:17:697. Feel weird to have a break between the two spinners.
01:18:094 (1,2,3) - I prefer a repeating slider here, especially since she is holding a note here. http://puu.sh/94yM
02:18:094 (1,2.3) - Feel really clustered together. I would make add a repeat to (2) and remove (3) then place something like this http://puu.sh/94zS. If you can adjust it so that it doesn't overlap with 02:16:902 (4), would be much better.
02:24:849 (2,3,4) - Repeating slider, same reason as 01:18:094.
02:30:809 (3,4,5) - You should do something like 01:24:055 (3,4,5) .
02:32:796 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/94AT Something like this if you can, you'll have to adjust the spacing so that this pattern work.
02:46:704 (1,2,3,4) - Curving all the slider seems nicer http://puu.sh/94Ce.
Pretty nice.
[Rin]
Nothing to mention, everything looks good to me.
[Zero]
00:27:233 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would prefer compressed stream (0.8x/0.9x spacing) for this.
00:31:604 (1,2) - I like the feel more like this http://puu.sh/94If
01:05:776 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as 00:27:233, but I guess it's fine since this stream is curved ,so it play much nicer.
01:13:723 (3,4) - I feel it's nicer to play if you remove (4) and add a repeat to (3). No need to fix spacing. It also make the patterns here nice and symmetrical.
01:24:452 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Compressed stream (0.5x) feel much nicer to make it feel like a drumroll leading to a climax. Right now, I don't really get this feel. http://puu.sh/94Jr and snap (7.8) to 1.5x distant snap http://puu.sh/94K1.
01:35:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 00:27:233 (0.8x/0.9x) feel nicer.
02:24:253 (6) - I would make a circle (6) and a slider (7) instead and put a jump for (7) since the vocal feels like it. So like this http://puu.sh/94KL.
All is suggestion, just not fond of the spacing of the stream, prefer compressed.
[Rika]
00:24:849 (3) - I don't see a reason to do a jump here. If you want to do a jump, I suggest making 2 hit circles and doing this http://puu.sh/94Ln. Fit nicer with the flow.
00:27:829 (10) - Feel like a new combo should be here, make it easier to see the stack as well.
00:33:591 (5,6) -
space out maybe? It's fine through
00:48:492 (6,7,8) - Like this? Stack (8) with (5). Sort of flow breaking to stack here http://puu.sh/94N5.
00:53:657 (8) - This should be a jump imo, since the drum is accented.
01:03:988 (3) - Feel it should be a jump for similar reason. Perhaps 1.5x distant snapping and place here? http://puu.sh/94NL
01:08:160 (5,6) - Jump be on (6) and not (5). Since the vocal is accented at (6). I guess this? http://puu.sh/94Ov.
02:39:551 (6) - Vocal is accented here, a little bit weird not to have a jump, perhaps this? http://puu.sh/94Pu
Just make sure to put jumps at the right notes, I notice some jumps, you put the jump on an unaccented note so it felt weird.
No star since this map doesn't need it, but looks good in general.
Good luck!
[General]
- You should capitalize Little Busters! -Ecstasy Ver.- considering all ranked map of this song does this and a google search show this as well. Also, since there's a full version of the song, please add short version somewhere. so like this Little Busters! -Ecstacy Ver.- (Short Ver.) or like one of the ranked map Little Busters! -Ecstacy Short Ver.- If you really don't want to, add it to tags atleast.
- Little Buster! EX is a 18+ game, so consider the following tags hentai eroge. Also consider these as well, visual novel galge gal game (if someone search gal or game, they will not find this song with current tags) and visual arts (if you add visual novel, do not write visual)
- Maybe change slider tick rate of Ozzy's Little Taiko to 2 for consistency? But I'm not really sure what slider tick does to taiko so your choice.
I guess that's all, I don't check skin, sorry if I miss anything there.
[Busters!]
00:15:909 (1) - Perhaps map through this spinner? I feel like there is too many spinner here. If not, end it at 00:17:697. Feel weird to have a break between the two spinners.
01:18:094 (1,2,3) - I prefer a repeating slider here, especially since she is holding a note here. http://puu.sh/94yM
02:18:094 (1,2.3) - Feel really clustered together. I would make add a repeat to (2) and remove (3) then place something like this http://puu.sh/94zS. If you can adjust it so that it doesn't overlap with 02:16:902 (4), would be much better.
02:24:849 (2,3,4) - Repeating slider, same reason as 01:18:094.
02:30:809 (3,4,5) - You should do something like 01:24:055 (3,4,5) .
02:32:796 (2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/94AT Something like this if you can, you'll have to adjust the spacing so that this pattern work.
02:46:704 (1,2,3,4) - Curving all the slider seems nicer http://puu.sh/94Ce.
Pretty nice.
[Rin]
Nothing to mention, everything looks good to me.
[Zero]
00:27:233 (2,3,4,5,6) - I would prefer compressed stream (0.8x/0.9x spacing) for this.
00:31:604 (1,2) - I like the feel more like this http://puu.sh/94If
01:05:776 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Same as 00:27:233, but I guess it's fine since this stream is curved ,so it play much nicer.
01:13:723 (3,4) - I feel it's nicer to play if you remove (4) and add a repeat to (3). No need to fix spacing. It also make the patterns here nice and symmetrical.
01:24:452 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Compressed stream (0.5x) feel much nicer to make it feel like a drumroll leading to a climax. Right now, I don't really get this feel. http://puu.sh/94Jr and snap (7.8) to 1.5x distant snap http://puu.sh/94K1.
01:35:776 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same as 00:27:233 (0.8x/0.9x) feel nicer.
02:24:253 (6) - I would make a circle (6) and a slider (7) instead and put a jump for (7) since the vocal feels like it. So like this http://puu.sh/94KL.
All is suggestion, just not fond of the spacing of the stream, prefer compressed.
[Rika]
00:24:849 (3) - I don't see a reason to do a jump here. If you want to do a jump, I suggest making 2 hit circles and doing this http://puu.sh/94Ln. Fit nicer with the flow.
00:27:829 (10) - Feel like a new combo should be here, make it easier to see the stack as well.
00:33:591 (5,6) -
space out maybe? It's fine through00:48:492 (6,7,8) - Like this? Stack (8) with (5). Sort of flow breaking to stack here http://puu.sh/94N5.
00:53:657 (8) - This should be a jump imo, since the drum is accented.
01:03:988 (3) - Feel it should be a jump for similar reason. Perhaps 1.5x distant snapping and place here? http://puu.sh/94NL
01:08:160 (5,6) - Jump be on (6) and not (5). Since the vocal is accented at (6). I guess this? http://puu.sh/94Ov.
02:39:551 (6) - Vocal is accented here, a little bit weird not to have a jump, perhaps this? http://puu.sh/94Pu
Just make sure to put jumps at the right notes, I notice some jumps, you put the jump on an unaccented note so it felt weird.
No star since this map doesn't need it, but looks good in general.
Good luck!
Topic Starter
thanks mod ~ but no change ~
request from my queue
2m-3m : 3diff
[rika]
00:27:233 (6) - NC?
01:16:604 (2) - move ti to 01:16:803 ?
01:25:644 (5) - NC?
01:30:809 (7) - NC
01:31:405 (1) - remove NC
01:32:002 (2) - NC
02:18:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - make them be a uniform pentagram
02:29:220 (5) - NC
[zero]
02:55:843 (6) - NC?
[Rin]
01:12:531 (1) - add clap
01:31:008 (8,9) - 1 grid down
02:56:240 (1) - x256 y88?
2m-3m : 3diff
[rika]
00:27:233 (6) - NC?
01:16:604 (2) - move ti to 01:16:803 ?
01:25:644 (5) - NC?
01:30:809 (7) - NC
01:31:405 (1) - remove NC
01:32:002 (2) - NC
02:18:094 (1,2,3,4,5) - make them be a uniform pentagram
02:29:220 (5) - NC
[zero]
02:55:843 (6) - NC?
[Rin]
01:12:531 (1) - add clap
01:31:008 (8,9) - 1 grid down
02:56:240 (1) - x256 y88?
Hi! Kawayi Riki mod form Thai mapper modding queue.
General
Title Should be Rita - Little Busters! -Ecstasy Ver.- ( not Ecstacy )
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Little_Busters!
Skin
Scorebar-bg.png and scorebar-colour.png is not perfectly stack . just fix scorebar-bg.png down 1 pixel . and it 'll fix
I also fix it . if you don't want to fix by your self you can try mine.
Taiko Bg.jpg Why don't Add -Ecstasy Ver.- after Little Buster! text?
Buster!
01:17:101 add note here for match drum if to hard make it 1/2 return slider.
01:35:578 (4) - add 2 more return and del 01:36:372 (5) - ?
02:35:180 (4) - can change direction of this slider tail to other way ?
Rin
00:07:564 add note ?
01:34:187 (4,5,6) - i think you can arrange these notes better.
01:57:233 (1) - i think it's better to NC next note of this one instead.
02:55:445 (3) - better to NC this because this return slider not same the 2 previous before (02:54:651 (1,2) - )
Zero
00:22:068 (1) - finish sound at head of slider ? (start of slider )
01:58:425 (5,6,7) - stack stream play better.
02:03:392 (5) - x,y 324 160
02:50:081 add note sound better imo
Rika
*** I'm not sure 2 things about this
1st you use more than 3 slider speed in this difficult.
2nd some green timing point use 5 percent volume. it's better to use 10 percent ( i'm not sure if it is between slider it 's unrank or not)
00:01:803 add note
00:15:180 (2) - if you follow guitar. i think this note land on 00:15:213 ( 1/4 )
00:34:386 (1) - delete this ?
01:16:604 (2) - i think this stream is not fit maybe delete this ?
01:24:055 (1,2,3) - i think this too far jump and break play feeling maybe switch 1 and 3 ?
I love this. it's very good map and song ( honest i listen this song a lot before join osu. )
keep my star please.
Good luck
General
Title Should be Rita - Little Busters! -Ecstasy Ver.- ( not Ecstacy )
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Little_Busters!
Skin
Scorebar-bg.png and scorebar-colour.png is not perfectly stack . just fix scorebar-bg.png down 1 pixel . and it 'll fix
I also fix it . if you don't want to fix by your self you can try mine.
Taiko Bg.jpg Why don't Add -Ecstasy Ver.- after Little Buster! text?
Buster!
01:17:101 add note here for match drum if to hard make it 1/2 return slider.
01:35:578 (4) - add 2 more return and del 01:36:372 (5) - ?
02:35:180 (4) - can change direction of this slider tail to other way ?
Rin
00:07:564 add note ?
01:34:187 (4,5,6) - i think you can arrange these notes better.
01:57:233 (1) - i think it's better to NC next note of this one instead.
02:55:445 (3) - better to NC this because this return slider not same the 2 previous before (02:54:651 (1,2) - )
Zero
00:22:068 (1) - finish sound at head of slider ? (start of slider )
01:58:425 (5,6,7) - stack stream play better.
02:03:392 (5) - x,y 324 160
02:50:081 add note sound better imo
Rika
*** I'm not sure 2 things about this
1st you use more than 3 slider speed in this difficult.
2nd some green timing point use 5 percent volume. it's better to use 10 percent ( i'm not sure if it is between slider it 's unrank or not)
00:01:803 add note
00:15:180 (2) - if you follow guitar. i think this note land on 00:15:213 ( 1/4 )
00:34:386 (1) - delete this ?
01:16:604 (2) - i think this stream is not fit maybe delete this ?
01:24:055 (1,2,3) - i think this too far jump and break play feeling maybe switch 1 and 3 ?
I love this. it's very good map and song ( honest i listen this song a lot before join osu. )
keep my star please.
Good luck
Topic Starter
thanks mod ~ fixed title ~
Ok, Bubbled ~ :3
Edit : >w<! Sorry, I have to pop the bubble, the title should be "Rita - Little Busters! -Ecstasy Ver.-" and not "Rita - Little Busters! -ecstasy ver.-"
(Thanks Louis Cyphre =w=)
Fix and I will rebubble ~
Edit : >w<! Sorry, I have to pop the bubble, the title should be "Rita - Little Busters! -Ecstasy Ver.-" and not "Rita - Little Busters! -ecstasy ver.-"
(Thanks Louis Cyphre =w=)
Fix and I will rebubble ~
It's "Rita - Little Busters! -ecstasy ver.-" in videoKuraiPettan wrote:
Ok, Bubbled ~ :3
Edit : >w<! Sorry, I have to pop the bubble, the title should be "Rita - Little Busters! -Ecstasy Ver.-" and not "Rita - Little Busters! -ecstasy ver.-"
(Thanks Louis Cyphre =w=)
Fix and I will rebubble ~
But "Rita - Little Busters! -Ecstasy Ver.-" in wiki
Topic Starter
change title Little Busters! -Ecstasy Ver.
Well, I guess -ecstasy ver.- was fine, but all ranked versions of this song have the e and v capitalized.
Rebubbled ~
Rebubbled ~
IRC modded on some spacing, new combo, png to jpg, etc.
Ranked.
Ranked.
Topic Starter
Thanks Mafia chan XD ~
(*･x･)/｡･:*:･ﾟ´★ﾟ･:*:･｡☆Congratulations ;*・'゜☆v(*'-^*);*・'゜☆ブイ♪
Grats!
不想吐槽了...
不想吐槽了...
Wtf this shit is terrible. Terrible difficulty spread I mean. Easy, hard, insane, insane?
Why does there have to be two insanes? D:
Why does there have to be two insanes? D:
OMG another Rika map ranked ♥ Gratz 
Topic Starter
E = Normal diff ~ so np ~
Grats , I like this song so much
, I like this song so much/me eats Rika
ohh~ rankˊ
恩恩!
ohh~ rankˊ
恩恩!
卧槽又rank
Congrats~
I still can't understand downvoting people...
congratz, anyway. fun pattern to play.
congratz, anyway. fun pattern to play.
I think someone hacked and is voting it 1. I may be wrong but it happend before on one of simplistiC's maps.
Grats! quite surprised by rating.
poor
4.6 stars
4.6 stars
KayeSara
12131123123123123
well, the map still has some issues as far as I can see it (issues which really needed to be fixed IMO) but that doesn't justify that rating.
TokidoSaya_old_1
想必你完全打不了Rika难度,也无法判断好与坏.KayeSara wrote:
恭喜rika又rank图，说实话这次做的很有进步！至少我很喜欢！同时也是作为key社fans的喜欢！！木哈哈
再者，投黑票的还是该自重了。我知道这部分多余的黑票都出至于rika的rank速度很快的让人羡慕，但从另外来讲，rika付出很多，而且一直很努力，至少每次我上线都看到她都在作图，难道这还不够？（写给国人看也够了，外国人也没闲心建小号浪费时间帮人投票）
歌是歌,map是map,即便是我用着这样一个ID也没办法消除我对这张map的反感.
如老詹所说,就算你再怎么搞基要来再多的mod也无法拯救一张骨子里就没有存在意义的map.
另外,这图有充足理由被unrank,有note没有被正确snap,而我也指出过这一点,不过既然现在这图获得了这样的rating,那么我也不多说什么,好自为之.
至于rank图速度过快遭人红眼,这点如果map本身足够好自然是可以避免的,你见过别人因为婆婆图rank太快而spam一分?
哇开小号刷1分的真了不起
TokidoSaya
Previously known as a dirty cheater
要说就开大号啊
首先开小号黑1分是一个对OSU风气有非常大影响的行为，经历过几次事件我自己都觉得会去开黑刷1分的都只有中国人干得出来的事了。这是给中国人长了脸呢，还是丢了脸呢？要知道，这部分数据老板和几个管理那边其实是看得到的。
其次这图可能确实不是很好，给1分是你的自由，但是开小号刷或者叫一群人去刷这种事情，真的是很值得自豪的事吗？我知道估计你也自豪不起来，所以你才开小号在这里说话。这是你的自由，请自便。不过，莫要人不知，除非己莫为。
至于mapper自己我觉得也需要有所检讨，为什么会被黑1分，是行为或者是图本身的问题，也必须自己思考思考，别人黑你当然也是有理由的，无论那是正当的还是不正当的。我也希望所有mapper都能思考这个问题，包括我自己。
TokidoSaya
Previously known as a dirty cheater
要说就开大号啊
首先开小号黑1分是一个对OSU风气有非常大影响的行为，经历过几次事件我自己都觉得会去开黑刷1分的都只有中国人干得出来的事了。这是给中国人长了脸呢，还是丢了脸呢？要知道，这部分数据老板和几个管理那边其实是看得到的。
其次这图可能确实不是很好，给1分是你的自由，但是开小号刷或者叫一群人去刷这种事情，真的是很值得自豪的事吗？我知道估计你也自豪不起来，所以你才开小号在这里说话。这是你的自由，请自便。不过，莫要人不知，除非己莫为。
至于mapper自己我觉得也需要有所检讨，为什么会被黑1分，是行为或者是图本身的问题，也必须自己思考思考，别人黑你当然也是有理由的，无论那是正当的还是不正当的。我也希望所有mapper都能思考这个问题，包括我自己。
我什麼也不說 我只想問unsnap note在哪
TokidoSaya_old_1
What's the matter with the rating? o_o
This is not a shit.
This is not a shit.
ykcarrot wrote:
What's the matter with the rating? o_o
This is not a shit.
Maybe somebody or some people do it viciously by use new account vote for 1/call their friends do iteldnl wrote:
ykcarrot wrote:
What's the matter with the rating? o_o
This is not a shit.
哟e婆你知道我ID是什么意思吗?goodbye wrote:
哇开小号刷1分的真了不起
TokidoSaya
Previously known as a dirty cheater
要说就开大号啊
首先开小号黑1分是一个对OSU风气有非常大影响的行为，经历过几次事件我自己都觉得会去开黑刷1分的都只有中国人干得出来的事了。这是给中国人长了脸呢，还是丢了脸呢？要知道，这部分数据老板和几个管理那边其实是看得到的。
其次这图可能确实不是很好，给1分是你的自由，但是开小号刷或者叫一群人去刷这种事情，真的是很值得自豪的事吗？我知道估计你也自豪不起来，所以你才开小号在这里说话。这是你的自由，请自便。不过，莫要人不知，除非己莫为。
至于mapper自己我觉得也需要有所检讨，为什么会被黑1分，是行为或者是图本身的问题，也必须自己思考思考，别人黑你当然也是有理由的，无论那是正当的还是不正当的。我也希望所有mapper都能思考这个问题，包括我自己。
我为什么在第四页开小号来mod这个map?
这首歌?
我有隐藏自己身份的意思?我是盒饭.我的modding queue里明确有这个ID,这人也去我的queue里求过mod.
我相信开小号刷一分的大有人在Heatherfield wrote:
哟e婆你知道我ID是什么意思吗?goodbye wrote:
哇开小号刷1分的真了不起
TokidoSaya
Previously known as a dirty cheater
要说就开大号啊
首先开小号黑1分是一个对OSU风气有非常大影响的行为，经历过几次事件我自己都觉得会去开黑刷1分的都只有中国人干得出来的事了。这是给中国人长了脸呢，还是丢了脸呢？要知道，这部分数据老板和几个管理那边其实是看得到的。
其次这图可能确实不是很好，给1分是你的自由，但是开小号刷或者叫一群人去刷这种事情，真的是很值得自豪的事吗？我知道估计你也自豪不起来，所以你才开小号在这里说话。这是你的自由，请自便。不过，莫要人不知，除非己莫为。
至于mapper自己我觉得也需要有所检讨，为什么会被黑1分，是行为或者是图本身的问题，也必须自己思考思考，别人黑你当然也是有理由的，无论那是正当的还是不正当的。我也希望所有mapper都能思考这个问题，包括我自己。
我为什么在第四页开小号来mod这个map?
这首歌?
我有隐藏自己身份的意思?我是盒饭.我的modding queue里明确有这个ID,这人也去我的queue里求过mod.
至于你认为别人一看到你那小号就知道是你，抱歉，我相信大部分人都没有那么了解你。
当然，其实一看那说话口气就知道是你了。
既然如此，何苦用小号?
Tokido Saya
麻烦百度一下
麻烦百度一下
开小号这么自豪?Heatherfield wrote:
Tokido Saya
麻烦百度一下
不扯了打麻将去，你爱怎么样怎么样我之前也说了。把这贴搞成没有意义的战帖也没有必要。
该说什么之前也说了
我只想说集团刷黑什么的，呵呵
当然这图不算好，mapper也该自我检讨
我只是想说明一下我使用这个ID在这里发帖的意图,如果你一定要情绪化把这变成战帖我觉得那我也还是提前闭嘴比较好,毕竟事前事后我该说的都说了,事已至此,再说都是多余.goodbye wrote:
开小号这么自豪?Heatherfield wrote:
Tokido Saya
麻烦百度一下
I really wanna know what you guys are writing, but I can't read Chinese~
呵呵 人家外国人都在这里替这图抱不平，到底是不是集团黑那就只有黑的人知道了Hatsune Miku wrote:
屎图该拿一分 好图该拿十分 自然法则
非要说有人集团黑 那也有黑的理由 不可能一大堆人都把白的说成黑的
盒饭eatshi 完了
一大堆人吗
嘛这事我是不想管了，你们爱怎么怎么样吧
Me too :CTenshi-nyan wrote:
I really wanna know what you guys are writing, but I can't read Chinese~
I check Ai mod and note are properly snap. :C
But what happen.
A least it's not bad to vote 1 .
KayeSara
不会玩我发个帖子干什么？TokidoSaya wrote:
想必你完全打不了Rika难度,也无法判断好与坏.KayeSara wrote:
恭喜rika又rank图，说实话这次做的很有进步！至少我很喜欢！同时也是作为key社fans的喜欢！！木哈哈
再者，投黑票的还是该自重了。我知道这部分多余的黑票都出至于rika的rank速度很快的让人羡慕，但从另外来讲，rika付出很多，而且一直很努力，至少每次我上线都看到她都在作图，难道这还不够？（写给国人看也够了，外国人也没闲心建小号浪费时间帮人投票）
歌是歌,map是map,即便是我用着这样一个ID也没办法消除我对这张map的反感.
如老詹所说,就算你再怎么搞基要来再多的mod也无法拯救一张骨子里就没有存在意义的map.
另外,这图有充足理由被unrank,有note没有被正确snap,而我也指出过这一点,不过既然现在这图获得了这样的rating,那么我也不多说什么,好自为之.
至于rank图速度过快遭人红眼,这点如果map本身足够好自然是可以避免的,你见过别人因为婆婆图rank太快而spam一分?
1pc+spun 玩多了没意义，天又晚，全身都发冷的玩给你看，不过我不是你老触，弱B没能力FC，录像一起给你贴了
Download: KayeSara - Rita - Little Busters! -Ecstasy Ver.- [Rika] (2011-12-04) Osu.osr
Hatsune Miku_old
哦，好，收回前言，向你道歉。
我也不想再出口伤人，请便。
我也不想再出口伤人，请便。
People are just mad.qilliam wrote:
how... did this happen ._.
O___O WHAT RATING 0^0
I really can't understand this...
I don't understand either even though I can read chineseVerdisphena wrote:
I really can't understand this...
尊重下mapper本人吧o_o;
@all : nothing happen \o/
@all : nothing happen \o/
retards voting 1 again...
congrats for the rank, sorry that this hate-rating is happening to you
congrats for the rank, sorry that this hate-rating is happening to you
Clearly something happened if there are walls of texts with a score image. What's the issue with this map?
this sounds better to me, should we unrank this map because of this part ??
i need other BAT's opinions
EDIT:After some discussion in #BAT, we may unrank this mapset, plz fix those notes and let it reranked
H.. Heart broke(n) :C
Alace wrote:
this sounds better to me, should we unrank this map because of this part ??
i need other BAT's opinions
EDIT:After some discussion in #BAT, we may unrank this mapset, plz fix those notes and let it reranked
in my opinion, ↑ is more exact/appropriate
TokidoSaya wrote:
00:14:921 (1,2,3,4)karenying wrote:
我什麼也不說 我只想問unsnap note在哪
无论多木耳开25%也能明白这压根不是2/3
unsnap的定义你懂? 依你的道理自造连打全是unsnap
Did some quick IRC modding for Kawayi's diffs.
[Taiko]
00:13:326 (1,1) - These sound awful, but if you want them in there, at least snap the ends so you don't get that extra blob that has no tick to hit at the end. Maybe doing a crescendo would make it sound better. Right now it's just so much in your face for such a subdued but rising part.
01:50:776 (2) - Huh?
[Zero]
01:37:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - After all those streams, this part suddenly felt rather empty.
02:43:922 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - This too, but at least the spacing is larger so it isn't as easy.
SPOILER
00:39 <Garven> : Well then
00:39 <Garven> : Let's start with Busters!
00:39 <Garven> : First, the beginning's combos feel off
00:40 <Kawayi Rika> : yeah
00:40 <Garven> : Since you use the combo changes for the pattern instead of the music
00:40 <Garven> : Then later change to the music instead of the patterns
00:40 <Garven> : Stick to one or the other to give a better feel of consistency
00:40 <Garven> : Personally I prefer keeping with the music
00:40 <Garven> : Makes more sense to me.
00:40 <Garven> : So if we do that, 00:03:790 (3) - new combo
00:40 <Garven> : 00:06:174 (5) - ^
00:40 <Garven> : 00:07:366 (1) - remove
00:40 <Garven> : 00:08:558 (2) - new
00:41 <Garven> : 00:07:366 (2,1,2) - Spacing feels too small amongst these
00:41 <Garven> : 00:15:909 (1) - May as well extend this spinner to 00:17:498 -
00:42 <Garven> : 00:24:452 (3) - It'd be cool if you could get this slider to not have the circle part to not be overlapping. It'll look a lot cleaner.
00:42 <Garven> : Even something like one grid left/right on the two sliders works fine
00:43 <Garven> : 00:31:604 (5) - new combo
00:44 <Garven> : 00:33:194 (3,4,5) - Well, I guess with this pattern maybe not new combo at that last one
00:44 <Garven> : This is why doing it to the pattern feels so wrong to me.
00:45 <Garven> : 00:52:664 (4) - Maybe something like this to break up the monotonous 1/1/1/1/1 rhythm you have going? http://puu.sh/9Y5Z
00:47 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/9Y6d Try a technique like this if you're trying to acheive an elbow slider. Looks much cleaner this way. 01:04:982 (1) -
00:47 <Kawayi Rika> : 00:24:452 (3) - how to fixed this?
00:48 <Garven> : 01:07:366 (1) - So taht applies to this slider as well
00:48 <Garven> : 00:24:452 (3) - Move right one grid 00:23:260 (2) - move left one grid
00:49 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
00:49 <Garven> : 01:09:750 (1,3) - It'd be nice if you could position these so they dont' have that overlap apprear http://puu.sh/9Y6C
00:50 <Garven> : 01:15:313 (3) - New combo
00:50 <Garven> : 01:16:505 (1) - remove
00:50 <Garven> : 01:27:233 (3) - new combo
00:50 <Garven> : etc.
00:51 <Garven> : Try to have around 2 measure long combos
00:51 <Garven> : Er
00:51 <Garven> : two big white ticks
00:51 <Garven> : It will give a much better consistency feel
00:51 <Garven> : So you avoid awkward short combos like this one 01:29:617 (1) -
00:52 <Garven> : 01:35:578 (4,5) - soft hitsounds feel weak here
00:52 <Garven> : 01:44:717 - Move this break back to the default spot. It's positioned incorrectly. Just drag it all the way left
00:53 <Garven> : 01:55:843 (1,2) - Starting with a stack then moving on to a pattern makes for awkward play when the music doesn't change any to give
00:53 <Garven> : a good feel for the stop and go motion that you set up
00:53 <Garven> : 01:59:021 (5,6) - ^
00:54 <Garven> : 02:01:803 (3) - Don't recommend stacks under slider ends for the easiest of a set
00:54 <Garven> : 02:04:584 (4) - Add whistle to the end of this slider
00:54 <Garven> : 02:08:558 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for the easiest of the set
00:55 <Garven> : 02:08:558 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Honestly feels overmapped for such a softer part of the song. You use the exact same rhythm during the
00:55 <Garven> : stronger parts of the song, so this feels overly done.
00:57 <Garven> : Maybe a rhythm like this would work better to convey the softer tone of this part
00:57 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/9Y7Q
00:58 <Garven> : 02:33:988 (3,4) - Kinda ugly overlap and easily avoidable
00:58 <Garven> : 02:52:266 (3,4) - Same comment about the odd use of stacking when the music doesn't change any
00:59 <Garven> : 02:56:339 (1) - Why have the end silent when you have such a strong drum hit to finish it with?
01:00 <Garven> : On to [Rin]
01:00 <Garven> : 00:09:353 (2) - Why did you use this rhythm when you follow the guitar so well up until this point? Plays awkward
01:01 <Garven> : 00:10:942 (1) - Spinner ends in a strange spot and feels like it drags on too long. End it at 00:10:942 (1) -
01:01 <Garven> : 00:14:915 (1,2,3) - Set these notes to the same rhythm that was suggested due to the unranking
01:02 <Garven> : 00:15:710 (4) - End this slider at 00:17:498 -
01:02 <Garven> : 00:21:670 (1) - Why a normal finish when there's no percussion at all in the music?
01:03 <Garven> : 00:30:809 (1) - Yeah, see what you can do about the new combo usage to avoid short combos like this
01:04 <Garven> : 01:28:425 (5,6) - Strange pattern to make. I would have preferred them to be normal circles there and have sliders earlier in the combo
01:05 <Garven> : 01:33:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This looks really messy with all the overlap
01:06 <Garven> : 01:42:730 - Should add a slider tick sound here
01:06 <Garven> : 01:44:717 - Drag this break all the way to the left
01:07 <Garven> : 02:10:942 (1,3) - These sliders could look a lot better
01:07 <Garven> : 02:13:922 (3) - These short sliders are kinda meh. I like 'em better as stacked circles
01:08 <Garven> : 02:23:260 (3,5) - Please don't cover a circle so much with a slider. It's ugly and bad practice.
01:09 <Garven> : 02:31:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The pattern looks fine, but it's too long for the phrase in the music so the combo feels wrong
01:10 <Garven> : 02:51:472 (5) - ctrl + h for better flow
01:10 <Garven> : 02:52:266 (7) - ^
01:10 <Garven> : 02:49:286 (1) - Can you position this so it doesn't overlap with 02:48:293 (9) - ?
01:11 <Garven> : 02:43:525 - Another thing: Why isthe slider speed still 1.5x here? The music has taken a step back in intensity, but the slider speed
01:11 <Garven> : doesn't reflect that
01:12 <Garven> : And it ends up causing strange spacing like at 02:46:704 (1) - that feels too big for how the music is flowing and compared to how you
01:12 <Garven> : mapped previous sections
01:13 <Garven> : 02:54:651 (1,2,3) - I would have preferred just more circle usage and patterns instead of just sitting in the middle clicking on stacked
01:13 <Garven> : kick sliders since it's such a huge buildup to that last note
01:13 <Garven> : 02:56:339 (1) - Same comment about the silenced spinner end
01:24 <Garven> : Okay, I'll do a forum post for the Taiko/Zero diffs
01:24 <Garven> : On to [Rika]
01:25 <Garven> : 00:14:915 (1,2,3,4) - Of course fix this rhythm
01:25 <Garven> : 00:08:558 (1,2,3,4,5) - Strange that you opted to do 1/1 rhythms after the beginning part
01:26 <Garven> : 00:34:088 - Snap this timing section to the end of the slider at 00:34:187 -
01:26 <Garven> : The slider slide is -really- noticible during that silent part of the song
01:27 <Garven> : 00:47:498 (1,2,3,4) - Pretty radical spacing for such a measured part of the music
01:29 <Garven> : 01:24:055 (1,2,3) - A really sudden jump after so much distance snapping
01:30 <Garven> : 01:49:485 (1,2,3,4) - At least position them so that they're not overlapping (or have them even looking as 4 looks further away from the
01:30 <Garven> : 2/3 than 1 does)
01:31 <Garven> : 01:50:876 (6,1) - Uncharacteristic jump during this part of the song
01:31 <Garven> : 01:51:074 (1) - This slider ends in a strange spot. Feels better ending at 01:51:074 (1) - or at 01:51:074 (1) -
01:32 <Garven> : 02:00:015 (3,4,5) - Uneven spacing like this is eh
01:32 <Garven> : 02:05:379 (1) - Why such a silent end of the spinner when you have a good drum beat there in the music?
01:34 <Garven> : 02:43:525 - Same comment about the 1.5x slider speed
01:34 <Garven> : 02:56:339 (1) - Why silent spinner end aaah
00:39 <Garven> : Let's start with Busters!
00:39 <Garven> : First, the beginning's combos feel off
00:40 <Kawayi Rika> : yeah
00:40 <Garven> : Since you use the combo changes for the pattern instead of the music
00:40 <Garven> : Then later change to the music instead of the patterns
00:40 <Garven> : Stick to one or the other to give a better feel of consistency
00:40 <Garven> : Personally I prefer keeping with the music
00:40 <Garven> : Makes more sense to me.
00:40 <Garven> : So if we do that, 00:03:790 (3) - new combo
00:40 <Garven> : 00:06:174 (5) - ^
00:40 <Garven> : 00:07:366 (1) - remove
00:40 <Garven> : 00:08:558 (2) - new
00:41 <Garven> : 00:07:366 (2,1,2) - Spacing feels too small amongst these
00:41 <Garven> : 00:15:909 (1) - May as well extend this spinner to 00:17:498 -
00:42 <Garven> : 00:24:452 (3) - It'd be cool if you could get this slider to not have the circle part to not be overlapping. It'll look a lot cleaner.
00:42 <Garven> : Even something like one grid left/right on the two sliders works fine
00:43 <Garven> : 00:31:604 (5) - new combo
00:44 <Garven> : 00:33:194 (3,4,5) - Well, I guess with this pattern maybe not new combo at that last one
00:44 <Garven> : This is why doing it to the pattern feels so wrong to me.
00:45 <Garven> : 00:52:664 (4) - Maybe something like this to break up the monotonous 1/1/1/1/1 rhythm you have going? http://puu.sh/9Y5Z
00:47 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/9Y6d Try a technique like this if you're trying to acheive an elbow slider. Looks much cleaner this way. 01:04:982 (1) -
00:47 <Kawayi Rika> : 00:24:452 (3) - how to fixed this?
00:48 <Garven> : 01:07:366 (1) - So taht applies to this slider as well
00:48 <Garven> : 00:24:452 (3) - Move right one grid 00:23:260 (2) - move left one grid
00:49 <Kawayi Rika> : OK
00:49 <Garven> : 01:09:750 (1,3) - It'd be nice if you could position these so they dont' have that overlap apprear http://puu.sh/9Y6C
00:50 <Garven> : 01:15:313 (3) - New combo
00:50 <Garven> : 01:16:505 (1) - remove
00:50 <Garven> : 01:27:233 (3) - new combo
00:50 <Garven> : etc.
00:51 <Garven> : Try to have around 2 measure long combos
00:51 <Garven> : Er
00:51 <Garven> : two big white ticks
00:51 <Garven> : It will give a much better consistency feel
00:51 <Garven> : So you avoid awkward short combos like this one 01:29:617 (1) -
00:52 <Garven> : 01:35:578 (4,5) - soft hitsounds feel weak here
00:52 <Garven> : 01:44:717 - Move this break back to the default spot. It's positioned incorrectly. Just drag it all the way left
00:53 <Garven> : 01:55:843 (1,2) - Starting with a stack then moving on to a pattern makes for awkward play when the music doesn't change any to give
00:53 <Garven> : a good feel for the stop and go motion that you set up
00:53 <Garven> : 01:59:021 (5,6) - ^
00:54 <Garven> : 02:01:803 (3) - Don't recommend stacks under slider ends for the easiest of a set
00:54 <Garven> : 02:04:584 (4) - Add whistle to the end of this slider
00:54 <Garven> : 02:08:558 (1) - Too soon after a spinner for the easiest of the set
00:55 <Garven> : 02:08:558 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Honestly feels overmapped for such a softer part of the song. You use the exact same rhythm during the
00:55 <Garven> : stronger parts of the song, so this feels overly done.
00:57 <Garven> : Maybe a rhythm like this would work better to convey the softer tone of this part
00:57 <Garven> : http://puu.sh/9Y7Q
00:58 <Garven> : 02:33:988 (3,4) - Kinda ugly overlap and easily avoidable
00:58 <Garven> : 02:52:266 (3,4) - Same comment about the odd use of stacking when the music doesn't change any
00:59 <Garven> : 02:56:339 (1) - Why have the end silent when you have such a strong drum hit to finish it with?
01:00 <Garven> : On to [Rin]
01:00 <Garven> : 00:09:353 (2) - Why did you use this rhythm when you follow the guitar so well up until this point? Plays awkward
01:01 <Garven> : 00:10:942 (1) - Spinner ends in a strange spot and feels like it drags on too long. End it at 00:10:942 (1) -
01:01 <Garven> : 00:14:915 (1,2,3) - Set these notes to the same rhythm that was suggested due to the unranking
01:02 <Garven> : 00:15:710 (4) - End this slider at 00:17:498 -
01:02 <Garven> : 00:21:670 (1) - Why a normal finish when there's no percussion at all in the music?
01:03 <Garven> : 00:30:809 (1) - Yeah, see what you can do about the new combo usage to avoid short combos like this
01:04 <Garven> : 01:28:425 (5,6) - Strange pattern to make. I would have preferred them to be normal circles there and have sliders earlier in the combo
01:05 <Garven> : 01:33:392 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This looks really messy with all the overlap
01:06 <Garven> : 01:42:730 - Should add a slider tick sound here
01:06 <Garven> : 01:44:717 - Drag this break all the way to the left
01:07 <Garven> : 02:10:942 (1,3) - These sliders could look a lot better
01:07 <Garven> : 02:13:922 (3) - These short sliders are kinda meh. I like 'em better as stacked circles
01:08 <Garven> : 02:23:260 (3,5) - Please don't cover a circle so much with a slider. It's ugly and bad practice.
01:09 <Garven> : 02:31:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - The pattern looks fine, but it's too long for the phrase in the music so the combo feels wrong
01:10 <Garven> : 02:51:472 (5) - ctrl + h for better flow
01:10 <Garven> : 02:52:266 (7) - ^
01:10 <Garven> : 02:49:286 (1) - Can you position this so it doesn't overlap with 02:48:293 (9) - ?
01:11 <Garven> : 02:43:525 - Another thing: Why isthe slider speed still 1.5x here? The music has taken a step back in intensity, but the slider speed
01:11 <Garven> : doesn't reflect that
01:12 <Garven> : And it ends up causing strange spacing like at 02:46:704 (1) - that feels too big for how the music is flowing and compared to how you
01:12 <Garven> : mapped previous sections
01:13 <Garven> : 02:54:651 (1,2,3) - I would have preferred just more circle usage and patterns instead of just sitting in the middle clicking on stacked
01:13 <Garven> : kick sliders since it's such a huge buildup to that last note
01:13 <Garven> : 02:56:339 (1) - Same comment about the silenced spinner end
01:24 <Garven> : Okay, I'll do a forum post for the Taiko/Zero diffs
01:24 <Garven> : On to [Rika]
01:25 <Garven> : 00:14:915 (1,2,3,4) - Of course fix this rhythm
01:25 <Garven> : 00:08:558 (1,2,3,4,5) - Strange that you opted to do 1/1 rhythms after the beginning part
01:26 <Garven> : 00:34:088 - Snap this timing section to the end of the slider at 00:34:187 -
01:26 <Garven> : The slider slide is -really- noticible during that silent part of the song
01:27 <Garven> : 00:47:498 (1,2,3,4) - Pretty radical spacing for such a measured part of the music
01:29 <Garven> : 01:24:055 (1,2,3) - A really sudden jump after so much distance snapping
01:30 <Garven> : 01:49:485 (1,2,3,4) - At least position them so that they're not overlapping (or have them even looking as 4 looks further away from the
01:30 <Garven> : 2/3 than 1 does)
01:31 <Garven> : 01:50:876 (6,1) - Uncharacteristic jump during this part of the song
01:31 <Garven> : 01:51:074 (1) - This slider ends in a strange spot. Feels better ending at 01:51:074 (1) - or at 01:51:074 (1) -
01:32 <Garven> : 02:00:015 (3,4,5) - Uneven spacing like this is eh
01:32 <Garven> : 02:05:379 (1) - Why such a silent end of the spinner when you have a good drum beat there in the music?
01:34 <Garven> : 02:43:525 - Same comment about the 1.5x slider speed
01:34 <Garven> : 02:56:339 (1) - Why silent spinner end aaah
[Taiko]
00:13:326 (1,1) - These sound awful, but if you want them in there, at least snap the ends so you don't get that extra blob that has no tick to hit at the end. Maybe doing a crescendo would make it sound better. Right now it's just so much in your face for such a subdued but rising part.
01:50:776 (2) - Huh?
[Zero]
01:37:167 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - After all those streams, this part suddenly felt rather empty.
02:43:922 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - This too, but at least the spacing is larger so it isn't as easy.
确实不是unsnapLKs wrote:
unsnap的定义你懂? 依你的道理自造连打全是unsnap
应该是off
其实这样更准的样子
oh maybe i missed something interesting
还是把rank体系撤了算了这种破事一次会有两次会有三次也会有
还是把rank体系撤了算了这种破事一次会有两次会有三次也会有
Someone should recognize that if you want to make a map for some extremely famous songs(like "bad apple" or “Tori No Uta”），you need have awareness of being“spurt”（oh，equal to condemn），you know,your map will climb to "most played list "immediately,blames are something you have to shoulder,i guess this this the "coexistence of venture and opportunity,isn't it?
and,at the same time,other people should also recognize that it's quite stupid to show you unsuppressed feeling directly on a public forum，no matter how bad,how stupid the map is,if the map get ranked,that means it has pass the principle of mapping,it suitable for the rule.which means,at some point of view，this map‘s ranking sequence is logical and reasonable,then,it's nothing to blame.
what?you told me some Bats mapping accord to privacy emotion？come on,we are just human beings,if you take that position and without a restrictive rule to balance your behavior,it's no doubt that same thing will also happened.
oh 不得不说有些BAT的确是巨蠢，也怪不得别人黑他
and,at the same time,other people should also recognize that it's quite stupid to show you unsuppressed feeling directly on a public forum，no matter how bad,how stupid the map is,if the map get ranked,that means it has pass the principle of mapping,it suitable for the rule.which means,at some point of view，this map‘s ranking sequence is logical and reasonable,then,it's nothing to blame.
what?you told me some Bats mapping accord to privacy emotion？come on,we are just human beings,if you take that position and without a restrictive rule to balance your behavior,it's no doubt that same thing will also happened.
oh 不得不说有些BAT的确是巨蠢，也怪不得别人黑他