As requested,
[
General]
- Song is really not for me, so mod will probably be quite lazy.
- You may want to just use a CBR mp3, rather then a VBR one as for some computer the wrong bit rate can be shown and the file size / quality of the sound isn't too much better anyway.. I can see it is 191kbs through.
Nothing wrong, but make sure that the difficulty setting of Insane is higher or at the very least equal to Hard. Since it seems that you want to keep the difficulty quite low, change Hard to 5 OD 5 HP and Insane 6 OD 6 HP. Also -1 ar to Hard or +1 ar to Insane.
[
Normal]
- It's generally recommended not to have a speed change in the easiest diff.
00:41:541 (5,6) - A slider to distinguish between the two instrument would be nice.
00:53:922 (1,2,3,4) - I really feel you should do two slider (1,2) a slider (3,4) a slider. Why? The accent is on the down beat and the third beat. Sliders emphasize this fact very well. You also did it for (5) & (6) and I don't see anything change in the instrument that make you want to put hit circles so please use sliders.
01:25:826 (2,3) - I feel a slider fits better with the instrument here, since the instrument is holding a note. Not really sure what it's call. Felt a little odd to follow the drum.
01:36:778 (3,4,5) - To follow that instrument (again not sure what's it call), a repeating slider may be nice. I may have forgotten to suggest this at some places, so if you hear this instrument again, try a repeating slider.
01:38:682 (7,8) - Similarly here, make them a slider.
02:10:110 (1,2) - This should definitely be a slider (to follow the instrument). The sound the slider track makes fits perfectly here imo.
02:12:015 (1,2) - ^
02:13:920 (1,2) - ^
02:15:824 (1,2) - ^ It's much nicer for beginners to play as well, as this whole section is just hit circles, mixing it with sliders would be nice.
Sorry for lack of suggestions in the beginning, I woke up about 1 min through the song Looks good, some of my suggestion can also be applied to some parts in the beginning. My main gripe is that there are a lot of hit circles in a row. I prefer if you mix it more with sliders / repeating sliders.
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Hard]
00:30:351 (2,3,4) - For me, the way you place (1), I feel (2) should be more up. Try putting it like this?
http://puu.sh/8dox01:22:254 (7,1) - Feel like they should be a slider to follow that instrument (a flute??). If not , please place (7) more left. The way you place it now, hitting (1) feels weird.
01:39:635 (1) - I feel you should make a jump here, I felt like I needed to hit this earlier then I should.
02:21:062 (2) - This isn't really following anything. I suggest putting a note at 02:20:110 instead since it's felt a little weird to have nothing there.And perhaps make a short slider that start where (1) is and end where (2) was if you don't want to have a gap there.
Very hard to find anything to point out. All my suggestions is to make the flow a little nicer.
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Insane]
Hm, nothing to point out, just +1 to hp drain and consider +1 ar (reason mentioned in [General]. I felt Hard had better flow and felt a little more polish through. But pretty good Insane for this type of song, good job vivicat.
Hope mod is hopeful.Map were all solid so starred.
Good luck!