Note 00:43:717 (1) - Volume 40%
Note 00:43:978 (2) - Volume 50%
Note 00:44:238 (3) - Volume 60%
Slider 00:44:499 (4) - Volume 70% and kiai start.

Megurine Luka wrote:

Hi. Mod Time.

[General]

[Easy]
00:36:151 (1) - This look more symmetrical. Looks the same to me :S
01:14:238 (2) - Move 3 grids right and 1 grid up It wont look symmetrical.
Good map.

[Normal]
Circle Size-1 Yesh :3
00:11:630 (2) - del Noes
00:41:369 (3) - 1 grid up Noes
01:19:195 (2) - 1 grid right Yesh :3

[Hard]
01:13:456 (4,1,2,3) - 1 grid right and 1 grid up. What I mean is like this Didnt get this one either :S

[Insane]
00:21:282 (10) - this looks strange But i like it
00:24:673 (7) - NC Noes

Quite good map so no more suggestions.

Deserve a star.

Good luck

NoHItter wrote:

General
Is it just me or does the BG look stretched? A little bit, but its not that noticeable
The combobursts have some white around them. I removed them now
IMO the spinner-spin is very distracting. Just make it the text only. Done since it was requested some time ago
Endou's picture in the scorebar-bg looks stretched too. Unstretched a bit

Easy
The slidertick claps sound odd. Maybe overlap the hit-normal with them so they sound like the hit-clap on a note. Will do soon
00:11:891 (2,3) - Don't put these at the offbeat of the song. It's sounds odd. Maybe something like this? Done
00:36:151 (1) - Maybe lessen the repeats and map the other parts. Done
00:40:325 (3) - Same as above. Done

Normal
00:43:456 (4) - Maybe change this into a Spinner for consistency at 01:00:151 (1). Or vice versa, make 01:00:151 (1) a slider. Done, changed to spinner.

LuPiiTa's Hard
00:25:456 (1) - IMO remove the slowdown. I'm still not sure about removing this
00:35:630 (1) - Plays oddly. There's really no musical cue for a Crumpled Slider. It sounds cool imo

Insane
00:21:282 (10) - Plays very oddly. I like how it sounds like, and how it looks like

Overall good.

Download: T-Pistonz+KMC - Tsunagari Yo (TV Size) (K o g u r e) [Ozzy's Taiko, Yo mah homie bro].osu

1. Revengexsoyah's Mod: Hice muchas de tus sugerencias, solo ignore algunas.
2. Esupanitix's Mod: Still not sure about changin the spacing.
3. Sakura Hana's Mod: Its kind of difficult to remove those texts, i try but i fuck it up. I changed the color of the note, see if it is more visible now.
   Also tried changing its position, but IMO it doesnt fit the lyrics if i move it.
   If i change the position of the slider after the spinner, i would have to change all the notes coming, what would be a pain in the ass
   About Lupiita's hard Slowdown, isnt there a way to avoid removing it? Coz i like how it sounds there
   PS: Colombia FTW
4. OzzyOzrock: Thanks for the diff
   Btw, do i need another bg for the taiko map?

1. 00:25:456 (1) - I don't like the shape of the slider D: You could move 2nd waypoint at x424 y352 and the last at x344 y328. It's better.
2. 00:48:412 (1) - Remove NC
3. 00:48:673 (2) - NC here
4. 00:53:630 (1) - Remove NC
5. 00:57:543 (2) - 1 Grid left
6. 01:05:108 (1) - Remove NC
7. 01:05:369 (2) - New combo
8. 01:14:760 (1) - Remove NC
9. 01:15:282 (2) - New combo

1. 00:10:325 (1) - Move it at 00:10:456?
2. 01:06:543 (4) - Delete circle?
3. 01:07:325 (2) - ^

1. Timing: Offsets are a bit funky. Stuff felt mistimed.
   Settings I used:
   115bpm offset 702
   116bpm offset 6962
   115bpm offset 10083
   115bpm offset 11126
   115bpm offset 44503
   115bpm offset 77894
   115bpm offset 79996
   115bpm offset 84160
   114bpm offset 88284 - This one is required for taiko. I am not entirely sure about this one though. It felt kinda okay, but I had too much variations. It would be best that taiko had nothing mapped there, then it would be unnecessary, else this would have to be nicely timed. These timings did work somehow, but I am not too confident in this one. I could SS those 9 notes every time with OD8, but every try I had either slightly early or slightly late.
   The red ones are missing ones you don't have, rest are just slightly reconfigured.
   With these I rarely had a 100 on the map (I could SS it if I give it some tries hehe). If you don't trust these settings, ask a very experienced timer to help you, I think these work good enough though.
   It could be just me being bad, but I definitely had problems in insane with your current timings, so you could check them out with a BAT just to be sure.
2. The custom 1 normal sounds are exactly the same as the default ones. This makes them redundant. Just use default normal set instead of custom 1, and delete all of these and do a full submit.

1. Note: I will be using my own timings for this diff because I checked the timing first. Some stuff may appear slightly different to you because of the timelines, but I hope you can figure it out.
2. 00:10:343 (1,2,3,4) - These are a huge problem. Because the music is very strange here, they fall on these funny ticks. You probably shouldn't map these at all because they are unplayable. Try this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/153650 . You don't map the first parts of the voice because you just can't follow them unless you really know the song by heart, and then you just make a pre-note before the slider, because that's a "heavy" spot where the voice ends. The slider is this long because of the odd rhythm and is necessary for people to get used to the rhythm that follows. With this, I doubt people will have much trouble playing this map, while with your current mapped stuff, unless you really watch approach circles to the millisecond, or know the song by heart, you will be 100 or 50ing those stuff. Ofcourse, the slider placement is just random, but I wanted to make it clear so you understand it best, you can place it anywhere if you want.
3. 00:49:720 (6) - This slider won't work. Usually, what I think is that when you are forced to map a slider tick in the highest diff, you're doing it wrong. Shorten it to 00:49:981 and then just map a circle at 00:50:111. This sounds the same, but it's much better because you aren't forced to use gimmicks to map stuff.
4. some thoughts

   You should probably remove 00:01:484 (2) and 00:01:745 (3) and then instead of the slider 3 map 2 circles at 00:01:755 and 00:02:277. Also remove 00:02:528 (4). The reason is, those notes don't really follow the music, and would feel much better if you only had 3 notes with huge spacing, those jumps would be fun and it would sound better. Some other notes after these aren't exactly following the music either, but those are fine because they give you the sense of rhythm I guess.

1. 00:01:223 (1,2,3) - Refer to the "some thoughts" section in the Insane. Should probably do the same.
2. 00:33:804 (1) - Remove this new combo and place it on 00:34:065 (2) instead, follows the music better.
3. 00:48:412 (1) - ^, just place it on 00:48:673 (2).
4. 01:05:108 (1) - ^, just place it on 01:05:369 (2).
5. 01:06:673 (1) - ^, just place it on 01:07:456 (3).
6. 01:19:978 (1,2,3,4) - Some inconsistent spacing. Also if this was intentional, then you should do the opposite, instead of using lower spacing for every note, use higher because that fits the song much better.

1. 00:10:978 (1,2) - I strongly suggest to make a slider out of these two. New players won't be able to hit blue ticks properly.
2. 00:29:891 (1) - Remove this new combo and place it on 00:31:978 (3) instead. Also remove the new combo from 00:32:499 (1).
3. 00:46:586 (5) - Perhaps a new combo here? Seeing as you had a new combo almost every stanza after here, this would make this section more consistent.
4. 00:54:934 (4) - ^

1. 00:18:412 (2) - New combo here instead of at 00:17:891 (1).

1. Maybe remove video from this diff? It looks ugly with it: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/153678, check that black bar in the play area.

lolcubes wrote:

Timing: Offsets are a bit funky. Stuff felt mistimed.
Settings I used:
115bpm offset 702
116bpm offset 6962
115bpm offset 10083
115bpm offset 11126
115bpm offset 44503
115bpm offset 77894
115bpm offset 79996
115bpm offset 84160
114bpm offset 88284 - This one is required for taiko. I am not entirely sure about this one though. It felt kinda okay, but I had too much variations. It would be best that taiko had nothing mapped there, then it would be unnecessary, else this would have to be nicely timed. These timings did work somehow, but I am not too confident in this one. I could SS those 9 notes every time with OD8, but every try I had either slightly early or slightly late.
The red ones are missing ones you don't have, rest are just slightly reconfigured.
With these I rarely had a 100 on the map (I could SS it if I give it some tries hehe). If you don't trust these settings, ask a very experienced timer to help you, I think these work good enough though.
It could be just me being bad, but I definitely had problems in insane with your current timings, so you could check them out with a BAT just to be sure.

SapphireGhost wrote:

Small list of things that need to be fixed before bubble:

1
Kiai is still slightly inconsistent. You can see the problems here.

2
Due to your hitcircle overlay, you'll need to have a slider border colour as well. This is so people with (for example) a black slider border colour won't have the problem of it looking odd with your grey hitcircle overlay.
In order to change the slider border colour, open a difficulty, then go to File > Open .osu in Notepad.
Scroll down to the "Colours" section and type "SliderBorder: 213,213,213" without the quotes. (I picked 213,213,213 because that's the colour my image editor said was closest to your hitcircle.)
Save and repeat for all difficulties.

Lastly, see if you can get Doomsday/Lybydose/Cyclone to give you a final timing for this map. After all that, this should be good and bubble-ready (forum PM me when that time comes).

PoochyEXE wrote:

I made you a (hopefully) better version of fail-background.png for the skin:

SPOILER

[attachment=0:ff870]fail-background.png[/attachment:ff870]

Doomsday wrote:

Quick timing check time!

As for the BPM changes, they all seem just fine to me, they work. The only issue that I found at least, was that the timing in general sounded a little early. Adding +10ms to every section sounded better to me.

But that's all I got. On the whole, timing is pretty good.

SapphireGhost wrote:

Apparently some stuff got unsnapped on [Ozzy's Taiko] for some silly reason, so go ahead and fix that. Other than that, should be fine.

Sakura Hana wrote:

[Insane]
00:10:988 (1) - New combo to fix spinner combo bug

[Ozzy's Taiko]
HP+1

[Easy]
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(Note all these hitsounds are to make your hitsounds consistent throughout kiai, so you either accept all suggestions or reject them all)
00:51:813 (3) - Remove hitsound whistle and add hitsound clap at slider end for consistence.
00:54:422 (4) - Remove hitsound clap and add hitsound whistle for consistence.
00:54:944 (1) - Remove hitsound whistle and add hitsound clap at slider start for consistence, also add Slider finish at slider end.
00:56:509 - Remove hitsound clap from slidertick.
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00:58:074 (3) - Remove hitsound whistle and add hitsound finish at slider end.
01:09:552 (1,2,3,4) - Use the same hitsounding you used at 01:05:378 (1,2,3,4) for consistence.
01:15:813 (3,4,5) - I think it would sound cooler if on the repeat you replaced whistles with claps (makes it sound it slightly different since the voice is slightly different as well).

Since all the fixes are metadata, a new combo and hitsounds should be fine for rank after fixes, however bubble needs to pop because of spinner combo bug

Blue Dragon wrote:

Can someone explain me what's wrong with the map just to know what's up with the rating? I don't see any reason on it to be 6.4.

Blue Dragon wrote:

Can someone explain me what's wrong with the map just to know what's up with the rating? I don't see any reason on it to be 6.4.