Ah yes, that edit is much, much better.
I had messed around with the time-snapping functions a little - however the way i had done it, i'd ended up doing more harm than good. Though, i do believe that your tutorial will fix that little problem. Im usually right with these kinda things once ive seen them done once.
Also, I was unsure what to do about those break sections. I thought it'd be a little unfair, and get a tad too chaotic if i tried to jam in some extra notes in a lot of those places, so i just let them be. The way that i had found it was that it was too easy if i'd put breaks in there (abit imperfectly timed). Again, the edits you made fixed this problem.
So, thanks for fixing up the beatmap! Ill hopefully have a better timed one next time
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