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376,144,11145,2,0,B|456:224,1,115,0|8
376,144,11579,2,0,B|456:64,1,115
376,144,12014,2,0,B|296:224,1,115,0|8
376,144,12449,2,0,B|376:24,1,115
376,144,12884,2,0,B|376:264,1,115,0|4[/spoilerbox]

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

IMO <- my opinion
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General

I can see you 2 bg is bad quality try find better picture
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Some Suggestions
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Normal

00:24:840 (1) - Grid 1 left and remove new combo?
00:30:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This too play on hard i suggest use Stack this is better Gameplay IMO
01:19:623 (3,4) - Jump? i suggest you fix this spacing pleasse because normal can't be make jump don't ignore this
02:00:492 (2,3) - try stack this will be better IMO
02:02:231 (2,3) - ^

This is fine to play but some color combo is weird imo
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[Extreme]

00:13:645 (5,7) - I feeling this is overmapped you should remove this
00:58:753 (7,8) - incosiente spacing?
02:07:449 (1,2) - weird stack
02:09:188 (1,2) - ^
02:44:840 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - very very confuse tu play try better play

Some notes or slider is overmapped but ok this jsut extreme
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[CMP's insane]

00:10:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - confuse play I like better http://puu.sh/4PLw try this code->fixed

[spoilerbox]376,144,10710,6,0,B|296:64,1,115
376,144,11145,2,0,B|456:224,1,115,0|8
376,144,11579,2,0,B|456:64,1,115
376,144,12014,2,0,B|296:224,1,115,0|8
376,144,12449,2,0,B|376:24,1,115
376,144,12884,2,0,B|376:264,1,115,0|4[/spoilerbox]

00:14:623 (1) - i not like this try copy and past you did this 00:15:927 (1)->fixed
00:17:232 (1,2) - not fit this song and remove and add note here 00:17:884 don't forget fix spacing->fixed
00:20:710 (1) - this is fit song but to play not good remove? you can sayd no if you wish->fixed
00:49:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this too much jump and 00:52:232 (8) - http://puu.sh/4PML get another place->fixed
01:15:710 (1,1) - too much jump and too hard catch :/ try reduce jump->fixed
01:25:275 (1) - again try get another place->fixed
02:58:101 add green line and remove kiai time->fixed

this too much play this like kirby i guess
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[Somoene's Watching you]

this is fine but name diff lol wut
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That all i think
questions? call me and good luck

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

IMO <- my opinion
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
General

I can see you 2 bg is bad quality try find better picture it was very nice BG but it was like 3240x4680 size, so i did reducing on windows paint and this happened... can't get better once ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Some Suggestions
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Normal

00:24:840 (1) - Grid 1 left and remove new combo?
00:30:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This too play on hard i suggest use Stack this is better Gameplay IMO
01:19:623 (3,4) - Jump? i suggest you fix this spacing pleasse because normal can't be make jump don't ignore this
02:00:492 (2,3) - try stack this will be better IMO
02:02:231 (2,3) - ^This is fine to play but some color combo is weird imo

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[Extreme]

00:13:645 (5,7) - I feeling this is overmapped you should remove this
00:58:753 (7,8) - incosiente spacing?
02:07:449 (1,2) - weird stack
02:09:188 (1,2) - ^
02:44:840 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - very very confuse tu play try better play I understand it is confusing but i don't want people just FC the Extreme difficulty on first try. please excuse this xD

Some notes or slider is overmapped but ok this jsut extreme
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[CMP's insane]

00:10:710 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - confuse play I like better http://puu.sh/4PLw try this code

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376,144,11145,2,0,B|456:224,1,115,0|8
376,144,11579,2,0,B|456:64,1,115
376,144,12014,2,0,B|296:224,1,115,0|8
376,144,12449,2,0,B|376:24,1,115
376,144,12884,2,0,B|376:264,1,115,0|4[/spoilerbox]

00:14:623 (1) - i not like this try copy and past you did this 00:15:927 (1)
00:17:232 (1,2) - not fit this song and remove and add note here 00:17:884 don't forget fix spacing
00:20:710 (1) - this is fit song but to play not good remove? you can sayd no if you wish
00:49:188 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this too much jump and 00:52:232 (8) - http://puu.sh/4PML get another place
01:15:710 (1,1) - too much jump and too hard catch :/ try reduce jump
01:25:275 (1) - again try get another place
02:58:101 add green line and remove kiai time

this too much play this like kirby i guess
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Somoene's Watching you]

this is fine but name diff lol wut
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That all i think
questions? call me and good luck

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-this BG has bad quality, perhaps change it? same as to Pereria
-I think you'll need a [Hard] for sure... also you have 3 insanes here which is not rankable, so perhaps you could remove one of them?
I'll try to make Extreme more easier or remove Someone's Watching You4
-There are a lot of Kiai toggles, I think you should remove most of them: 00:19:623, 02:05:710, 02:31:797, 02:33:536, 02:45:710, 02:47:449 If this is not really needed I wanna keep it

Normal:

00:30:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - stream is a bit too much for the easiest diff, perhaps reduce it?
00:38:319 (2) - Too far from (1)
01:14:406 (4,5,6,7,1) - seems a bit too hard for the easiest diff
01:20:058 (4) - Too far from (3)
02:47:449 (1,2,3) - too far apart it's just x1.2 spacing rather than x1.0, i think it is excusable since it's not that hard, and this is Normal instead of Easy...

Extreme:

00:13:971 (8) - too close to (7)
00:31:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern plays weird o.o perhaps change it?
02:44:840 (4,5,6,7,8) - confusing
I wanna keep those :$ and yet i admit 02:44:840 confusing (reason at last post) but yeah O.O..

CMP's Insane:

-A few things should probably be changed... the slider velocity is really fast, there are a lot of jumps that don't play nicely (or are just too far), and there are a lot of patterns involving multiple repeating 1/4 sliders that don't play that well, especially with the high slider velocity T_T that said, I can find some good ideas in this map, but IMO you should probably change these things
-end the last Kiai time somewhere...though I think it might be better if you changed your kiai time to match the other diffs

00:24:406 (1,2,3) - doesn't fit, perhaps try this http://puu.sh/4Q66
00:25:819 (6,7) - move (6) 1/4 later and move (7) 1/4 earlier
00:25:492 - add a note?
01:25:275 (1,2,3) - doesn't fit the song, perhaps try this? http://puu.sh/4Q4Y
01:26:362 - add a note?
02:24:406 (1,2,3) - doesn't seem to fit the music maybe this? http://puu.sh/4Q4E
02:25:492 - add a note?
02:39:079 (4,5) - move 1/4 earlier
02:54:406 (1) - remove NC

Someone's Watching you:

-capitalize "you"?

00:38:753 (3) - NC?
02:56:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - this looks odd and doesn't play nicely, perhaps change to a spinner or space it evenly? This is just to Follow the BG (You can see Mikoto shooting Railgun that way! xD....oh yeah.)


Nice start but I think a few things should probably be changed (mostly on CMP's Insane)

pieguy1372 wrote:

General:

-this BG has bad quality, perhaps change it?
-I think you'll need a [Hard] for sure... also you have 3 insanes here which is not rankable, so perhaps you could remove one of them?
-There are a lot of Kiai toggles, I think you should remove most of them: 00:19:623, 02:05:710, 02:31:797, 02:33:536, 02:45:710, 02:47:449

Normal:

00:30:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - stream is a bit too much for the easiest diff, perhaps reduce it?
00:38:319 (2) - Too far from (1)
01:14:406 (4,5,6,7,1) - seems a bit too hard for the easiest diff
01:20:058 (4) - Too far from (3)
02:47:449 (1,2,3) - too far apart

Extreme:

00:13:971 (8) - too close to (7)
00:31:797 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this pattern plays weird o.o perhaps change it?
02:44:840 (4,5,6,7,8) - confusing

CMP's Insane:

-A few things should probably be changed... the slider velocity is really fast, there are a lot of jumps that don't play nicely (or are just too far), and there are a lot of patterns involving multiple repeating 1/4 sliders that don't play that well, especially with the high slider velocity T_T that said, I can find some good ideas in this map, but IMO you should probably change these things
-end the last Kiai time somewhere...though I think it might be better if you changed your kiai time to match the other diffs

00:24:406 (1,2,3) - doesn't fit, perhaps try this http://puu.sh/4Q66->fixed
00:25:819 (6,7) - move (6) 1/4 later and move (7) 1/4 earlier
00:25:492 - add a note?->fixed
01:25:275 (1,2,3) - doesn't fit the song, perhaps try this? http://puu.sh/4Q4Y->fixed
01:26:362 - add a note?
02:24:406 (1,2,3) - doesn't seem to fit the music maybe this? http://puu.sh/4Q4E->fixed
02:25:492 - add a note?->fixed
02:39:079 (4,5) - move 1/4 earlier->fixed
02:54:406 (1) - remove NC->fixed

Someone's Watching you:

-capitalize "you"?

00:38:753 (3) - NC?
02:56:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - this looks odd and doesn't play nicely, perhaps change to a spinner or space it evenly?

Nice start but I think a few things should probably be changed (mostly on CMP's Insane)

Leyko wrote:

Hi!
ah, i LOVE this song~~ <3

general
mp3 must be 192kbps (new rules >__<)
hitsounds hurt my ears a little x.x'
make kiai standing from (00:14:406) 'till (00:31:797); (01:01:362) 'till (01:30:927);
(02:00:492) 'till (02:28:101); and (02:28:319) 'till the end.

normal
00:30:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this part may be confusing. replace them with spinner?
00:38:753 - add NC
00:40:492 - remove NC
00:42:232 - add NC
01:17:014 - ^
01:17:884 - remove NC

extreme
HP Drain +1 (max score gets too much high)
AR +1 (I don't wanna make it same with Someone's watching you =D
01:28:101 - add note? (doesnt fit i think)
01:29:188 - make this streme curvy and pretty~ (this is meant to be like this O.O
02:00:384 - add note?

CMP's Insane
Crazy diff o.O
HP Drain -1
No breaks?..
00:14:623 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - remade this part. it ruins the flow T.T

Someone's Watching You!
whats up with the diff's name xDD When Toaru Kagaku no railgun OVA start, this message appears for few seconds xD
otherwise it's very fun :3

Raging Bull wrote:

I don't see any other shortend song (ex: only my railgun) has short version on it O.O

I understand this is shortened but I think i shouldn't put short ver. cuz This is 3 mintues(which isn't really short) and
it already has TV Size...O.O

and thanks for accepting it even i broke the rule ;o;

Leyko wrote:

Hi!
ah, i LOVE this song~~ <3

general
mp3 must be 192kbps (new rules >__<)
hitsounds hurt my ears a little x.x'
make kiai standing from (00:14:406) 'till (00:31:797); (01:01:362) 'till (01:30:927);
(02:00:492) 'till (02:28:101); and (02:28:319) 'till the end.

normal
00:30:058 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this part may be confusing. replace them with spinner?
00:38:753 - add NC
00:40:492 - remove NC
00:42:232 - add NC
01:17:014 - ^
01:17:884 - remove NC

extreme
HP Drain +1
AR +1
01:28:101 - add note?
01:29:188 - make this streme curvy and pretty~
02:00:384 - add note?

CMP's Insane
Crazy diff o.O
HP Drain -1->fixed

No breaks?..
00:14:623 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - remade this part. it ruins the flow T.T

Someone's Watching You!
whats up with the diff's name xDD
otherwise it's very fun :3

Raging Bull wrote:

Hi.

General:
Baddddddd difficulty spread. You need a better normal or easier hard.

Normal:
00:19:623 (3,4,1) - Yeah. I prefer you don't do kiai toggles. I don't mind 00:12:666 (1) - since it's a chorus but the other two doesnt seem necessary.
01:05:710 (2,3) - Space these. No need for jumps on lower diff. ;_;
01:08:319 (1) - Ahhh. Kiai toggle. Remove this
01:14:406 (4,5,6,7,1) - Unstack these. Beginners would most likely spam click instead of listening to the music
01:15:275 (1) - Yeah...Kiai toggle. Remove it.
01:20:492 (1) - >_> Remove the beginning and end kiai toggle.
01:29:188 (1) - Eh I guess you can keep it since it seems okay, though I would also remove it. This one is up to you.
02:05:710 (3,1) - ;_;
02:19:623 (1) - ;_;
02:31:797 (1,5,1) - Just sooooo many! This is totally ruining kiai mode.
02:45:710 (1,1) - Yep same thing.
02:48:156 (1) - Short spinner on an normal Just remove it I suppose and use a slider instead. Also. Remove kiai toggle ;_;
02:54:406 (2,3) - And space these. You made a jump on normal. I wouldn't usually point this out but this is the easiest diff so yeah. Space it properly. >_>

Oh dear. It states don't overuse it. So please don't.
Plays like easy tbh.

Extreme/Someone:
First off I'm not even going to mention kiai toggles anymore. Just check what I said on normal and remove those I mentioned.
Dunno how to mod this and your other insane. I could mod insanes but I don't know what would fit for what difficulty >_>
You also have 3 insanes right now which is rather unrankable. Make extreme easier please.

CMP:
00:07:014 (12,2) - Find a way to move 12 so it doesn't overlap with 2. It looks ugly.
00:07:666 (2) - Reverse select.
00:08:536 (1) - ^ seems to play better to me imo.
00:10:492 (6,1) - Tricky. Try this with 00:09:406 (1,2,3,4,5,6) instead? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/138652
00:14:623 (1) - Sounds ugly. Move this to 00:14:406 and change the timing section so your slider won't break.
00:15:927 (1) - Sounds ugly too. It doesn't really follow anything. Try this one instead

The combo starts at 00:14:406 (1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1) -

01:42:232 (1,3) - Arcs could be nicer...I could help if you want me to.
01:44:840 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I don't think this really fits. You can hear the vocals really clearly. I don't think there are drums at that part yet
I suggest you map to vocals here since you also do it in the next combo.
02:58:101 (1) - End your spinner at 03:01:362 and end kiai here since it's the end of the song.

• ●Red-You must fix it.
  ●Blue-You'd better to fix it.
  ●Black-Suggestion only.

• ●You'd better to change a higher quality BG for "479303.jpg".
  ●I'm not sure but that'll be nice if you unify the KIAI time in all diffs ~ ><
  ●Remove your useless osb file.

• ●00:37:884 (1,2) - DS here is 1.23x , did you do that on purpose ? o.o I think it's unnecessary... @.@
  ●02:47:449 (1,2,3,4,5) - Too hard for beginners imo since this is the easiest diff in your mapset.

• ●Oh.. Hitsounds in this diff is too loud !! T_T PLZ LOWER THEM AT LEAST 20% I GUESS...
  ●00:05:710 (1,2) - Keeping 1.0x will be better.
  ●00:18:753 (5,6) - Change your pattern here. They are not following any vocals or rhythms.
  ●00:22:449 (4) - Down about 8 grids since it's really confused to change your DS suddenly.
  ●00:59:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I suggest you to change pattern like this:
  SPOILER

  
  ●01:01:362 (1) - Resnap KIAI line.
  ●01:17:014 (1,2) - Confusing Spacing here.
  ●01:21:797 (4) - The same to 00:22:449 (4). Hard to read.
  ●01:30:927 (7) - Add a note here (Suggestion only). And your KIAI time should be endded here. Resnap your green line.
  ●01:58:754 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - The same. See my suggestion above.
  ●02:34:840 (5) - You can stack this better on the end of the slider6.
  ●02:54:406 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4) - No. I want to say no because this pattern is really played badly for most players. Players will miss a note easily here and have to retry. And actually it's too hard for a hard as well.
  ●02:57:884 (x) - Add a green line to make KIAI ends here.

• ●00:31:362 (5,6,1) - Confusing DS here. o.o I point out this because I have missed here 2 times during playing before I start modding.
  ●02:01:362 (3,3) - Unstacked ? Since there is 0.7 stack leniency you don't need to stack them manually.. ._.
  Very hard in the last part xD

• ●Can't pass this diff but try to mod anyway ;_;
  ●00:50:492 (4) - Ctrl+R in my opinion..
  ●01:49:622 (4) - ^

JoJo wrote:

Hi there ~ ><

Try to find one of higher quality for you ~ No kds plz.

Call me if you want the original 3100x4388 image ~

Zelos wrote:

Requested Recheck of the hardest difficulty:

Someone is watching you!:
00:10:166 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this stream looks a bit un-even here.
00:13:536 (4,5,6) - hiding a slider under 2 sliders like this is not suggested. I highly suggest you change this.
00:19:623 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - these streams do not fit. I couldnt find any point in this part of the song that signifies long stream.
00:27:449 (6,7) - the random speed ups do not fit imo. if you intend on keeping them then at least let the player know through a storyboard or something.
01:00:275 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - these streams do not fit. I couldnt find any point in this part of the song that signifies long stream.
01:59:405 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
02:22:666 (1,2) - ack this anti jump here would massively throw people off due to your 1/4th double notes being the same spacing. try to fix this?
02:29:188 (4,5,6) - hiding a slider under 2 sliders like this is not suggested. I highly suggest you change this.
02:56:145 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - again super long stream that does not fit, also goes over the same spots like 4 times.
02:57:884 (1,1) - seperate these on the timeline by at least a 1/4th

Overall Thoughts:
Well notes arent thrown everywhere at least this time
My only issue is with the overmapped streams you placed. (the ones I mentioned and the ones I did not mention)
It seems you are trying to hard to make a quality insane difficulty. the overmapped streams gives it away.
Anyway, I wish you luck.

1. 00:14:406
2. 00:31:797
3. 01:01:362
4. 01:08:319
5. 01:15:275
6. 01:22:232
7. 01:30:927
8. 02:00:492
9. 02:14:406
10. 02:28:319
11. 02:42:232

1. 01:18:753 (1,2,3,4) - Emm, it's not a good idea to use jump in a Easy diff., alough it's a tiny jump, it may confuse beginner

1. 03:01:362 - Uesless timing section?

1. 00:10:275 (2) - Remove clap, add clap to 00:10:492 (3)
2. 00:54:623 (2) - I don't know what this slider follow, according to vocal, it should be note or slider at 00:54:732, 00:55:058 and 00:55:275
3. 01:30:927 - Add a note here with finish, and KIAI ends here
4. 02:44:840 (4,5,6,7,8) - Those notes and slider are maybe a bit hard to play, them looked irregular IMO
5. 02:34:840 (5,6) - I think this partten is hard to tell 5 and 6 which is a slider
6. 02:57:884 - KIAI ends here

1. 02:45:275 (11) - I was always recommending use only 1 reverse on a slider since it's easy to understand and play. Well, just personal opnion
2. I'm worry about the 1.5xBPM slider, maybe they need a SB warnning since it's always upexpected

Breeze wrote:

Hi there
Red=Fix it
Blue=Think about it
others are just suggestions
Good use of custom hitsound, but I feel it's lace of finish sound (except for the 2 GD diff.), so I'll give you some finish sound suggestion, add them if you like (I mean use default normal finish), if you don't like, just ignore them. And maybe you can try use custom finish sound which is really a "finish" sound

1. 00:14:406
2. 00:31:797
3. 01:01:362
4. 01:08:319
5. 01:15:275
6. 01:22:232
7. 01:30:927
8. 02:00:492
9. 02:14:406
10. 02:28:319
11. 02:42:232

[Basic]

1. 01:18:753 (1,2,3,4) - Emm, it's not a good idea to use jump in a Easy diff., alough it's a tiny jump, it may confuse beginner

[Advanced]

1. 03:01:362 - Uesless timing section?

[CMP's Hard]

1. 00:10:275 (2) - Remove clap, add clap to 00:10:492 (3)
2. 00:54:623 (2) - I don't know what this slider follow, according to vocal, it should be note or slider at 00:54:732, 00:55:058 and 00:55:275
3. 01:30:927 - Add a note here with finish, and KIAI ends here
4. 02:44:840 (4,5,6,7,8) - Those notes and slider are maybe a bit hard to play, them looked irregular IMO
5. 02:34:840 (5,6) - I think this partten is hard to tell 5 and 6 which is a slider
6. 02:57:884 - KIAI ends here

[Someone's Watching you]

1. 02:45:275 (11) - I was always recommending use only 1 reverse on a slider since it's easy to understand and play. Well, just personal opnion
2. I'm worry about the 1.5xBPM slider, maybe they need a SB warnning since it's always upexpected

star

Raging Bull wrote:

Why does Uiharu have 2 left hands?

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. Adjust the Audio Lead-in to 2000ms via notepad

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 01:04:840 (1) - This slider is too far from the previous circle, you did it for symmetry and etc, but actually it is confusing for new players, you should move 01:03:971 (1,2) some grids down to fix the spacing

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 02:47:449 - Add a kiai fountain here as the other difficulties.

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 00:26:036 - Add a circle ? as you want to follow the vocal, it is kinda weird if you have nothing here.

haha5957 wrote:

Raging Bull wrote:

Why does Uiharu have 2 left hands?

seems like its saten's hand behind

Yukoyuko wrote:

blue=Think about it
black=Just suggestions

I'm sorry but I'm not good at English and This is my first modding
There will be many problems in my modding but please understand it
영어실력이 그리 좋은편이 아니라 복잡한건 한국어로 설명했습니다
처음 모딩해보는데 부족한부분이 있어도 이해 부탁드려요!

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[Advanced]

00:19:623 (1,2,3) - Slider(reverse)
It's better for who don't know this song
초반에 박자 헷갈릴거같아서 이렇게 해보는거두 괜찮을거같아요 맞는 말이에용 ~ 근데 그냥 단순히 킵학 ㅗ싶어서..ㅎㅎ

00:24:406 (3) - Slider end
00:25:275 (1) - Delete 00:25:275 (1) and New combo from 00:24:840
00:24:840 ~ 00:25:275 - Slider (1)
I think this is better
왼쪽하고 대칭맞추실려고 해놓으신거같은데 콤보가 이상해서 바꿔봤어요 // 대칭 맞추려고 한게 맞아요 저도 뉴콤보 이상하다는건 느꼈지만 다른 맵들도 슬라이더 등을 이유로 콤보가 이상한 경우는 종종 있는것 같아서.. 뭣보다 반복을 안하면 따로 넣을만한 곳이 없더라고요 ㅠㅠㅋ

00:59:732 (1) > 00:59:840 (392,232) - How about making slider more longer
01:00:166 (2) - Add Reverse arrow and End slider at 01:00:275
01:58:862 (1) > 01:58:971 (120,152) - How about making slider more longer
01:59:297 (2) - Add Reverse arrow and End slider at 01:59:406
이박자가 더 익숙하다고 생각해서 바꿨봤습니다 바꿨습니다~

02:37:666 (6) Add one circle (376,192) How about adding this?
1부터 중간에 하나씩 있길래 맞춰서 넣어봤는데 이상한가요? // 넣었습니다~

02:53:971 (2) - I think it's too far from other notes
너무 구석으로 가있는거같아서 안쪽으로 좀 옮기는것두 괜찮을거같습니다 // 옮겼습니다~


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[Extreme]

00:31:036 (4,5) - How about moving these circles a little bit?
4,5가 2,3과 겹쳐있어서 4,5의 위치를 조금 왼쪽위로 이동했으면 합니다 // 익스트림이니 괜찮지 않을까용? 움직이니까 모양이 안좋아보이는데...

00:33:101 (8) - How about adding one circle in front of 8 in same position? (00:32:992)
00:34:840 (8) - How about adding One circle in front of 8 in same position? (00:34:732)
둘다 하나씩 더있는게 박자가 자연스러울것 같습니다 // 어느정도 동의하지만 이쪽은 왠지 킵하고싶네용 'ㅁ'

00:50:058 (4,5) - How about moving these circles down? 4 > (448,152), 5 > (344,144)
00:50:927 (1,2) - How about moving these circles right? 1 > (248,64), 2 > (248,176)
일부러 그 위치에 놓으신건지 아닌지 잘 모르겠지만 이렇게 옮기는게 나을것같네요 // x1.2가 기본설정이라 이 거리에 놓는게 DS에 맞아서.. 사실 그냥 이 부분 자체를 아예 바꿀것 같아요~

00:59:949 (3,4) - How about moving these circles to (344,312) or little bit?
1,2와 3,4를 조금 떨어뜨려놓는게 나을것같아 옮겨봤습니다 (옮겼습니다~)

01:19:949 (7) - How about moving these circles to (344,232)?
진행상 이게 맞을것같네요 // 옮겼습니다~

01:49:188 (4,5) - How about moving these circles up? 4 > (64,232), 5 > (160,240)
01:50:058 (1,2) - How about moving these circles left? 1 > (256,312), 2 > (256,216)
이부분도 이렇게 옮기는게 나을것같아요

01:59:079 (3,4) - How about moving these circles to (168,72) or little bit?
이부분도 00:59:949 처럼 붙어있길래 옮겨봤습니다

02:02:232 (1) - How about moving this circle to (200,48)?
이위치는 어떠신지... // 옮겼습니다~

02:13:319 (6) - How about moving this circle to (320,360)?
1~5와 6이 시간차가 있길래 위치 바꿔봤습니다 // 옮겼습니다~

02:19:079 (7,8) - How about moving these circles? 7 > (112,136), 8 > (160,320)
의도하신건진 잘 모르겠지만 테스트할때 점프가 심해서 위치 조정했습니다 // 의도입니당 귀엽게봐주세요 ]..]

02:34:188 (4,5,6) - How about moving these circles? 4 > (168,312), 5 > (184,328), 6 > (208,336)
별로 중요한거같진 않지만 이렇게하는게 나을거같아요 // 의도한 배치입니당~

02:37:014 (1) - How about moving this circle to (176,352)
이것도 약간 옮기는게 나을거같네요 // 옮겼습니당~

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플레이만 해보다가 모딩하는건 처음이라
제작자분의 의도를 미처 파악하지 못하고 실수한 부분도 있을텐데
그런부분도 알려주시면 감사하겠습니다!

ziin wrote:

If you want to use a finish (cymbal crash) you can just use normal or soft hitsounds for that one note.

[easy]
Nice map.
Hitsounds are a bit strange. If you listen to the snare drum, you'll hear it hits on beat 2 and 4 (the white tick before and after the long white tick) and usually that's when you want to put in a clap (in your case, a whistle). Alternatively, you can listen to the music for each time the snare drum plays and put a hitsound on it if a note exists there.

[advanced]
00:10:927 (1) - http://puu.sh/5agV
00:45:710 (1,2) - see how these overlap each other? This looks bad. maybe something like this http://puu.sh/5ahq
01:00:058 (2) - move 1/4 earlier
01:20:492 (4) - too low, it's off screen. move higher and stay inside of the grid.
01:44:840 (1,2) - see 00:45:710 (1,2)
01:59:188 (2) - move 1/4 earlier
02:19:622 (4) - too high, underneath HP bar: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/142464
02:28:319 (1,2,1,2) - spacing?
02:37:884 (6,1) - (6) covers up the repeat on (1). Example: http://puu.sh/5aj0

[cmp]
Can you re-scan your background and rotate it so it's square, or zoom in so we don't see crooked borders? Color would be nice too.
00:10:275 (2) - no clap
00:10:492 (3) - clap
00:28:101 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - too many red ticks. Move them all 1/2 later.
01:00:058 (3,4) - 1/4 earlier
01:59:189 (3,4) - ^

[extreme]
00:13:862 (4) - nothing in music here
00:14:297 - add
Well it doesn't exactly follow the music so I'm going to assume you didn't try to map to the song. I don't think I can convince you to map to specific parts, so I'm not going to bother with pointing out the overmapping. If you want to map a song without overmapping, just listen to 1-2 parts in the music, and map those parts. Don't try to "guess" at good rhythms. Listen to the song at 25% if it's not clear that there is a note at that spot.

[someone]
more random notes. Seems overmapped on first glance.

Star for raildex and easy.

KuraiPettan wrote:

General

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. Adjust the Audio Lead-in to 2000ms via notepad

Basic

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 01:04:840 (1) - This slider is too far from the previous circle, you did it for symmetry and etc, but actually it is confusing for new players, you should move 01:03:971 (1,2) some grids down to fix the spacing

CMP's Hard

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 02:47:449 - Add a kiai fountain here as the other difficulties.

Someone's watching you!

1. Suggestions : You don't need to follow them if you disagree
   
   1. 00:26:036 - Add a circle ? as you want to follow the vocal, it is kinda weird if you have nothing here.

Short mod ~

It's a very nice map, I enjoyed playing it
Sorry but I can't star now because I don't have any kudosu available. I will star it as soon as possible. xD

/!\ Kudosu this post only if you think it was useful, and don't kudosu it if you only fixed the Audio Lead-in and the kiai fountain, thanks.

pieguy1372 wrote:

Basic:

02:48:753 (3) - too far from (2) ==

Advanced:

00:12:666 (3,4,5,1) - these jumps seem a bit too much for this diff
00:43:971 (1) - too far from (4)
00:55:275 (2,4) - goes off the playfield
01:07:449 (4) - goes off the playfield
01:54:405 (2,4) - goes off the playfield, also it might be more interesting if you didn't copy-paste this part
02:06:579 (4) - ^
02:34:406 (5) - goes off the playfield
02:52:666 (1) - repeat arrow hidden by (4)

CMP'S Hard:

00:06:579 (2) - too close to (1)
00:18:753 (5) - 1/6 is off time, perhaps change to a 1/4 slider (and move (6) a bit)?
00:22:449 (4) - too close to (3)
01:08:101 (4) - too close to (3)
01:10:927 (4) - too close to (3)
01:18:101 (2) - too close to (1)
01:21:797 (4) - too close to (4)
02:40:492 (5) - (nazi) 1 level 4 grid right
02:54:406 (3) - too close to (2)

Extreme:

01:27:666 (2,3) - space this the same as the other streams?

Someone's Watching You!: OTL

00:13:536 (4,5,6) - O.O, this is a bit too much and out of nowhere, perhaps just use 1.0x sliders?

Nice map~

Sekai wrote:

Seems like that depends on CMP's mind, and the rule saids we can't kudosu image/Mp3/storyboards

DragonSparta wrote:

Hello~
Basic
Approach Rate - 1 or 2
00:40:058 (2) - Align with the previous (2)
02:33:101 (4,5,6) - Move one gird left

Advanced
Approach Rate -1
Hp Drain +1
I suggest moving some notes that overlap each other
02:20:492 (1) - Remove new combo

CMP's Hard
00:09:188 (1) - Remove new combo
01:17:184 (1) - Let this be centered and let (2) be right underneath it, centered too
02:54:406 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2...) - Move this a bit higher

Extreme
Seems nice~
I like it~

Someone Watching You!
00:12:666 (1) - Remove the new combo and add it in 00:12:992
_____________________________
That's all
I guess I can't mod the Insanes
Sry

DragonSparta wrote:

Hello~
Basic
Approach Rate - 1 or 2
00:40:058 (2) - Align with the previous (2)
02:33:101 (4,5,6) - Move one gird left

Advanced
Approach Rate -1
Hp Drain +1
I suggest moving some notes that overlap each other
02:20:492 (1) - Remove new combo

CMP's Hard
00:09:188 (1) - Remove new combo
01:17:184 (1) - Let this be centered and let (2) be right underneath it, centered too
02:54:406 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2...) - Move this a bit higher

Extreme
Seems nice~
I like it~

Someone Watching You!
00:12:666 (1) - Remove the new combo and add it in 00:12:992
_____________________________
That's all
I guess I can't mod the Insanes
Sry

CMP wrote:

DragonSparta wrote:

Hello~
Basic
Approach Rate - 1 or 2
00:40:058 (2) - Align with the previous (2)
02:33:101 (4,5,6) - Move one gird left

Advanced
Approach Rate -1
Hp Drain +1
I suggest moving some notes that overlap each other
02:20:492 (1) - Remove new combo

CMP's Hard
00:09:188 (1) - Remove new combo
01:17:184 (1) - Let this be centered and let (2) be right underneath it, centered too
02:54:406 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2...) - Move this a bit higher

Extreme
Seems nice~
I like it~

Someone Watching You!
00:12:666 (1) - Remove the new combo and add it in 00:12:992
_____________________________
That's all
I guess I can't mod the Insanes
Sry

some part is fixed


thank you

1. AP change to 5?
2. Circle Size change to the large?
3. Slider Velocity change to 1.40 or 1.50?
4. hmm... i have a question. this difficulty is NORMAL or HARD?!

1. AR -1, OD+1

C R E A M wrote:

생략

haha5957 wrote:

C R E A M wrote:

생략

음.. 다른 부분들은 일단 모딩이니 나중에 주말에 보고 (ㅠㅠ) 앞에 General 부분에 대해서만 미리 답변을 드리고 싶어서요 'ㅁ'

일단 님 말씀처럼 베이직은 이지보다 어렵고 어드벤스는 노말보다 어렵습니다.

노린게 맞습니다. 난이도를 Easy Normal Hard 하면 이게 이지치곤 어렵다느니 노말치곤 쉽다느니 노말치곤 어렵다느니..

그렇다고 정직하게 뒤에 +를 박아놓으면 +를 떼라는 모딩이 들어옵니다; 개인적으로 묘지에 간맵들 지나가면서 정말 요약하자면 그런 모딩들에 지쳤습니다 -_-;

애매한 난이도명을 박아놓으니 그런 모딩은 점차 사라지더군요. 대표적으로 커넥트때 난이도에 Clara Alice Claris를 박아놓으니 대충 이게 좀 어렵다싶으면 그냥 노말이거나 하고 쉽다싶으면 이지겠거니 하더라고요 ㅠㅠ


제 퓨처게이 베이직은 처음부터 ☆2.5였습니다. 처음엔 노말이었어요. 근데 이지같대요ㅋ 이지로 바꿨습니다.
그런데 이제 크림님은 왠지 이지치곤 어렵다고 하십니다 (크림님 이전에도 몇분이 그러시긴 했지만)

저는 어차피 똑같은 ☆2.5를 놓고 이름이 이지면 어떻고 노말이면 어떠냐고 따지고 싶은 생각이 들더라고요
☆2.5치고 이 부분은 너무 난해하다, 고 한다면 OK 인정, 근데 이건 이름이 이지라서 어떻고 이름이 노말이라 어떻고..

유비트 같은 경우도 마퀼소치틀 베이직은 레벨 6짜리 익스트림들보다 어렵습니다.
근데 OSU는 유독 왠지 난이도 이름에 집착한다는 느낌이 듭니다; 그냥 그래서 그렇습니다

난이도 이름을 애매하게 박아놓은건 그것 떄문이에요 'ㅁ';

그리고 어드벤스 SV가 비교적 빠른 편이라서 노말이라고하면 또 뭐라고 할것 같다는 느낌도 들었고..그냥 아무려면 어떻습니까..라고 말하고 싶지만 그렇게 말할순 없으니 그냥 난이도 이름을 애매하게 해서 그런 심리를 은근히 표현했을 뿐이라고 말씀드리고 싶네용 'ㅁ';ㅠㅠ

발맵 봐주셔서 감사합니당


+

마지막 난이도는 아예 빼거나 말씀하신 억지스트림 제거랑 Kiai를 제외한 부분의 스트림간 거리는 단축하되 여러가지 방법으로 꾸겨넣은 느낌이 안들도록 마지막으로 수정해보고 여전히 그런 느낌이 들면 걍 제거하겠습니당 ㅋㅋ 에이 아깝당

1. OK, this words are typed after checking all diffs, the top 3 diffs are almost all notes and leck the use of sliders imo, making the structure of this map all click click click, it might be an enjoyable thing for specific genre song, but not fitting well for this.
2. try to create some nice patterns insteading of random triangle jumps, even you can try to 'copy' other mappers' patterns (I don't mean steal the whole or most part of it), that can make your work more than great.
3. about the storyboard, this image is not fitting the pulse or color change effort imo, when it turns orange, makes me think of 'ohh this is on fire?' lol

1. umm, some streams are like 'for stream', and too many copy/paste, some people don't like it including me
2. using really many notes, that's not a bad thing, but kind of not fitting the genre of this song imo

1. plays alike 'Aleister Crowley' diff with less streams, but this diff has some nice patterns. I prefer this one than 'Aleister Crowley'

1. AR+1, and OD too low, make it 6 plz

416,96,58753,2,0,B|408:16|304:16|280:64,1,170,0|8

48,80,141362,6,0,B|72:136|48:184|48:184|72:232|48:304,2,212.499996833503,4|8|0

184,208,114405,2,0,B|208:296|296:312,2,160,2|0|2

1. Tags : The source is "Toaru Kagaku no Railgun" and I'm ok with this. However some other maps of this anime in osu! "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun", if someone in the game search for "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun", he will not find this map, so add "To Aru Kagaku no Railgun" in the tags.
2. Breaks : The letterbox cuts Misaka's head, consider disabling them ?
3. Kiai : The kiai sectios aren't consistent throughout the difficulties, in Uiharu Kazari , a kiai fountain is missing (this kiai should start on 02:14:406 and ends on 02:14:514).
4. Custom Hitsounds : Do you really use all of them ? o.o

1. Do not use OD 0, I don't know if it's unrankable, but this is senseless. With OD 0, even if you click on a circle 50ms later/earlier than you should, you get a 300 (and 50ms is really big !). So increase the OD. I would suggest you to use OD 2 en HP Drain Rate 2.
2. 02:03:971 (1,2,3) - These sliders end at the same place which can be confusing for beginners, re-arrange the pattern please ?
3. 02:38:753 (1) - This slider is hidden by the previous slider's track and by its hitburst, Change it and make it visible.

1. 00:58:319 (5,6) - I really dislike this kind of patterns, a player who is not really used to the game yet would not understand which is the circle or the slider. I can be very confusing !
2. 01:20:492 (4) - Without any actual reason, I would add a new combo on this slider, it looks nice.
3. 01:57:449 (5,6) - Same as 0:58:319 (5,6).
4. 02:19:622 (4) - Same as 01:20:492 (4).
5. 02:37:884 (7) - This overlap looks awkward, maybe you can try to make it better ? ( Suggestion : Move the 2nd square 1 grid left and move the 3rd square 1 grid up and 1 grid left)

1. 00:58:753 (4) - This slider overlaps the previous circle awkwardly, make it better, like this :
   
   SPOILER

   http://puu.sh/baIM
2. 01:57:883 (4) - ^
3. 02:13:319 (4) - A new phrase starts on this note, consider adding a new combo.

1. I think HP drain rate 8 is kinda high for this difficulty, use 7 instead ?
2. 00:13:536 (1,2,3) - This pattern is very confusing, it really looks like a triple (3 1/4 notes) but it isn't. You ought to use a more adequate spacing here.
3. 00:25:710 (1,2,3) - This triple sounds awkward, you should do something like this instead :
   

haha5957 wrote:

Yahoo!

Thanks \:D/!