beatmap discussions
00:02:626 (3,4,1) - a bit minor when song is this slow but still would be good to use ds here a little more consistently bc visually it feels double the distance away compared to the last one
02:19:542 (1,2,3,4) - ohmygod im looking at this snapping and the way the stream looks the same and it do be kinda scary to play, was this intentional? (just making sure)
00:28:360 (1,2) - could use different shapes for these two, would be a nice touch to show the difference between the sounds they map
00:27:432 (3,4,5,6) - hmmmmm might be my bias toward the piano but i feel like just following the piano would work much nicer here compared to the doubles u got going on here
00:17:844 (4) - id map this as a 1/4 slider, it just kinda shows off the next slider really nice idk how id explain but if it makes sense to you as well go for it
bit of inconsistent spacing when both parts sound the same in intensity 00:50:626 (1,2,3) - vs. 01:09:826 (5,6,7) -
01:15:826 (1,2,3,4) - maybe make spacing increase more gradual here so it increases progressively like this --> https://hypercyte.me/ss/w/g4QVM.webm
02:31:820 (8) - this rhythm doesnt rly fit here in comparison to the other times you've used it
using a 1/2 slider feels more fitting --> https://hypercyte.me/ss/w/NCvuy.webm
but if you want that "stop-and-go" feel to it, just removing a repeat and keeping it where it is would also work fine imo --> https://hypercyte.me/ss/UNlKb
05:33:283 (3,4,5) - adding a circle here would be nice! fitting it within the pattern similar to 05:33:283 (3,4,5) - would also look really cool
00:24:502 (2) - this would work nicely as 2 circles, but i understand what youre going for here with the focus on the other sound
project loved metadata check!!
artist: 長谷川白紙
romanised artist: HAKUSHI HASEGAWA
title: 砂漠で
romanised title: Desert
tags: sabaku de air ni ni electronic instrumental japanese
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refs (feel free to ignore)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JUB0SDZ2a-w
https://soundcloud.com/hakushi-hasegawa/desert
