02:59:718 (1,2,3) - there is inconsistent spacing here. if its intentional then just ignore
05:05:972 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) -
05:17:721 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) -
the circles for both of these streams are in the wrong order (assuming this isnt on purpose for some reason)
01:58:755 (1,2,3) - this being uneven hurts my head 😭 obviously optional to make it more neat
some small parts that could be visually sharpened up (subjective)
00:33:946 (2,3) - you could move the second slider a bit to the right so they dont overlap awkwardly
00:53:837 (2,3,5) - i can see what you were probably trying to do (and why you couldnt). i understand the space is limiting because its near the edge, but it might be better to find a work around then keep it how it is, but that's ultimately up to you
01:25:305 (2,4) - the overlap here is just slightly off
01:28:403 (2,1) - the overlap looks neater if you move the slider 1 pixel to the right imo (not really an issue)
01:36:555 (1,2) - and 01:39:164 (1,2) - i dont think blankets well, but thats more about slider shape and if you want to keep your wave sliders a little extra funny or not
honestly, for rank or not, none of this probably matters. i just figured id mention a couple things that caught my eye just in case it didnt catch yours/wasn't your intention
01:18:106 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - this part of the song feels more intense than others with much more spacing, so more spacing at this part might fit more
00:25:176 (1,2) - this makes more of a triple sound so you could maybe make the 1 in the 1-2 a 1/4th beat kick slider
01:16:374 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is the only part that caught me off guard when playing. the larger spacing for a 1/4 beat feels kind of random. changing this to be similar sizes to other 1/4 beats with similar intensity to it (although sacrificing visuals), which is 2 less notches in medium grid snap spacing, may make it more playable/readable.
distance between these two objects 00:34:129 (5,1) - is too large and feels awkward
edit: timing feels too late at those triples
another edit: changing it to this https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/826496659353370624/848255328340279316/Screenshot_2021-05-29_12.41.41.png should fix the issue just move the objects accordingly
00:53:832 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - you could space out the second 1234 pattern more to represent raising intensity in vocals instead of repeating the pattern. it also could fit better with the large jump to the next slider
00:46:144 (4,1) - changing the placement of the circle to fit the curve of the slider could make it look neater. example: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/826496659353370624/835844259117793350/screenshot2065.jpg
also this goes for multiple portions of the map, and if you want it specifically like this for stylistic reasons then disregard this suggestion
00:06:582 (1,2,3,4) - the circles with these vocals i feel would fit better as two sliders. also every other instance of this same type of vocal you use two sliders so it feels inconsistent having this one specifically be circles
00:24:996 (7) - two sounds in the long slider, repeating slider/slider & circle/3 circles would fit better
all kiai sections have different slider speeds for no apparent reason. it would make more sense for them to have the same slider speed considering there isn't any notable difference between sections (00:44:829 (1) - , 01:48:829 (1) - , 02:44:829 (1) - )
02:20:829 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - this section feels like it would be better if it wasn't all 1-2's because there is significantly less emphasis on these three notes 02:21:996 (2,1,2) -
02:10:829 (1,2,1,2) - i don't see a reason for these jumps to be 1-2 jumps, while all of the following jumps are 1-2-3-4
00:16:496 (5,6,1) - this feels more like a separation of two patterns than part of the beatmap due to the spacing to the next note and lack of emphasis on the next note. this is just an example as this occurs multiple times (00:14:996 (4,5,1) - , 00:22:996 (1,2,1) -). a way to fix this would be placing the next note in a direction where the direction of the flow changes instead of a straight line causing less emphasis and more uncomfortable flow, making it more comfortable to play and expressing more emphasis on the sound
00:47:035 (4,1) and 02:22:832 (3,5,3) are off from a "perfect stack". if this is just aesthetic choice then you can ignore this
01:27:425 (2,1,2,1,2,1) - could change the direction of the jumps after the transition circle for emphasis