00:55:626 (1,2,3) - this has pretty big spacing compared to the rest of the section, scale by x0,8
00:14:126 (1) - this could be anywhere else in a slow part, no need for it to be directly on top of 00:13:126 (2) - . And if you want to keep it there at least have it flow the opposite direction
Your use of volumes needs some work, considering the highest % of volume you've used in the entire map is just 50%. I'd suggest in general to buff the main kiais to 70%, also buff all other sections accordingly. 30% in the non vocalised slow parts is ok, but you should buff parts like 01:22:126 to 50-55%. Also you could bump up the volumes on the small kiais you've used on some sliders to 5% more than what the rest of the section they're on is, it would be a nice touch
01:13:876 (2,1,2) - also move this a bit further up so that 01:14:126 (1) - doesnt overlap with 01:13:126 (1) - . This is purely visual but its always better if you keep your patterns clean where its possible