00:08:769 (5,1) - quite edgy for a walk, would nerf the distance to make it easier for salad players
00:54:870 (2) - could change to a 1/1 slider and add circle on 00:55:379 to match the intensity of this section
00:43:345 (1,2,3,4,5) - is inconsistant with 00:46:057 (1,2,3,4) - . Would suggest changing 00:43:345 (1,2,3,4,5) - to match 00:46:057 (1,2,3,4) - as you did 1/1 dash for other similar parts in the kiai section
00:32:836 (1,2,3,4,1) - is inconsistant with 00:30:125 (1,2,3,1) - . Would remove 00:33:006 (2,3) - dash
00:30:464 (2,3,1) - would remove 3 dash and add dash on 1 for better emphasis
00:27:921 (1) - would start spinner at 00:27:413 instead to represent the sound in that part