beatmap discussions

ima come back to mod this.

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Was the bass at 00:52:894 - left out for patterning sake? If not perhaps u could add something there.

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00:20:517 - to 00:23:908 - can have even more patterning variety by having perhaps one or 2 of these LNs be extended.

I'd probably suggest remapping this section with that idea, maybe into something for visually appealing.

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00:19:157 - to 00:20:191 - might want to recheck this, 1/4 sounds completely off.
I believe u could map the piano which is 1/3 and pattern around that at 1/1 and 1/2 with some drum and snares.

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00:14:507 - to 00:20:191 - It's a bit confusing on what the LN lengths are going to exactly, atleast it's hard for me to follow.
00:17:433 - compare to . 00:15:970 - and 00:14:507 - etc, I'd probably see about making them more consistent overall with eachother.

Could probably amplify some more finger control by keeping the previous LN release skillset, and adding more patterning ontop of it.

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00:02:040 - to 00:14:507 - the 1/4 short LN seems very repetitive, I'd suggest adding more variety in the LN lengths, however you want to do it. The current feels bland.

You could try an LN release skillset here, much like https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1923261#mania/3970285
and this will become a much better build up entering 00:14:507 -

00:02:104 (2104|1) - should be at 00:02:137 - I believe.

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Hey, just some thoughts for the mapper to consider when I playtested this owo)b

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mapper's in the tags "whose the mapper and whose guild" quoted by randomelol

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03:35:935 - 04:40:768 - are unused SB hitsounds, might wanna get these removed in next BN check.

Also u could do some slight file optimization for bg. Current is 1.54MB which is kinda big, here is a 697KB
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1134717772325204041/1154174468260905102/catearsgirleatingchocolateorsomething.jpg

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your title is missing a marker, I believe it should be "20,november (single mix)" instead of adding single mix in the tags

with sources:

  1. https://beatmania.fandom.com/wiki/20,november_(single_mix) (wiki i know but everythings so old)
  2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f4NopoYpED8&ab_channel=KENTGameChannel (single mix)
  3. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4MNt_uN2tQ4&ab_channel=KoRamdeo (radio edit)
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hey just wanna see if you can look into a missing hitsound file being soft:hitwhistle.

I'm assuming a W was accidently added during a change in inherited points (im assuming that's the case xD)

you may want to look into this.

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01:14:798 - was wondering why there was one hitsound inconsistency showing up... perhaps you could add 1 note here in 7k hard and slap on the clap hitsound

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I think you're missing some SB hitsounding, may want to double check this.
At 03:00:431 - and 03:04:899 - you're missing kick2 SB hitsounds in some diffs.

Easy diff, u could add abunch of HS to storyboard 00:45:446 - 00:46:098 - 00:47:402 - 00:48:707 - 00:49:359 - 00:50:663 - 00:51:315 - 00:52:620 - 00:53:272 - 00:55:880 - 00:56:533 - 00:57:837 - 00:59:141 - 00:59:793 - 01:01:098 - 01:03:054 - 01:03:707 - 01:06:315 - etc (aint no way ima name every single one)

all the way to 03:16:881 - being the last one.

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general check
AoiKing AtlantisCorsace Open 2022ElectronicInstrumental
HP 8.5OD 7.5
WidescreenEpilepsy
audio.mp3 at 6.83MB looks the same as ranked 7k chart by kobi

soft-hitnormal.wav** at 27.5KB looks good with no extra silence

^❓ HS volume could be increased, the soft-hitnormal.wav is very low in audio already and hard to hear ingame, perhaps 50%/60%?

BG and Storyboard graphic are conflicting, since you state this diff is no longer the same used in gbc2023 and the graphics currently made, no longer fit anymore. I'd suggest remove bg bottom right "GB Cup 2023 Spring Final Tiebreaker, along with conflicting SB graphics such as "1, 2, 10" (however, I'd discuss this with your BN just to make sure before u remove tags associated with GBC) and perhaps tags associated too)
^❌bg.jpg at 2174x1188 with a size of 1.42MB (can be optimized further using this .jpg at 613KB)
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1134717772325204041/1152511662620946504/40E2F5FE8FFDD89DE2E6DDB9F2D36F01.jpg
The current bg also has some blurriness to it, which is definitely seen thru the text, just a suggestion whether you want to find a higher quality one, and add better graphics accordingly.
^❌storyboard Some graphics are conflicting since this isn't the same diff used in gbc2023, aswell as... SB/10.png and SB/9.png are unused files.
^^Using your current sb file is 7.91MB which can be optimized further.
You need to convert all .png to .jpg especially "sea" bg which is at a size of 3.46MB and "light" which is at 2.54MB
If you decide to change the SB, make sure to include this.

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I'd remove gf tb grand finals tiebreaker as this specific chart wasn't featured in Corsace's 2022 tournament.
I'd also remove -Timerains- which the name doesn't actually have any searchable beatmaps, Seiran- should be enough.

Copy: aoi's odd ideas blue_aoironohikari bluenoup aoisoundsystem electronic underwater duck instrumental trance hardcore duckcore breakcore psytrance quacken hybrid hydro core co2022 co22 2022 custom song vinxis charybdis lucky_clover lovely_hyahya seiran- gb cup gbc 2023 gbc23 4k spring final tiebreaker

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How come 02:48:405 (168405|2) - and 03:52:305 (232305|0,232605|3) - are different lengths for the same kiai?

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why is 02:46:155 (166155|2) - and 02:48:105 (168105|0) - different lengths? both have very similar sounds, and the vocals have roughly the same length aswell.

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what is the point of the LN at 02:26:430 (146430|1) - perhaps it would be better to have it be a rice note instead.
I also don't see any consistency in other sections like this unless im blind.

At most I'd say shorten it to 1/4 like but ehh. what do you think

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could add a single 1/4 LN here at col 4 01:28:530 - for example

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Shouldn't 01:20:955 (80955|1) - be extended to 01:21:255 - ?
like

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00:40:905 - to 00:55:305 - having ur vocals be snapped on 1/8, makes some of the hitsounding just sound very weird.

Like it's not complementing with the drums you map on snap either.
like 00:53:392 (53392|3,53505|0,53692|2,53805|1,53992|1,54105|3,54255|2,54405|0) -

I believe simplification for 1/2 is much better in this case, here's an example

The timing/playability feels much more natural when using simplification.

I'd discuss this with ur BN's and see what you guys think.

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00:48:630 (48630|2,49155|0) - could be lowered to 00:49:080 - better fits the sound.

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Hey since this this isn't nommed, your .png bg is 1.4MB which is kinda big.

here's a .jpg with a size of 330KB
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1134717772325204041/1151989916767617064/Louise.jpg

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Hey, thought u could do some slight file optimization during ur 2nd BN check.

Notice ur soft-hitfinish.wav was 827kb
with close to 1.6 seconds of silence

Here's a 215KB soft-hitfinish.wav
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1134717772325204041/1151651536561246319/soft-hitfinish.wav

otherwise map looks freaking amazing!

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hey, i'd suggest looking into the actual size of all your .wavs
You can cut alot of the length and lower the overall size by a few mb.

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hihi, I noticed ur bg was png at 1.69mb which is kinda big.

How about this jpg at 139kb instead.
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1134717772325204041/1151608321799888987/bg.jpg

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hello, just wanted to see if this was intentional.

soft-hitfinish.wav has a delay of around 10-11ms

Here's an edited version
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1134717772325204041/1151601779071520940/soft-hitfinish.wav

**Also wanted to see if you'd consider adding soft-hitwhistle storyboard hitsounding in ""ATing's Baka Insane Plus" from 01:19:199 - to 02:03:790 - ** since it does provide some HS inconsistencies between both diffs.
Finally, just wanted to point out some of these unused timing points.

perhaps could add a nice slowjam to the 110bpm bits.

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Just wanted to make sure these were intended owo)b

Advanced HS: hey, i saw some inconsistencies with the HS at 01:09:236 -
I'd wanna suggest adding a storyboard HS here, where its used in different sections, for ex.

There also seems to be a completely different HS at 01:51:152 (111152|2) -

Also looks like LR_CymbalFSU is duplicated twice at 01:13:902 - 01:14:402 - 01:14:902 - 01:15:402 -

Then check out an inconsistent HS at 01:09:236 - in hard diff.

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Hello, thought you could use some extra tag suggestions before this hits ranked if you like owo)b
Sources:

  1. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8Wr98RC6SNU&ab_channel=tokiwa-Topic
  2. https://twitter.com/tokiwa_shion
  3. https://megarex-jp.bandcamp.com/album/future-evangelix-01-2

Current tags: future evangelix 01 egarex future bass electronic instrumental featured artist fa edm 常盤

Copy these tags: 2019 tokiwa_shion future evangelix 01 egarex future bass electronic instrumental featured artist fa edm

Added 2019 tokiwa_shion for release year date and another way to find tokiwa credentials.

finally, I'm unsure whether to put 常盤 in artist, or keep tokiwa in artist.
https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1700539#mania/3474728 and https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1638487#fruits/3344284 etc has 常盤 in artist, whilst https://osu.ppy.sh/beatmapsets/1496234#osu/3221246 just has tokiwa in artist etc.

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Hi, just wanted to see if you'd like some more tags before this hits ranked for more accessibility c;
Sources:

  1. https://twitter.com/_aran/status/1416353207601696772
  2. https://la-priere.booth.pm/items/3126803
  3. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ft1oytmXg3Y&ab_channel=Lapri%C3%A8re
  4. https://twitter.com/Lapriere_info/status/1416336878668746754

Current tags: nayuta 棗いつき 藍月なくる natsume itsuki aitsuki nakuru aran dudehacker muse dash japanese pop j-pop electronic

Copy New tags: 2021 棗いつきitsukinatsume nayuta itsuki 藍月なくる NakuruAitsuki Nakuru Aitsuki 7utauta nayuta ラプリエール aran _aran dudehacker muse dash japanese pop j-pop electronic

I added the artist twitters (itsukinatsume, NakuruAitsuki, 7utauta) , aswell as ラプリエール which is another translation for laprière.
I added aran's twitter _aran

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Hey, just wanna see what you guys think about some issues regarding slight timing issue, with some obvious late drum sounds being 02:13:113 (133113|0,133113|1,133280|2,133280|3) -, may want to look into this for the rest of the song.

Also just wanted to see what these were about, im a noob owo)b

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02:05:562 (125562|0,125619|1,125676|2) - I believe this is supposed to be 1/8 not 1/6

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Hi looks like Nicknem's Easy has inconsistent tags with the other 3 diffs, probably just forgot to copy/paste from other diffs.

Copy these tags into Easy : Sun [ Lovega ] Nicknem_ project sekai hatsune miku miku: colorful stage! jpop j-pop pop japanese Jishoumushoku Yoisaki Kanade 宵崎 奏 Asahina Mafuyu 朝比奈 まふゆ Shinonome Ena 東雲 絵名 Akiyama Mizuki 暁山 瑞希 vocaloid video game version ver プロセカ proseka Tanabe Rui 田辺 留依 Kusunoki Tomori 楠木 ともり Minori Suzuki 鈴木 みのり Satou Hinata 佐藤 日向 Fujita Saki 藤田 咲 Nanou ナノウ Hoehoe-P ほえほえP Getsumen. 月面。Fantasm-O-Matic EXIT TUNES PRESENTS Supernova 3 LOIDs -All time best of Nanou- 初音ミク Project mirai こんぷり~と Miku dé Nihongo

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In "heroines" diff you have an unsnapped note at 01:22:380 (82380|0) -
comparing to "Hard"

Also causes a slight inconsistency within the HS on the note aswell at 01:22:372 (82372|3) - within the "Hard" diff.

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01:20:170 - wouldn't hurt to add 1 note to col 1 here.
01:21:503 - could also have a note added on col 3 here.
01:23:837 - could have a note on col 2.
or could be mapped like

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00:57:587 (57587|2) - this note shouldn't technically be here following consistency reasoning.

Seeing as u don't map 00:56:253 - 00:58:920 - 01:01:587 - etc

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I'd remove 00:28:670 (28670|1) - and replace with
What do ya think?

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How about adding a note here 00:20:837 - like

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missing note here 00:18:837 - 00:10:837 - following consistency, you seem to map singles for the vocals,

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missing note here? 00:01:170 - considering u mapped at 00:01:503 (1503|3) - etc

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potential ghost note? 00:52:420 (52420|2) -

comparing with top diff

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00:32:670 (32670|3,32837|3,33003|3) - compared to 00:35:337 (35337|3,35503|3) - are triple singles, compared to double singles.

I'd make this double singles for consistency.

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There a reason you have different hitsounding volumes between the diffs, example with 4k expert having 40% and 4k afterlife/ 7k last mission etc having 30%. I'd make em all consistent within all diffs.

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Metadata:
Sources:

  1. https://soundcloud.com/takehirotei/unwelcome-school-x-extended
  2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4TeS5Ot2qhs&t=2s&ab_channel=%E4%BD%8E%E6%B8%85DISSY
  3. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pEg_d2f6myw&ab_channel=MO2

Copy Tags: blue archive ブルアカ buruaka sua deng o dok zua k lou k佬 ah beng jsaw low-definition low definition 低清 dissy dissy.official official 低清 mitsukiyo ミツキヨ novelty meme mashup electronic chinese cantonese mandarine malaysia hardbass hard bass steady bom bibi 嗶嗶 ost 7 jumpstream js dense

Added: low-definition low definition 低清 (低清(or low-definition dissy)) dissy.official official (name of official youtube channel)

Audio: 192kbps good

Timing: good
-> 180 BPM
-> 4 OFFSET

OD/HP: good enough

BG: 1600x1124 with a size of .99MB

Files: no unused files
all samples are under 5ms

reminder to repeat general check after mods are complete.

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Metadata:
Sources:

  1. https://www.bmthofficial.com/
  2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QD1vsicJevY&ab_channel=BMTHOfficialVEVO

Copy Tags: bmth Francesco Cameli Daniel Morris Dan Lancaster Rhys May Ted Jensen Matt Nicholis Matt Kean Lee Malia Jordan Fish Oli Sykes track 6 amo 2019 sony music entertainment follow you rock pop interlude electronic english electro-pop logan636

Added: Francesco Cameli Daniel Morris (assistant recording engineer) Dan Lancaster Rhys May (mixing engineer) Ted Jensen (mastering engineer) Jordan Fish Oli Sykes (producers) Matt Nicholis Matt kean Lee Malia Jordan Fish Oli Sykes (writers) amo 2019 (album) sony music entertainment (label, phonographic copyright) Sphere & and Madden Studios (recorded here) follow you (ouch interpolations Follow You by Bring Me The Horizon) rock pop interlude electronic electro-pop (various tags) bmth (bring me the horizon) logan636 (GD top diff)

Audio: 192kbps is good

Timing:
-> 160 BPM
-> 192 OFFSET (thought the offset was off a few MS, try 188 offset, I timed specifically to match the drum+bass perfectly.)

OD/HP: Good

BG: 1200x675 with a size of 104kb

Files: missing vital stuff

  1. highly recommend a custom hitnormal
  2. set your kiai+preview point

all files are being used.

reminder to repeat general check after mods are complete.

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Metadata:
Sources:

  1. https://soundcloud.com/fvrwvrd/speedcore-sonata
  2. https://xbeibeix.com/video/BV1fu411Y7cX
  3. https://namu.wiki/w/ADOFAI%20World%20Cup%202023/3%C2%B74%EC%9C%84%EC%A0%84

Copy Tags: moonlight sonata 3rd third movement speedcore instrumental electronic 8bit 8-bit chiptune classical orchestral piano 冰与火之舞 dance of fire and ice ADOFAI World Cup 2023 2022

Added: 8bit 8-bit (does have some nice 8bit in it) 冰与火之舞 dance of fire and ice (song is in that game) ADOFAI World Cup 2023 (was featured in this fire and ice tournament) 2022 (song was released during 2022)

Audio: 192kbps is good

Timing:
-> 350 BPM
-> 2721 OFFSET (I believe this was off by little of MS, try 2733

OD/HP: Good

BG: 1920x1080.jpg with a size of 1.69MB (wowzers big)

Files: no unused files, good
Samples under 5ms delay

reminder to repeat general check after mods are complete.

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Metadata:
Sources:

  1. https://vocaloid.fandom.com/wiki/%E3%82%B0%E3%83%AB%E3%82%AB%E3%82%B4%E3%83%B3_(Glucagon)
  2. https://vocaloid.fandom.com/wiki/EZFG
  3. https://soundcloud.com/ezfg
  4. https://twitter.com/EZFG
  5. https://open.spotify.com/artist/0ftj0xhjB3T6GI2gq5nEGW?si=I7pYhdcES5aUo3ef5wdgtw&nd=1
  6. https://w.atwiki.jp/hmiku/pages/32830.html

Copy Tags: electronic japanese vocaloid techno gurukagon 2015 巡音ルカ megurine luka v2 V4X vocaloid chordjack schopfer

Added: v2 V4X (used luka v2's english database for main vocal and V4X japanese and english voice banks) Gurukagon (Romaji term) 2015 (the song was released in 2015)

Audio: 160kbps okay, could be better

Here's a 192kbps https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1134717772325204041/1143719741274464276/luka.mp3
With a new offset at 1734

Timing: With new 192kbps.mp3
-> 137 BPM
-> 1734 OFFSET

OD/HP: Good and yummy

BG: 1920x1182 with a size of 341KB is good

Files: Good
no unused files, and sample is under 5ms delay

reminder to repeat general check after mods are complete.

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This needs to have explicit content which is marked good

Metadata:
Sources:

  1. https://genius.com/Infant-annihilator-motherless-miscarriage-lyrics
  2. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0SxT8GaiYDc&ab_channel=InfantAnnihilator
  3. https://www.metal-archives.com/albums/Infant_Annihilator/The_Elysian_Grandeval_Gal%C3%A8riarch/796902
  4. https://open.spotify.com/album/3t1jvhjicanv8MtpRgOUr7

Copy Tags: english metal the elysian grandeval galeriarch galèriarch 2016 Aaron Kitcher Eddie Pickard Dickie Allen single stream jumpstream handstream jump split trill chordjack jack delay dump rice

Added: the elysian grandeval galeriarch 2016 (name of the album + release date of the song) Aaron Kitcher Eddie Pickard Dickie Allen (band lineup) single stream jumpstream handstream jump split trill chordjack jack delay dump rice (various skillsets involved)

Removed: Alot of the death core tags, I'll come back to look through them again to readd them.

Audio: 190kbps which is good

Timing:
1st
-> 360 BPM
-> 743 OFFSET (however I believe this to be a few ms late, I'd suggest 733
2nd
-> 150BPM
-> 42076 OFFSET (good)
-> Normalization is good 360/150=2.4
3nd
-> 160 BPM (choose this for easier timing purposes)
-> 46345 OFFSET (however I believe this to be a few ms late, I'd suggest 46337
4rd
-> 360 BPM

OD/HP: from top diff 8.4|8/4, 8.2|8.2, 8/8|8/8, 7.8|7.8, 7.4|7.4, 7|7 good

BG: 2560x1440 with a size of 478KB good

Files: Awesome
No unused files,
sample has no delay.

Reminder to repeat general check after mods are complete.
Reminder to remove HS before nomination.

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Why is 00:50:593 (50593|4,50670|3) - 1/3? should be 1/4

Please double check this for all diffs that have this snapping of 1/3 like "7k expert, 7k insane, 7k last mission, 7k last attempt, 4k another, and 4k insane/4k afterlife just have some straight up wacky snappings.

Please make them all consistent.

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