00:04:762 (1,2,3) - try keeping spacing consistent with 00:03:281 (4,5,6,7) and 00:09:207 (1,2,3,4,5)
00:14:392 (1,2,3) - try putting sliders on stronger sounds than slider ends
00:17:540 (1) - nc shouldn't be there
00:25:318 - this sound should be supported. Many players will misread 00:25:503 (5) this stack and start it 1/2 earlier.
00:42:910 (5,6,7) - 1/4 stacks like this feels forced
02:04:762 (1,2,3,4,5) - pls no
03:04:947 (8) -