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00:07:955 (1) fix this slidershape pls thx
edit: try to change the slidershapes around the map because you use only curved, less curver or more curver shapes. try looking at latest ranked maps, look how the slidershapes work and try using them with a sense

I normally put as much as modding I can in one post, but I'm gonna kudosu farm so I won't. 00:07:955 (1) - just a suggestion but this slider is pretty ugly, you can make the slider look like an S by curving the third point, which would make it look a lot better

00:08:470 (2) - fix stack unless the stack and the slider placed before were for buildup, in which that case it's okay. But still, change the previous slider shape regardless of buildup (you can keep the four points, just make it less ugly) and if the stack isn't for buildup, then make sure to keep it correctly stacked

00:10:012 (7,8,9,10,11) - The length of these reverse sliders are different, so perhaps you should change spacing to reflect that.

00:10:712, 01:35:762 i suggest using a 1.4x slider instead of reverse sliders

00:11:555 (11) - It's better to use this rhythm because there are no sounds on the blue ticks, and in 00:11:898 (1) - it's also better to place a circle there because the same sounds are covered with circles. Essentially, it looks like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11695445

00:13:441 - I reccomend not following vocals in this segment since the background music is definitely prioritized and more prominent in this section from 00:13:441 - 00:23:898

00:19:270,00:31:098 Slider Overlapping

00:21:327, 00:35:012 Consider using a nc

00:23:212 - similar to what I said in my previous post, putting a stream here would feel a lot more satisfying than simply mapping the vocals, especially since there isn't a change in the vocal pattern either so it doesn't signify any change in the song and completely disregards the background music, which doesn't feel right

00:31:098 - putting slow full-beat sliders here feels really wrong since the background music doesn't change at all, and since instrumentals were mapped before, there's no reason to not map them here. What you could do is put some half beat sliders so it's still mapping the same rythm, but it's kind of a break for the player from hitting the jumps, which would give a similar effect of what I assume you were trying to do here, but done in a better way.

00:37:784 make the slider 1 tick shorter and move the two circles two ticks back,(1/2 beat back) and don't place anything on 00:37:955 - as there is nothing to be mapped there. And after moving the two circles to 00:37:612 - I recommend adding a new combo. What you could also do is make 00:37:784 - a half beat slider (assuming you've already moved the two circles a half beat back and that this would be where the second circle is placed. Basically like this:https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/11693052)

01:00:070 (1) - 01:00:412 (1) - 01:00:755 (1) - 01:01:098 (1) - 01:01:441 (1) - 01:01:784 (1) - 01:02:127 (1) - 01:02:470 (1) - 01:02:812 (1) - Try using highly spaced sliders instead of circles because the red ticks are significantly weaker than the white ticks

01:24:070 - Slider doesn't quite match with the music. It starts on a vocal, and ends on a held syllable that starts 1 beat before the slider tail. There is also a drum triplet starting at 01:24:412. You could do more to express the more complex rhythm here than just a reverse slider.

01:25:955 - spinner starts at same time as sliderend, so consider starting the spinner later or ending the slider earlier.

01:26:812 - it would be a lot more satisfying to have a stream here rather than continuing the spinner and continue the stream until 01:27:412 - but obviously a new combo at 01:27:155 - or, what you could do is put a reverse slider at 01:26:812 - and start the stream at 01:27:155.

01:37:784 - it would be better to place two triples with a half beat gap in between

01:38:555 - just my opinion but I would place a slow velocity long slider, of course there's nothing wrong with a spinner, just me.