00:06:071 (4) - There are 2 noticeable sounds on the white ticks and none on the red ticks so you should delete the slider and place 2 notes on the white ticks.
00:06:928 (1) - should probably be a single note or a 1/2 slider since there isn't any sound on the blue tick.
00:10:356 (1,2) - should be the same as 00:03:499 (1,2,3) - since the music is still playing the same rhythm (I thought it was a different part of the song. Forget what was here before)
00:12:928 (3) - should be a single note on the first white tick with notes on the white and red ticks after that. Since the singer has noticeable notes that shouldn't be
mapped with slider reverses. https://imgur.com/a/1rNu56l
00:14:213 (2) - should be the same as 00:00:499 (2,3,4,5) - . Same reason as I said in mod in the General tab. The music is the same so the rhythm should be the same. Especially since the intensity of the song didn't change.
00:18:070 (3,4) - should be the same as 00:11:213 (3,4,5,6) - since you mapped it correctly the last time and a 1/2 jump isn't the rhythmically correctly.
01:55:785 (5) - same here. A single slider is way underkill since that part of the song is supposed to be a harder part of the music.
00:37:785 (1) - This one is a bit trickier than the last ones. The singer noticeably holds the first note so it should be a 3/4 slider and then she does a triple (3 notes after each other) that you could either map with a 1/4 reverse slider or 3 notes. After that the singer goes back to the more usual 1/2 rhythm that you could map with 2 1/2 sliders (00:38:642 (1) - ).
01:13:356 (7) - should just delete this since you are following the singer it just feels out of place in the song.
01:19:356 (4) - should be a 1/2 slider like 01:15:928 (5) - because it's pretty noticeable and you shouldn't ignore the same sound that you mapped last time.
01:24:499 (11,12) - should be either a 1/2 slider or a 3/4 slider. I only recommend mapping a 3/4 slider if you use it more than once in the map.
01:58:356 (1) - should be a single note on the first white tick with another note on the next white tick since the the sound on the red tick isn't really noticeable and mapping it just makes the rhythm denser
02:44:642 (4) - should have lower slider velocity for more emphasis with the next section of the song.
02:45:071 (5,6,7,8) - could be 2 1/2 sliders. It's not really a problem but in my opinion the rhythm should be a bit more calm in this section and 2 1/2 sliders would do just that.
02:47:213 (8) - should have the same spacing as 02:46:571 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - because it's now a 1/4 jump which is (in most cases) a big difficulty spike.