00:29:213 (1) - could remove your nc here and make it here 00:29:068 (4) - instead because the instrument you 're following with the 1/3 start here
01:04:285 (7,8) - imo there is nothing that justify that huge spacing
Something you could do is having a small spacing on 01:04:285 (7,8) - so doing an anti jump
And then, having a bigger spacing for 01:04:503 (8,1) - in order to give impact on the cymbal
01:17:764 (5) - you could do the NC there instead of 01:17:981 (1) - since you're regrouping your NC per voice section for that pattern
01:38:633 (5) - nc since you're starting following something different which is also in a different mesure dividor (1/3)?
01:58:633 (1,2,3,4,5) - the fact you're actively mapping the vocals here feels a bit strange since you did a lot of long sliders in this section.
Something you could to in order to keep a difference is changing 01:58:633 (1,2) - into a 1/2 slider and then 01:59:069 (3,4,5) - into an other 1/2 slider but a reverse?
Like that you'll keep a difference in your rhythm for these two things if it was your intention.