00:30:194 - nothing wrong with current rhythm, maybe it's just me but the vocals at 00:31:694 - 00:32:294 - are more stressed with the snares than 00:31:994 - , and with how there is no snare at 00:31:094 - , consider a rhythm like
if applied, remove 00:39:194 - for break, and could add 00:42:494 - for vocal progression
would also be nice to apply since current structure is very similar to kiai's 01:04:994 -, but music is pretty different