00:28:507 (4,5) - would suggest merging them as a single slider since the note on 00:28:620 - is not supported by the first layer of the syths like other fruits in this section
01:15:870 (3,4,5,6,7) - 01:16:320 (2,3,4,5,6) - too early to spam hyperchains here, song is not really too intense yet. consider nerf
02:04:920 (2,3,4,5) - 02:05:370 (6,7,8,9) -
please consider nerfing 3 -> 4 and 7 -> 8, they are rather punishing to me. 1x instead of 1.2x would be much much better
02:20:370 - ~ 02:25:170 -
should contain more wiggle movements in this section like how you did in 02:10:770 - ~ 02:17:970 - :
02:12:720 (2,3,4) - 02:13:920 (2,3,4,1) - 02:14:970 (1,2,3,4) -
02:26:970 (1,2,3,4) - i would make the pattern here same as 02:25:770 (1,2,3,4,5) - (flipped) so it would overall feels much consistent, since 02:25:770 (1,2,3,4,5) - is the only pattern start with a hyperchain comparing with other bursts in this part
04:34:156 (1,2,3,4) - i think you could sth more intense to emphasize these kicks, currently the movement feels the same as 04:33:634 (1,2) -