POP IN 2

00:00:425 - Chrisse

00:02:214 - 00:02:385 - can add normal note to be consistent with what u did on 00:00:851 (851|0,1021|1) -

00:04:345 (4345|0) - optional but how about a 1/4 ln here to be aesthetic with the setup here

00:12:527 - should be triple, see 00:07:072 -

00:13:720 - 01:23:265 - double-triple on snare

00:22:839 (22839|2) - would move to col 4 to align with the rest of the same chiptune rhythm

00:24:800 - 00:25:140 - double too? like 00:19:345 - 00:19:686 -

00:29:743 (29743|0,29913|1) - idk why it has this LN layer when the feeling and the rhythm of them is about the same as 00:27:015 (27015|3,27186|3) -

00:32:811 - double on kick

00:39:629 - triple on snare like 00:40:993 -

00:49:089 (49089|1,49175|0,49175|2,49260|1,49345|3,49430|2) - is a waste of potential to follow just the usual 1/4 snap
ik it's 1/8 but if u rly insist that 1/8 is too hard then 1/6 work fine, I genuinely don't think 1/4 fit that well with this part either
so it's either 1/6 or 1/8

1/8 is fine since this is a marathon map

00:49:217 (49217|3,49260|2,49302|1,49345|0,49388|3,49430|2,49473|1) - consider what my angel chan did with this section going with 1/6 i think u should too

00:51:646 - note on drum?

00:58:379 (58379|0) - think this LN should be 1/1 long like 00:58:720 (58720|3) -

same vocal length

01:02:470 (62470|0) - remove

see 01:07:925 -

01:02:811 (62811|3,62811|2) - how about one LN with 1/4 length on col 3 and 3/4 length on col 4 to replicate the long vocal

01:05:368 - intentional to leave this note out right

01:06:561 - why triple here, no snare

01:30:424 - chen

01:33:151 (93151|1,93321|1,93492|2,93662|0,93833|3,93833|0,94003|1,94174|3,94344|1,94344|0,94344|3,94515|2) - subjective but those would have been more fun if the use of this pattern is repeated

like 00:18:152 -

01:37:754 - how about this for same sound note

01:43:549 (103549|0,103634|1) - better go with 1/6, no cheating here

01:44:060 (104060|2) - think it's fine with 1/4 snap, for the vocal too

01:44:743 - double on snap

02:01:788 (121788|3) - long vocal

suggest something funny

or

02:02:470 - 02:07:925 - unsure if u should keep these being 1/6 LN cuz this is the only use for the whole map

02:06:219 (126219|3,126560|0) - i'd add LN on them, the sudden absence of LN is kinda weird when vocal is apparent
i get what u're doing here but yea, i'd still add the LN cuz it's more noticeable that way

plus 02:06:560 - just normal kick, should only be double

02:08:264 - would go with triple on this

02:14:487 (134487|2) - it still bother me how to catch the sound on here

while on 02:14:317 - the sound is much more prominent so i think it should be better to follow the sound on here instead

if u agree, please apply to all parts like this on chorus 2 and 3

02:18:065 - i would suggest to do something like this to accumulate with the gracing vocal

02:18:662 - fine but too easy

can still add 1/4 LN on each of these timestamp to be more challenging02:18:662 - 02:19:003 - 02:19:344 -

02:21:133 - how about 1/4 LN on col 3 for that vocal feeling

02:23:777 (143777|2,143777|3,143947|0,143947|1,143947|3,144118|0,144118|1) - we can try all triple for the impact

02:24:288 - suggest

no sound on 02:24:459 - so can try something like that

02:24:628 - very cool instrument string here, i'd suggest to add 1/4

02:24:969 - chrisse

02:24:969 - is fine to follow solely with the ai vocal but really really a waste of potential for skipping out the melody here, the solo melody is just once in the whole song so i'd suggest to map to it according, you can still map to the vocals here but priority the melody would have been nicer imo

02:27:101 - can try note here for drum

02:28:464 - got a high pitched synth here think it's good to map to it too

02:33:493 (153493|2) - this should be 3/4 in length consider the same sound but mapped differently on 02:34:175 (154175|2) -

02:40:139 (160139|2,160480|2) - how about double on melody

02:43:804 (163804|0) - i'd move to col 2 and 02:43:633 (163633|0) - to col 3 for pitch

02:48:151 - chen

02:50:622 - can have single here cuz the sound here is still clear enough

02:56:332 - the sudden use of jumpstream is rather weird, consider the rhythm is just the same as the previous session but it has been mapped with just LNs and not rice

i'd suggest to stick with that LN for consistency

02:58:550 (178550|0,178550|1) - no vocal and sound is too weak for double

03:01:276 (181276|0,181446|1,181616|2) - relatively short vocals like 03:01:787 (181787|1) - so i'd suggest to change all into 1/4

03:01:447 (181447|1) - should try for 1/4 LN on vocal

03:02:383 (182383|0) - vocal starts on 03:02:469 -

03:03:322 - suggest on adding a 1/4 LN on col 3 for the high asf pitch vocal, it's to emphasis the vocal too

03:04:429 (184429|1) - no sound brother

03:08:179 (188179|1) - this LN is rather odd tho, nothing is attached with it, the use of vocal on 03:07:753 (187753|3,187838|2,187923|0) - is different from 03:08:094 (188094|0,188179|1,188264|3) -

03:09:969 - chrisse

03:09:969 - the use of vocal here is rather confusing
i cant tell what LN following which and which

mayb is better u focus only vocal here and when the vocal is absent you follow the synth

until 03:19:514 -

03:14:231 - how about double here too for the ting ting

03:29:913 - can try double for the loud percussion

03:35:878 - chen

from last chorus 03:35:878 - until 03:52:241 - is same structure like previous chorus so please recheck with the mod provided in the previous chorus

03:40:139 - dont understand the use of double here
same percussion and rhythm with 03:40:480 - right

03:45:595 - double on kick

03:48:407 - 1/4 LN for vocal here too

03:51:390 (231390|2,231390|1) - 1/4 LN for vocal too
to follow 03:51:050 (231050|1,231050|0,231220|3,231220|2,231561|0,231561|3) -

03:54:628 (234628|2,234713|1,234798|0) - no synth, no vocal as well, why is this LN here

03:56:162 - alternate

03:56:162 - triple ons strong vocal like previous

04:00:254 - chen

04:01:276 (241276|0,241276|1) - no idea why theyre not LN though, got synth and vocal for it

04:03:918 - 04:04:004 - 04:04:089 - can add note on the tom