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00:00:765 - 少跟了一个音,可以试试在此处加个咚,然后00:00:865明显是咔
00:01:565 - 少跟了一个音,可以试试在此处加个咔
00:03:965 - 同00:00:765
00:07:165 - 同00:00:765,然后00:07:265明显是咔
00:07:865 - 类似00:01:565,可以试试在此处写一个xxo o来配合旋律音色,以及填充密度
00:08:765 - 少跟了一个音,可以试试在此处加个咚

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感觉这个layer太模糊了 能大概听出来但不是很好follow 加上我想intro写得简洁些

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00:02:065 - 此处和00:02:215应当一致用咔,因为踩镲实在太明显
00:01:865 - 这里就和踩镲区分开用咚如何呢
00:08:465 - 同00:02:065

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00:02:865 (9,10,11,12) - 要不试试用o xxooo x

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00:04:665 - 少跟了几个音,可以试试在此处写一个oox o来配合旋律音色,以及填充密度

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00:09:265 - 这里写成o xxo应该可以更好地配合旋律和鼓

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00:09:865 - 少跟了几个音,可以试试在此处写一个ooxo,也可以更好地凸显踩镲的音色

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不是很想跟那个layer 而且我想强调00:10:065 (41,42) - 起的鼓点

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00:10:365 - 相比00:05:565起的那一串而言,这一串stream不仅更长,旋律性也更突出,我觉得排列可以更顺一些。
就我kddk的角度,举一个我自己比较喜欢的微调方案,oxxoxooxxoxooxxooxooxooxxoxxxo
其中00:10:565这里的o改成x可以配合旋律的上扬
00:11:465这里的xx改成oo是个前面形成一个配色的循坏,也能配合旋律的下降
00:11:665这里的o改成x纯粹很方便读图
00:12:265这里的x改成o是因为我觉得后面还有一组oo的二连,还没到音调真正上来需要用xx二连的地方

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00:13:865 - 我认为这里可以塞成oox,inner的密度应该更高一些,这里的音乐也并非不适合再塞一些

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00:14:465 - 我觉得大胆跟个鼓,塞上
到后面00:22:865为止的这一段里所有1/1底鼓都大胆跟,这可是inner oni

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applied 塞爆了已经

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00:14:665 - 塞个x变成xxo,这里有个沙锤一样的音色明显可以塞
00:15:165 - 类似00:14:665,有个沙锤一样的音色可以塞成xox
00:15:465 - 类似00:14:665,有个沙锤一样的音色可以塞成oox
00:16:36500:16:76500:17:065 - 同理,配色可以微调

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00:17:865 - 此处起旋律有几个在1/2红线处的音很重,需要强调,可以写xxo xxoox oox x

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00:19:565 - 也可以跟一下这个沙沙声,用ox二连来划分前后半
00:19:665 - 和00:19:86500:20:065一致用咔更符合旋律

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00:23:065 - 和前两串相比,音乐进行到这一串时,旋律实在太明显了,鼓就弱化很多,我觉得塞上比较好
配色也可以简化成战车式的ooxxooxxooxoxoxoxx

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还是想跟鼓点并且卡一下手

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