00:25:415 (33,34,35) - 00:28:239 (38,39,40) - these are the places where the song really builds up as it goes up, but 00:24:710 (31,32) - 00:27:533 (36,37) - is more dense? Just seemed a little flipped around
00:45:355 (69) - i get that this is for the vocal, but i would move this 1/2 back so its aligned with the cymbal (you can also make it a finisher by doing this)
same with 00:56:649 (91) (also applies to the later kiais)
01:06:355 (106,107,108) - make these mono-colored since the vocal is repeating the same words, would be a better way to represent it
same applies to 01:12:002 (115,116,117)
01:57:538 (199) - would actually suggest moving this to 01:56:832 - to reflect the kiai progression better and for a nice 7-plet
you can also do with with 02:01:420 --> 02:02:832 and the others