00:08:322 - think you can maybe tone down a bit with the svs here. doesnt feel like it should go up to 1.4x at all as the music doesnt really guarantee that much intensity in.
I think these patterns can be variated in any way, they sounds really different but have same pattern, think about it 01:27:236 and 01:28:377
also I think they can be variated between themselves, in 2nd one pitch is higher 01:37:671 and 01:38:812