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00:00:715 00:01:309 добавь сюда по одной ноте братишка ты используешь 4 ноты в 00:01:903 00:02:497 для такого же звука [add note here since you used 4 notes for same sounds]

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Да, логичное замечание, исправил

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fair point. done <З

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00:02:794 (2794|5,2794|4,2794|0) - maybe change to column 2/4/6 pattern?

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overall visually improved. done <З

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00:17:348 (17348|3,17348|4,17348|5,17447|2,17447|5,17447|4,17942|2,17942|3,17942|1,18041|2,18041|1) - бро ты реверснул эти ноты будет круто реверснуть так же в обратную сторону то что идет после них чтоб одна рука не напрягалась [you reversed this notes, would be cool if you do reverse for next notes backway for hand balance]

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Я согласен с тем, что можно ослабить напряжение на одну руку

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00:18:536 (18536|5,18635|5) - delete, sudden quads compared to triples you did before.

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killer triple notes fixed. done=)

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Why is Insane diff hardest than Top diff in 00:19:328 (19328|0,19427|1,19427|2,19526|5,19526|4) - ? i think you could change it making doubles on top diff and singles on Insane diff. Also the single note 00:19:328 (19328|0) - is not in top diff, missing note?

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yes, good point, will improve the quality. done <З

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00:19:427 (19427|0,19427|1,19526|5,19526|4) - бро эти ноты звучат одинаково так же как и 00:22:991 (22991|2,22991|4,23090|4,23090|2) - но в одном моменте у тебя идет джек а в другом его нету, должно быть одинаково для одинаковых звуков, либо убери его позднее либо добавь раньше, так же и в инсейн диффе [this notes sound same but in one moment you have jack but in other there's no jack, should be same for same sounds, make this moments same]

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Раньше там был джек, но спустя исправления он убрался по невнимательности. Вот она значит работа на дистанции, а не все сразу. Джек вернул на место и пометка, я считаю, решена!

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00:22:694 (22694|1) - this could be a triple i think, or just in a different lane (with some jack intact)

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but assuming other part are made to be 4-row jack 00:26:555 -, and you wanna stick with the concept
you can either skip this suggestion, or apply the same suggestion to other jacks

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I decided to remove 1/6 jacks from this moment and replaced them with bracket thrills. OK)

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00:26:555 можно четкую прогрессию сюда добавить с постепенным увеличением числа нот так как звук становится с каждым разом громче [can add progression here since music become louder]

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Сделана прогрессия, как ты показал, логика в твоих словах имеется, я тоже думал как можно сделать прогрессию

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00:28:931 (28931|1,29030|0,29129|1,29228|0,29327|1,29426|0,29525|1) - i dont see this mirrored elsewhere, and for this part especially where the piano rhythm are repeating, i don't see any repetition

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19434449/81fb this would probably be a better way to still implement the finger-control type of pattern (with trills that switching between left and right hand every 2 beats)

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I moved one illogical note, thanks for pointing it out, for the next notes. I'll have to change this, completely change the pattern. Save finger control concept

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00:36:059 (36059|5,36059|1,36257|1,36257|5,36455|5,36455|1,36654|1,36654|5,36852|5,36852|1,37050|1,37050|5,37248|1,37248|5,37446|5,37644|5,37842|5) - можно убрать эти анчоры и сделать более чистые паттерны [can remove this anchors and do more clear patterns]

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Доделал движуху, спс за моддинг!!

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Новичок)

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00:41:109 (41109|2) - move to column 5 and add note at 00:41:208 - column 5

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logical . done =)

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00:41:109 (41109|1,41109|4,41109|5,41208|1,41208|5,41208|4) - бро двинь эту ноту 00:41:109 (41109|1) - в 3 колонку ты используешь всю карту джеки в двух колонках а тут в трех [move this note to 3 column since you used in map jacks at 2 columns, but here you used in third columns]

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Теперь на этом месте стоит джек в 2 ноты

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