Human Again

01:17:284 (1) - This broken stack doesnt seem intentional

01:19:008 (2) - maybe could make this part of the slider more curvy?

01:51:767 (4) - 01:57:284 (4) - NC?

02:34:008 (2,4) - plus dw mb?

03:01:767 (11) - Since you were following this intense sound giving a lot of emphasis, on this part you made look like the other bursts. I'd recommend you do something to differenciate it like this Same applies for similar parts latter in the song.

03:19:353 (5) - Since you always been mapping this clap sound active, mapping it passive made it underwhelming for such strong sound. For this you could do is something similar to this in terms of rhythm

03:26:939 (1) - minus dw? вроде не выделял ранее

03:34:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Maybe as the song gets intense, you could add ¼ sliders at the end of these bursts? If so, then apply this for the other bursts as well

03:34:008 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - тут, 03:56:077 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - бросается в глаза сразу, выглядит грязно (оверлапы я имею ввиду), как будто без них будет лучше). В целом карта очень чистая и такое наблюдается только здесь почему-то.

03:51:767 (1,2,3) - дс бы подправить

05:15:215 - может тут 05:15:202 - такой оффсет поставить ?

прикольно было бы брейк начать не сразу, а отсюда 05:17:974 - когда она начинает говорить, паузу некую оставить перед этим, атмосфернее выходит

07:13:836 (1,2) - Using double here makes it be out of place since you're placing objects, in a 1/2 rhythm, always spaced from each other. You can just separate this stack like this

07:25:128 (5) - Could maybe delete this circle and focus more on the drum itself in this section?

07:43:491 - 08:26:249 - this is soo good

07:43:491 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - замутить энды мб? во всех подобных случаях парта

07:48:318 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I personally would make this streams a little more “chaotic”, like:

Just a suggestion if you like, rn it’s still great.

09:08:491 (2,3,4,1) - может равносторонний сделать треугольник? и ласт ноту в центр соответственно

09:10:387 (1,2) - I think the use of rever sliders for these specific part was weak since the song has such strong sounds that you normally mapped active before and after this. Changing it for 2 triples with quick slider will make it way better in my opinion

09:25:043 (6) - i may be picky but this is not straight XD

09:33:491 (5,6) - These being quick sliders was quite random and are not following any specific sound in the song itself. I think just changing it for circles on the top of each slider sliderhead maintaining the flow you were following.

10:30:043 (1) - нада поменять, не красива