svs: i'll just post all my suggestions here since they kinda connect with each other (please see #4859153 first before applying sv)
(btw it seems like you're doing the gradual sv changes manually by hand? just fyi there are tools out there like fruko's Manage Beatmap tool or Alchyr's Taiko Editor that can help do gradual sv changes for you!)
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from 00:01:278 to 00:02:568 - i think it would match the buildup in the intro well if you did a gradually increasing sv change from 1.0x to 1.1x throughout this bit
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00:02:890 - you could contrast the less intense section of 00:03:858 ~ 00:13:857 with the more intense section of 00:14:180 ~ 00:27:083 (where there's more instruments) better via sv. consider the following:
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kiais: current sv feels a bit too high imo, your idea to increase the sv in the 2nd kiai compared to the 1st kiai is nice, but it's feeling slightly exaggerated atm i feel. also the gradual sv decrease on 00:38:212 is slightly messy and could be tidied up a bit. maybe try the following:
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from 00:48:373 to 00:49:663 - can do 1.1x to 1.0x so that 00:49:663 onwards is the same sv as on 00:14:180
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01:04:824 - add a 0.8x sv line (and make 01:05:792 0.8x) for the slow outro?
i didnt know there were tools for sv o_o
couldnt really get them working so i just did them manually, shouldn't be that much of a hassle
also w sv changes, fixed
00:31:116 ~ 00:38:212 - the density in this 1st kiai is very low in comparison to the first ~30 seconds of the map (which has more continuous mapping and 1/4 improv) despite being much less tense in comparison to the kiai
buffing the density here in the 1st kiai would give better contrast between these sections, for instance consider:
having more continuous mapping by mapping the drums in the 1/1 gaps (00:32:245 00:33:212 00:34:180 00:37:406). this would contrast well with the shorter continuous mapping at the beginning of the map
having more triplets and 5-plets in the kiai. the current improv here is just triplets despite the section before (00:14:180 ~ 00:27:083) having considerably more 1/4 rhythms. here's an example for the start of the kiai that demonstrates the higher amount of improv you can do: (first note is 00:31:116)
note how the example is basing it's improv on the vocal phrases; maybe you can apply a density like this throughout 00:31:116 ~ 00:38:212?
should be fixed, i didn't buff the first kiai too much to contrast the more intense part in 2nd kiai