00:22:335 (22335|2,22651|1) - these 2 notes are on blue ticks, but the next 2 blue ticks don't have any even though there's a similar sound
00:41:730 (41730|0,41888|1) - this 1/6 emphasises the subtle bass kick (?) but the piano instrument (??) is louder and snaps well to 1/2 so maybe consider
00:49:414 (49414|1,49414|0,49493|1,49572|2,49651|2,49730|3,49809|3) - 这里的子弹排列没有很贴合音高走向，感觉可以改一下
01:06:940 (66940|2,66940|0) 和 01:07:572 (67572|0,67572|3) - 这两个地方前后类似的部分都没有用双押，只在这两个地方用有点不协调
02:20:440 (140440|2,140519|0,140519|3,140598|1,140677|3,140677|2,140756|1,140835|0,140835|3,140914|2) - this part has buildup but not as intense as the buildup on the next white tick so maybe change it to just single stream