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00:02:503 (2503|4) - 移动到最右边有开头的感觉

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ok

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00:07:555 - 整个长面或者起码4

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4

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00:11:503 (11503|5) - 变成面条?挺强的

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行吧

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00:12:134 (12134|3,12450|0,12450|5) - 都结束到蓝色线?有点短

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1/6 now

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00:45:134 (45134|5) - 从音阶和强度来讲,这个都是比00:45:292 (45292|5,45371|5) - 低明显地 。 同时,后面的00:45:687 (45687|3) - 其实算是一次重复。所以我建议试试这样:

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prefer keep for structure 00:43:160 (43160|3,43239|5,43318|3,43397|2,43476|1,43555|0,43634|2,43713|3,43792|4,43871|5)

前面这里也挺类似的 00:40:634 (40634|2),没打算这么写

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密度太高了这样,有点jumpscare了,prefer keep

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00:48:292 - 这里开始音符的流向太简单了,只看头的话感觉比较无聊,可以多摆摆转一点的

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rearranged

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00:47:976 - 00:56:818 remapped

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00:50:345 - 所有这种地方都可以加到4,加在最边上

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感觉太重了,不是很有必要,prefer keep

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Reopen this for 2nd 鼓点太重了。一直3体现不出

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Reopened by AWMRone

比较纠结!quad的话我感觉确实太重

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remap之后应该这个问题解决了,虽然仍然不是quad

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00:53:187 (53187|4,53187|2) - 根据00:54:134 (54134|2,54134|5) - ,这里应该是col36的排列吧?根据前面和后面的排列,你的重复只是将LN变成了米,但是轨道不变。这里我个人倾向于动面的轨道是因为可以同时削弱col5的不必要anchor

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ok

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00:57:055 - 音乐好像是这样的

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00:57:134 故意省略的

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00:57:845 - 4133

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不太好,这里的鼓用 00:57:924 (57924|3,57924|4,58003|5,58003|4,58081|3,58081|5) 这种叠来表示也有一定的效果(虽然主要是为了表示钢琴)
prefer keep for pattern stability

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还行吧我觉得,和 00:57:608 (57608|5,57608|3,57687|5,57687|3) 比较像。主要是有种前1/2拍rc -> 后1/2拍ln感觉比较有区分度

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01:08:503 - 这段音乐没变,为啥前面也开始1/6了,只保留最后扭的音01:10:397 - 就行了吧

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主要是为了难度过渡,因为如果保持1/4的话这一段和 01:18:292 相比就太简单了。不过这里要不要改我也不确定
open for 2nd bn

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所以1:18才需要削呀。这一段是整个曲子最难的一段。并且难度过渡感觉没有音乐支持,完全一样的。可以通过重新换轨道改改味。

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有道理,remapped

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01:18:450 (78450|1,78529|1) - weird jack, i suggest to remove them

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ok

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01:19:239 - 这一段我觉得难太多了。主要来自于这两个方面
1、所有这种burst 密度太大。
2、01:19:555 (79555|1,79634|1) - 很多这样的叠感觉有点过
参考

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比如01:28:555 - 这里叠我觉得可以有,这里01:28:713 - 就可以没有
主要考虑还是难度太大

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ok 01:19:555 (79555|1), 01:29:660 (89660|4) deleted
01:18:608 (78608|4,78687|4) 这里我感觉是顺手的叠,先不动吧

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01:18:292 - 01:38:503 这一大段我库库削了点,好打一些了

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01:19:239 (79239|0,79239|1,79239|4,79274|2,79310|3,79345|5,79380|4,79415|2,79450|1,79485|3,79520|4,79555|2,79555|0) - 这个1/9 dump。即使是原速度听也是很明显的被分成了2个部分。差不多在01:19:310 (79310|3) - 这个object的时候,dump前半部分的音停止了。在01:19:345 (79345|5) - 差不多这里又重新启动了。所以我的建议是,也许你可以做出不一样的排列

如果你同意,请在01:21:76601:24:29201:29:34501:31:871也应用同时地

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ok
01:24:292 这里keep应该没事因为听起来急促一点

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01:30:687 - LN尾巴可以对称啊

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?_?和谁对称
比较倾向于不改,毕竟大部分pattern已经是尾巴不平整了,这里搞两组平的稍微好点?

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resolve

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01:38:187 (98187|0) - could remove this, feels better

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ok

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01:43:555 - 这句明显宽广了LN直接给上去 也可以整体都加长

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感觉不太好,个人认为这段相对空一点会比较合适,prefer keep

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01:43:871 (103871|3) - 这里不是有个和01:44:029 (104029|4,104187|5,104345|5) - etc一样的声音吗。怎么没有表达?这里01:43:555 (103555|3) - 都表达了。我个人感觉可能是mistake。如果你同意,01:45:152 (105152|2) - 也需要修复

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感觉这里是个回声,声音相对小得多,所以忽略掉应该没事

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01:47:523 (107523|3) - 这里背景音没了长LN可删

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violins here sounds very faint, it's probably not suitable to use such a heavy LN layering

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Reopened by tyrcs

那改掉。删掉长LN好还是把1/4LN改成rice好?

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ok

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prefer removing long ln

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01:47:523 (107523|3) - 这里背景音乐没了 小提琴也是难度的,所以长LN可以变成米饭了

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all for violins #4618413/12262876

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01:48:809 (108809|2) - 一个小建议,这个是可以做一个LN的。和01:48:637 (108637|3,108666|2,108694|1,108723|0) - 弱音做出区分,又和01:48:209 (108209|2,108294|3,108337|4,108380|5,108423|2,108466|1) - 相似强度的部分做出对应

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01:48:552 (108552|0,108637|3,108666|2,108694|1,108723|0,108809|2) prefer keep for 纯面pattern->纯米pattern for pattern diversity

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01:48:894 - 这里开始很多一开始就有长音的我倾向于使用这种结构 打着也舒服

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ok

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01:50:759 - 实测太难了,可以给个短LN体现变化就行

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这里提过,左手三连也太难了。reopen for 2nd

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Reopened by AWMRone

我觉得这里是manipable的。如果mapper想keep for怕疼多样性的话也行,不是很spike

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Need more osr or feedback of this

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可以看看 #4618429/12501509 ,我这里是接上了的,没有miss

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01:53:694 nerfed,其实主要还是01:53:694

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OK

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Marked as resolved by AWMRone

02:04:323 - 这种单手三连太难,而且相似的音效这一段以绕的结构为主(02:05:609 - )我设计一个

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感觉难度上没啥差别,这种盾也不简单。。。
这两组 01:53:352, 02:04:323 是一致的,前面那组得给 01:53:780 (113780|2,113780|5,113802|1,113866|4,113887|2,113887|5,113952|0,113952|3,113973|4,114037|1,114059|0,114059|3,114123|2,114144|4,114144|1,114209|5,114209|3,114294|2,114294|1) 做铺垫,所以一致到后面去后面的也就这么写了

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真的难

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我感觉真的还行不简单也不会很难!

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reopen for 2nd BN

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Reopened by AWMRone

我倾向于mapper。这个是真的manipable的。就抖3下而已还是同轨的。还没有02:05:009 (125009|3,125009|2,125094|3,125094|4,125180|4,125180|5) - 难

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同轨道会变得更难

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让更多的高排名玩家参与一下测试吧

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我自己也打过,只说这个175bpm纵连的话,可能是我擅长jack的原因我觉得难度确实是合适的
我发个我刚打的replay参考一下:
osz file
replay for this version

PS:没热手,然后进结尾的时候不小心choke了一下,,,

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OK

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Marked as resolved by AWMRone

02:10:837 - 02:53:504 love this part gj

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02:11:462 - 这一整段有一个很奇妙的问题。我觉得每一句中间那个长音,还是从白线上起的。现在的版本全部提前了1/4,不知道是出于什么考虑。各种倍速下感觉都和音乐有点错位。

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比如02:42:837 (162837|0,162837|5,162851|1,162879|2,162921|3) - 这组位置是对的02:43:421 (163421|0,163421|4,163421|5,163435|1,163462|2,163504|3,163587|0) - 这组感觉提前了,虽然声波可能确实是提前起的但是现在最长的音都是1/4之前就已经按住了

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你说得对
rearranged this section

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这么早?看来不是废物大学生

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02:19:900 - 这里太叠了 可以做开一点 中间两个叠音叠一下就行

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02:25:921 - bery good

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检查重复段落

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ok

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02:44:817 (164817|2,164837|1,164858|0,164900|3,164921|4,164942|5,165004|1,165025|0,165087|4,165108|5) - Vs. 02:44:150 (164150|3,164171|4,164192|5,164233|2,164254|1,164275|0,164337|4,164358|5,164421|1,164442|0) -

个人我觉得这里的强度更高相对于前面。非常intense。你可以试试和前面做出不一样的规律(不仅仅是对称)的排列来体现出音阶和强度的增加:

但是这可能会让你预设的排列变丑(具体参考图片我画出的绿线)。个人我这样做的目的是让排列看着更加宽敞体现出上述不同

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02:22:837, 02:23:504 类似,我认为单纯是音高有区别,镜像pattern是能体现这一点的。真正有明显区分的是 02:25:504 这种

对应到这个po里的 02:44:171, 02:44:837 就是 02:46:837 这组有明显区别,keep for now

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02:45:671 - 有的LN组不好看是因为头错开了尾巴却平了

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02:52:587 (172587|3,172608|4,172671|3,172692|4) - 这俩和后面LN应该不在一个轨道,尤其是100%打 音乐没有三连的感觉 前面好像也有一处

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?w?没听明白

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会不会是你没更新,我记得以前的版本确实是三连,后面我改了

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02:58:921 - too intense for the music sense here imo

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nerfed

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03:00:712 - 前面抓那么细 接着抓呀 感觉不用省

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感觉这里点到为止就行,后面的没什么规律了,可能会适得其反

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好像抓一抓也行,先抓一下试试!

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03:11:421 - 可以认为没有

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ok

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这么细

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03:25:504 - 虽然知道抓的是琴,但是我觉得从这句开始鼓更重了,应该buff+鼓+1/4填上了

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ok rearranged
double for drum, single for melody now

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03:26:837 - 像其他句子一样叠一下

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ok

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03:35:671 (215671|5) - 长一些?

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长一些

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03:42:254 - 切分音,这个应该比03:42:337 - 这个长吧

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03:43:587 - same

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ok rearranged

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03:50:564 (230564|1,230639|2,230714|4,230789|3,230864|1,230939|0,231014|3,231089|4) - this part could change into 1/6 or 1/8 tiny LNs to make the fadeout part better?

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ok 1/8

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03:57:192 (237192|0,237192|2,237192|5) - 你用的是不止一个LN在表达主旋律的音节的时候,etc 03:56:764 (236764|1,236764|0,236764|5,236978|5,236978|2,236978|0) - 。我觉得你把03:57:192 (237192|0,237192|5) - 全部变成一样的LN结构也不会丑。或者,和03:59:478 (239478|4,239478|3,239478|2) - 一致做2个LN。

如果你同意,04:06:335 (246335|0,246335|3,246335|5) -,04:24:621, 也需要apply

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ok 03:57:192 (237192|5,237264|4) change to 1/4 LN

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04:02:764 (242764|1) - suggestion

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rearranged

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04:14:121 (254121|5,254150|2,254178|3,254207|4,254235|5,254264|2) - this part seems way different from the previous part 04:13:907 (253907|0,253942|2,253978|1,254014|0,254049|3) - although they sound just like the same imo, also you did the same as I said afterwards too, in 04:32:192, think this one could be a consistensy issue

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This one does not effect 04:50:478 part since it has very clear sound to separate this one from the one I mentioned upwards.

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Either you can change all them like the structure in 04:13:907 or 04:14:121, both works but not the situation like this rn.

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done by dm modding, this one is closed

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Marked as resolved by [GS]hina

yea keep it should be fine!

there is a clear difference between these two places: the drum frequency at 04:13:907 and 04:14:121 is increasingly intense compared to 04:13:478 and 04:13:692, while 04:31:764 has nearly the same 4 drumsets

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oops closed

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04:28:335 (268335|4,268335|2,268549|4,268549|2) - 这里的反键结构实际上在04:29:478 (269478|5,269478|2,269692|1,269692|3) - 可以继续使用?我感觉没有破坏结构

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这里我个人认为是几种在排列组合的摆放方式中,LN含量+美观性里面最好的了,should be fine

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04:34:335 (274335|5) - 如果短面条是钢琴的话,这里没有

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我不知道为什么就这样会比较符合直觉!it's fine i guess

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04:38:907 (278907|4,279121|1) - 可以删除。 当然不删也行你懂我意思吧

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04:50:907 - suggestion

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ok

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05:05:764 (305764|0) - 二倍长不是更好看吗

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你说得对

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05:14:049 - 和05:14:049 - 这两句太简单,可以弄个小复杂的放手

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就这样子应该就行,ln已经够多了orz

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05:15:686 (315686|0,315686|2,315754|5,315754|3,315822|0,315822|2,315890|3,315890|5) - 这里强度很高。做成和之前一样的1/4jacks的表达效果会明显比目前的jumptrill好很多

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要给 05:15:958 (315958|2,316027|2) 这里比较特别的爆鸣声预留表现的空间 so prefer keep

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05:18:413 - 到05:19:456 - 有背景音,05:19:456 - 到05:20:500 - 没有,后面又有了,所以
05:19:456 - 到05:20:500 - LN长度应该整体缩短或者直接米饭。现在和05:21:804 - 这一句一样显然不太合适

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ok少画一点,有些不怎么跟着lead的简化了

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另外 05:21:804 这里是有背景音的

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(unnecessary spike)

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nerfed

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05:40:391 - 很难的,弄成后16打起来不会有太大区别

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ok

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05:43:848 - 虽然现在摆的已经很好看了,但是不应该这里是22 05:44:370 - 这里是21吗,或者说想强调小提琴忽略鼓点也不是不行

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ok rearranged 05:44:370

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05:45:087 (345087|1,345217|1,345348|1,345446|1,345543|1) - this anchor is kinda absurd to hit, if possible please rearrange it

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nerffed

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05:48:348 (348348|0,348348|2,348413|4,348413|1,348413|5) - 切分节奏反了。像是是复制粘贴或者直接3131什么写下去的

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没太明白你的意思,不过这里和 05:30:935 比较像,虽然鼓不一样,我比较倾向于抓小提琴

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06:09:303 (369303|2,369303|3,369303|5,369303|0) - 搞不懂为什么要陆续放,而且最后一个延长时间也不够。可以一起到06:18:636 -

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因为钢琴声逐渐变小
不过确实太短了,都延长了

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不行我接受不了,正常演奏就是按住不动声音自然就变小了,最后一个音了现在还要留一部分脑子出来一个个松

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Reopened by AWMRone

草,行那我弄平

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