Yami no Rinne

Why use a Quad at 00:19:146 (19146|2,19146|1,19146|0,19146|3) - The intensity is not that high better use a Hand instead

00:21:731 (21731|1) - suggest to reduce the LN lenght down to 00:22:076 - , no need to extend it at this point when the pitch is clearly different

then add on 2 00:22:249 - for the crash

You should really try to avoid shield in a Rice based maps. Here 00:24:319 (24319|1,24577|1) - instead of this shied you could try this:

00:33:456 (33456|0) - move down on 00:33:413 - in the 1/8 for the grace

00:58:283 - add on 1 for the crash

01:02:421 - add on 3 for the crash

01:02:594 (62594|1,62594|0,62680|2,62766|3,62852|2,62938|1,62938|0,63111|0) -

suggest to rearrange like this to follow more precisely the instrumentals

start at 01:02:594 -

01:10:697 - why single? doesnt really make sense on clear sound

01:33:627 (93627|0) - suggest to move on 3, then add a note on col 1 here 01:33:972 - for the crash

01:34:662 (94662|3,94834|2) - ctrl+g

then add a note on col 3 here 01:35:352 - for the tom

and move 01:35:524 (95524|2) - on col 1

01:35:093 (95093|1,95093|0,95093|0,95093|1) - no kick here, sound don't suit the chord size

01:37:765 - add note as 6k did

Ignored sound at 01:43:801? If you're using single notes for others then why leave it empty here?

01:46:041 (106041|3) - suggest to remove since there aren't any specific changes of the piano here

01:46:990 -
01:47:162 -
01:47:334 -

don't leave empty those points, suggest to map the pianoes, rearrange the section?

02:07:248 (127248|0,127421|2,127421|3,127507|1,127593|0,127679|1,127765|3,127765|2,127938|3) -

suggest to rearrange like this, similar to the previous same section

start at 02:07:248 -

02:36:385 - add on 2 for consistency of the snares

02:47:937 (167937|1) - suggest to move on 3 then

02:47:765 (167765|1) - change into a LN for the guitar

02:48:541 (168541|0) - start the LN on 02:48:454 - for the guitar, same in the 6k ver

02:49:661 - haven't applied on 4K?

02:53:454 (173454|2,173454|3,173541|1,173541|0,173627|2,173627|3,173713|1,173713|0,173799|3,173799|2,173885|0,173885|1,173972|3,173972|2,174058|0,174058|1,174144|3,174144|2,174230|1,174230|0,174317|3,174317|2,174403|0,174403|1,174489|3,174489|2,174575|0,174575|1,174661|2,174661|3,174748|1,174748|0) -

this jumptrill is a big no, there aren't long sounds or consecutive instrumental to justify the use of this pattern and the LNs aren't enough to make it pass

you should nerf down to a jumpstream and make variation here

02:55:351 (175351|0) - move on col 2 to reduce the lenght of the anchor from col 1

02:55:523 (175523|1,175523|0,175610|2,175610|3,175696|0,175696|1,175782|3,175782|2,175868|1,175868|0,175954|2,175954|3,176041|1,176041|0,176127|2,176213|1,176213|0,176299|2,176299|3,176385|0,176385|1,176472|3) -

since there's still the guitar here, only making this piece as a jumptrill doesn't feel that good

suggest to make variation in it

something like this

start at

02:55:523 -

02:58:972 (178972|0,178972|3,179144|1,179144|2,179317|0,179317|2) -

suggest to add the guitars here too in the blue ticks

something like this

start at 02:58:972 -

03:00:121 - 1/3 but leaving as 1/4 for simplification , same on 6k

03:02:765 (182765|0,182851|0) - what's this random jack here ?? xD

03:02:592 (182592|3,182679|2,182765|1,182851|0) - suggest to reduce down to 1/4 the lenght of those LN and rearrange the section

something like this

start at 03:02:592 -

03:06:730 (186730|0,186817|2,186903|0,186989|2,187075|1) -

suggest to change into LN to express the guitars

then

03:07:161 (187161|3,187248|0,187248|1,187334|2,187334|3,187420|1,187420|0,187506|3,187506|2,187592|1,187592|0,187765|2,187765|3,187851|1) -

suggest to rearrange like this to make it different from the previous jumptrill since the sequence of the instrumental is different

start at 03:07:075 -

03:20:696 -

suggest to rearrange here to avoid the long anchor formed on col 1

03:23:799 -

suggest to rearrange to avoid the long anchor present on col 4

03:24:661 (204661|3,204748|2,204834|3) - swap the column placement of the notes to reduce the long anchor on 4

03:25:351 - really long anchor on col 1, suggest to make those changes

start at 03:27:075 -

03:29:661 (209661|0,209719|1,209776|3,209834|2,209891|1,209949|2) -

suggest to rearrange like this

start at 03:29:661 -

so the flow of the pattern at this point goes from right to the left to keep the balance ,

previous one would thre you off because of the multiples change of direction

03:31:213 -

suggest to rearrange like this to reduce the long anchor on 4

then you also need to rearrange the next notes placement

start at 03:32:420 -

start at 03:33:799 -

03:35:696 - suggest to change here too always to avoid long anchors