Pajama Parties

00:06:482 (1,2) - the transition is kind of awkward and feels weird to go suddenly have an anti jump here when everything else was building up in spacing up until now when the song hasn't got done building up so I would raise the spacing between these

00:08:040 (1,2,1,2) - 這裡有兩個點一起講

(1) 00:07:651 (3,1) - 這擺好遠喔
(2) [00:08:040 - 嗚] [00:08:430 - 哇] [00:08:820 - 哇] 這三個音我自己會分成同一組，現在感覺沒有同一組的感覺

如果是我的話，我會都用1/2滑條然後做個形狀（可能是圓形之類的）

00:08:430 (2) - offscreen

00:09:599 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 這個串很大機率會notelock我覺得可以Ctrl+H轉一下之類的

00:10:963 (1,2,3,4) - 這組基於美觀的角度我可能會這樣擺（主要是覺得現在的擺法有點隨心所欲）

如果有照改的話 00:12:716 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - 可能要換個flow然後往上擺之類的

00:16:222 (4,5) - 感覺併成一個1/2滑條比較合曲？這裡好多click

而且這樣比較能強調00:16:612 - 的感覺

00:17:391 (1,2) - 這有點主觀但我覺得這兩個我可能會分成一組，然後如果是一組的話左邊是弧的右邊是直直轉角的就有點不太搭

感覺把(1)改成直線滑條就好了

00:18:950 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 小吐槽 但感覺形狀可以再彎一點

如果不知道怎麼放弧形的話可以在中間放一個圈圈然後按著alt繞著他的approach circle一顆一顆放

00:20:508 (1,2,1,2) - 感覺第一個(1,2)縮進來一點會比較好看...嗎（這可能是很主觀的審美問題）

00:21:287 (1) - 這個把他的彎彎的部分做的比較弧一點，然後跟00:21:579 (2,3) - 做一個blanket感覺應該會不錯

如果有照改的話 00:21:872 (4,5,6) - 要往遠一點的地方擺

00:23:430 (1,2) -

(1) 00:23:235 (3,1) - 這好遠喔
(2) 00:22:846 (1,1) - 好像前面有提過但左邊是直彎滑條，右邊是弧形滑條有點略不搭
(3) 感覺00:24:015 (2) - 好像沒什麼理由要藏在(1)的尾巴下面，可以擺出來

00:27:911 (2,3,1,2) - 這邊感覺可以這樣擺，主要出發點也是讓物件之間不要看起來很無關（然後也是一些美觀的improvement）

00:29:859 (1) - 這個疊到(2)的尾巴一點點了

我覺得要嘛就要分開要嘛就要貼的好好的像這樣（好像一些愛情語錄會說的話）

00:31:905 (5) - remove?

00:32:002 (6) - 感覺可以換成一顆note就好，藍線上是沒音的，也是跟後面非kiai段做一個小區隔

the drum sound here is prominent, maybe consider making 00:34:729 active

00:41:547 - Could be made slightly more difficult.

我注意到三段副歌前都有個diff spike，而且逐段增強，但第一段的spike難度相比其他兩個有點差太多了，旁邊的小山都跟它差不多高（用mapset verifier看就挺明顯）

since you have been following vocal here 00:46:222 (1) - , I think using passive on 00:46:612 isnt really ideal, perhaps make it clickable, just do a 3/4 slider + 1 circle to give it more feedback?

00:49:729 (4) - I felt like you can give it more rhyhtmic contrast to emphasise more 00:50:118 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - by using 1/2 slider here 00:49:729 and remove 00:49:924 (5) - instead?

I personally not really convinced by the idea using additive rhythm here 00:50:800 (8) - since the instrument/ bell sounds (whatever that is called) stops here 00:50:703, maybe just remove this note

I believed this is not intended, the visual here 00:57:131 (3,5) - is a bit inconsistent.

01:03:755 - theres quite a prominent trumpet(?) sound here so maybe map this actively? like 00:51:287 (2) - 00:45:054 (3) - (i think a sliderhead works better than a circle but either works ig)

01:21:968 (7,1) - , 02:36:774 (7,1) - 建議保持間距，不然強迫症要發作了tf

要強調的話個人也比較建議拉大，Like this: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/19344012/829e

02:04:533 (4) - 這個停頓有點奇怪 這個還蠻大聲的但是停在離上一個滑條很近的地方

02:06:675 (1,2,3) - 這些也可以拉開

02:17:390 Inherited timing point is 1ms after it should be

02:17:390 (3) - unsnapped slider end

02:27:910 - map this actively since its the melody? exact same rhythm as 02:24:404 (1,2,3) should work

02:34:046 (2,3) - 02:30:929 (2,3) - 可以再拉開一點 類似的稍微有點疊到會不好看
02:45:637 (3,4) - 既然3 4是snare那這邊distance可以不一樣

02:43:884 (3) - maybe rotate up a bit so it doesnt visually clash with 02:44:663 (1)

02:49:339 (1,2,3) - control + G rhythm? to follow more of the vocal

03:04:144 (1) - i think this would go harder if it was higher sv, try 1.4x

03:34:922 (3) - make this a 1/4 slider? since theres a drum at 03:35:019