01:18:724 (2) - do a different slider here, the straight one is boring. i recommend a wave like such https://i.imgur.com/ZqwiNIT.png
01:35:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - could you fix this so its like https://i.imgur.com/ZqwiNIT.png ?
i moved around 01:33:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) a bit and that allows it to work fine without going too far off to the right and not overlapping poorly with the 1
im just assuming that you mean like a normal wiggle and yeah i could do this but i think what i have is fine as well