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changed the pattern kk k k k to kd k k k
there's (almost) same pattern on 00:03:157 (1,2,3,4,5,6) and the 3rd note in that pattern is already represented as k, so I think kd k k k is more proper

9 months ago

Marked as resolved by luxem_

00:15:889

00:15:889 - Multi-color to follow lyric pronunciation. I can suggest kdk for these 3 notes. Or if you prefer instrument, you can also use kkd. At least I think the pattern must be in multi-color, not a single-color.

9 months agoLast edited by Rossi 9 months ago.

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41 days ago

Marked as resolved by luxem_

00:20:947

00:20:947 - Move to 00:20:773 - to optimize the vocal pattern.

9 months ago

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41 days ago

Marked as resolved by luxem_

00:49:901

00:49:901 - Can be make as k k to represent higher instrument sound. This also for other higher diffs, (Muzukashii, Oni, Inner Oni). For Kantan no need to change since to contrast the previous k k pattern around there.

9 months ago

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41 days ago

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00:50:598

FinHazel

00:50:598 (1) - Similar issue to kantan, you should extend this spinner to 00:51:645 -

9 months agoLast edited by FinHazel 9 months ago.

I set the end of spinner to make 2/1 rest, so if I extend the spinner it would be hard to make 2/1 rest.
but indeed that spinner is too short, so removed spinner as kantan do so.

9 months ago

Marked as resolved by luxem_

00:53:563

00:53:563 - Move to 00:53:738 - to make the vocal pattern more solid there. In this case sound at white tick is more important to cover than the red tick. Also 00:54:261 - can be change to d so there are not too many ks around here.

9 months ago

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41 days ago

Marked as resolved by luxem_

00:55:831

00:55:831 - Add d since there are so many gaps around here. Use this instrument is better to make the pattern more solid than if you just cover the vocal. Same for 01:06:994 - .

9 months ago

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41 days ago

Marked as resolved by luxem_

00:57:575

00:57:575 - Add finisher here. D to make it same with other diffs.

9 months ago

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41 days ago

Marked as resolved by luxem_

01:00:715

01:00:715 - Add d. Same case as before, there are so many gaps. Especially the next is 5/2 breaks.
Or another option, you can add d at 01:01:412 - and 01:01:761 - , then change 01:01:936 - to k. I think this one much better.

9 months ago

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41 days ago

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01:01:761

FinHazel

01:01:761 (31) - This note doesn't represent any vocals compared to other notes in the kiai. You should consider removing this note

9 months ago

removed

9 months ago

Marked as resolved by luxem_

01:10:657

01:10:657 - Move to 01:11:005 - so make to make the pattern following vocal indirectly.

9 months ago

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41 days ago

Marked as resolved by luxem_

01:11:877

01:11:877 - And another to many gaps, consider to add note here and 01:12:575 - too. I think 01:11:877 - better with d, and 01:12:575 - with k.

9 months ago

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41 days ago

Marked as resolved by luxem_

01:15:715

01:15:715 - Still need a multi-color for these finishers. I can suggest DKD KDDK. If you place it all as K I think it isn't really represent anything.

9 months ago

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41 days ago

Marked as resolved by luxem_

01:21:470

01:21:470 - Multi-color needed too as lyric pronunciation. I can suggest kkdkd. Also same for 01:24:261 - I think ddkdk is better.

9 months ago